Love, Unrequited T2 [Ch 93 - Pg 144] T3 link Ch 148 - Page 72

Originally posted by: imshveta

Oh my

What did you just do? And you were saying you don't do romance, ha

First of all, what did you do to Keerti? Fifty shades of her journey from Meena Kumari to Maneka 😉

Nishit babu, bachalo apna dil. ❤️

I am so loving this new Avatar of Keerti. She seems so confident and clear in her head. Stalking bhi karo toh shaan se.

Prasanna is an intelligent girl. Maybe her time with her dadi made her more perceptive. She knew she is sending love to her brother.

And after so so so long of unrequited love, there is a role reversal. I am glad to see this Nishit who doesn't know how to react around her. He too, is taken aback by her new Avatar like us.

And for God's sake why did you stop there? I want to know how many ants Nishit found on her nape 😛

Please do continue writing such ' no romance' . 👏

Thanks for tagging me.

And take care. Sending love and wishes for your great health 🤗

Kitne bhi tu karle sitam

Has has ke sahenge hum

Yeh Pyaar Na Hoga kam

Sanam teri kasam.....

Five. There you have your answer. He found 5 ants. I wouldn't want you to wait for Qayamat just to know that.😆

Love the song.❤️

Shveta, Your love for the story makes my heart warm. There are so many good things out there and yet you choose to read this story and share your precious moments in this thread. Thank you for that.🤗

Originally posted by: canapoem

GN, superb updates.

Not sure why you thought they were not good enough, they are stellar.

Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder, Kavi. It is all because of you all that I could reach this far. If I were to choose a song lyrics, it would be

Kal nahi thi jo aaj lagti hoon

Taareef meri hai khamakhaa

Tohfa hai tera meri adaa

If u are replying does that u are done with writing

Originally posted by: bakwas_serial

GN..my casual comment did not do justice to how well crafted and thought out is the chapter Come Vorrei.

Like I missed that when Kirti stumbled on the stairs..Nishit had moved to help (It would not fit Nishit the character if he did not).

The verbal repartee and the whole he walking towards her and then walking away in sync with her responses. Set the mood and is very telling❤️

The icing was the reason for the ant story she regaled to him.

Dont doubt your ability to write romance. This was amazing. 💕

Shradha 🤗I am so happy you liked it. Making leads meet after a break is difficult thing. I had already scrapped 2-4 drafts. This one also was not supposed to be the final one. I had planned to sit on it until another better idea came to my mind. But then I realized nothing was coming and this was the best I could do in that moment. And I was missing you all so I had to update. 😅

Your she played a Nishit on him was ❤️. Thank you for your unwavering support.

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

If u are replying does that u are done with writing

No it means I want to be a Goldie and I am increasing my no of posts.😆

Originally posted by: canapoem

I thought I will dedicate one song for each chapter.

K, I am sure commenting everytime must be a difficult commitment to keep. I just wanted to tell you that your words really mean a lot to me and thank you for making my thread a brighter place with your presence and wit.

And the lyrics of the songs that you highlighted are so apt. 🔥

Originally posted by: Saumya96

Oh my, you are back, sigh.!

Meera, that was really something called as meera feeling for her kanha.!

Kirti and her never ending encounters with animals. So she met Prasanna and got to know THE good news Nishit is here, hayee mera Nishit.!

"Had menopause came early" this cracked me up, god I am still laughing.

17 years of obsession, I will never forget this.

Wait, what.? Is she really Kirti.? Miss Singh.? I read thrice to confirm that. That was, sizzling.

P.S: this song is the latest addition in my favourites, thought to share

https://youtu.be/FdB38uoo1No

Take care of your health dear.!!

First of all this is such a soothing song, Saumya. Please keep sharing your favorites whenever you have time.

I think this story has changed the way I look at 17 years too. 😆

Sizzling? Was it? I didn't think I could pull off writing such scenes. Thank you. ❤️

Originally posted by: Meerkat

First of all this is such a soothing song, Saumya. Please keep sharing your favorites whenever you have time.

I think this story has changed the way I look at 17 years too. 😆

Sizzling? Was it? I didn't think I could pull off writing such scenes. Thank you. ❤️

For sure I will...!!!

Hope you are doing well now.

Yeah it was sizzling. Never imagined Ms Singh actually doing that. Imagining Nishit's expressions 🤩🙈

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

WHAT THE FUDGE JUST HAPPENED WHSGJSJSKANSBSNSNS HOW DO I SLEEP NOW.

lmao nishits coldness and borderline abusive words countered with seductions...I stan 😂😂😂

😆

Haal-e-dil, please remind and stop me if I happen to go the unhealthy abusive route, even if it's borderline. I try to not to write men like ITV portrays them to be but I have to confess I have grown up consuming that content on a daily basis. Even as a child I watched serials and not cartoons.😅

I had to do a lot of unlearning and wouldn't be surprised if some of it still lingers in my writing. So if you ever think the hero is going the villain route. Please free to point that out. Readers can be the best moral compass, I think.

Originally posted by: Saumya96

For sure I will...!!!

Hope you are doing well now.

Yeah it was sizzling. Never imagined Ms Singh actually doing that. Imagining Nishit's expressions 🤩🙈

Nishit's expressions...hmm...😆He had it coming didn't he? With all those crass remarks and high and mighty attitude!

He did not even follow her back on insta!

Let him also toss and turn all night.

Isi baat par ek gaana arz hai

Yaad tum aate rahe ek huk si uthti rahi

Neend mujhse, neend se main bhagti chupti rahi

Raat bhar bairan nigodi chandni chubhti rahi

Aag si jalti rahi, girti rahi shabnam...aap ki kasam

Karwatein badalte rahein aapki kasam...aapki kasam

But in his defense, he deserves to jhunjhlaofy and lash out. He is a human as well. And with this changed attitude of hers, it is going to spike his temper all the more. The girl sure takes him for granted. Is it okay to reveal character insights like this? That is why I stay away from replies. 😂😅