ShiVi FanFiction // Arcane // Chapter 10 P.G 53 / 16.03.2022 - Page 33

This was brilliant! Made me blush! Such stunning writing and visual imagery. You, my friend, are a genius!

Please update soon and do tag me when you do. I CANNOT WAIT TO READ MORE OF THIS!

Originally posted by: nafees5

So my dear Inny turns out I had already started reading this beautiful and unique fic of yours but forgot to comment along the way. Sorry about that😐

Just re-read the prologue and the first chappu and I loved it.

How intrigued rishita is😆

She is as intrigued by shivi as I am by this story❤️

Loving it!

Awwwie didu 🥺 I am glad you are reading this abhi!!

Rishita yahan is very curious!

I hope to keep that intrigue alive till the very last update!

Is this going to end ? Should I start reading it dear author ?

Originally posted by: Clouds7

Is this going to end ? Should I start reading it dear author ?

Well, I'm no where near the ending unfortunately, I still have a good 10-15 chapters to go through!

Originally posted by: nafees5

Second chapter

I loved it. This whole idea of curious rishita and showing shivi's dynamic through her eyes is🔥🔥

I love how in sync they are, that dinning table scene and ice cream feeding part is so pure ❤

And my favourite was the ending.. How shiva was drawing circles on her thigh. I could totally picture it❤️

Thanks you didu 🥺😭

I've noticed that ShiVi are almost quite always in sync in the show too and this idea just popped up ya know! 🥺❤️

Hehe, car rides are like my fav 🥰

Originally posted by: nafees5

Loved chapter 3❤❤❤

Shopping... Bickering.. Everything was lovely

Awww thank you 🥺❤️

Originally posted by: nafees5

Chapter 4

Jaise jaise Mai sochti hu that it can't get any exciting than it already is tu mujhe galat saabit kar rahi hai!

I'm loving this

Mai bhi rishita ki tarah inki story sunne k liye betaab hu

Onto the next one! 🔥🔥

Awww, thank you so much didu! I am glad that its keeping you hooked and intrigued!

I try to love this too

Sunaogi story abhi! Finally have inspiration for this again!

Originally posted by: nafees5

Chapter 5

Needless to say I loved it.. Each and every part of it..

The emotions, the flashback.. Ooof innu you are gonna make me cry with this😭

Raavi's emotions and pain were beautifully penned in this part❤

As I progress to read further I think I'm gonna be at the loss of words with this.

I don't wanna make you cri 🥺😭

I'm glad I was able to express Raavi's emotions well, it was a lil difficult to write!

loss of words? whyyyy 🥺🥺

Originally posted by: nafees5

Innaya I love you for this❤️

Chapter 6 has my whole heart❤

Heck this story has my whole heart❤

Oh that flashback man! 😭 My poor poor raavi asking gaumbi why her parents left her😭. Mera dil💔💔

I love gaumbi-raavi bond so much. How I wish they could show an ounce of this in the show, sigh!!

Beautifully written chapter and my favourite part was

"Same same but different" 💜💜💜

Saara gist jaise inn lines mein aa gaya in dono ka.. Lovely!

Awww didu I love you too!!

I'm glad you liked this chapter! It was one of the most challenging chapters I had to write, considering that I had to explore bonds of Raavi and the family members, and maintain the emotions acche se! I am glad that you loved this!

Show se toh meri expectations utt gayi hain baba! 🤡

Same same but different was my favourite part as well!

Originally posted by: nafees5

Chapter 7

This was so sensual.. All that seduction and passion into a bubble bath.. My God☺️

How can you write this and be okay.. Mera toh padh k he bura haal ho gaya☺️😆

I loved rishita-raavi bonding over shopping also❤️

So babies are gonna go on a date.. Me Waiting

Thank you didu 🥺❤️

I don't know how I am okay after writing this but there is more to come ☺️

I needed to make Rishita and Raavi bond, cuz something special going to be coming up soon!

Babies will go on multiple dates