SKR FF 4:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 145 - Page 111

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Golden_Ginni

Loved it Saumya 🤗🤗

Awesome and beautiful part 🤗

I really loved the four boys discussing about their world their love & their aspirations ... They all are discussing how their life changed after their marriage & they are lucky to have such life partner

Even girls too enjoyed with their family & gup shup waiting for their husbands & finally when it was late they slept ... Hmm chalo fir bhi bhoole bhatke ghar aa to gaye ... Wo bhi bhang pee ke 😂

Thankfully Aman got go know & dropped them ... They looked adorable in intoxicated state 😉 kya kya Harquate kari hai & surely they are going to regret it when they are back to senses

I really loved the reactions of boys & girls too cute 😍 & the song was amazing too 😊👍✨ I really think ke boys ke acchi class lagegi iske baadh thankfully elders didn't saw them in state

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗😌🙏

True... Their discussion started from their school, then college and then their after marriage life. Getting those lovely flashbacks was really emotional for them, woh dinn ❤️

Bhoole bhatke ghar ko aa hi gaye 😂 true!! Aman firse chala aaya help karne 😁 Raghuvanshi boys and Aman ki friendship never ending hai 😂 😜

After they are Back to senses tab jo biwiyan chidhayengi na. Pura badla liya jayega Holi ka ...

Thanks a ton Goldie ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thnxx 🤣

Main aishe hi Ram Urmila ko ek type nahin bolithi🤣

Yess di hame bhi poora bachpan dekhna hain dono Rajrishi Raghuvanshi ka🥺par koyina possible na toh aishe chote chote events se adjust karlenge 😍

Yess action ke dwara pyaar jata dete toh words ki zaroorat hi nahin padti🤩🤩 phir bhi words bhi use kardete🤩😂😂


Hn jab ladkiyon unhe cidayengi jaise ladke cidayethe😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Bhuvi_09

Okay...the rest of it is your choice as this is your story. #authorknowsbest But Imma fight you on this. Romancing anyone when they aren't in their senses is TOTALLY wrong. Well if someone has a fantasy like Urmila that's a different thing. There is absolutely nothing positive about this mainly because one person is drunk and other is sober. Now I am not blaming Rajrishi girls because they are just... being wives and it's not like Raghuvanshi boys have a problem. So we can let it slide but please from next time?

Okay from next time I am putting another disclaimer, about this. In case anyone is offended with any "light hearted" track. And is taking it as other way. Because while writing I do not think in deep about any light hearted scenes. I just write it down to add humor.

Let me put another explaination for one more time. They are husband and wife, and the wife has romanced with their husband who had bhaang. They didn't do anything forcefully on the boys. This track was only added coz of many readers wanted boys to get intoxicated and girls to tease them. The suggested song gave me that feeling to add it here. It was not to hurt anyone's sentiments. Nor I am feeling that I did anything toxic and whatever.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Blockbuster update ❤️

Chalo finally ladko ki mahino ki tamanna aaj puri ho gayi…ab Raghuvanshi boys utne cute act krege toh kisse pyar nahi hoga insee🥺ufffff….vaise normally chahe kitne bhi taane mar le apni biwiyon ko lekin yeh pighal toh jate hi hai aakhir charo ladko ki aankho mein aansu aa gaye while praising their wives😍

Aman is forever saviour for Raghuvanshi boys😜…inhe embarrassment se toh bacha hi leta hai humesha..

And then jo bawal kiya bhaisahab ladko ne ghar mein 😂😂Lakshuu is back now with flirting in his bhabhi..that’s the purity in their relation..one needs sense of emotions to understand that..n baki dono ne bhi mauka nahi chodha Siye ke sath flirt karne ka..or jiska romance ka hakk hai vih toh darr ke hi khada ho gaya😂

Shatrughan ki tarif kitni pyari si thi…Laksh ka bubble bath fantasy, LakshMila ki toh fantasy bhi bold hoti hai vaise…Bharat kafi bolna seekh gaya bhyi shadi ke baad, sach mein Manvi ka rang chadh gaya usse….and Ram was the cutest today🙈hawww he was crying or Katti bhi ho gaya vih bhi little finger dikhakar😍😍or uske emotions bhi aa gaye finally in front of Siya jo voh i guess nahi bol paa raha tha…

And last mein ladkio ne itne pyaar se treat kara apne husbands ko…bhang ke nashe mein itna pyaar mil raha hai ladko ko, lottery lag gayi ladko ki toh🙈..or vaise bhi bhang ho ya kuch hamari Rajrishi girls ko pyar jatana aata hai apne patiyon par har state mein bas har baar tarike alag hota hai…kabhi baato se yoh kabhi actions se🥺🥰

Continue soon 😍

Edited by Sonali00 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

I enjoyed the boys reminiscing their childhood. How much I wanted to know about their childhood! Kya hoga apna Bharat bhaiya ka?! He still gets blush thinking he helped girls in their study? 🤦‍♀️ Ram was always their dhaal bhaiya, so the younger two were like shanti se prank karte jao 🤪

Poor Aman, may be not in his wildest dream he thought he has to see the Raghuvanshi boys in nashe se chad gayi mood 😂 But he was the powerpuff girl, I mean saviour of the day! I loved how Ram kept repeating bhaang pi hein, that was adorable 🥰 Bharat to bhaang ke nashe mein bhi padne wale baat kar rahe hein. Lakshman ka itna I love yous- you put it purpsely for us, na? Taaki kuch I love you hum bhi raakh saake? 🤪 Shatrughan was the best, koi bhi gaana nehi chode 😂 He had songs for each and every word that was falling to his ears. Hats off to your memory Saumya, for how you have managed to use the song lyrics 👏

Now coming to the main part ☺️I cannot think any better background than bhaang and the song. The sequence was aag laag gayi. I really was hoping that the girls will take the charge of romance, and you made it yeeeethe playfulness of the song and sequence got my heart.... hayeeeeee ☺️

Now, coming to a serious mood. Yes, having romance in intoxicating state is not accepeted, whether its girls or boys. Because, an intoxicated person is not in a state to give consent according to the law. But, within the partners or husband/wife, having some nashe wale moments to initiate romance or intimacy is not always wrong, especially when the couple have a good understanding between them. So yup, the pattern of relationship matters, the background story matters. Jumping to a conclusion is never a good thing. None of the couple are abusive towards each other, so not for a single moment I felt the girls are forcing boys into romance and boys are just doing things without knowing a thing.

Coming to Rajrishi girls, not even the writer show them as mahan. They have their share of emotions, and isn't it normal? A person in relationship will always feel some possessiveness, if someone goes beyond that, well s/he must possess some control over their lives. But it is not possible for every human to reach that stage. None of the characters any emotion went beyond the limit, except Lakshman. He is known for his anger and yup, every other character gets worried and try to control him. Saumya never showed that any negative emotion is good.

I can totally understand from where some people come from, and I am not saying they are totally wrong. But we GET wrong when we shut ourselves down to see only one side. As I said, pattern of relationship, understanding and background matters a lot. Not everything is always either black or white. I guess, if any of us would feel any of the characters being abusive or going beyond their limit or any of the character facing discrimination or pressure, every one of us would point it out. We read the story from the beginning, we got to know how the characters and their relationship developed, and that's why we know Saumya is not writing any inappropriate sequence.

Believe it or not, juicy stories, little bit of intoxication and sometimes dirty talk are necessary between the couple while getting intimate- and I am not saying it, kamasutra says it. Sex is a very sacred thing, its not only the pleasure of the bodies, it is the release of the souls within the universe. And there are so many things which we consider today as "unethical", were a part of a fruitful end between lovers. Again pattern and understanding of the relationship matters. Instincts beyond the limit is crime while Instincts within a healthy limit is bliss.

Lastly, it is a fanfiction. There are fictions which are straight up dark, some people enjoys it while others may not. We can never expect everything to go in our way, specifically in art form, the artist has the full independence. So it is better if anything makes someone continuously uncomfortable, not to read/watch it. And may be sometimes we should try to understand the point of view of the writer rather than jumping to the conclusion. As far as I know Saumya, while writing a fun sequence and romance, she always keep a light heart, to entertain us.

Okay, ranting done, don't know if could express what I needed to. My longest comment so far. Give me some sabashi please 🤪

PS: I did not skip the bubble bath part, Saumya 😉

Edited by Apukar - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh my Goddd

The hotness was amazing

But but

I lived the after bhaaang wali masti in living room😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 The actions and reactions were tooo funny, I kept on laughing throughout 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Right since Aman came😂 to that "Double H - Smarty"🤣🤣🤣

Oh God Saumya👏👏👏👏👏🤣😂

Outstanding work!! Thank you sooooo much for such a happy shappy lovely shovely update

Love

Mohini

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonali00

Blockbuster update ❤️

Chalo finally ladko ki mahino ki tamanna aaj puri ho gayi…ab Raghuvanshi boys utne cute act krege toh kisse pyar nahi hoga insee🥺ufffff….vaise normally chahe kitne bhi taane mar le apni biwiyon ko lekin yeh pighal toh jate hi hai aakhir charo ladko ki aankho mein aansu aa gaye while praising their wives😍

Aman is forever saviour for Raghuvanshi boys😜…inhe embarrassment se toh bacha hi leta hai humesha..

And then jo bawal kiya bhaisahab ladko ne ghar mein 😂😂Lakshuu is back now with flirting in his bhabhi..that’s the purity in their relation..one needs sense of emotions to understand that..n baki dono ne bhi mauka nahi chodha Siye ke sath flirt karne ka..or jiska romance ka hakk hai vih toh darr ke hi khada ho gaya😂

Shatrughan ki tarif kitni pyari si thi…Laksh ka bubble bath fantasy, LakshMila ki toh fantasy bhi bold hoti hai vaise…Bharat kafi bolna seekh gaya bhyi shadi ke baad, sach mein Manvi ka rang chadh gaya usse….and Ram was the cutest today🙈hawww he was crying or Katti bhi ho gaya vih bhi little finger dikhakar😍😍or uske emotions bhi aa gaye finally in front of Siya jo voh i guess nahi bol paa raha tha…

And last mein ladkio ne itne pyaar se treat kara apne husbands ko…bhang ke nashe mein itna pyaar mil raha hai ladko ko, lottery lag gayi ladko ki toh🙈..or vaise bhi bhang ho ya kuch hamari Rajrishi girls ko pyar jatana aata hai apne patiyon par har state mein bas har baar tarike alag hota hai…kabhi baato se yoh kabhi actions se🥺🥰

Continue soon 😍

Haa itne cutiees ko dekhkar kiska gussa nahi pighlega.? And moreover these are Rajrishi girls, to to hona hi hai..

Sabse jyada bechara to Aman hi hai filhal 😂

Three natkhats are back with their bhabhi.!! Ohh this Siya and her ladlas ka bond, we are missing this.... Yeh to bhai hamesha ka hai, Ram bas dekhta reh jata hai aur baki teeno Siya ki tarif karke chale jate hai, poor Ram 😂😜

After bhaang, yahi to dekhna tha sabko. Boys with their cuteness and girls on fire 🔥 🔥

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Apukar

I enjoyed the boys reminiscing their childhood. How much I wanted to know about their childhood! Kya hoga apna Bharat bhaiya ka?! He still gets blush thinking he helped girls in their study? 🤦‍♀️ Ram was always their dhaal bhaiya, so the younger two were like shanti se prank karte jao 🤪

I know this was requested by you too, the childhood of these boys. How Ram and Bharat handled these two namunas..!!! 😜 We can have more often aisa bich bichme flashbacks...


Originally posted by: Apukar

Poor Aman, may be not in his wildest dream he thought he has to see the Raghuvanshi boys in nashe se chad gayi mood 😂 But he was the powerpuff girl, I mean saviour of the day! I loved how Ram kept repeating bhaang pi hein, that was adorable 🥰 Bharat to bhaang ke nashe mein bhi padne wale baat kar rahe hein. Lakshman ka itna I love yous- you put it purpsely for us, na? Taaki kuch I love you hum bhi raakh saake? 🤪 Shatrughan was the best, koi bhi gaana nehi chode 😂 He had songs for each and every word that was falling to his ears. Hats off to your memory Saumya, for how you have managed to use the song lyrics 👏

Now coming to the main part ☺️I cannot think any better background than bhaang and the song. The sequence was aag laag gayi. I really was hoping that the girls will take the charge of romance, and you made it yeeeethe playfulness of the song and sequence got my heart.... hayeeeeee ☺️

Aman the powerpuff girl today 😂 bechara, always have to handle his four boss.!! Ram with his repetitive things was cute, Bharat with his alphabet was cute, Lakshman ka do chaar I love you tum log rakh lo 😂😜 and Shatrughan, I don't know the songs literally came into my mind automatically 😂

Glad that your suggested song could put 🔥 and ypu loved that. Girls taking charge was something new, never seen before. Hayee hamari sharmili who became real sherni now 😂😜


Originally posted by: Apukar

Now, coming to a serious mood. Yes, having romance in intoxicating state is not accepeted, whether its girls or boys. Because, an intoxicated person is not in a state to give consent according to the law. But, within the partners or husband/wife, having some nashe wale moments to initiate romance or intimacy is not always wrong, especially when the couple have a good understanding between them. So yup, the pattern of relationship matters, the background story matters. Jumping to a conclusion is never a good thing. None of the couple are abusive towards each other, so not for a single moment I felt the girls are forcing boys into romance and boys are just doing things without knowing a thing.

Here it is always a light hearted scenes, we never actually portrait girls to be all hanikarak biwi and boys to be all bechara and whatever. The romance thing, yeah I felt this song will go superb with this track hence I added. You are right, understanding their relationship pattern is very important. And in their case, all four couples, there is nothing like without consent.!!


Originally posted by: Apukar

Coming to Rajrishi girls, not even the writer show them as mahan. They have their share of emotions, and isn't it normal? A person in relationship will always feel some possessiveness, if someone goes beyond that, well s/he must possess some control over their lives. But it is not possible for every human to reach that stage. None of the characters any emotion went beyond the limit, except Lakshman. He is known for his anger and yup, every other character gets worried and try to control him. Saumya never showed that any negative emotion is good.

I can totally understand from where some people come from, and I am not saying they are totally wrong. But we GET wrong when we shut ourselves down to see only one side. As I said, pattern of relationship, understanding and background matters a lot. Not everything is always either black or white. I guess, if any of us would feel any of the characters being abusive or going beyond their limit or any of the character facing discrimination or pressure, every one of us would point it out. We read the story from the beginning, we got to know how the characters and their relationship developed, and that's why we know Saumya is not writing any inappropriate sequence.

The character building was/is important for any story. As of this, each and every character has been built and positively improved. Let it be Dashrath being overpossesive for Ram, Kranti being insecure, Lakshman's anger, Bharat's underconfidence, and many more to list. We have always seen negative things should be kept back and hence these characters are developed and are still into that. Talking about possessiveness, then I think there is a difference between being possesive and being overpossesive. These boys or girls are possesive for each other which I think is normal in any love relationship.


Originally posted by: Apukar


Believe it or not, juicy stories, little bit of intoxication and sometimes dirty talk are necessary between the couple while getting intimate- and I am not saying it, kamasutra says it. Sex is a very sacred thing, its not only the pleasure of the bodies, it is the release of the souls within the universe. And there are so many things which we consider today as "unethical", were a part of a fruitful end between lovers. Again pattern and understanding of the relationship matters. Instincts beyond the limit is crime while Instincts within a healthy limit is bliss.

Another beautiful point.

If we look at the starting ka story, before marriage, no much romance or any of the scene was shown. Even after their marriage love making was not shown in any intimate sequence. But when the readers themselves started requesting and suggesting and due to the popularity of this FF, I decided to raise the bar. Which I don't think is anything wrong. Again I will repeat, they are normal human beings which will get romantic and into that feeling and we are just reading them not to get offended or uncomfortable.


Originally posted by: Apukar


Lastly, it is a fanfiction. There are fictions which are straight up dark, some people enjoys it while others may not. We can never expect everything to go in our way, specifically in art form, the artist has the full independence. So it is better if anything makes someone continuously uncomfortable, not to read/watch it. And may be sometimes we should try to understand the point of view of the writer rather than jumping to the conclusion. As far as I know Saumya, while writing a fun sequence and romance, she always keep a light heart, to entertain us.

Okay, ranting done, don't know if could express what I needed to. My longest comment so far. Give me some sabashi please 🤪

PS: I did not skip the bubble bath part, Saumya 😉

Thanku for pointing this point. The romance and fun sequence is always to entertain all of us. This modern take of Ramayana will definitely have a lot of sadness, heartbreaking, and separation part between not only the two but I have put light on other remaining three couples too. So to have some positivity in between and for our happiness, these sequences and tracks are obvious.!

Shanoka, your longest comment till now, but perfectly put words whatever you wanted to say. I appreciate your efforts and a big thanks from my side as a writer. ❤️😘


P.S: Lakshman and his boldness, no one has answer to that. Not even Urmila 😜

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Dharma_dasi..

Oh my Goddd

The hotness was amazing

But but

I lived the after bhaaang wali masti in living room😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 The actions and reactions were tooo funny, I kept on laughing throughout 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Right since Aman came😂 to that "Double H - Smarty"🤣🤣🤣

Oh God Saumya👏👏👏👏👏🤣😂

Outstanding work!! Thank you sooooo much for such a happy shappy lovely shovely update

Love

Mohini

Thanks Mohini 🥺

Bhaang wali masti has to be shown. Ladkiyan ne enjoy kar liya at Holi time then why not boys.? In this case, why should girls have all the fun 😜

Happy shappy lovely shovely tracks are obvious and much needed after and before a storm of sadness for them.!! It's always shown in the story...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Agree with u di... This is just a fan fiction only for a entartainment purpose and i love the way this story has been potrateyed somuya di ne koyi toxicity nahin dikhayi..sab naturally perfectly potrayte huga huya hain.. unlike tv serials and bollywood...Tv shows movies produced by tv instury and bollywood is filled with toxicity example is kabir singh and many more tv serials toh ek hi msz dete torture saho self respect kho do that is goodness sanskaripan greatness and true love...I know India main ladies ko devi mante they are super women i agree and i respect them but the way TV serials are showing for me this is disappointing even tv serial main dikhate jo independent hain jyaada padha likha hain wha vamp jo galat par muhain na kholo bado ko jawabab nahin dete karke kam padhi likhi ho ghar sambhale is best.. jab ki dono apne level main thik hain par tv serials ne kuch ur hi dikhaya🙄 main ek baar TRP ke video main dekhithi about some bollywood movies.. Even i wonder how the hell they are existing yaar... Got to know about Pinjra Khoobsurti ka from their only how its even possible ki after being tortured a lot she still is in love with the male protagonist...kiya msz de rahe yeh log...torture sahoge toh pyaar ho jayega...creepiest thing is this na even that male protagonist kisi ladke ko female protagonist se milana nahin cahati usliye clinic khol diya only for female..i find this tv serial toxic but still people are in with the ships of this serial..i mean how yaar yeh bhi pyaar huya..kiya hoagaya hain hamare desh ko kaisi choice hain TV serials main bhi yahi dikhate male charecter easily female par shak kar deta trust naam ki chiz hi nahin hain bahut insult karta then leap then phir ek saath then phir separation ke liye aisgi trust shak insult karne bali chize but still this is called as true love i mean how and people love their shipping ekta kapoor ke shows ki toh history hain...logo ki choice sachi main bakwas hain people love toxicity and illogical stuff ushko pyaar bolte...TRP ke through imli serial ke bare main pata laga how is it exam possible yaar after knowing ki husband ne cheat kiya action lene ki waja they are fighting ki kisko milega..matlab kuch bhi..yeh sab dekh log bhi yahi expect karte kuch bhi ho jaye sabkuch sehelo par pati chodo mat pati parmeswar and all jaise stupidity logo ko pasand hain..Thapad jaise movies bakwas lagte par yeh sab badhiya coming to bollywood bahut sare scenes are really annoying but still logo ki fav movie banti hain.. jaise unhealthy way main flirting jabardasti shaadi dushman se shaadi se pyaar yeh sab hi bas bollywood and tv serials dikhate jiska Indian society main padta and result toh aaye din dikhte... Even tv shows has promoted extra maratial affairs i don't remember the name but have heared about this serial which was onaired in colours and people them i mean how and ur bhi bahut hain aishe..never ending list hain..jiske bare main ur mention karte gaye toh yeh comment end hi nahin hoga..


And iss hisab se somuya di ki ff is millions time better than above mention stuff...i am glad ki ff main aishi toxicity nahin hain.. couples main understanding hain maturity caring love respect and wha sab kuch hain jo sab kuch hona cahiye... And above all charecters main tv serials ki tarah koyi mahanpan nahin normal inshano jaisa gunn hain jo ham sab pasand karte....


I don't have any intention to hurt any one sry if any one get offended... This are my thoughts which i just want to share...baki main pagal huin toh din raat patar patar karti toh kripaya ignore kare 😂😂

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