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Posted: 3 years ago

Not me blushing and smiling like an absolute idiot after reading pt 11&12 together...and mom looking at me suspiciously!

Both the parts were so so sooo cuteee ❤️


Update next one jaldi jaldi!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Read both parts

Both updates were cute and sweet 🤩❤️💞

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Posted: 3 years ago

Another cute updatesmiley27

The mushy mushy feels is still theresmiley42

Dev's role is to be a Kabab mein haddi everywhere I guesssmiley36 But I did not mind him and Krish here...The teasing session was super fun. Dobi Raavi again opening her mouth at the wrong momentsmiley36

The conversation has my heart❤️ Babies cannot stay away for a second!!

Waiting for the next update Pixiee🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

PART- 12

Raavi quickly stood up and straightened herself.shiva too stood up.she hid behind shiva embarrassed.

Dev and Krish were standing like they saw a ghost.the cold drinks bottle lay broken on the floor.

" Tum...tum log yahaan?? Iss waqt? " Shiva said trying to break the awkward silence.

" Woh, hum.woh kuch accounts check karne the.to mai Krish ko bhi le ayaa.dekha dukaan lock nahi hai.laga koi chor hoga, to isliyee..." Dev said

Finally Krish burst into laughter and dev joined him.shiva wished that he could just dissapear.raavi hid her face more into shivas back and clung to his shirt sleeves.

" Tu to keh rahaa tha raavi bhabi tujhe sar dard deti hai, par yahaan to..." Krish teased him.

Raavi peeked in from behind shiva.

" Kyaa? Aisa kahaa shiva ne? " She asked Krish.

" Han bhabi.kal raat ko hi kaha tha.pucho isse " he said

Raavi glared at shiva, who was averting his gaze away from her.

" Tu kaisa hai shiva? Kal raat mere kamre mai to tu kitna khush tha.aur peeth peeche yeh ..." Raavi blurted out while shiva closed her mouth with his palm.

" Gadhdedii.kuch bolne se pehle soch liya kar " he muttered

" Kamre mai " Krish and dev said together.

Shiva put his hand in his head.

Raavi gave him a puppy eyed look while he shook his head at her.

Krish jumped towards them and hugged them both tightly.

" Mai bahut bahut khush hu.mujhe to bachpan se pata tha aap dono made for each other ho" he said proudly

Dev came forward.he was happy for his brother and raavi.

"Mai bhi bahut khush hu.dhara bhabi aur gombi yeh baat jaankar shock ho jayenge " he said

" Bilkul.par unhe apne muh se batana, iss tarah action dikhane ki zaroorat nahi hai " Krish said

Shiva hit him on his head while raavi blushed a deep red.

Dev pulled Krish.

" Chal ab.inhe thodi privacy dete hai.tum apna continue karo " dev said

" Nahii...matlab hum bhi jaa hi rahe the.hai na shiva.mai chalti hu..byee " raavi muttered and ran away shyly.

Shiva cursed his brothers to ruin his plans of a perfect first date.

Dev decided not to pull his leg further, he put his hand on his shoulder.

" Hum dukaan lock kar denge, tu jaa use ghar chod aa " he said

Shiva nodded and went off.he found raavi waiting outside.

" Tu gayi nahi? " He said

" Mujhe pata tha tu ayega " she said

Shiva smiled and held her hand as they walked hand in hand on the moonlit silent street.

" Woh Krish to aaj gaya.use to mai itna Marunga, itna Marunga..." Shiva was interrupted

" Aise kaise marega? Haath to lagake dikha.mera laadla devar hai woh " raaavi said smiling widely.

" Tere laadle devar ne sab kuch bigad diya " shiva said under his breath giving him a few galiyas.

" Kya bola? Kya bola? " Raavi asked

" Kuch nahi " he said grumpily.

" Aww...tu gusse mai kitna cute lagta hai " raavi said pulling his cheeks

" Dekh, tu yeh mujhe cute wute mat bula. " Shiva said pointing his finger.

" To kya bulau? Baby? Shona?nahi. Jaanu bulaungi mai tujhe " raavi said sweetly.

" Dekh.itna zyada shakkar hazam nahi ho raha mujhse.thoda kam kar." Shiva said

Raavi smiled and hugged him.

" Ab gussa chod na shiva.hamara parivaar hai.woh taang nahi kheenchenge to kaun kheehega?" She said rubbing his back softly.

Shiva hugged her back.she has always addressed the pandya parivaar as her own, but today she was his.and hearing this from her mouth felt so right.

" Tu bolti hai to nahi karta gussa " he said as he softly kissed her hair inhaling the scent.

They were almost home, but raavi didn't want to leave him.

" Accha nahi lag raha " She pouted

" Roz to milegi mujhse, muh kyu latka rahi hai? " He said smiling

"Woh to hai.par ab tujhe ek pal ke liye bhi khudae dur karne ka mann nahi karta " she said

"Accha? Mai hu hi Aisa.ladkiya merese bilkul dur nahi reh sakti " shiva said proudly

"Ladkiya? Agar koi aur ladki tere kareeb ayi na...nahi tere kareeb ane ke baare mai socha bhi to mai usee..." She said angrily making strangling gesture

Shiva pulled her closer holding her by the waist.

" Iss shiva ki gauri sirf tu hai " he said looking into her eyes

Raavi smiled and hugged him again.

" Aaj kal tu kuch zyada hi nahi chipak rahi ? " Shiva teased her.

" Mai to tujhse bachpan se chipakti hu, ab to mera haq hai.ek baar shaadi ho jaye na to Mai 24 ghante tere sar pe nachungi." She said

" Tu to gaya shivaa." He said dramatically.

They finally parted ways.raavi went inside while shiva waited till she got inside.

PS- tagging saraa since she hadn't read my story from longg 🥺🥺

Loving this yarr...... Want more update as soon as possible please🥰😍
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Posted: 3 years ago

Pixie, cute update!❤️ Dev Krish donon ban gaye kabab me haddi😆 Now I can’t wait for them to tell the rest of the family especially Mami🤣

Edited by mpks1 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Where is mami?

Har laadli beti is romancing with Khula saand outside their home and she is nowhere to be seen🤣

Bahut nainsaafi hai Prafulla Patel ke saath😆

Btw nice story loved how Shiva apologize to her and Raavi do understand his point and also Krish being a cupid is all my heart ❤️

Loved it waiting for next chapter

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Posted: 3 years ago

Aww. This was cute! Well ShiVi better reveal it to others before Krish can😂😂 Hard to imagine him keeping a secret!


Loved to see these happy courting days of the too. And Shiva gesture in the store was ❤️❤️. Giving things back to her the way she imagined by redoing the set up! And the apology too was ❤️❤️.


Can't wait for the next part!

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Posted: 3 years ago

oh the updates were so cute awesome.......dev and krish caught dem🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you so much for tagging, Pix ❤️❤️❤️

Looks like I’ve missed out on the whole story, I’ll read and comment sooon 😘🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

THIS ONE WAS AMAZINGGGGG! UPDATE SOON!

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