SKR FF 4:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 145 - Page 14

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it dear💕🤗🙏 Saumya

Awesome and beautiful part🤗🤗

I really don't know that despite of Manda & Vaibhav constantly warning Raghvan he is really on his way of his own destruction ... Hope all understand before it's too late

All are able to bring smile on Siyas face & the 3 master chef 😂😂 were whole heartedly prepared her favorite cake that was really sweet

Bantering of everyone brought happiness back in this palace It felt like real Raghuvanshi family & their happiness is personified & you penned it well

Last scene was so cute 😂😂 siblings arrangements for their special night was really great ... Siblings as well as Sira are quite happy with it 🤗🤗

Hope coming storms in their life gives them good strength

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely update. Loved each and every bit of it. Manda standing up for Siya against her family is very nice to see. Every woman should support each other lekin kabhi kabhi Suvarna jaisi exception hoti hai. Hadd hai ab Raghavan ne kaha ki usse Suvarna ka badla lene mein koi interest nahi hai, phir bhi madam ke dimaag mein ghus nahi rahi hai baat. Aur destruction toh hoga hi woh bhi Raghavan ka puri tareeke se. Usspe daya dikhana bohot badi bhul hogi. Jab legal tareeke se sab sort out ho sakta hai, ek ladki ki izzat pe haath daalna haiwaniyat se kam nahi hai.

Sab kitni mehnat kar rahe the Siya ki chehre pe khushi laane ke liye. Itni mehnat ki kitchen ka naksha badal diya teeno ne. Aur jo dhinge haank rahe the, mujhe laga ki sach mein bohot badiya cake banayenge. Lekin pyaar se banaya hua cake kaisa bhi ho bakery se kayi badiya hota hai. Kyunki usska main ingredient hota hai pyaar.

Aur kya sundar decoration kiya tha che ke che ne. Ati sundar.

Yeh pal yahi teher jaaye meri bhi hai tamanna,

par kya kare kismat ko manzoor nahi hai,

Yun humesha humara saath rehna.

Darti hai yeh kaynaat,

Ki kahin ussi ki nazar na lag jaaye,

Issiliye thodi doori banayenge,

Lekin phir jeevan bhar ki khushiyan saath de jaayenge.

**On spot banaya sorry 😅

Do continue soon ❤️

Thanks for PM 💕

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Posted: 4 years ago

Yaaarrrrr.... Thank you so so much for this light hearted lovely chapter,it was actually required at the moment where everything is just going in not so good way and everyone is highly tensed... Ahhh it's like detoxification of highly toxic atmosphere... And Somu what to say,well your dadi got succesful outcome for her daily routine of reading the Ramayan and the Bhagwat Gita as if a reader can feel the good qualities as well as the family values and positive approach of a writer through her story only that no doubt that person will be great in real life too... The way you actually show what is the actual meaning of family , how they fight with you , trouble you but at the same time love and care for you and support you in bad time always melts my heart... Yaar the way you daily write more and more amazing episode the only thing which comes into my mind repeatativly is Haaayee , ek hi to dil hai ,kitni baar churaogi 💖💖💖😘😘😘...

Now coming to the episode...

Well like the episode I will also not gonna say much about the chakrams but I now really feel that Manda should actually stop interfering in her so called husband's life and work and enjoy her own life , I know it's easy to be said but look what she got throughout her married life, nothing but she had kept loosing herself with every passing second, till date she had tried nth times to change her so called family which is nothing less than devil's , had tried at her level best to make them understand that whatever they are doing is wrong but always she gets a cold shoulder and humiliation by her own husband to don't paye heed to his work . If a person is hell bent on digging a grave for himself and jumping in it , then try stopping him in starting but if he is being stubborn at every level then instead of pulling him back just give a hard push into the grave as it will stop everything for once and for all.....

Oye hoye after a long time finally the siblings are trying to be back on the track , atleast for their Bhaiya Bhabhi as they don't want to trouble them more with their unnecessary or actually genuine tension and I actually enjoyed every bit of cake making session and was laughing like maniac throughout the cake making session... The hilarious dialogue of Shatrughan that what's the difference between baking soda and corn starch,they look actually same 🤣🤣.. beta what if the girls add sugar inpl place of salt and vice versa, what's the difference they look same no...🤣🤣... Bharat is actually way too overconfident for his cooking skills 😂😂😂... And especially the baking part😆😆... Had never seen a big flirt than Lakshman... Bhaisahab koi bhi situation ho, but ye janab har jagah khade ho kar flirt kr skte h vo bhi itna naturally aur smoothly ke samne vale ko doubt ho jaye ki ye sach m The Lakshman Raghuvanshi hi h😆🤣... Haaye Urmila kya sharmati h, jaise first time ho😁😁😂😂... Shatrughan ka kya pachka kiya h Shruti ne, O God that Ravan ke bhai vali line😆🤣.. my stomach started paining because of laughing too much and uspar se Lakshman ka expert comment for Shruti...🤣🤣.... Awww Shruti ka cookie zameen par gir gaya and no one cares to help him🤣🤣🤣... SiRa are actually enjoying this scene to the fullest.. Vaah beta Bharat Vaah kya reason diya h sugar na add krne ka and add bhi kiya to poora dabba😂😂😂🤣🤣.. bhabhi ko diabetes ho jayega Maharaj... Ram ne ek baar phir apni bhaiyon ka buri tarah se popat kr diya h behno ke saath milkar...

Aur ab Mahool bada tensed h sabki nighahe Siya pr h jo ye dangerous cake khane jaa rhi h , aur ye kya Siya ki taraf se ek baar phir green signal for the boys😆... But but but signal ke saath warning bhi mili h and expert comment bhi aur isi ke saath siblings apni cake banane ki koshish m nakayamb ho gye pr actual motive m paas 😁🥺😁😁🤗🤗😉😉😉.

Uff iske aage mene kuch nhi bolna I had once again lost myself in the moment completely so that I can cherish this moment in future...

With lots of love 💕💕💕

Waiting for your next update 🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

I have a request, at some point in the story, please make Manda slap Raghvan or Suvarna, or both.

Cake making sequence was very funny, nicely put. Lakshman's song and shayeri don't have any difference, kaha se laatein hein ye saab?! Shatrughan falling in ground smiley37 Bharat bhaiya is very confident nowadays! The terrace conversation was cute at first, but you made it scary at the end 🥺 Is it the next day? That unfortunate day? 😟

Eagerly waiting to read further.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it dear💕🤗🙏 Saumya

Awesome and beautiful part🤗🤗

I really don't know that despite of Manda & Vaibhav constantly warning Raghvan he is really on his way of his own destruction ... Hope all understand before it's too late

All are able to bring smile on Siyas face & the 3 master chef 😂😂 were whole heartedly prepared her favorite cake that was really sweet

Bantering of everyone brought happiness back in this palace It felt like real Raghuvanshi family & their happiness is personified & you penned it well

Last scene was so cute 😂😂 siblings arrangements for their special night was really great ... Siblings as well as Sira are quite happy with it 🤗🤗

Hope coming storms in their life gives them good strength

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗🤗

Vinash kale viparit buddhi.. the kahawat goes for Raghvan.! Nothing more to say..

And you are correct, their bantering and laughing and teasing felt like real Raghuvanshi siblings. Otherwise from last few days, they were literally living with tons of worries and tensions. Thankfully they got some happy moments to spend with each other..!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: karuna_kini

Lovely update. Loved each and every bit of it. Manda standing up for Siya against her family is very nice to see. Every woman should support each other lekin kabhi kabhi Suvarna jaisi exception hoti hai. Hadd hai ab Raghavan ne kaha ki usse Suvarna ka badla lene mein koi interest nahi hai, phir bhi madam ke dimaag mein ghus nahi rahi hai baat. Aur destruction toh hoga hi woh bhi Raghavan ka puri tareeke se. Usspe daya dikhana bohot badi bhul hogi. Jab legal tareeke se sab sort out ho sakta hai, ek ladki ki izzat pe haath daalna haiwaniyat se kam nahi hai.

Sab kitni mehnat kar rahe the Siya ki chehre pe khushi laane ke liye. Itni mehnat ki kitchen ka naksha badal diya teeno ne. Aur jo dhinge haank rahe the, mujhe laga ki sach mein bohot badiya cake banayenge. Lekin pyaar se banaya hua cake kaisa bhi ho bakery se kayi badiya hota hai. Kyunki usska main ingredient hota hai pyaar.

Aur kya sundar decoration kiya tha che ke che ne. Ati sundar.

Yeh pal yahi teher jaaye meri bhi hai tamanna,

par kya kare kismat ko manzoor nahi hai,

Yun humesha humara saath rehna.

Darti hai yeh kaynaat,

Ki kahin ussi ki nazar na lag jaaye,

Issiliye thodi doori banayenge,

Lekin phir jeevan bhar ki khushiyan saath de jaayenge.

**On spot banaya sorry 😅

Do continue soon ❤️

Thanks for PM 💕

This is what as a girl we all should feel proud about, Manda taking a stand for an unknown girl Siya. So so proud of her, but feeling bad as Indrajeet could not take these qualities from his Amma. Well, daya ki baat to aati hi nahi, it is going to end with Raghvan and indrajeet's end, that's it...

And there in Raghuvanshi palace, everyone is doing one or the other thing to make their bhaiya bhabhi happy. Glad.! Siya ne bhale hi nazar ka tika lagaya, but.... Jo hona hai wo toh hoga hi..

And hey, don't feel sorry, this poem is so good. I must say my readers are great in this. Such a lovely and emotional piece it was.! 😘

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Khyati55

Yaaarrrrr.... Thank you so so much for this light hearted lovely chapter,it was actually required at the moment where everything is just going in not so good way and everyone is highly tensed... Ahhh it's like detoxification of highly toxic atmosphere... And Somu what to say,well your dadi got succesful outcome for her daily routine of reading the Ramayan and the Bhagwat Gita as if a reader can feel the good qualities as well as the family values and positive approach of a writer through her story only that no doubt that person will be great in real life too... The way you actually show what is the actual meaning of family , how they fight with you , trouble you but at the same time love and care for you and support you in bad time always melts my heart... Yaar the way you daily write more and more amazing episode the only thing which comes into my mind repeatativly is Haaayee , ek hi to dil hai ,kitni baar churaogi 💖💖💖😘😘😘...

Now coming to the episode...

Well like the episode I will also not gonna say much about the chakrams but I now really feel that Manda should actually stop interfering in her so called husband's life and work and enjoy her own life , I know it's easy to be said but look what she got throughout her married life, nothing but she had kept loosing herself with every passing second, till date she had tried nth times to change her so called family which is nothing less than devil's , had tried at her level best to make them understand that whatever they are doing is wrong but always she gets a cold shoulder and humiliation by her own husband to don't paye heed to his work . If a person is hell bent on digging a grave for himself and jumping in it , then try stopping him in starting but if he is being stubborn at every level then instead of pulling him back just give a hard push into the grave as it will stop everything for once and for all.....

Oye hoye after a long time finally the siblings are trying to be back on the track , atleast for their Bhaiya Bhabhi as they don't want to trouble them more with their unnecessary or actually genuine tension and I actually enjoyed every bit of cake making session and was laughing like maniac throughout the cake making session... The hilarious dialogue of Shatrughan that what's the difference between baking soda and corn starch,they look actually same 🤣🤣.. beta what if the girls add sugar inpl place of salt and vice versa, what's the difference they look same no...🤣🤣... Bharat is actually way too overconfident for his cooking skills 😂😂😂... And especially the baking part😆😆... Had never seen a big flirt than Lakshman... Bhaisahab koi bhi situation ho, but ye janab har jagah khade ho kar flirt kr skte h vo bhi itna naturally aur smoothly ke samne vale ko doubt ho jaye ki ye sach m The Lakshman Raghuvanshi hi h😆🤣... Haaye Urmila kya sharmati h, jaise first time ho😁😁😂😂... Shatrughan ka kya pachka kiya h Shruti ne, O God that Ravan ke bhai vali line😆🤣.. my stomach started paining because of laughing too much and uspar se Lakshman ka expert comment for Shruti...🤣🤣.... Awww Shruti ka cookie zameen par gir gaya and no one cares to help him🤣🤣🤣... SiRa are actually enjoying this scene to the fullest.. Vaah beta Bharat Vaah kya reason diya h sugar na add krne ka and add bhi kiya to poora dabba😂😂😂🤣🤣.. bhabhi ko diabetes ho jayega Maharaj... Ram ne ek baar phir apni bhaiyon ka buri tarah se popat kr diya h behno ke saath milkar...

Aur ab Mahool bada tensed h sabki nighahe Siya pr h jo ye dangerous cake khane jaa rhi h , aur ye kya Siya ki taraf se ek baar phir green signal for the boys😆... But but but signal ke saath warning bhi mili h and expert comment bhi aur isi ke saath siblings apni cake banane ki koshish m nakayamb ho gye pr actual motive m paas 😁🥺😁😁🤗🤗😉😉😉.

Uff iske aage mene kuch nhi bolna I had once again lost myself in the moment completely so that I can cherish this moment in future...

With lots of love 💕💕💕

Waiting for your next update 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Light hearted episode to necessary tha, just before the storm.. so that it is cherished till the happy days are back. And by the way, thanks a ton, from my dadi too 😅🤪 for the praising words. In bachpan, we used to feel bore, isn't it obvious at that time we were not that mature to understand these qualities our culture tells us, we were just interested into dream world of cartoon and power rangers and barbies and what not. But then as we grew, we understood the literal meaning of what Ramayan and Mahabharat tells us and ultimately teaches us. I am so so glad and lucky to be a part of a family, in real and also of forums, where people are so much into our historical things that they understand each and every bit of it. Thanks again Khyati 🤗

Moving towards the biggest chakram, the highlighted words are so so true. Manda to waise hi haar chuki hai in front of the stubborn baap beta, but a final try atleast for Siya.. but no.. they are not going to listen to anything. Now Manda should support Siya and should not cry over the dead bodies of her husband and son.! She should be strong in these times...

Finally, finally we could see the happy few moments of the siblings. Uff, this is giving pain.. but then.. story demands.. let's see what happens the next day 💔

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Apukar

I have a request, at some point in the story, please make Manda slap Raghvan or Suvarna, or both.

Cake making sequence was very funny, nicely put. Lakshman's song and shayeri don't have any difference, kaha se laatein hein ye saab?! Shatrughan falling in ground smiley37 Bharat bhaiya is very confident nowadays! The terrace conversation was cute at first, but you made it scary at the end 🥺 Is it the next day? That unfortunate day? 😟

Eagerly waiting to read further.

Nice idea 😂 we could actually do that.

Lakshman 😂😂😂 bechara, kitna aatur hai romance ke liye.! Finally we could see some of these moments, Shatrughan ki jokergiri, Lakshman ka flirt, Bharat ka bholupan, we are going to miss that for some time...

And yaa... The answer is YES, the next day is the unfortunate day...💔

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi dear

When you will update the next unfortunate day?

Eagerly waiting for the next update

Continue soon and God bless you 💖

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: chsripriya

Hi dear

When you will update the next unfortunate day?

Eagerly waiting for the next update

Continue soon and God bless you 💖

Not sure about the time. Haven't completed yet. Stay tuned 🙂❣️

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