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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

Part - 21




Geet is excited to hear him say it...


Geet closes her eyes and sharpens her ears so that she won't miss those beautiful words from him for the first time...


Maan: tum bahut pyaari ho


What? Geet is disappointed...Geet feels like banging her head on the wall...


She wanted to hear something else...


" Geet, tum bahut sundar ho, aur mein tumse bahut pyaar kartha hoon Geet, I love you Geet"


Maan ko aaise kuch kehna chahiye tha, haina babaji?


Mein kya koi kudhiya hoon? Pyaari khudiya?


Mein toh ek sundar 18 saal ki ladhki hoon, aur inko abhi bhi mein koi bachi lagthi hoon, haina?


Geet: aapko yahi kehna tha?


Maan is surprised...


Maan: nahi toh


Geet: phir, yahan kyun aaye ho?


Maan: tum mujhe galat samaj rahi ho Geet


Geet: kya? Mein galat samaj rahi hoon? Hare babaji? Ab inko kya karien?


Maan: tum meri fikar mat karo, aur bathao, tumne apne exams kaise kiya?


Geet: ab inko meri exams ki padhi?


Maan: Geet, mein kuch pooch raha hoon


Geet: bahut achche kiya hai, aur abhi sirf ek aur paper bakhi hai, mere exams katam hothe hi mujhe koi kaam dhoondhna padega, aap mere liye koi ahchca kaam dilwa sakthe ho kya?


Geet turns to this boring topic as Maan is only interested in that...


Maan: very good, I'll think about it


Geet: ho gaya? Gud night


Geet tries to cover herself and sleep...


Maan tries to stop her...


And between their push and pull Maan falls over Geet...


And they freeze for a moment...


Maan keeps staring her for a while...


Geet anticipates something...


Maan leaves her saying...abhi nahi


Maan: Geet, mein tumme kuch bathane aaya tha aur tumme dekhthe hi sab kuch bhool jaatha hoon


Geet: kya?


Maan: aao mere saath


Maan takes her to his room...and he opens his cupboard and takes out an album...


It's his little sister's b'day album...


They are at their village home...


It looks very elegant and beautiful...


Typical Indian farmhouse with serene surroundings and simple but colorful interiors...


And Geet immediately recognizes Maan...


Geet: ye toh aap hi haina?


Maan: haan


Geet: ye dadima hai


Maan: tumme kaise patha?


Geet: meinne unki tasveer dekha haina?


Geet shows the one on the table...


Maan: aur ye meri choti behen hai, ye maa aur ye papa, aur ye dekho Vicky


Geet looks at Maan and tears fill his eyes looking at those pictures...


Geet: aap ro rahe ho?


Maan hides his tears...


Geet: kya hua?


Maan: ye sab ab mere saath nahi hai Geet


Geet: par ab toh mein hoona aapke saath


She goes and hugs Maan...


Maan feels better now...


He hugs her back...



Maan: haan Geet, ab toh mein akhela nahi hoon

Geet: aur mein bhi ab akheli nahi hoon, haina auntyji?


Geet remembers her aunty and uncle...


Maan: Geet, tum bahut achchi ho


Geet: bas, achchi hoon?


Geet looks at herself in the mirror...


Maan: aur bahut samjhdar ho


Geet: aur?


Maan: aur kya?


Geet: koi ek ladhki ko aaise tareef karthe hai kya?


Maan: phir kaise karthe? Tum hi bathao


Geet: woh tum bahut koobsurat ho, tummra chehra, chandini ka chand hai


Maan smiles...


Maan: tumme aaise tareef ki kya zaroorat hai Geet?


Geet: toh mein sundar nahi hoon?


Geet is disappointed...


Maan: tum toh kuch zyada hi sundar ho Geet, issiliye toh mein tumse itna dhoor rehtha hoon


Geet: kyun?


Maan: kyunki


Maan gets closer and pulls her into his embrace...


Maan: jab tum paas hothi haina? Kuch kuch hotha hai Geet




Geet: kya?

Geet steps back...and runs away...


Maan: hare, Geet, rukh jao


Maan runs after her...


Geet goes to her room and closes the door...


Maan: Geet, darwaza kholo


Geet: nahi


Maan: Geeet


Geet: aap chale jao


Maan: nahi jaaoonga


Geet: mujhe sona hai


Maan: par mujhe neendh kaise aayegi?


Geet: woh aapki problem hai


Maan: meri problem hai?


Geet: haan, gud night


Maan: gud night Geet


Maan keeps standing at the door and Geet too stays close to the door...


Geet: aap jaoona


Maan: tumme kaise patha ki mein yahi hoon?


Geet: patha hai


Maan: toh darwaza kyun nahi kholthi?


Geet opens the door...


Geet: ab kya hai?


Geet pretends to be angry...


Maan: kuch nahi


Geet: toh, jao, sojao


Maan kisses her gud night and leaves...


Geet likes it very much...


Next day Geet goes back to the hostel...


Geet thinks about Maan and his family...


She realizes that Maan too needs help...


Just as Maan had helped her get out of her mess she has to do something to make him happy...


She knows that Maan needs love and a happy family...


And to start a family we need atleast two people, we have Geet and Maan...


But they are still like well known starngers...


Geet has no idea how to get closer to his heart...


How to assure him that she is there for him...


She doesn't mean anything physical, that she knows very well that Maan is into her long before... And that will happen by itself...


Maan is slowly but steadily progressing anyways...


But the problem is to make him feel that he has got someone to share not only his love but also his worries...


He has made the first step forward by letting her peep into his lonely world...where everyone close to his heart and soul just remain in his memories...


Geet is frustrated that she couldn't do anything...


It's not her fault, she is still young and immature, not even strong enough to face her problems, for that too she needed Maan, now how would she help him...


And she has got only two more days to think...


She had to come up with an idea soon, for then she will have to start her life afresh...


She knows that Maan is desperate to have her home, start their life together but he is hesitant b'coz for him she is still that innocent girl who accepted him b'coz of her terrible background and she had no other option than to come with him...


Geet decides that she needs more time to accomplish her mission so she opts to go for a short tour with her friends...


Why not? This maybe the last chance for her to be with her friends...and everyone is so excited about this tour...


The only one who is not so happy with this plan is Maan...


Maan has been planning a surprise for Geet...


He is thinking of moving into her room itself...


It's not fair for them to stay in two rooms in the same house after they have vowed to be partners for life...haina?


Geet wouldn't mind sharing her room...


But maybe she would demand Maan's room if he moves to her room...anything is possible...she is so possessive about her house...and also very much like Maan, ziddi...


Whatever, Maan has decided that it's time for him to break his bahelor's vow and become a family man...with atleast 3 or 4 kids...


A couple of children like him and a couple like Geet, and maybe if Geet wants she can have a few more...he wants a very big family...


He wants to make her his wife in everyway, he wants to have her totally for himself...he wants to take their relationship to the next level...he is fed up of being lonely and single...


How could he not mingle with such a beautiful wife at home...


Geet is so near yet so far...he is just waiting for her studies to complete...


This separation is too hard for him...he is not ready to wait any longer...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Part - 22



Finally the wait is over...


It's time for Geet to say adieu to her hostel...


He himself goes to take Geet home on the last day...


But Geet is yet to tell him about her plans...


She is afraid that Maan would get angry with her for not asking his permission...


MSK is now her hubby haina?


She is waiting for the last minute to reveal her plans so that Maan won't be able to stop her...


Maan comes and finds everyone ready to leave...


Yes, it's must be very hard for them to separate...


And it must be hard for Geet too as she is going to enter a new world alltogether...


Geet is busy shouting instructions to everyone...


Maan already knows about her bossy attitude but finds it amusing to see her friends running around her and taking orders from her...


Maan thinks about himsef ordering everyone at KC...



But that is different, they work for him and he pays them for that...



Here, these people just do it out of love and also there is no ego between them...


It's nice to have a group of crazy and true friends around you...


Geet: Pinky, ye Pinky kahan chali gayi?


Geet is shouting aloud and searching Pinky...


Maan keeps looking at her and is admiring evrey bit of her dramebazi...


He had already seen her doing this at KM with the KC staff but it's always amusing to see her like this...Maan then imagines her joining KC and for a moment Maan imagines taking orders from Geet at KC...ohhh no...what about his reputation as DD at KC...


For a minute Maan has doubts about offering her a job...


It may not be a good idea, he can offer her a partnership, that would suit her better...


And partners can have equal say in the decisions, haina?


Pinky: Geeet, Geeet


Pinky stops seeing Maan...


Only she knows Maan and not the others...


Geet has not yet noticed him for she didn't expect that Maan would come to take her...


She thought she would call him and inform hin about the trio and just leave before he could decide otherwise...



She would just let him know that everything has been preplanned and she couldn't change her plans now...


Never in her wildest dreams did she thought that she woukd end up marrying MSK...haina babji?


Geet: Pinky tuh kahan thi? Aur ye tere haath mein kya hai?


Pinky si speechless...also her mouth is full...


Pinky: ohhh Geee Gee


Geet: ye kya hai?


Geet snatches the bag from her...


It's fully loaded, with all sorts of snacks...


Geet: Pinky, tumme wahan bhi aaise hi khake rehna hai toh tu issko lekhe ghar kyun nahi jaathi?


Maan: Geet, tum ghar kab aaogi?


Geet turns and looks at Maan...


She is shocked...


Geet: aap, yahan?


Maan: chalo, Geet, tummare luggage kahan hai?


Geet: aap yahan kyun aaye ho?


Maan: what? tumme ghar lekhe jaane


Geet: par sir


Maan stares...


Sab ke samne sir sir kehthi toh Maan ko bahut bhura lagega haina?


Geet: woh, mera matlab hai, mein ghar nahi aa sakthi



Maan is shocked...

Ye kya naya tamasha hai? hare, babaji, iss ladhki ko ab kya ho gaya?


Maan: kya bakwaas hai? tum ghar nahi jaaogi toh phir kahan jaaogi?


Geet: hum na, kahin goomne jaa rahe hai


Maan: what?


Geet: Pinky, tu bathao


Maan looks at Pinky and Pinky swallows everything in a sec and just blinks...


Maan: Pinky


Pinky: ji


Maan: ye kya keh rahi hai?


Pinky: ji, hum hum


Maan: jaldhi bolo


Pinky: Geet, hum kahan jaa rahe hai?


Achcha hua Pinky ko yaad nahi, warna kadbad ho jaatha...


Geet: hum, kahin dhoor jaa rahe hai, bahut dhoor


Maan: Geeet, tum mujhse kuch toh kadbad hai, ye kya ho raha hai


Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai, hum sab aakhri bar saath mein ek trip jaane ka plan kiya hai, ye toh hum bahut din pehle hi plan kar liya tha


Maan: tumne mujhe batahya kyun nahi?


Geet: mujhe kaise patha ki mein bhi inkke saath jaa sakthi? Pehle toh mujhe yahi doubt tha ki mein apne exams puri kar paoongi ya nahi, par aapka lak lak shuker hai ki aaj meinne bhi apne degree puri karli


Geet tries to butter Maan...


Geet: aur aapke wajhe se mujhe sabke saath jane ka ek mokha mil raha hai, aap mujhe rokhenge toh nahi


Geet makes a sad face and looks at Maan as if she is a little child waiting for her mother to get her a chocolate...



Now Maan couldn't stop her, she has this knack to trap him always, where he has no other way but to accept her wishes...



If he tries to stop her she wpuld think that he is also like that idiot Daman trying to threaten her in the name of marriage and relationships...


Maan reluctantly lets her go...


Maan: mein tumme kyun rokhoonga?


He looks at her and he is really upset...


Aur kitne din Geet, ab mujhse ye dhooriyan bardaasht nahi hotha...


Jadhi wapas aajao Geet, Maan tummare bina adhoora hai...


Geet: thanks, aap bahut achche ho, meinne kaha na Pinky, Maan sir mujhe kabhi nahi rokhenge, ab dekha tumne, woh bahut achche hai


Ab issne sabke mere barein mein kya kya bathakke rakha hai? ye toh isske babaji hi jaanthe...


Hope she has not said anything silly about me...


Maan just wants to escape before he is embarrassed infront of her friends...


Issne sabko mere barein mein bathadiya? Ohhh no...mein kaise kudh yahan aake pasgaya?


Itne din toh log Maan ke barein mein kuch bhi nahi jaanthe the, ab toh issne sabko meri kahaaniyan sunakke mere reputation karab karke rakha hai...


It's better to leave ...


Maan: toh Geet, aap log kaise jaathe ho?


Geet: hum ne gadhi ka intrezaam karliya hai


Maan then calls her aside...


Geet: ye kya hai?


Maan: Geet, tum kab lautogi?


Geet: 10 20 din hoga


Maan: kya? Itne tum akise jaa sakthi?


Geet: kyun? Aap nahi chahathe ki mein apne dhosthon ke saath jaaon?


Maan: aaisa nahi hai Geeet


Geet: phir?


Maan: teek hai, par ye aakhri bar hoga, agle bar tumme kahin bhi jaana hai toh mein tumme lekhe jaaonga, samjhi tum?


Geet: aapke saath jaake maza nahi aayega


Maan: what?


Maan stares...


Geet: woh...meinne bas yuhi kehdhi


Maan: tum kahan jaa rahi ho? mujhe uss kagah ka address chahiye


Geet: address?


Maan: haan, mujhe ye toh jaana hai


Geet: par hum kissi jungle mein jaa rahe hai, wahan koi address nahi hai


Maan: what? aaise kaunsa jagah hai?


Geet: ye bahut remote place hai, hum wahan tents mein rahenge, aur trecking bhi karenge, bahut maza aayega


Maan: kya? remote area hai?


Geet: haan, prohibited forest hai


Maan is worried...


Geet is very careless and it's not safe to let her go...


Maan: Geet, tum nahi jaa sakthi


Geet: kya? par kyun?


Maan: meinne kaha na, tum nahi jaa sakthi, mein tumme kahin bhi lekhe jaatha hoon


Geet: nahi, mujhe aapke saath nahi jaana


Maan: Geeet, ye kaise zidd hai?


Geet: haan, sir, aap itne ziddi kyun ho?


Maan: Geeet


Geet: mujhe patha hai, aap Dhust danav ho, bahut bhure ho, aap bhi mujhe sab ke tarah apne control mein rakhna chahthe ho, haina?


Maan: isse kaun behes kar saktha? Hum kuch ehthe toh ye kuch aur samajhthi aur kuch bhi bolthi rehthi hai


Geet: aapne kuch kaha?


Maan: nahi, tumme jaana hai?


Geet: haan


Maan: toh teek hai, jao, lekhin sambalkke Geet, aur tummare saath Pinky ke alawa kaun kaun aatha hai?


Maan jaantha hai ki iss Pinky toh Geet se bhi badi buddu hai...


Geet: hum sab jaa rahe hai, aapko chintha karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, 10 ladhkiyan aur 20 ladhke, pure class jaa rahi hai




Maan is little relieved now...but then he is a little jealous...

Itne sare ladhkon bhi saath jaathe hai...kaash ye Geet mujhe apne college ke days mein hi milthi? Mein bhi aaise sab ke saath maza kartha...


But those days are gone...Maan had never missed all these, but now he feels as if he had missed out a lot...why worry Maan? Geet haina? Ab Geet ke saath jahan bhi jaana hai jaa sakthe ho...aur jaldh hi Geet tumme bhi badal degi...


Geet: ab kya soch rahe ho?


Geet si worried that he is thinking of some more reasons to stop her...


Maan smiles and he feels as if people are watching them...


Yes, everyone is watching them only...


Maan turns towards them...


They come towards him...


Friends: halo sir, nice to meet you


Maan talks with them and he is convinced that Geet would be safe in their company...


Maan: Geeet


Geet: haan


Maan: yahan aao


Geet: ab kya hai? babaji, inko yahan kyun aana tha?


Maan: Geet, ye lo


Geet: ye kya hai?


Maan: paise


Geet: mere paas haina, meinne Adi sir se liya haina, pehle hi


Maan had told Adi to give Geet money whenever she neede from the time of the renovation itself and it's still continuing...


Ab Maan ko kya patha ki Geet ne litna karcha kiya hai...


Aur Maan doesn't care about that...


He wants her to feel free , and Geet is not afraid to spend Maan's money...afterall it's now her money too...


Maan: ye bhi rakhlo Geet


Geet: aap ko kuch chahiye? Aap ko kuch lekhe aaoon?


Maan is happy that she asked...


Maan: teek hai


Geet: par wahan toh kuch nahi milega


Ye lo, ye ladhki toh hamesha aaise hi Maan ko pareshaan karthe rahegi...


Maan: what? mujhe kuch nahi chahiye


Geet: teek hai


Maan: OK then, enjoy your trip everyone, bye Geet


Maan leaves after seeing them off...

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#23

Part - 23



Geet ka mission shuru ho gaya...


Geet ke jaane ke badh Maan bahut akhela mehsoos kartha...


Itne din toh akhela hi tha, par ussko kabhi itna bhura nahi laga...


Pehle toh Maan ke zindagi mein Geet nahi thi...ab th aagayi haina? Aur ab toh Maan ko Geet ki saath ki aadat padgayi hai...hamesha nahi toh bhi weekends mein saath thi...aur jab Maan ne socha ab Geet hamesha ke liye meri ho gayi hai aur 24*7 mere saath hogi toh ye pagal ladhki ne toh Maan ko phir se akhele chod dhiya hai...


Aane do ussko, mein usse strictly keh doong ki abhi kahin bhi jaana hai toh mujhse pehle permission lena padega...ye samaj thi kya pane aapko? Yahan koi akhela reh reh ke pagal ho raha hai aur ye toh chali gayi chutti manane...


Ye koi bachi hai kya? chutti manane jaane ki?


Usski shadhi ho gayi,aur bechara pathi usska kab se intrezaar kar raha hai...


Usske saath batein karne ki, shararat karne ki, aur thoda romance karne ki...


Then Maan thinks that she is still young and he shoudn't expect more from her...


It's the time to enjoy life, if he has missed it, why should Geet miss it too?


But Geet, you should be missing your MSK, haina?


Or is that only me who is missing Geet so much?


No no, she would be thinking about me only...


Maan keeps on thinking some thing or the other about Geet...


He couldn't even call her and speak with her as her mobile is not reachable...


Maan hates this place? Why on earth she should go hide in such a place?


If it's somewhere else he would have followed her easily...


But this place is a mystery for him...


But Maan has conveniently forgottem that he also used to go fpr his jungle camps and Dadi would be worried about his whereabouts...


Now he realizes his mistakes...maybe that's why babaji is punishing him...


What? when did Maan start thinking like Geet?


Maan toh yahan soch socch ke pagal ho raha hai...



Ab patha bhi nahi ye kab aayegi?

KC is suffering the most...


Maan stays at KC longer for he hates going home without Geet...


All the staff, specially Adi is having a nightmare...


He had to stay back at KC & work in the late hours of the night...


What's even worse is that Maan never thinks about dinner?


Poor Adi, Geet hothi toh kitna achch hotha?


Pinky bhi saath hogi aur kahne ko kuch na kuch toh hotha hi rehtha...


Adi is also getting tired of this long hours at work and he too decides to take a break...


Romeo and the others too feel that they needed a break...


They decide to go on a vacation...


And who will get Maan's permission?


That's the biggest problem...


Some have gone on sick leave and a few have asked permission for personnel reasons...


Maan is getting angrier day by day...and he is waiting to explode...


As usual it's Adi... poor Adi...Maan calls Adi...


Adi doesn't realize the seriousness of the situation...


He jokingly tells Maan that they have completed the last project well before time and the next project is scheduled for the next week only...


And they are all getting paid for no work at all, moreover they are tired of over working and it would be nice to take a break...


Maan gets furious but later thinks it's better for him to get this break...


He has to make some changes at home before Geet arrives...he had to shift his things...


And so he gives permission for Adi & party to take a break...


Adi thinks that Maan is also planning a jungle camping...


For those who are back working at KC it's just like a vacation as Maan is on leave...


Maan is busy thinking how to surprise Geet...


He keeps shuffling his things and arranging and rearanging things...


Also the garden is almost in full bloom and makes sure everything is perfect when Geet comes...


The servants are surprised by this new interest of Maan...


They are also much happier to do their work as it is being appreciated then and there by Maan along with the criticism...they are used only to the criticism and it's good to hear a word of praise now and them from your malik, haina?


Even without being present Geet has changed Maan so much...


He is now enjoying whatever he does...not like before, he is not only concerned about perfection of his job but also has time to appreciate the efforts put by the staff and also has the heart to look at the joy and happiness the work brings...


Now the satisfaction is there, yes , he is happy about the changes...



It's never wrong to change for the better...

What's life without change? It's boring and you get tired of the routines...


So, let's keep changing for the better...


Now Maan has leant one more lesson, if oyu think whatever oyu do is the best then you will never improve, if you want to improve keep looking for the changes...that would take you forward, else oyu would stagnate, Geet is like a river and Maan was like a stagnanat lake, she has flowed into him and taken him on her ride along with her ...


Maan has started to enjoy life, even tries the swing, enjoying the evening breeze that brings the fgragrance of the blooming garden and this place is full of life, with the bees buzzing...and the only disappointment is, Geet is not with him...


As Maan tries his hands at cooking to Nakul's surprise, he learns to make Geet's favourite Gol gappe...but poor Nakul had to suffer a lot, Maan gives him a hard time till he perfects the art of making gol gappe...'


This is crazy...Maan had never thought that cooking can be so much fun...


Definitely not for Nakul...with Maan donning the chefs cap it's nothing less than a nightmare...but thank god Geet balled Maan that evening and Maan is all set to go take her home...


Nakul is very happy that the kitchen is all for himself now...he hates intruders...specially MSK...


Geet asks Maan to come to a certain place...


When Maan goes there and waits for Geet, he only finds Adi...


Maan is surprised...


Adi says that Geet had arranged a surprise for Maan and takes the drivers seat...


Maan keeps wondering what are these guys up to?


He s sure that all this is Geet's plan...


And Adi and party have been working for Geet?


What's this babaji? Maan pays them and they serve Geet?


Maan is not angry this time and Adi is also surprised like Nakul...


Maan has been surprising everyone nowadays...all thanks to Geet...


Maan keeps staring Adi and looking out ...


He is clueless to what Geet is upto...


She is literally kidnapping him with the help of his own aadmi, Adi...


Adi couldn't control his laughter watching Maan s plight...


If it were another day Adi wouldn't dare to take a ride all alone with MSK that too when it's nothing official...


Adi breaks the silence...ha ha ha ha ha haha...


Maan: Adiii


Maan loses his temper...poor Maan he had been controlling himself for long...


Now he has to get an answer...what's wrong with everyone, they all behave strange...


But Maan has forget that nothing has changed but Maan and his attitude...


Maan: Adi, yahan koi tamasha chal raha hai kya?


Adi: nahi sir


Maan: aur tumme patha bhi hai ki hum kahan jaa rahe hai?


Adi: ji sir


Maan: hum kahan jaa rahe hai?


Adi: hum Geet m'am se milne jaa rahe hai


Maan thinks that this Adi is of no use...


Maan stares him...


Adi pretends to have taken his drivng too seriously...


He keeps looking forward...


Maan is puzzled as they seemed to be heading nowhere...


They aren't taking any familiar route...


Are we going to join Geet's camp?


Then Maan has not come prepared...but what's Adi doing here?


Maybe Geet invited him? Maan is suddenly disappointed...


Geet didn't invite Maan, is he too old for them?


Maan looks at himself, he is not that old...


Maybe these two years seemed to be like two decades for him as he was all alone...having no idea what he wanted and having lost interest in everything...


Maan keeps thinking and thinking but couldn't figure out anything...he gives up and decides tp ask Adi itself...maybe he should call geet...


But Geet is not attending his call...


Pinky attented and said Geet is too busy to talk with Maan...


This angered him, but he is getting restless, what's going on?


If this girl insane? Yes, she might act mad at times but what about the others?


Has everyone gone crazy?


Maan: Adi


Adi: ha ha ha ha ha


Maan: tumme ho kya gaya hai?


Adi: Maan sir?


Maan: I mean, yahan ho kya raha hai?


Adi: aap ko patha nahi sir?


Adi is surprised...


Maan then pretends to be knowing everything...


Maan: woh...aur kitne dher lagayega? Humme jaldhi pohunchna haina?


Adi: sir, we will be there soon, don't worry sir, I have informed Geet m'am that we will reach in time


Maan: haan, Geet must be worried


Adi: yes sir, Geet m'am toh bahut pareshaan the, achcha hua sara kaam waqt pe ho gaya


Maan ko patha nahi ye kaise kaam ka baat ho raha hai...


Maan: kaam teek se hua haina?


Adi: our people did a wonderful job sir, they were so happy that Geet m'am trusted them so much


Maan: what?


Maan gets curious...aakhir Geet ne kya surprise plan kiya hai?


Aur mere hi logon se kaam karwakke mujhe hi surprise kar rahi hai?


Hope she has not done anything silly...


May be she has planned a wedding reception or something?


She wanted to declare their relationship status, she might want veryone to know about their wedding...


Maan is never bothered about others, but Geet might have a few friends to share her joy with which is natural...


But she could have told about it to Maan...


Maan is not against it nor is he trying to hide anything...


For him it's not a necessity to go tell everyone about his life...his wedding...his wfey...


So, Geet wants the marriage to be approved by the so called society...


What if Maan is an anti-social animal, Geet is not like him...


That's why she is reluctant to accept their relationship?


Maan is confused but prepares himself for a nightmare...


He is made a scapegoat...for everyone to have fun Maan has to compromise, his privacy is being invaded the moment he had met Geet, this girl has stormed into his life and made him vulnerable to emotions and relations which he had always kept under ckeck, at a safe distance...


He has been living like an alien in this world and it's time for being human...


Haina Maan sir? Toh aap tayaar ho jao, you have been waiting at the banks all the while and the time has come for you to plunge into humanity...time to brush up your human skills, and smile makes us human, tears and all the emotions make us what we are...welcome to the club Khuarna sab...Geet taught you to smile, to enjoy life, she helped him find his long lost soul...


But one thing is a mystery, if at all they wished to have a reception it must have been in Delhi, why are we heading for the jungle?


Then Maan got desperate to lnow where they are going actually...


Maan: Adi


Adi has been quiet after watching Maan nervous and serious...


Adi: ji sir


Maan: ye kaisa rastha hai?


Adi: ha ha ha ha ha , aap hi bhool gaye sir?


Maan: Adiii


Adi: sir


Maan stares Adi and poor Adi keeps looking at the road for he might have taken the wrong route...that's why Maan is angry...


But this is the route, Adi had just been there ...


Adi: sir, rastha toh yahi hai, shayad aap ko teek se yaad nahi hai, woh dekhiye sir


Adi shows a sign board...


Maan is shocked looking at the name board...


Geet yahan? Ye kya nayi misibat hai? babajiii...


Ab toh babaji hi Maan ko bacha sakthe...

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Maan looks at the name board..."Rohtak 20 km"


This is Maan's native...


Maan has forgotten it after dadi...


How would Geet get here?


And Maan remembers Munshiji's visit...


It must be munshiji...


So he had persuaded Geet to come for the festival...


And see Munshiji had succeeded in getting Maan back to Rohtak...


Maan spent his childhood here before moving to delhi with his family...


So he is very popular among the old people...


They fondly remember his pranks and have been waiting to see him...


Most of them don't know him much for Maan never came back for he is disturbed by his families memories...



Dadi used to come for the festival and keep in touch with the relatives...



Maan remembers Dadi's cousin sister who is also married to the Khurana family...


All of them are very angry with Maan for not even informing them about Dadi's sudden demise...


But Maan was out of his mind and it took some days for him to realize that Dadi is no more with him, Dadi even asked her cousin sister to look for a bride for Maan...


They almost fixed Maan's marriage but Maan firmly denied to come to Rohtak as he was not willing to spoil an innocent girl's life...


Maan didn't want to give false hopes to dadi and told her that he didn't want to get married, never...


Dadi fell sick after that and never recovered...


Sometimes Maan regrets that he had troubled poor dadi a lot...he thought Dadi was worng that only marriage could bring him happiness...


Now Maan realizes that Dadi was right...here he is happy and ready for life's challenges...


And the first challenge is minutes away...


Maan has no idea what kind of a reception would he get from the few relatives left...


Munshiji is the only one Maan has met after leaving Rohtak...


Maan comes back from his thoughts...


He is now worried about Geet...


Why did she come here?


And what would she know about this place...


He is scared that Geet might not have had a warm welcome after knowing that she is Mrs.MSK...what if everyone hated her for Maan's behavior?


Ye ladhki toh mujhe pagal kardegi...kya zaroorat thi yahan aane ki?



Geet has made a big mistake coming here, that too without Maan...


She might have come here on Munshiji's request ...


So Geet has come to celebrate the festival...


And she brought the whole KC gang here?


And what would they do? Arranging a party?


And what would be the others reaction?


They might have thought that Maan send them here...


Maan ka izzat toh pehle se hi bahut karab hai, ab toh kuch bacha hi nahi kone ka...


It is not so bad as Maan thinks...


Munshiji helped Geet get to know everyone and Geet got to hear a lot of stories about Maan which she would have never known from Maan, she even doubts that Maan would remember them...she might well be using them as bed time stories for their kids...and who knows Maan would also be interested to hear them then...haina babaji?


As soon as Munshiji introduced Geet as Mrs.MSK, everyone showered her with love and blessings, they all are happy to see Dadima's bahu finally...


They are so loving and caring, and Geet wonders why would Maan miss all this affection and love? He has built a forbidden fort around himself which he also couldn't break...


Geet is the only one who had no difficulty in making her way thru it...


Now that the doors are open she needs to invite the others too, that's how Maan's life would be happier and colorful...Geet misses her family very much and she is very unforrunate to leave them, but Maan has a family which he should own with pride...they are such lovely and innocent people...


The girls of her age easily get attached to her calling her babhi or didi accordingly...


Some have even played with Maan and his siblings when young, and a few are also targets of Maan's pranks too...as Geet gets to know them more she gets to know the otherside of Maan...the naughty Maan...Geet has to bring out that Maan...he is still residing inside Maan only...it's time to wake that Maan up...



And when Geet decided to celebrate the festival this tme with them along with Maan they were so happy to help her any way they could...


Geet has got her friends too...


And their mission is made easy by the local support they got...


Adi stops the car and blows the horn to announce Maan's arrival as it is the norm to warn the others about dhak dhak's arrival at KC...


Maan comes back to reality...


He steps out and fnds in front of his home, his childhood abode...


Maan is shocked to see it in perfect shape after all these years of neglect...


This place was a little messy with thorns and bushses grown so high to make is disappear when Geet arrived...


But Geet vowed to fix it in time for the festival and along with her friends and KC staff she accomplished her mission in style...


They have cleaned the mess and repainted it...


Mended some petty damages and now it looks as good as new...


Maan walks towards the door when a couple of aunties run in to convey the message...


And sudden;y Maan finds the other dadi and he remembers her ...she is also like Dadi but Maan couldn't imagine anyone taking Dadi's place...still it's not that bad to be hack here amongst known faces...something tells him that it's only for the good, even if he doesn't need a family Geet definitely needs one, right now...


Maan feels embarrassed facing her...


What would she be thinking about his long absence?


Maan makes slow steps gathereing his strength to face the reality...


He had been escaping this for a very long time...


And now there is no more escape...Maan helped Geet get out of trouble and this Geet is dragging him into trouble...


Maan doesn't want to come face to face with dadi and so tries to enter the house hurriedly...


Dadi chases and pulls him back...


Maan is surprised...he pretends to have not noticed her...


Dadi: kahan bhaagthe ho?


Maan: Dadi? Aap?


Dadi: shaitan, mujhe patha hai ki tum kaise sab ko ullu banathe ho?


Maan: par meinne kya kiya?


Dadi: kya kiya? Abhi bathathi hoon


Maan is nervous...ab Geet ne Maan ke kitne shikayat kiya hoga?


Dadi: Geeet, Geeet puthar, jaldhi aao, mera potha jo goom ho gaya tha woh milgaya



Geet had already got the news and is running to see Maan...


In a hurry Geet couldn't stop and almost hits Dadi...


Maan holds her back and pulls her towards him...



Geet hits Maan instead and Maan catches her as she falls...

Dadi: wah rabji, kya jodi babayi aapne? Ek gadha hai toh ek pagal hai


Maan to hiss galiyan ko bahut hi miss kartha tha, Maan ki Dadi being a metro resident doesn't use such language, par ye Dadi hamesha aaise hi pyaar se daantthe hai...


She used to say that Savithri ne Maan ko bahut bigadke rakha hai, Maan ko mere paas bhejdo toh mein ussko yuhi teek kar dhoongi...


Dadi sometimes thinks that she should have done it, brought Maan to the village with her always...but Maan was so depressed that he never wanted to come back, and he was also kept busy finishing his studies and taking up the family business...


Dadi was desperately needing Maan's service...


And some how Maan got attached to KC and missed out life...he deliberately made his business his life...


Dadi: Geet, sambalkke beta


Maan wonders how Geet has won dadi's heart within days...


She is so kind to Geet...


Maan: Geeet, ye kya kar rahi ho? aandhi ho gayi ho kya?samne dkehke nahi chal sakthi?


Dadi: usko kyun daandhthe ho? tum itne din andhe ho gaye the kya? tumne toh humme dekhne bhi nahi aaye?


Maan: woh...


Maan ke paas jawaab nahi...


Maan then decides to get inside and hide somewhere...


Jab tak ye Dadi yahan hai Maan ko unke samne hi nahi aana chahiye...


She keeps pulling his legs...Maan couldn't do much for she is the eldest member of the family...even Maan is scared of her...


Dadi: Maan, kahan jaathe ho?


Maan: andar


Dadi: tum andar nahi jaa sakthe


Maan is shocked...now what will happen?


Maan stares Geet...Geet is also puzzled...


Geet looks at Dadi...


Dadi: Geet ko kyun gurthe ho? meinne hi rokha na? Geet kya karegi? Ye meri pariwaar hai aur yahan sirf meri chalthi hai, haina puthar?


Geet: ji dadi, Maan sir


Dadi: kya kaha tumne? phir se kaho?


Geet: Maan sir


Dadi: ye mein kya sunrahi hoon rabji? Ye teri naukrani hai kya? tumne issko itna darakke rakha hai? meinne pehle hi savithri ko kaha tha ki ye ladhka bahut bigadgaya hai, mere paas do din bhejna, par savithri toh sunthi hi nahi thi


Dadi remembers her sister and her eyes moisten...


Geet: Maaan


Maan is shocked...


Geet is trying to distract dadi...she is feeling sad na?


Maan looks at Geet surprised...


Geet apne aakhon se maafi mangthi...


Geet: Maan


Geet's voice lowers seeing Maan's reaction


Dadi also looks a little surprised...


Geet: hum kuch bhool gaye hai


Maan: kya?


Geet: humme Dadi ke aashirvaad nahi lena?


Maan: haan, mein bhi bhool gaya tha


Maan takes this oportunity to cool Dadi...


They bow and get dadi's aashirvaad...


Dadi: hamesha saath raho aur aaise hi kush raho, aur haan, Dadi ko kabhi mat bhoolna


Geet: suna aapne? Aap itne pyaare Dadi ko kaise bhool sakthe


Many heads peep out to see Maan...


Aunties, uncles, cousins, children...


They too want to talk with Maan but is afraid of dadi, they are waiting for Dadi's orders...


Geet: ab chalo, andar chalthe hai


Dadi: abhi nahi


Maan is losing his patience...he is made a show piece...


All eyes are on him, which Maan hates...

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Maan feels like a scape goat...


Dadi: Meera, Lachi, Pammy, kahan mar gaye sab ke sab?


Dadi gets angry...


And the aunties come with aarthi...


Maan thinks...achcha aarthi bhi aagayi...ab toh Maan ka balidaan hi bakhi hai...


Wah Geet wah...tussi great ho...


But Maan babu ye aap ke liye nahi hai, aap ka balidaan toh kab ka ho chukka hai, jab aapke shadhi hui Geet se, tab se aap bali ka bakra ho gaye ho...samje...


Ye aarthi toh apni pyaari bahu rani ke liye hai...


Naye naye shadhi hua haina? Geet ka grahapravesh...


Even Geet didn't expect this...


Suddenly she feels like a dulhan and she is all shy shy...


Maan is happy to see Geet blushing...




That's what he missed...a happy happy blushy bride...

Meera: bhai, babhi ke chehra dekho kitne laal laal ho gaya? Meinne toh itne din babhi ko kabhi itna sharmathe hue nahi dekha, babhi bhai ne aapko bahut hi pareshaan kiya hai kya?


Meera winks at Geet...


Maan feels awkward...


He had never met this girl...maybe he had seen her as a kid...


She fondly calls him bhaiya?


Dadi: jab teri shadhi hogi na, tab dekhthe hai ki tum kaise nahi sharmathi?


Their marriage was an accident and Geet missed all this welcome and teasing...


Maan keeps looking at everyone...


Dadi: kay dkehthe ho? sab ko bhool gaye ho, ye Meera, yaad hai tumne isska baal katdhiya tha aur tab se iska baal aaise hi chote ho gaye


Geet smiles...


Dadi is making fun of the MSK...


Meera: kya Dadi? Bhai ko kyun daandhthe ho? ab toh mera baal aap hi katthe ho


Everyone laughs out loud...Maan too laughs as this is interesting...


Dadi ko koi jawaab detha, MSK is loving it...


Geet's official entry into Khurana house ...


For the first time Maan is happy being surrounded by people...


And after a decade there is happiness in his home...


Maan sochtha ki kash Dadi aaj yahan hothe?


Koi baat nahi unke PA ho haina yahan?


Dadi: Geet, kya dekh rahi ho? tumme toh kuch bhi patha nahi hai


Dadi instructs her and Geet does all the rituals to perfection...


Maan stealthily moves to the terrace...


He wants to escape from this devil dadi...


Maan hamesha unko aaise hi bhulatha, abhi bhi Maan ko sab yaad hai...


She used to easily catch hold of Maan and disclose his pranks to everyone...



Dado just wants that prankster Maan back...she loves that Maan, not this moody MSK...



Afterall Maan is still young, dadi is enjoying life at this age and why shouldn't Maan?


It's very unfortunate that he lost his family at the wrong time, but now he has to start afresh, he has got a lovely wife...somehow Dadi feels Maan has to open up, or Geet will suffer when they return home and they are left all alone...


But Dadi will make sure Maan is changed before he returns...


Dadi has set a lot of plans in action...even Geet doesn't now about them...


Geet is busy attending the guest and serving them...


Dadi is very happy that Geet has easily accepted them as her family...


But this Maan is still aloof, and where s he now?


Dadi finds Maan missing...you can't fool this devil dadi Maan...


Dadi: Geet puthar


Geet: ji dadi


Dadi: aapke pathidev kahan hai?


Geet ko kuch samjmein nahi aathi...


She just blinks...


Geet: kya Dadi?


Dadi: hare, tummara Maan sir kahan hai


Geet then understands that she is referring Maan as her pathidev...


Geet looks around...


Geet: yahi honge Dadi


Dadi: tum bhi na? kaise pathni ho? hamesha hummare nazar apne gharwalon pe hi hona chahiye


Geet: achcha?


Dadi: ye Maan kahan hai? Maan ko bhulao


Maan ka bhulava agaya...


Maan comes back cursing Geet, ye Geet ne mujhe hi tamasha banakke rakha hai...


Aur ye Devil dadi patha nahi kyun mere peeche padhe hue hai?



Dadi : Maan, ye kaise aankh michouli khel rahe ho apne biwi ke saath? Geet ne itne din kaise tumme yaad kiya tha aur aaj aathe hi tum Geet ko chodke kahan gayab ho gaye the?


Maan: mein toh yahi tha, haina Geet?



Dadi: Geet, tumne Maan ko yahan dekha?

Maan signals her to say yes...


Geet: nahi dadi


Maan stares Geet...but Geet is not scared now...dadi haina?


Dadi: ab tu joot bhi bolne laga


Maan: ye sab toh iss Geet ki galthi hai


Maan murmurs...


Dadi: kya hua? Apni biwi ko galiyaan de rahe ho?


Maan: nahi toh


Geet enjoys it very much...you need elders for this only...


Dadi: ab kade kade Geet ko hi gurthe rahega kya?


Maan looks at dadi...for a change...


Geet giggles...


Dadi: tu kya apne daand dikha rahi ho? tum bhi aao


Maan is happy now...donno ki band bhaj rahi haina?


Geet comes near dadi...


Dadi: beitjao


She asks Geet to sit on the couch...


Maan is restless...ab mera kya hoga?


Dadi: tum aaise hi kya sochthe rehthe ho hamesha? Tum bhi beitjao apne biwi ke saath


Ye bar bar biwi biwi sunkke Maan ko bahut ajeeb sa lagtha...par Geet ko toh bahut achcha lagtha...koi toh hai ussko Maan ki biwi kehne wale...warna ye Maan toh Geet ko abhi bhi waise hi dekhtha jaise pehle bar dekha tha...


Kya karein Geet? Maan ke aankhon mein koi problem hai, tujhe dekhthe hi Maan ke nazar atakjaathe...aur pehle hi nazar mein Maan apne aap ko ko jaatha...phir jab bhi tumme dekhtha Maan ko wahi ehsaas hotha jab pehle bar tumme dekhke hua tha...



Maan: nahi, mein bahut tak gaya hoon, abhi thoda aaram kartha hoon



Dadi: hare, abhi tak jaathe toh bakhi ka riwaaz kaise karoge?


Maan blinks...abhi kitni bakhi hai...


Yahi toh shuruwaat hai...kuch meeta ho jaye...


Dadi: hare, ladhkiyon, mittai lekhe aao


Some girls come with the sweets and they all keep smiling...


Maan is embarrassed...this is harassment...Maan couldn't do anything...he is helpless...


Dadi: ab apni zindagi mittai ke saath shuru karo, aur babaji se prarthana karo ki aapki zindagi aaise hi meetti meetti ho


Geet takes a laddu and eagerly looks at it...her mouth already watering...she loves laddu...


Maan is hesitant...ye kitna calories hoga?


Dadi stops Geet before she could take a bite...


Geet is disappointed...


What's this? She had to wait for her pathidev to start?


This is very unfair...but Geet had to obey dadi's orders...


She looks at dadi and then looks at Maan staring the laddus like some bomb...


Dadi: itne bhi kya jaldhi hai Geet puthar?


Geet is ashamed...she could have waited...


Maan is still staring the poor laddus...koi mittai ko dekkke itna dukhi kaise ho saktha? Mittai ko dekhthe hi sab bache ban jaathe...we enjoy sweets as much as kids do or even more, haina?


Dadi: Maan, ye laddu hai? tumne pehle dekha hi hoga? Savithri tujhe banakke dethi ya nahi? jab ye chota tha sab se zyada laddu mangtha, ek bhi laddu zyada nahi miltha toh pure ke pure laddu ko bahar fekhtha tha, bahut shaitan tha, haina Maan?


Maan: ab sab ke samne meri beizatti karne ke liya hi Geet ne itna sara arrangements kiya hai kya?


Geet: aap ne kuch kaha?


Dadi: hare teek se bolo, mujhe teek se sunayi nahi dethi


Maan: thank god, mein bach gaya


Dadi: tu itne asaani se nahi bach saktha bachu


Maan looks tensed...


Dadi: ab tu Geet ko apne hathon se khilao


Maan: issko? ye apne haath se nahi kha sakthi?


Dadi smiles...


Dadi: nahi, ab isski shadhi ho gayi hai, aur issko khilane wala aagaya hai


Maan: mein?


Dadi: nahi, padosan ko bhulathe hai, hare Nandkishore


Someone steps in...ji dadi...


Ussko dkehthe hi Maan apne aap Geet ko ladu khilatha...


Geet bites his fingers for fun...


Maan keeps staring Geet...aaj toh tum bahut kush hogi Geet?


Geet is munching ...


Dadi: ab tu hi kathe rohogi ya issko bhi kuch khilaoge?


Geet's mouth is full...


She tries to say something...


Maan takes a laddu and thrusts in her hand...


Jaise bhi jaldhi jaldhi ye tamasha katam karna padega...


Warna KC ke staff bhi aajayenge...


They are arranging the food for the guests...


Pinky just comes running...Adi is after her...


Maan ka dar sahi tha...ab KC gang bhi aagayi...


Ab Maan kya karega?

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As Maan stares Geet, Geet looks at Pinky...


Geet knows what's coming next...poor Maan sir...


But Geet bhi ab Maan ko bacha nahi sakthi...


Geet ko tih ye sab bahut pasand aaya...


Magar Maan kya soch raha hoga?


Yahi toh darne ki baat hai...usske chehre ko dekhke hi patha chaltha ki Maan ko ye sab utna pasand nahi hai...aur ab sab ke samne Maan kuch nahi karega...par akhele milthi toh aaj Geet gayi ...


Geet thinks that she would never meet him alone...why would she? Haina babaji?


Ab toh babaji hi Geet ki madat kar sakthe...


Pinky: Geeet


Pinky freezes looking at them...


Geet looks at Maan...


Adi too comes...: Pinky, pinky


Maan stares Adi...Adi blinks...ye meinne kaise waqt pe entry dhi?


Adi: ha ha ha ha ha ha


Dadi: Maan, tummare chamche ko badh mein dekhlo, ab Geet, tu Maan ko laddu khilao


Sabke samne? Geet is scared...


Maan signals her to do it fast...


Geet forces a laddu into his mouth and Maan tires to get out of that place...


Geet suddenly holds his hand and stops him...


Everyone laughs...Maan again stares Geet...


Geet leaves her hold...


Dadi: hare, usse pakadho Geet, usse jaane mat do


Geet: nahi Dadi, ye nahi manenge


Dadi: mein bhi dekhthi hoon ye kaise nahi mantha apne Dadi ke baat ko?


Dadi turns and stares Maan...


Pinky couldn't control her laugh...


Adi: ah ha ha ha ha ha, she's Maan sir's Dadi


Geet: haan, dadi ho toh aaise


Pinky bursts out laughing...


Maan keeps staring them one by one...


Dadi: ab tummari ginathi katam ho gayi hai kya? sab ke sab yahi hai, koi kahin nahi jayega


Dadi teases Maan...


Romeo, Tasha and Manisha too join the party...


Maan thinks... ye sab chutti lekhe yahan maza kar rahe hai? sab ko KC aane do? Mein bhi sab ko dikatha hoon ki aakhir MSK kaun hai?


Dadi: Maan


Adi: sir, dadi


Maan comes out of his thoughts...


Maan: ji dadi, ab kya hai?


Dadi: hare, ab aap dono ko apni dadi ke taraf se ek choti si toffah, shadhi Mubarak ho


Dadi takes out her ring...


Maan thinks that she will give it to Geet...


Geet stretches her hand...


Dadi: hare, mein tumme dethi toh Maan ko bhura lagega haina?


Dadi looks at Maan...


Maan: nahi nahi


Geet: aap unko hi dedo


Dadi: phir tum naraaz ho jayegi?


Geet: mujhe koi probem nahi hai


Maan: toh mujhe problem hai kya?


Dadi: hare hare, abhi se ladhayi shuru ho gayi?


Dadi asks someone to get a bowl with milk...


She drops the ring...next game starts...


Dadi has told them that who ever wins will dominate the other...


Geet is determined not to loose...ladhki hai toh hamesha gulam nahi ban sakthi haina?


Maan is also not ready to loose...ye samjthi kya apne aapko? Hamesha apne manmani karthi rehthi...meri koi kadar hi nahi...aur ye MSK ka izzat ka sawaal hai...


Both of them put their hands in the milk in a hurry and the milk splashes on Geet's face...


Maan moves back to escape and Geet gets the ring...


She jumps in joy...mein jeet gayi...


Maan stares and Geet sits...


Maan looks at the milk drops dripping from her lips...


She looks so beautiful...in her red saree...


She has dressed up like a bride...dadi ka kaam hai...


Just then Maan notices the changes...she is not that childish women any more...she has turned into this beautiful lady waiting for her man...


Maan keeps staring her lips...


And there's a round of applause for Geet...


Geet keeps looking at Maan and she finds something different in his looks...


It's not anger...it's something else...


Geet feels nervous...


Maan comes to his senses...


Maan: ab toh mein chal saktha hoon?


Dadi: hare, itne srae mehmaan aaye hai, sabse millo, Geet, Maan ko sab se milao


Geet takes him and introduces his family to him itself...


Maan is happy that she has become everyone's favourite and they love her so much...


Geet sab se baat karthe karthe Maan ko hi bhool jaathi...


And in all the crowd Maan could only see Geet, her smile, her nakrein, her adayein and her captivating beauty...Maan would no longer wait to meet her alone...


But this Geet is always surrounded by someone or the other...


Either it's her friends, or KC party, or the kids or the girls or the aunties...


Maan wonders from where do these people keep coming...


And the party goes on and on...


In between Maan manages to pulls her into a room for a minute or two...


Geet is blushing and hyper ventilating with his touch...




Geet keeps looking into his eyes and they are lost in each other...

Maan: ye sab kya hai?


Geet comes back to her senses...


Geet: hmmm


Maan plays with her zulfein...


Geet melts with that touch...she is nervous...


Maan: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?


Geet: mein


Maan pulls her closer into his embrace...


He keeps staring at her lips...


Geet freezes...



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Maan: tumne mujhse joot kyun bola?

Geet: woh...mein


Maan hears Dadi's voice...


Dadi: Geeet puthar


Dadi just enters...Maan is caught red handed...


Dadi smiles...: ye kya ho raha hai?


Maan raises his voice...he starts blaming Geet...


Maan: Geet, tumne mujhse joot kyun bola? Jawaab do


Geet is shocked, what happened to Maan?


She is really afraid of him now...


Maan stares her and leaves...


Geet prays to her babaji to save her...


Now Geet is afraid to face Maan alone...


He has got so angry...geet didn't expect this...


She thought he would be happy...But he seems to be upset...


Geet bahut dar jaathi...babaji ye kya ho gaya?


Meinne kya socha aur ye toh ulta h ho gaya? Maan sir bahut naraaz ho gaye hai...ab mein kya kroon? Kaise unko samjaoon ki mein sirf unko kush dekhna chahathi thi...

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In the evening...dadi has arranged holi celebrations...


Though it's not holi this game of colors is played at the festival season every year for the people to have fun with their guests and it's a chance to forget the disputes and get united with their foes too...Maan used to play this game as a child...



Maan is the one who pulls everyone into the party ground, the old and the women busy in the kitchen, he makes the whole house the playing ground, his mother waits for his games to get over before painting the house, though the others do it for the festival and restrict the kids from spoiling it...


No one can restrict Maan, he was the yuvraj...and everyone follows his orders from childhood...his sister normally goes and hides as she is scared of crowd...


Maan carried his little sister and helps her play making sure she is safe with her big bro...


Just like that Geet is also timid and doesn't like spoiling her clothes and drenching in color water...her aunty always tries to protect her during holi and she stays at home along with her aunty while her uncle used to play with the children in their area...


Anuty strictly asks them to stay away from them for it would spoil their skin...


She is very particular about her looks and so is Geet...


She is always concerned about her looks and her dresses...she loves to dress up and look elegant...that's why the girls are after her seeking tips from her...


Even Maan admires her looks and is amused at her care and concern even for her nails and how she used to escape hard work just b'coz it would spoil her nail paint...


So Geet has decided to hide this time...


she finds a safe place to hide, the kitchen...


She takes Pinky with her so that they can escape...


Pinky loves the kitchen and is happy to stay there 24*7 as long as she gets something to munch...


Geet: Pinky, issko chak ke dekho, ye kaisa hai?


Pinky: ahccha hai, namak thoda kam hai


Geet: aur ye mittai?


Pinky: thoda zyada hi meeta hai par mujhe meetha bahut pasand hai


Out in the ground all are playing with the pitchkari...


Maan is there too...dadi had dragged him in...


Adi starts with a teekha on Maan's forehead...


But the other boys are not used to KC's diplomacy and they enjoy their game...


And Maan is also not spared...Maan too joins them and Adi and party then plunge into the field keeping their fears aside...this is not KC, haina?



Maan keeps looking for his Mishti and is disappointed that she is no where near him...


He wonders where would she be?


Maan: Adi, Geet kahan hai?


Adi: Geeet m'am Pinky ke saath hnge sir


Maan: Pinky ke saath? Kahan?


Adi: ha ha ha ha ha


Maan: Adiii


Adi: Pinky toh ofcourse kitchen mein hi hogi sir


Maan: kitchen mein?


Maan rushes in...


He finds Geet eating her Gol Gappe...


Maan: geeet?


Geet jumps off her seat...


Geet: Maan sir?


Maan: kitchen mein kya kar rahi ho?


Geet smiles...: kitchen mein kya karenge sir? Khana khathe hai


Maan: har waqt kathe rehthi toh tummari friend ki tarah choti hathi banjaaoogi


Pinky looks at herself...


Geet: haan, hathi?


Maan: haan, ab bahar aao, sabke saath khelo



Geet looks at her dress...

And she nods her head...: nahiii


Maan: ab tum aathi ho ya nahi?


Maan lifts her and takes her out...


Maan: bachon, dekho ye aapki didi andar chup rahi thi


Kids come running towards them...


Maan: toh ho jaye?


Kids: haaan


Maan lets her down and Geet stsrts running...


Maan ctaches hold of her hand and slpashes color on her...


The kids follow...


Geet has bathed in the colorful waters...


She has turned into a rainbow angel now...


She gets angry with Maan for spoiling her dress and looks...


She takes the pithckari from the kids and chases Maan...


Geet: aap ko mein nahi chodoongi


Maan takes this opportunity and runs far where there is no one...


Geet gets tired of running and stops...


Maan: kya hua? Har gayi?


Maan stops and looks at her...


Geet takes off and catches him...



She is breathing heavily and Maan hugs her and pats her...

Maan: sambalke Geet, itne tez kyun baagthi ho?


After resting Geet steps back as she is embarrassed that she had been in his embrace for so long... Maan has lost his senses and has frozen...


Geet splashes water on him and tries to escape...


Maan won't let her go...


He pulls her back into his arms...


He looks into her eyes...Maneet eyelock...Mahiii...



Geet ko dhoondhthe dhoondhth ek chota sa bacha wahan aagaya...

Kid: Didi, didi


Geet steps back...


Kid: aap uncle ke saath kya kar rahi ho?


Geet blinks...


Maan: hum bhi khel rahe the


Kid: mein bhi kheloon? Didi ke saath


Geet lifts him up...


Geet: haan, kyun nahi?


Geet takes him in...


Maan keeps looking at her...


He should take Geet to Delhi, then only they can interact peacefully...


Then Dadi takes Geet with her to her house after dinner...


Geet is surprise...


Itne din toh Geet Maan ke ghar pe hi thi...


Ab Maan bhi aagaye aur achana Dadi Geet ko apne ghar kyun lekhe jaa rahe hai?


Geet is scared to ask Dadi about it...


Dadi asks her to stay with her that night...


Dadi ke pariwaar kahin bahar gaye hai aur Dadi akheli hai...


Geet then wants to inform Maan...


Maan is waiting for Geet...


He asks her friends and Adi...


Pinky says that Geet had gone with Dadi...


Ab Maan kuch nahi kar saktha...


Geet ka mobile bhi uaake paas nahi hai...


Maybe she had left it at home...


She thought they will return immediately...


Geet is worried that Maan will be angry with her...


But it's not her fault, and Dadi's knows better...haina?



If Dadi needs her then Geet should be there for her for Dadi is the one who helped Geet all these days along with Munshiji...


Next moring Munshiji comes...


Dadi:munshiji, sab tayaar haina?


Munshji: ji dadiji


Dadi calls Geet, gives her new clothes and asks her to get ready...


They have a pooja at the temple...


Geet & Maan had to perform it together...


Dadi hd specially arranged this for Maan's goodness...


He is starting a new life and god should give him strength to get out of the past and keep Geet happy...there shouldn't be any more problems for Maan...


Maan is also informed about th pooja and Dadi had sent him a new dress too...


Maan has stopped believing in the almighty after that tragedy and he is still hesitant, but he can do this for Geet, she always keeps chanting babaji babaji...haina?


Maan comes to pick up Geet and dadi...


All the guests have left this morning and it's only family now...


At the temple Dadi and other family members take good care of Geet and help her in everything...Maan first stops but Dadi forces him to join them...


After entering the temple Maan feels peaceful and safe...


Somehow he had missed this guidance and he also sincerely takes part in the pooja...


Whenever Maan stumbles Geet helps him showing him how things are done...


Geet keeps thanking her babaji for all that she had received, the love of Maan, Dadi and the whole pariwaar...


Maan too thanks babaji for bringing Geet into his life and giving his happiness back...


He promises to keep Geet as happy as she is now and will take care of her always...



And also thanks Dadi for all the concern and care they received...

Dadi blesses them and warns Maan that Dadi would want her pothi to be kush and that Maan should make sure that she is happy at her sasuraal...ye apne parivaar ka izzat ka sawaal hai...hummare yahan bahuein ek bar aathe toh apne maike ko hi bhool jaathe...


Jab koi bhi ladhki Khurana parivaar mein shadhi karkke aathi toh woh uss parivaar ko nahi apnathi, par ye parivaar ussko apnathi, they welcome them as they are and don't put any pressure on the, yahan ka ye rule hai, yahan aaise nahi hotha, iss ko aaisa hi karna hai, aais arehna hai waisa nahi karna hai...kuch bhi nahi...and they also say that women rule the Khurana family always...



Dadi ko dekhthe hi patha chaltha ki ye toh sach hi hai...haina?


They return home in the evening...


Geet is so happy to have performed the pooja and got loads of blessings from her babaji, dad and all the elders...she had been worried that her marriage was not approved by her family except for her mother and didi...now she believes that she has made the right choice, she vows to herself to make this marriage a success...she has Dadi for support...


As Geet is thinking about her new sasuraal and it's people, Maan is worried about what would happen tonight?


Will he be able to spend the night with his Mishti?


Aaj ye devil Dadi ne kya plan banaya hoga?

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A few guests accompany Maneet home, along with dadi...


Dadi has asked the ladies to come help her...


They have a small function, just like mehendi and haldhi...


Dadi asks Maan to take rest as it's only a ladies function...


They only want Geet to be present...


And the ladies are all set to beautify Geet...


Geet is confused...ye kaunsa naya function hai...


Aur ab mujhe hi kyun itna attention dethe hai...


Dadi says that Geet is the new bride and they should make sure that she looks like an angel tonight...aaj party ka heroine toh Geet hi hai...


Some of them discuss about her dress and matcing jewellery...


Some of them take her to the showers...


Geet is feeling shy and she syas she will manage on her own...


They get the bath tub ready and let Geet relax and go...


As Geet is chilling she thinks about Maan...


What would Maan be doing? He would be tensed that Geet has suddenly taken the centre stage and everyone had been neglecting him...


But Geet didn't ask for anything, they treat her like a princess...



All b'coz of Savithri Dadi, she was such a kind and nice person helping everyone and so they all want to show Geet that Savithri dadi's bahu is not alone and they are always there for her...just like Dadi had been standing for them when they were in trouble...


They think that it is their duty to fulfill Dadi's dreams, Maan had finally got married but it seems like an accident more than a wedding, so Geet shoudn't regret that she didn't have a proper wedding, they don't want her to miss the fun and formalities of a fat Indian wedding...


Geet keeps thinking about her Dhust sanav and there he is sitting next to her...


Geet blushes thinking that it's her imagination...


Btu Maan has actually peeped in to see what's going on and found his Mishti all alone...


He couldn't miss this chance to drool...


Geet splashes water on the image as she is thinking that it's only a dream...


Geet: cahle jao yahan se, thoda toh sharam karlo, besharam, dikahyi nahi dethi? Mein naha rahi hoon


Geet thought that Maan would vanish...


But he is still there...


Geet: hare, ye kaisa sapna hai?


Geet splashes more water...maan holds her hand and stops her...


Geet realizes by the touch that it's Maan hmself...



She just freezes...she feels a thousand volts passimg down her fragile body...


Maan could feel the shiver...


Maan: kya hua Geet? tumitne dar kyun gayi?


Geet is speechless...


Maan: ab teri bolthi kyun band ho gayi?


Maan keeps staring her and pouring water over her face...


Geet gets up in a shock...and looses her balance...


Maan catches hold of her as she falls...


Maan: Geeet


Maan bahut gabragaya ...


Geet: aap yahan kya kar rahe ho? mei Dadi ko bhulathi hoon, Daaaddiii


Geet tries to shout...


Maan closes her mouth...


Maan: chup, bilkul chup


Maan is embarrassed as he hears someone running hearing Geet's voice...


Maan hides behing the screen...


Lady: kya hua Geet?


Geet: kuch nahi, cockroach


Maan gets angry, mujhe cockroach kaha?


Lady: ye sheher ke ladhkiyan bhi na? aawein dar jaathe ho, kahan hai


She tries to enter and search...


Geet smiles...: chala gaya, aap jayiye


Lady: jaldhi nahalo, aur isse pehenkke neeche aao


Geet: ji


After that lady went Maan comes out...


Maan: mein kya cockroach laghta hoon?


Geet: meinne aapko bachane ki koshsish kiya tha aur aapko bhura lag gaya?


Maan: tum cockroach se itna drthi ho?


Geet: nahi toh, mein yuhi bolthi thi


Maan: achcha, toh wahan dekho, tummara friend


Geet jumps towards Maan and Maan pulls her and hugs her...


Geet is lost in that passionate hug...


Dadi: Geeet puthar


Maan escapes...Geet: aathi hoon Dadi


All are awaiting Geet's arrival...


Geet goes down and after haldhi, mehendi lagathe hai...


Geet had really missed Maan ke naam ke mehendhi...


She is very happy that dadi thought of this...


And the ladies have a small sangeet...


" Mehendhi lagakke rakhna


Doli sajaake rakhna


Lene tujhe oh gori


Aayega tera sajna"


Maan keeps watching Geet from the balcony...


Geet thoda bangra bhi karthi sab ke saath...


Maan wished he was there too...


It's dinner time and Maan comes down for dinner...


His eyes look for Geet and he finds her missing...


Maan is disappointed, kahin Geet aaj bhi dadi ke saath toh nahi chali gayi?


Maan looks worried...dadi smiles...


Dadi: Maan, kissko dhoondhthe ho?


Maan: Dadi, Geet kahan hai?


Dadi: fikar mat karo, aaj mein teri biwi ko churake nahi jaoongi, ab toh woh teri amanat hai


Maan smiles...


After dinner the guest leave and Dadi too gets ready to leave...


Maan is puzzled that Geet is missing...


Dadi: ab hum bhi bhlathe hai bte


Maan: bahut bahut shukriya Dadi, aap ne Geet ki itne madat kiya hai


Dadi: dadi hothe kiss liye bte, ab tum bhi tak gaye hoge, jao, sojao


Maan: ye Geet kahin nazar nahi aathi?


Dadi: mujhe kya patha? Aap donno hamesha aaise hi luka chupi kelthe rehthe ho, ab aapki bari hai, dhoondhlo apni Geet ko, hum chalthe hai


Dadi too leaves...


Now Maan gets worried, where is this stupid girl hiding?


Maan goes up to his room and Geet is not there...


He then finds the terrace light glowing and rushes there...


Ye ladhki itni raat ko upar kya kar rahi hogi? Sach much pagal ho gayi hai?



And Maan is surprised to see the diaz set up for his milan...



Jo bhi ho ye devil Dadi ne apna kaam perfectly kardiya hai...


Maan bhi kabse soch raha tha ki woh apne SR ke taiyariyan kaise karega?


Aur soch raha tha ki Geet ko kahin bahar le jaayega, koi HM suit book karkke...


Par ye toh usse bhi badiya hai...


Chandhni raat aur apni chand bhi apne raah dekh rahi hai...


The palce is moonlit baring a few candles that are about to end...


There's a cool breeze that spreads the fragrance of the flowers arousing his desire...


Today the only beautiful thing that has captured Maan's complete attention is his Mishti, simple yet sensual elegance, that could give tough competition to the Cleopatras and Mohinis...


For Geet it's a very different experience...


Geet had never expected this, that too this night...


She is also just as surprised as Maan...


When the girls took her up after getting her ready, Geet thought this is yet another function...


But as they got near the bed Geet could sense what's coming up...


An unknown fear surrounds her after she is left alone and is kept waiting for her pathidev's arrival...this happens to be their official milan, total surrender and complete acceptance of their relationship...ultimate confession of their chori chori chupke chupke pyaar...


Even though there is no need for any formal confession as they know each other's mind, it's always good to know from one another how much they love each other, haina?


Just to let the other partner know that this marriage is not a compulsion or compromise, nor it's a result of any pressure or an action of pity, this is one way of confessing their love for each other...


Geet senses that Maan is here and this is the moment she had been waiting for...


For Maan too the long and desperate wait is over...



Geet has hidden her face with the pallu and Maan couldn't wait to see her reaction...


He just wants this pardha off once for all...no more hurdles...


Maan reaches the bed and makes his way inside the flowers...


Geet is sitting anxiously and is happy that she is behind the pallu...


Maan gets closer and sits beside her...



He keeps staring Geet and slowly opens the pallu and lifts her chin...

Geet is all blushy blushy and her face has turned red...


Seeing her all shy Maan is turned on...


Maan looks into her eyes for Geet's answers for all his queries...


What's going on in her mind?


Is she also thinking like Maan?


Isn't she ready for this yet?


Maan knows that all these are purely Dadi's work and Geet had no idea about it too...


Maan tries to break the unusual silence of his Mishti...


Maan: Geet


Geet: aap abhi bhi mujhse naraaz ho


Geet bursts out...


Maan is taken aback...


Maan: Geet?


Geet: woh aap , aap aaise hi mujhe darathe ho, issiliye...issiliye


Maan: kya? mein hamesha tumme daratha hoon?


Maan gets angry...


Geet: dekha? Abhi bhi naraaz ho gaye ho


Maan wonders what to do with this stupid girl?


Ab toh Maan ko shak ho gaya ki ye pure raat jagda karke rahegi toh ye SR nahi shivrathri ho jayegi...jaldhi Maan, kuch socho, jaise bhi issko rokhlo, warna aaj bhi ye tummari nahi ho sakthi, ab bahut ho gaya intrezaar, sare umar Maan Geet ka intrezaar nahi kar saktha...haina?


Par issko kaise sambalein? Ye toh bahut mushkil hai?


SR haga ya nahi? ab aap log thoda aur intrezaar karlo...

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Maan tries to calm her down...


Maan: nahi Geet, mein kyun tumse naraaz honga?


Geet: issiliye meinne aapse joot bola tha


Maan: meinne tumse koi safai nahi manga?


Geet: woh meinne aapke liye hi ye sab kiya tha, kyunki aap kush ho


Maan: mein toh bahut bahut kush hoon, aur tera ye wala idea toh mujhe sabse zyada pasand hai Geet, ye idea mere dimad mein kyun nahi aaya?


Maan pulls her closer...starts showering flowers over her...


Geet: kya?


Maan: mujhe patha hai Geet, tumne ye sare tayaariyan mere kushiyon ke liye hi kiya hai


Maan looks at the decorations...


Maan keeps staring her...Geet ko kuch kuch hone lagtha...


Geet: ye meinne nahi kiya


Maan: tumne nahi kiya?


Maan pretends to be disappointed...


Geet: mein kaise?


Geet blushes...


Maan: phir bhi ye kamaal ki thought hai


Geet ko bahut tand lagthi toh she likes Maan's closeness and his warmth...


Maan keeps admiring his mystique beauty, Mishti as the candles fade a way Moon showers it's light making the perfect scenario for the night...suhaag raat...


Maan: haan Geet ye hummari suhaag raat hai


Geet's heart starts pumping faster and faster...dhak dhak...dhak dhak...


Maan lies down on her lap...


Geet tries to move but Maan makes himself comfortable on her lap...


Geet then looks into his eyes...Maneet eyelock...


Maan looks at the night sky and puts his hands around her neck...


Geet is startled...the MSK has just become a baby in her lap and suddenly turns into this lover boy full of passion and demanding his lady love for a cure for his loveria...



Maan : ye tandi hawayen aur ye chandni raat, suhaana raat aur haseena saath, Geet tumne toh mujhe shayar banadhiya hai



Geet had never seen this avatar of Maan...pagal deewana...


She is surprised that Maan could also get crazy just like her...


Maybe her craziness has infected him too...


Geet: aapko kya ho gaya?


Maan: mujhe pyaar ho gaya


Geet: kya?


Maan: mujhe ek chulbuli, shararthi, bolibali kubsoorat pari se pyaar ho gaya hai Geet


Geet: achcha?


Maan: tum poochoge nahi ki woh pyaari pyaari pari kaun hai?


Geet: kaun hai?


Geet pretends to be unaware...


Maan: tum hi bathao, kaun hai woh pari jisne mere pathar dil mein bhi pyaar barasa aur meri duniya ko itne rangeen banadiya?


Geet: mujhe kaise patha hoga? Aapki pari hai, aapko hi patha hoga?


Maan: achcha? Toh tum bathao ki tummare sapnon ka Rajkumar tumme milgaya ki nahi?


Geet: sapnon ka Rajkumar?


Maan: haan


Geet: mein aaise sapne nahi dekhthi, par meinne sach mein ek rajkumar ko mili, pehle socha ki woh bhi ek aur Dhust Danav hai, hamesha gussa kartha aur mujhe daant tha raha, phir mujhe uss gusse ke peeche usska pyaar dikhayi diya aur usske daant ke peeche usska kadar dikayi diya, aur ek din achanak laga ki woh bhi ek sapna hai, sach nahi ho saktha, lekhin mere Rajkumar ne mere sapne ko bhi sach banadhiya, aaj mere liya shayar bhi bangaya mera Rajkumar


Maan: oh etra Rajkumar? Kahan hai woh Dhust Danav?


Geet closes his mouth...


Geet: chup bilkul chup, kabardar aapne mere Rajkumar ko aaisa kuch kaha


Geet warns him not to say a word more about her Rajkumar...


Maan: kya hua?


Get: unko toh sirf mein Dhust Danav bhula sakthi


Maan: achcha meri pariyon ki pari


Maan pulls her closer and kisses her lips...


Geet too puts her hands around his neck and hugs him tight...


That kiss breaks the last hurdle between them and kick starts their union...



Maan slowly unties her choli and touches her bare back...



Her cold body starts steaming and his passionate touches ignite her desires...


Maan turns around pins her down and starts removing her jewels...


Geet doesn't need them as she is a natural beauty and anyhow they are meant to be discarded and so are her clothes...why would they need them to keep themselves warm as they have themselves become hot, the fire inside them growing bigger and bigger ready to engulf them in the flames of desire and passion...


Maan whispers in her ears...


"I LOVE YOU GEET...mere zindegi mein aane ke liye shukriya...ab mein bhi sapne mein vishwas karne laga hoo Geet...aur pyaar se nahi dartha...kyunki tum ne mujhe sapne dekhna sikhaya aur pyaar ka matlas bhi sikaya...mein apne zidagi bar ke iye tummara saath ko chchtha hoon Geet, kya tum mere saath deghi?"


Geet: haan...mujhe bhi aapki saath ki zaroorat hai

Maan: aaj se tere sapne mere sapne, teri chahat meri chahat


Geet: ab mera koi sapna nahi, meri koi chahat nahi


Maan: kya?


Geet: abhi se sapne ho toh hummare honge aur chahat bhi hummare hi honge, haina?


Maan: hummara pehla sapna?


Geet: woh toh puri ho gayi, ab hum ek ho gaye


Maan: par mera sapna adoora reh gaya


Geet: aapka sapna?


Maan: haan, lekhin ab toh woh bhi pura ho jayega Geet


Geet: kaise?


Maan: aaise


Maan jumps into action...mahiii...


Isske aage mein likh nahi sakthi...


Aap ko jo bhi sochna hai sochlo...happy Maneet dreams...



Next Day Maneet get ready to return...

Geet is very sad...she will miss this place and the lovely people, specially Dadi...


Maan is very happy that Geet is all his now...


Dadi orders Maan to take Geet to Rohtak regularly...


Geet promises to visit Dadi even if Maan doesn't accompany her...


She wouid miss Dadi's care and her guidance...


Dadi warns Maan to take good care of her bahu else she would catch the next flight to Delhi and make sure her bahu is happy, who knows Maan better than devil Dadi...


And Maan is scared that this may not be a joke and his Devil Dadi is damn serious...



You better be good beta...now you are under the scanner...


Dadi says that she will keep in touch with Geet everyday...to know what Maan is doing...


And Geet need not be afraid of Maan for Dadi will set him right if necessary...


Hope Maan had learned his lessons now...


Adi had already called Maan and Maan keeps talking over the phone...


She calls Dadi immediately...


Dadi: Geet bte, kya baat hai? gadhi karab ho gayi hai kya?


Geet: nahi Dadi, aap bahut sahi kehthe, aapke pothe bade Dhust Danav hi hai, ye kabhi nahi sudhrenge


Dadi: mujhe patha hai, ab uss ullu ke patte ne kya kiya?


Geet: lagtha hai unka dimag karab ho gaya?


Dadi: Maan kahan hai?


Geet: yahi hai


Dadi: phir tum itna pareshaan kaise?


Geet: mein yahan akhele beitkke bore ho rahi hoon, kssi ke paas mujhse baat karne ke liye bhi waqt nahi hai, hamesha phone pe busy rehthe


Dadi: kya? Maan ko mobile do


Geets puts the phone on speaker...


Maan is not aware of this...


He is seriously discussing business with a client...


Geet pokes him...


Maan: Geet, mein bahut zaroori baat kar raha hoon


Dadi hears this...


Geet: aap ke liye phone hai


Maan: mere liye? Par tummare mobile pe kaun call karega? Adi?


Geet: nahi Dadi


Maan: Mr.Sharma, call U later


Maan snatches the mobile from dadi...


Geet: Dadi ye toh naraaz ho agye


Geet shouts...Maan stares...


Dadi: aur apne bade bade aankhon se mujhe darathe bhi hai


Maan closes her mouth with one hand while holding the mobile on the other...


Maan: chup...bilkul chup, har waqt bak bak karthi rehthi ho, tum toh aajkal kuch zyada hi bolthi ho, teri bolthi band karna padega


Dadi: tum mujhse aaise baat karoge?


Maan: dadi aap nahi ye Geet mujhe bahut pareshaan karthi hai


Dadi: isska matlab Geet sach hi bolthi


Maan: kya kaha usne?


Dadi: tum mere samne hi Geet ko aaise daantthe toh bechari tere saath akhele kaise rahegi?


Maan: Dadi, aap galat samajthe hai


Dadi: Maan bte, ye teek nahi hai, aap Geet se maafi mangiye abhi


Maan: what? meinne koi galthi nahi ki


Dadi: toh phir aap Geet ko hummare paas wapas bhejdo, hum Geet ko apke saath nahi bhej sakthe


Maan: Dadi?


Dadi: geet beta


Geet snatches the mobile...


Geet: ji dadi, mein aathi hoon aapke paas, mujhe nahi jaana iss Dhust Danav ke saath


As Maan had stopped the car as he was speaking on the phone Geet wasily gets down and starts walking back...


Maan runs after her...


He catches hold of her and pulls her towards him...


Geet drops the mobile...


Maan looks into her eyes...


Geet's anger vanishes in a sec...


Maan: mujhe patha hai ki tumme kya chahiye


Maan gets closer and Geet backs off until she is locked in his broad shoulders...


There is no escape...bechari Geet...


She has invited trouble herself..

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Geet is scared...


Geet looks at Maan...he is all geared up...


And his looks zero in on her shivering lips...



Geet closes her eyes and gets ready for it...

Maan locks lips with hers...


Geet is pleasantly shoced and she is surprised by the sudden change in Maan's attitude...


She is no longer a guest...she has become 100% Mrs.MSK, Maan ki Geet...


Ab toh kissi aur se shikayat karne ki kya zaroorat?


Geet ko pura haq hai, Maan would love to see her as Mrs.MSK...


Geet ko haq se mangna hai...wahi toh Maan chahtha...haina?


Abhi Geet ko patha chalega ki apna haq kya hai aur uspe Maan ka haq kya hai, haina?


Dadi knows that her job is done...she cuts the call...


Maan : ab tum kush ho? Dadi se mere shikayat karthi? Ab toh tumme sabak sikhaana padega takhi dubara aaisi galthi karne ki sochogi bhi nahi


Maan lifts her and takes her back to the car...he opens the back door and puts her on the rear seat...


Maan: ab toh mein sirf tummara hoon, kaho Geet, ho jaye?


Geet: mera matlab ye nahi


Maan: phir? What do you want? I am all your now


Maan starts unbuttoning his shirt...


Geet: app ko koi aur kaam nahi hai kya?


Maan: tum kahan mujhe koi aur kaam karna dethi?


Geet: woh aap mujhse baat hi nahi kar rahe the


Maan: mein bathon mein viswas nahi kartha, I believe in action


Geet: nahi, I'm sorry


Maan: maafi toh mujhe mangna chahiye thi? Haina?


Geet: mein bas mazak kar rahi thi


Geet bahut hi dar jaathi...Maan ko kya lagtha?


Geet hamesha wahi sochthe rehthi? Geet turns all red in sharam...


Ab ragging katam, Maan ne toh Geet ko sach much daradhiya...


Maan: Geet, aao


Maan gives a hand...He pulls her out...


Maan: mein bhi mazak hi kar raha tha


Geet keeps staring his bare chest...


Maan: lagtha hai tum bahut serious ho gayi ho


Geet sharmakke apne aakhen band karthi...


Maan: hare, ye koi galthi thodi nahi, tumme pura haq hai Geet


Maan pulls her and hugs her...


Geet pushes him off...


Geet: sharam naam ki koi cheez hai bhi ya nahi, kahin bhi kapde kholkke aajaathe ho


Geet pulls his shirt and starts to button it...


Maan: toh bas issiliye tum itna tamasha kar rahi thi?


Maan sound disappointed...


Geet: mein bas aapse batein karna chahathi thi


Maan: aur kitne batein karenge? Ab toh hum batein se bhi aage nikal chuke haina?


Maan starts stroking her waving hair...


Geet: aapse toh yahi umeed thi, hamesha mein hi baat akrthe rehthi aur aap bas ek gante men mein do hmm aur char haan Geet karthe ho, babaji mein bhi kaise aadmi ke saath fusgayi


Maan doesn't bother her and is busy in his actions...


Geet: isski koi kami nahi, chdo mujhe


Geet tries to get off his hold...


Maan: nahi chod saktha


Geet: aap na, pagal ho gaye ho


Maan: mein pagal ho gaya hoon? Mein bas apna kaam kar raha tha, kissne mujhe distract kiya? Kissne shuru kiya tha ye sab? Ab itni bhi boli banne ki natak mat karo Geet


Geet: kya?


Maan: maan jao ki tum bhi yahi chahathi ho


Geet: nahi, aap chalo, humme dher ho rahi hai


Maan: mujhe koi problem nahi


Maan's mobile rings...


Geet smiles...aapka bhulawa aagaya...


Maan gets it... it's from Adi...


Ek minute Geet...Maan gets back to business...


Geet keeps admiring his style and attitude...


Bechare Adi ka band bhaj raha hai...


Maan starts driving as it is getting late...


Geet keeps staring at him and Maan ko ye ajeeb lagtha...


Usually Maan keeps stalking her and Geet always drools without his knowledge...


Ab toh khule aam flirt karthi...ye toh kal raat ki azar hai...


Ab ussko bhi ehsaas ho gaya ki Maan ne koi jadu kar liya hai jo Geet ek hi raat mein itni besharam ho gayi aur she is shameless to demand Maan...


Maan looks into her hazel black eyes that are dizzy and inviting him always...


Geet hosh mein aathi...and she blushes as she had been thinking about the previous night...


She was dreaming about tonight...


And Maan has read her mind...


Geet is ashamed that she is still thinking about their SR...


Ye aaise kya ho gaya hai mujhe? Kyun mein bar bar wahi sochthi? I'm a bad girl...


Then she thinks, Maan is also thinking about that often, she had seen him all dreamy many times drooling and flirting...if she is bad then Maan is worse...


Maan: kya soch rahi ho Geet?


Geet: kuch nahi


Maan: joot mat bolo, mujhe patha hai tum kya soch rahi thi, mere barein mein hi soch rahi thi, haina?


Geet: haan, mein soch rahi thi ki aap kitne bade Dhust Danav ho, kahin pe nigayen aur kahin pe nishaani, aap mujhe dekhe bina kaise mere aakhen pad sakthe ho?


Maan: tum toh bahut badal gayi ho Geet


Geet: kya?aaisa kuch nahi hai


Geet is embarrassed, issko kaise patha chaltha ki mere mann mein kya hai?


Maan: gabrao mat, issme tummari koi galthi nahi hai, mera bhi yahi haal hai, ye kudrad ka kamaal hai


Geet: kya? aap ko dekhke toh mujhe laga ki aap koi saint ho, par aap toh usska opposite nikhle, aap toh shaitan ho


Maan: kya karein Geet? meri Mishti ko ye shaitan hi zyada pasand hai


Geet: aap ab bas bhi karo, mujhe bahut bhook lagthi hai


Maan: kaise bhook hai Geet?


Geet: Maaan


They stop at a dabba for lunch...Geet takes charge and orders food as she is the master now...


Maan is happy to let her do it as she loves her food and Maan is not a foodie like Geet...


He has to up his game to catch up with her and he likes everything about her...


Be it the chit chats or be it the fights over petty issues or be it her courage to run away from her forced marriage or be it her faith in Maan or be it her cribbing or be it her boldness or be it her shyness or be it her loudness... Maan is just fascinated by her acts totally...he loves to be the silent admirer...


Geet: aap mirch nahi kathe haina? Mere liye char lacha paratha, ek sahi paneer aur tandoori chicken, chicken masala, aur pyaaz aur hare mirch bhi aur inke liye bachon wala dal, bina koi mirchi ki aur lassi bhi, aur kuch?


Geet turns and looks at Maan who is lost in her innocence and attitude...


Maan smiles: nahi


Geet relishes the hot and spicy food along with her mirchi and it's too hot for her too, but she had to save her reputation infront of Maan and so she keeps eating with teary eyes...


Maan stops her...


Maan: Geeet, bas karo, mujhe patha hai ki tum mujhse zyada mirchi kha sakthi ho


Maan takes the lassi and makes her drink...


Ek chtu from the adjacent table keeps looking at them...


Chotu: kya hua uncle? Aapn didi ko kyun daantta? Dekho kaise ro rahi hai, papaji, ye uncle bahut bhure hai


The couple looks at Geet and they get angry...


Aunty: ki hua puthar? Aaise nahi rothe, sunoji, aap iss bhai sab ko thoda samjao


Uncle: bhai sab, kyun biwi ko rulathe ho? mujhe dekho, kaise apni biwi ke saath kush hoon?


Chotu: haan, hummare ghar mein sirf papaji rothe hai, maa toh unko rulathi hai


Aunty: chup kar gadhe


Uncleji chup ho jaathe...


Maan is embarrassed...Geet is enjoying this...


Aunty: bechari kaise ro rahi hai?


Maan: Geeet



Geet bursts out laughing...: auntyji ki jai ho, Maan sir seekho kuch uncleji se

Aunty: haan bhai sab, biwi ki izzat karna seekho, aur aurat ko kamzoor mat samjo


Geet: nari sakthi zindabad, aunttyji tussi great ho


Aunty: toh bhai sab itni pyaari si gudhi ko kabhi rulao mat, warna aapka bhi yahi haal hogi


Aunty looks at uncleji...


Geet: koi baat nahi aunty, meinne mirchi khali


Aunty: tabhi toh bhai sab lassi philathe the


Auntyji sharmathi...


Uncle: ye aapki biwi nahi hai? tabhi toh aap itna kush ho


Uncle is dejected...he looks at his wife and curses his fate...


Aunty: andhe ho kya? dekho ye shadhi sudha suhaangan hai


Uncle: shayad inki pathni nahi ho


Maan gets angry...


Maan: toh kya ye aapki padosan ki biwi hai? ye meri pathni hai, Geet Maan Singh khurana, bolo Geet, kyun chup ho?


Geet: ji auntyji, hum pathi pathni hi hai


Aunty: aap thode dher chup raho, bar bar kyun bathana chahthe ki aapki kopdi kali hai


Chotu: ab papaji ko mirchi laging


Papaji: chotuuu


Aunty: sorry bhai sab, ab chalo yahan se, chotu, aao beta


They leave...Geet feels bad for the uncle...


Geet: bechare uncleji


Maan: haan, par ye toh teri hi galthi hai Geet


Geet: meri galthi? Babaji, ab uncleji se meinne kaha ki hum donno ki shadhi nahi hui?


Maan: zyada natak mat karo


Geet: mein natak karthi?


Geet makes a face...Maan enjoys her expressions...


Maan: chalo chalo, aaj ke liye itna hi zyada hai, tum aaise hi mujhe sir sir bhulathi toh aaisa hi hoga


Geet: sorry ji


Geet apne khaan pakadthi...


Maan : sorry Maan


Geet: sorry Maan


Geet is liking it...Maan, ye toh achcha hai, haina Maan?


Maan: tummare muh se sunkke aur bhi achcha lagtha hai Geet


Geet: Dadi ne pehle hi kaha tha, par mujhe laga aap naraaz ho jaooge


Maan: tum Maan sir kahogi toh zaroor naraaz ho jaaoonga, samji?


Geet: teek hai Maan babu, ye kaisa hai?


Maan: Geeet


Geet runs and Maan chases her...


Geet turns back to look at Maan and is about to hit the waiter...


Maan holds her and pulls her...


Geet goes and hits Maan...


Maan: Geet, tum teek toh haina? Tumme lagi toh nahi


Maan pareshaan hojaatha...


Geet: nahi Maan, mein bilkul teek hoon, aap ke hothe hue mujhe kuch bhi nahi hoga, haina babaji?


Then they return late that evening...

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