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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: munizaaa

you dont have to i am continuing right now!!😛 But it will be a short part i ll do a longer one on saturday.😉

dude finily ive been waitin sence like for every

i mean can ya blame me your fan fic are realy good 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

This part is dedicated to all the poor souls who are still suffering from the disease called school. My spring break starts today, and I am just super excited!!

Part 11

"This is sooooo Gay!! " Kripa said lying back on the bed on top of the pile of clothes.

"You mean stupid?" Angad said correcting her. He grabbed few of his shirts from under Kripa not wanting to get them wrinkled, and then shoved it into his bag.

"Whatever." Kripa said rolling her eyes, she reached her hand behind her back punching at her saris trying to make it a bit more comfortable to lie on, "you know after the hard weeks in school, I finally get a few days of peace. Finally the spring comes bringing with it a mere 2 weeks of holidays. I go home thinking how awesome it will be to take a break from the lectures of professors, and the tons of homework every night. I am already making plans, of going to the movies and to the beach with my friends. And then out of no where your mom thinks to surprise us, 'Guess what guys I have surprise for you!! Honeymoon tickets!! Its a 2 day cruise and then 7 days of fun in Hawaii' she says, thinking that she has just done the most wonderful thing in her entire life, not knowing that she has unknowingly pushed me into the fiery pits of HELL."

"Well it might be fun, you know Hawaii its a really cool place." Angad said in a fruitless attempt to get her to stop complaining.

"Ya sure, of course you would say that." Kripa said pouting.

"And what is that suppose to mean?" Angad said sighing expecting another one of Kripa's ridiculous answers.

"You are a guy! Of course Hawaii is a wonderful place; you'll have all the chicks in the world to keep you occupied. And almost all of them in bikinis! It's like Heaven on earth for any guy."

"Oh so you are jealous. Oh how stupid of me, of course you are since you love me so much." Angad said maliciously, it was so annoying the way Kripa complained about everything. Every insignificant little thing, he hoped that he got her on her own on a beach in Hawaii. He would not forgo the chance to push her from the cliff into the water. That would be so funny, and even more so if she drowned and died. This image though did not stay gruesomely murderous as it had started out to be, soon his thoughts start deviating just as all guys thoughts do when, the words beach, bikini and girls appear in the same sentence. Hmm angad thought… and if she was wearing a bikini…, her perfect body glistening with water in the hot baking sun…, Ha la luya what a sight that would be.

"…like I would be Jealous." Kripa finished her sentence to notice Angad in a daze, "Why the hell are you staring at me?" Kripa snapped breaking his dreamy expression. Guys, Kripa thought, were so stupidly predictable. She could bet money on the fact that Angad had been thinking about girls in bikinis. There was no mistaking it; it was disgustingly obvious from the way he had been drooling. Is that all guys ever thought about, sex, girls, and curves.

But angad was quick in his defense, "Me? Why would I? Aren't the one that is in love with me?"

"If you say that again I'll…" Kripa searched for the appropriate thing to say but before she could finish Angad cut her off.

"Are you going to pack your bags or not, mom will be in here to check any moment."

"Since you are so excited, you do it. " Kripa replied acidly, getting up from the bed, throwing one of her saris in his face, "I am off, have to go meet up my friends." Kripa walked out of the door without further ado, while Angad was left clenching his fist and grinding his teeth, wishing that there would be a vast clear blue ocean near their hotel in Hawaii.

I know short part but I have a wedding to go to today. And something is better then nothing right? Ruhee are you going?

Edited by munizaaa - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: night girl

dude finily ive been waitin sence like for every

i mean can ya blame me your fan fic are realy good 😛

Well hun i love yours even more, and you continue so quickly! I am going to go and catch up on the 7 parts that i have missed.

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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part!! lol hahha honeymoon during thei rspring break 😆 and angad imagining kripa in a bikin was just hilarious: "Hmm angad thought… and if she was wearing a bikini…, her perfect body glistening with water in the hot baking sun…, Ha la luya what a sight that would be." 🤣 man i lovee your fan fic and the way you write the parts 😳 ...."Is that all guys ever thought about, sex, girls, and curves." i always have wondered about that...i know soem that dont...but u never know what they talk about when you aint around 😉 😆 ...and oh the part about angad thinking of dropping kripa from a cliff was hularioussssssssssss as well :: "while Angad was left clenching his fist and grinding his teeth, wishing that there would be a vast clear blue ocean near their hotel in Hawaii. " goshh it was awesome!! you're so lucky...my spring break doesnt start until, like, the first week of april but atleast the weather is turning nice.... well...ima stop now..lol...continue soon, will be looking forward to it 👏


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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome part... i hope sumthin happens at their honeymoon loll 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg! all guyz are the same.. gurlz in bikinis.. ewwww!! lol

that was a great aprt and i hope u enjoy at the wedding or enjoyed or enjooying.. w/e fits

ur so lucky. i had 5 snow days so no chance for spring breaks.. lolz

well hope u enjoy urs and write for us!!! 😉

continue sooooooonnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome! oo lala 😉 honeymoon 😳 hopefully, sumthing naughty 😉 😆 continue soon muni
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Posted: 18 years ago
yay honeymoon! lol angad has some interesting thoughs a brewing in his little sick perverted and twisted mind of his lol its quite hilarious though! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey

nice part... WHOA ur spring break started already?? mine isnt till like march 30th.. ur soo lucky! the part was just hilarious.. i hope something happens on their honeymoon... angad is soo funny with his thoughts.. u kno i wonder the same thing.. is taht all guys think bout? i m gonna go ask some1 that.. lol... cant wait till their not so romantic HONEYMOON parts.. haha.. well have fun at the wedding and hte week off from school..


luv mansi 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow just read the fan fic right after i got back from the wedding to good

cant wait till angad and kripa go on there honey moon 😛

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