Shivi FF: Agar Tum Saath Ho (Part 20- Pg.91) (complete)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Barkhaa Bannerjee

@barkhaa_tpm

Navigator

Posted: 4 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: ananya.2

Slow burn hai behen and I have never written slow burn before. I’m trying very hard not to make them jump on each other 🤣

Slow gaya tayl lene. Tu ghee daal. Abhi ke abhi daal 🙂🔪

Quote

Iktara22

@Iktara22

Navigator

Posted: 4 years ago

#162

Such a pyaara and cute update, loved it!!!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Pottermeow

@Pottermeow

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 4 years ago

#163

Super cute Ananya.... Caring Shiva is the best!!!! Second best actually, because protective, possessive Shiva is THE BEST😆... The two of them are such cutie pies though, why should I go through this torture all alone? And Shiva feeling the need to cover himself up was just, gold!!!!

Quote

ZaaraBB

@ZaaraBB

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 4 years ago

#164

So sweet and wonderful

You are a gifted writer. Imagery is coming when i read your story

Loved it

Quote

mpks1

@mpks1

Trailblazer

+ 13

Posted: 4 years ago

#165

Ananya, read the last 2 parts in one go. We have caring Shiva and Raavi taking a stand for him against Mami❤️

What a beautiful way to show that you can turn things around even if their marriage is forced. Both willing to move on and start a new life together and Shiva giving her freedom to do what Raavi wants out of their marriage.

Can’t wait to read the next part.

Quote

Pixierocks

@Pixierocks

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 4 years ago

#166

This is how the show should have progressed 🤩🤩

Proper slow burn 🔥🔥🔥

It's so heartwarming to read the small moments between them ❤️❤️

Another beautiful updatee, loved it 👏👏

Quote

sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 4 years ago

#167

Beautiful update👏

Shiva is so caring

Raavi needs compliment😆

Loved the way Raavi took stand for Shiva in front of maami😊

Quote

Jeet Gaye

@PunnyPotato

Stunner

+ 39

Posted: 4 years ago

#168

This is what our Shivi are

Typical them Raavi asking for complements and he giving it in his own way.

Shiva being the foody and Raavi getting annoyed.

I miss this on the show.

I really like how u r writing this

Amazing ❤️

Quote

Miya ✍🏼

@Miyas_Scribbles

Explorer

Posted: 4 years ago

#169

Ooooo Raavi checking out her hot hubby 😳 and getting annoyed that he wore a vest 🤣Shiva running for his life *literally* varna yeh ladki ka kuch bharosa nahi 🤣

Chipkaliyon ki beauty queen ❤️

Lovvveeee caring Shiva 😊❤️