Shivi FF: Agar Tum Saath Ho (Part 20- Pg.91) (complete) - Page 10

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Posted: 4 years ago
#91

Aww!! That was so cute.shiva really has compromised so much n didn't ask for anything but things are going to change as Ravi without knowing has fulfilled his first wish n she will be the one who will be ultimate go to person for Shiva n vise versa.Love it .

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Posted: 4 years ago
#92

aww i am loving these two

so raavi is slowing accepting their marriage

loved it

please do continue

bye sumi

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Posted: 4 years ago
#93

This was soo good…

Liked the way ShiVi are progressing….

Looveed the way Raavi got rid of her past stuff and they way she maked the room look..

Aaaww Shiva has such an innocent wish for his room..

Cant wait for the next chapter..

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Posted: 4 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Palak2812

That's adorable.


The way u described the Pics were really nice.


So we r gonna see revamp of Storeroom with Shiva ko pasand.


Cute 🥰


Aww thanks ☺️


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Posted: 4 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Miyas_Scribbles

3rd wala bhi updated 😲 if i had not stalked the comments i would have totally missed it


Getting rid of all her past memories 👏

Also getting Shiva to tell her what he wanted, she knws how to push his buttons 🤣


The wedding pic is one of my favorites, loved how you weaved that in ❤️




Aww thanks. I wish they’d proceeded this organically in the show.


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Posted: 4 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

I'm loving how this is going. Both are amazing parts!


Loved how there friend provided a different pov, Shiva and Sanjana's insight, Shiva possessiveness about his cupboard, and the progress with sleeping on bed. And then the pictures selection was good too! Loved the flashback. And the best part was that diary is out of the picture. No more kaand's and MU related to the diary and Shiva can see there efforts Raavi's making to move on with him. Loved her trying to involve him in their relationship. It's a small start, but beautiful nonetheless!LLooking forward to the next part.


So happy to see this express speed back!


Thank you 🙈🙈🙈

I agree. Raavi should’ve burned that diary sooner and gotten a new diary.


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Posted: 4 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Hi Ananya❤️

So happy to read your story after a long time. Read all 3 parts in one go. This is so beautiful❤️

I love the way Shivi are progressing in thie relationship. Really liked reading this version of Raavi. She is slowly coming back to being her own self...cute and bubbly. Finally she burnt all of her past memories and started everything afresh with Shiva.

Loved the fairy lights and room decor scene...and lastly blushing Shiva is a cutie. Waiting to read the next part❤️


Glad to see you here after so long!!! Thanks for reading!!!


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Posted: 4 years ago
#98

Part 4


Gaumbi sent Shiva to Ahmedabad early in the morning for some work and Raavi was annoyed. He couldn’t take her shopping because of it. She wanted to be cross with Shiva for leaving but it wasn’t his fault. It was Gaumbi’s and she couldn’t exactly be mad at Gaumbi. Shiva did leave her money to go shopping by herself, so in order to uplift her mood, she went shopping by herself. She spent the entire morning shopping. First she went in and bought new bed sheets, then curtains. At last, the fairy lights. Shiva’s swing was the difficult one. She called him on the cell to ask him what kind of swing she wanted but his phone was unreachable.

She made two rounds of the market before making a decision. It was a small chair like swing which looked really pretty. She paid the shopkeeper who promised to deliver it to their house. Then she went back and had lunch. Dhara di kept asking her about her shopping trip, but Raavi kept replying to her in monosyllables. She was upset at Dhara di and Gaumbi for sending Shiva to Ahmedabad. After lunch, she went to her room and changed the curtains and bedsheets. She left the lights for Shiva. He was the best person for the job. The swing was delivered in the evening. Dhara and Rishita were shocked to see it. Raavi told the delivery boy to place it in her room.


“Excuse me! Tumhare room mein kyu?” Rishita asked.

“Kyu matlab? Maine kharida hai. Toh mere room mein rahega.”


The delivery boy handed the delivery slip to Dhara to sign. Her eyes went wide as she saw the price of the swing. “Raavi tune Rs. 10,000 kharch kar diye ek jhule pe?”


“10,000?” Rishita was shocked. “Wow! Just wow! Yaha mujhe Rs. 2,000 ka parcel lene ke liye Dhara bhabhi ke saamne haath failana padhta hai aur tum jake 10k kharcha karke aati ho. Yeh partiality nahi toh aur kya hai?”


“Rishita please! Main baat kar rahi hi! Raavi itni bari rakam kharch karne se pehle ek baar humse puch toh liya hota. Aur ek jhule ki wajah se? Bachhi ho tum?” Dhara scolded her.

“Please Dhara bhabhi. Aap yeh daantne ka natak mat karo. Aaj bilkul clear ho gaya ki iss ghar mein mere saath partiality hoti hai!” Rishita said.


Raavi had had enough. “Partiality? Tumhare saath?” She laughed loudly, making a scene. “Partiality toh mere saath ho rahi hai Rishita. Meri shaadi ko ek hafta nahi hua aur aap sabne Shiva ko Ahmedabad bhej diya? Kyu? Dev deal karta hai na uss dealer ke saath? Main batati hu kyu. Aap sab meri aur Shiva ki shaadi ko seriously nahi lete ho. Dev aur Rishita ki toh love marriage hui hai. Dev kaise jaye apni biwi ko chodke? But Shiva? Shiva aur Raavi ki shaadi ka toh koi matlab hi nahi banta. Unn dono ka koi plan ho bhi toh kya matlab banta hai? Bhej do Shiva ko Raavi se dur. Aur mujhe apne kamre ke liye kuch kharidne se pehle sabki permission leni paregi?”


“Raavi aisa nahi hai…” Dhara was shocked at her outburst.

“Aisa hi hai.” Raavi sobbed. “Shiva aur mujhe shopping karne jana tha aaj par aap logo ne use bhejne se pehle ek baar puchna bhi zaroori nahi samjha.”


“Sorry Raavi!” Raavi turned around to find Gaumbi and Shiva at the door. “Galti meri thi. Mujhe puchne chahiye tha tujhse. I’m sorry.”


Shiva was still surprised at his wife’s outburst. He had no idea she would make such a big scene over a shopping trip. Gosh! It was only going to get worse with time. This is how women trapped their husbands and this was his punishment for marrying her. He shuddered thinking of the future. It was only a matter of time till all her anger would be directed at him.

“Ek kaam karte hai.” Gaumbi said. “Kal Shiva chutti lega aur sara din tere saath spend karega. Tujhe uske saath jaha jaana hai tu jaa sakti hai.”


Raavi smiled a little and nodded. Rishita rolled her eyes and went back to her own room. Dhara showed Gaumbi the bill for the swing, but Gaumbi asked her to relax and took her away from there. Raavi felt Shiva’s eyes on her, and she wondered if he were mad at her for creating a scene. She couldn’t take it anymore. Her intention wasn’t to hurt anybody.

“Yeh sab kya tha?” Shiva asked. “Shopping nahi gaya tere saath toh itna natak?”


“Woh Rishita wapas partiality ka naara laga rahi thi.” Raavi said. Then she remembered the swing. She really wanted to see his reaction. “Tu pehle mere saath chal.” She dragged Shiva to their room.

Raavi watched the surprise on Shiva’s face turn into a blush. He went closer and examined the swing. She at once knew he loved it! He sat on the swing and looked at her, but his eyebrows furrowed as he remembered something.


“Maine toh tujhe sirf 5k diye the phir tu yeh kaise kharidi?” Shiva asked.

“Woh isiliye ki yeh jhula main apne paiso se layi hu.” Raavi smiled. “Meri taraf se tere liye humari wedding gift.”


Shiva was shocked to hear that. He wasn’t used to getting gifts from anybody, and he had no idea how to thank her. Raavi suddenly pulled him up and sat on the swing herself.

“Waise tune best cheez choose ki humare room ke liye. Aur woh Rishita ise public property samajh rahi thi.” Raavi said. Then she remembered the lights. She ran to the bed and showed Shiva the lights. “Inhe laga de na thik se please.”


Shiva got the perfect opportunity to thank her. He got a ladder and put up Raavi’s lights. They really lit up the room. When he was done, he went and put the ladder back in the place, then he came back and looked at the room. It was perfect! The chipkali had outdone herself. He sat on the bed and admired their room. Raavi did the same.

“Perfect hai na Shiva?” Raavi asked.


“Haa perfect.”


Raavi looked at Shiva. Somehow this whole ordeal gave her hope that this marriage could work. He smiled at her, then lay down on the bed.




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Posted: 4 years ago
#99

Babies 💔

Hamesha Shivi ke saath he partiality hoti hain.


But in this both of them r soo cute 😍

Really adorable 🥰


I am waiting for the next one already

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Posted: 4 years ago

Rishita and her tantrums

Loved that Raavi spoke about the partiality happening 👏

Loved it even more that Shiva didnt fuss about Raavi creating a scene.

Them two decorating their room ❤️

Love it love it love it 🤗

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