Shivi FF: Broken (Part 12, Pg.31) (finished) - Page 9

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Posted: 4 years ago
#81

Awwwieeee! Raaaavi search of a dreaaaaam what’s it going to beeee? Has to be something amaazing 😂 Maybe annoying Shiva into being her slave for life 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#82

Unres..


This chapter was beautiful as usual.👍🏼👏❤️

Feeling so happy to find Raavi taking baby steps towards life in the truest sense.

Shiva waking her up and Raavi purposefully delaying dressing up.... those scenes were adorable. Those moments are truly the crux of ShiVi. ❤️

Raavi holding onto his sleeves.... I can imagine her bholi si face, wanting to hide behind Shiva from the rest of the world. It kinda pained and soothed me.

And I really loved the part where Shiva advises her.

She's broken for sure but now, Shiva is there to make her life beautiful like never before.

Raavi's dream.... looking forward to know what it would be.

About the part of her dream, being a Pandya bahu, well Shiva can help her in that. 😉


Ananya, this story had me in the first chapter itself behen. You're doing great and I appreciate your commitment towards us and our never ending ShiVi cravings.

Sending lots of love behena... ❤️


Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.....smiley42smiley42smiley42

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Posted: 4 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

oh i do believe and agree to what u said........but your writing is such that tharak ho ya pain ya love ya anger......every thing comes out naturally and in abundance


Wow. Thank you so much ❤️🤗


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Posted: 4 years ago
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So happy to see Raavi going back towards life❤️

I am excited for her to find her dream and her journey getting there

You are doing a fantastic job Ananya! It cannot be easy writing this but you are doing each emotion, each action justice 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

So happy to see Raavi going back towards life❤️

I am excited for her to find her dream and her journey getting there

You are doing a fantastic job Ananya! It cannot be easy writing this but you are doing each emotion, each action justice 🤗


Thank you behena ❤️🤗


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Posted: 4 years ago
#86

Beautiful, emotional ....I am loving everything about this story 🥰🥰🥰

And thank you for giving us super fast updates as always 😊😊😊

You are the best 😘😘😘

Waiting for the next update ❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#87

Beautiful Story!

I am loving it!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#88

Beautiful update, love your writing skills👏

Loved the way you described the emotions of Raavi and the family involved with her👏

Finally Raavi is getting back to normal, she is healing but needs some time to recover fully❤️

Shiva has become her companion, she shared her delima with him ❤️

Loved Shiva's advice❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#89

This story is so beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

Good job Ananya👏👏( I hope I can call you that)

Raavi's feelings, everyone's care, the way she is slowly trying to move on with one step at a time, the way everyone is being supportive of this slow progress and not hurrying her with some stupid shaadi idea or anything, it's just so perfect

Loving the story😊

Even with your exams around, you have given four updates!! That's really commendable🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swathu

This story is so beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

Good job Ananya👏👏( I hope I can call you that)

Raavi's feelings, everyone's care, the way she is slowly trying to move on with one step at a time, the way everyone is being supportive of this slow progress and not hurrying her with some stupid shaadi idea or anything, it's just so perfect

Loving the story😊

Even with your exams around, you have given four updates!! That's really commendable🤗


Yes, you can call me that 😊❤️

Thank you!! I keep writing in between studying. That’s my secret 😆


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