Badly Arranged- Last part -- pg 88 - Page 31

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Posted: 18 years ago
hmm so they called a truce well an awsome part magnificently written
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Posted: 18 years ago
well this part wasnt crap it shows that u can write ab t the conflicts and thoughts of ur characters like if it were they were ur own
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: armaghan0

well this part wasnt crap it shows that u can write ab t the conflicts and thoughts of ur characters like if it were they were ur own

phew thats a relief, i like first perspective, but wasnt sure if i could do a good enough job on it.😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
yeah i think writing first perspective is better
gd jobbbb
continue soon
OMG!!! kripa sed sorry!!! shocking! lol!
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part..its wasn't a crappy part but it was really good
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome part... im soooo happy they r at peace!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
i love the reflection line, i think mishti said it once lol that was awesome!! yay they are cooperating! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 😆 i hope they continue to fight though. Its funny to think of them without wanting to kill each other
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Kaj!

😆 😆 i hope they continue to fight though. Its funny to think of them without wanting to kill each other

Forecast: I am predicting from the current situation that there will be a lot more of Angad and Kripa fighting in the future. Remember that they are badly arranged, the peace cannot possible last very long.

Edited by munizaaa - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
That was Great!!! i really likesd it except u changed back to the third person near the end or were u supposed to do that i dunno/
i think u should continue this way also do it in Angads POV also.

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