Originally posted by: Apukar
I enjoyed the boys reminiscing their childhood. How much I wanted to know about their childhood! Kya hoga apna Bharat bhaiya ka?! He still gets blush thinking he helped girls in their study? 🤦♀️ Ram was always their dhaal bhaiya, so the younger two were like shanti se prank karte jao 🤪
I know this was requested by you too, the childhood of these boys. How Ram and Bharat handled these two namunas..!!! 😜 We can have more often aisa bich bichme flashbacks...
Originally posted by: Apukar
Poor Aman, may be not in his wildest dream he thought he has to see the Raghuvanshi boys in nashe se chad gayi mood 😂 But he was the powerpuff girl, I mean saviour of the day! I loved how Ram kept repeating bhaang pi hein, that was adorable 🥰 Bharat to bhaang ke nashe mein bhi padne wale baat kar rahe hein. Lakshman ka itna I love yous- you put it purpsely for us, na? Taaki kuch I love you hum bhi raakh saake? 🤪 Shatrughan was the best, koi bhi gaana nehi chode 😂 He had songs for each and every word that was falling to his ears. Hats off to your memory Saumya, for how you have managed to use the song lyrics 👏
Now coming to the main part ☺️I cannot think any better background than bhaang and the song. The sequence was aag laag gayi. I really was hoping that the girls will take the charge of romance, and you made it yeeeethe playfulness of the song and sequence got my heart.... hayeeeeee ☺️
Aman the powerpuff girl today 😂 bechara, always have to handle his four boss.!! Ram with his repetitive things was cute, Bharat with his alphabet was cute, Lakshman ka do chaar I love you tum log rakh lo 😂😜 and Shatrughan, I don't know the songs literally came into my mind automatically 😂
Glad that your suggested song could put 🔥 and ypu loved that. Girls taking charge was something new, never seen before. Hayee hamari sharmili who became real sherni now 😂😜
Originally posted by: Apukar
Now, coming to a serious mood. Yes, having romance in intoxicating state is not accepeted, whether its girls or boys. Because, an intoxicated person is not in a state to give consent according to the law. But, within the partners or husband/wife, having some nashe wale moments to initiate romance or intimacy is not always wrong, especially when the couple have a good understanding between them. So yup, the pattern of relationship matters, the background story matters. Jumping to a conclusion is never a good thing. None of the couple are abusive towards each other, so not for a single moment I felt the girls are forcing boys into romance and boys are just doing things without knowing a thing.
Here it is always a light hearted scenes, we never actually portrait girls to be all hanikarak biwi and boys to be all bechara and whatever. The romance thing, yeah I felt this song will go superb with this track hence I added. You are right, understanding their relationship pattern is very important. And in their case, all four couples, there is nothing like without consent.!!
Originally posted by: Apukar
Coming to Rajrishi girls, not even the writer show them as mahan. They have their share of emotions, and isn't it normal? A person in relationship will always feel some possessiveness, if someone goes beyond that, well s/he must possess some control over their lives. But it is not possible for every human to reach that stage. None of the characters any emotion went beyond the limit, except Lakshman. He is known for his anger and yup, every other character gets worried and try to control him. Saumya never showed that any negative emotion is good.
I can totally understand from where some people come from, and I am not saying they are totally wrong. But we GET wrong when we shut ourselves down to see only one side. As I said, pattern of relationship, understanding and background matters a lot. Not everything is always either black or white. I guess, if any of us would feel any of the characters being abusive or going beyond their limit or any of the character facing discrimination or pressure, every one of us would point it out. We read the story from the beginning, we got to know how the characters and their relationship developed, and that's why we know Saumya is not writing any inappropriate sequence.
The character building was/is important for any story. As of this, each and every character has been built and positively improved. Let it be Dashrath being overpossesive for Ram, Kranti being insecure, Lakshman's anger, Bharat's underconfidence, and many more to list. We have always seen negative things should be kept back and hence these characters are developed and are still into that. Talking about possessiveness, then I think there is a difference between being possesive and being overpossesive. These boys or girls are possesive for each other which I think is normal in any love relationship.
Originally posted by: Apukar
Believe it or not, juicy stories, little bit of intoxication and sometimes dirty talk are necessary between the couple while getting intimate- and I am not saying it, kamasutra says it. Sex is a very sacred thing, its not only the pleasure of the bodies, it is the release of the souls within the universe. And there are so many things which we consider today as "unethical", were a part of a fruitful end between lovers. Again pattern and understanding of the relationship matters. Instincts beyond the limit is crime while Instincts within a healthy limit is bliss.
Another beautiful point.
If we look at the starting ka story, before marriage, no much romance or any of the scene was shown. Even after their marriage love making was not shown in any intimate sequence. But when the readers themselves started requesting and suggesting and due to the popularity of this FF, I decided to raise the bar. Which I don't think is anything wrong. Again I will repeat, they are normal human beings which will get romantic and into that feeling and we are just reading them not to get offended or uncomfortable.
Originally posted by: Apukar
Lastly, it is a fanfiction. There are fictions which are straight up dark, some people enjoys it while others may not. We can never expect everything to go in our way, specifically in art form, the artist has the full independence. So it is better if anything makes someone continuously uncomfortable, not to read/watch it. And may be sometimes we should try to understand the point of view of the writer rather than jumping to the conclusion. As far as I know Saumya, while writing a fun sequence and romance, she always keep a light heart, to entertain us.
Okay, ranting done, don't know if could express what I needed to. My longest comment so far. Give me some sabashi please 🤪
PS: I did not skip the bubble bath part, Saumya 😉
Thanku for pointing this point. The romance and fun sequence is always to entertain all of us. This modern take of Ramayana will definitely have a lot of sadness, heartbreaking, and separation part between not only the two but I have put light on other remaining three couples too. So to have some positivity in between and for our happiness, these sequences and tracks are obvious.!
Shanoka, your longest comment till now, but perfectly put words whatever you wanted to say. I appreciate your efforts and a big thanks from my side as a writer. ❤️😘
P.S: Lakshman and his boldness, no one has answer to that. Not even Urmila 😜
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