SKR FF 3:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 144 - Page 44

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Apukar

Indrajeet is the perfect example of a toxic person. He claims he loves Sulochona, but when she stands against wrong, it's her "fault". He does not even try to understand her needs and want.

Suvarna is becoming a thief. Thief of happiness. How shamelessly she was eavesdropping ew.

And you.... I am not crying, you are! Those flashbacks... golden moments... 🥰🥰🥰🥺🥺🥺

If Sulochana praises his Appa, will listen to whatever Raghvan will say, then automatically Indrajeet will start loving her back...💔 That's what his thinkings are!

Suvarna ke bare me nahi hi bolte, she has totally lost it...

No.... I am not crying 🥺🥺💔💔

Stay tuned ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ummm... sorry somu....Mae nae ithna bada galthi kardi....I am so so so so so so sorry for not reading your updates for 2 days...and also for not commenting and liking.....I am so sorry...😔....maaf kardo babydoll...😢....I love you babydoll💓...I miss you babydoll....💓I love you I love you I love you... sorry baby.... sorry darlu😘...sorry cutie🤭...sorry sweetie 💓....sorry sweetheart 💓💓💓💓...abbb maaf zaror karna.........💓💓💓💓😰😥😥😥😥...abb Mera sorry time finish 🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅.....abb blast time start............. ........................................Mae aaj login ki.... updates kae pm check ki.....but you didn't pm me 😲....jao somu...I am angry on you....😡....I am not talking to you...🙅...very bad you are....my angry baby dragon...kua hua....2 din nahi thi....toh bool jaogi..😡😡😡...Mae tumsae bohoth naaraz Hoon...abbb mujae bi manao ...Jaesae raghuvanshi boys nae apni biwiyon ko manaya...haaannnnnnn.... mujae manao manao manao...😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😂.abb mujae tumharae out of the world updates sae manao....manao ...manao.....😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠......🤣🤣😂😂...hey just kidding.... don't take it seriously ....but I AM hurt ....becoz tumnae bujae bool dii....so abb I will be eating your updates from today just like my favorite noodles.... despiratly..... hurriedly.... aggressively.....Soo jaldi update kardoooooooo......

Yahan saans Lena hai toh..... tumharae update chahiyeeeeeeeeeeeee jaaannn💓💓💓💓.... update karoooooooooo....💓💓💓💓💓💓.......


And now let's hop into the last two updates......

My god....I was hoping and jumping..... ye ye ye ye.....suvarnaaaaaaa😈😈😈😈😈.....bang on.....😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏....I loved to see siya walking into raghuvanshi office like an angel...😇... actually you know what....I was imagining the same scene a few days back....like siya coming to office.... meeting suvarna.... suvarna ka misunderstanding.... everything.... every little thing I thought in my mind....and you ....you brought it in our updates....🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭... you know what...this was the best episode 😏💯💯💯💯....Maza aagaya...😅...and our siyaram💓💓💓💓💓💓💓...hayee.... bracelet..💓💓💓...and then the flying kiss again....😍😍😍😍😍😍.... suvarnaaaaa🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💥💥💥💥....jal Raha haiiiiiii. ......haaannnnnnn....😂😈😂....I just LOVEED it...muuuuhhhaaa😘😘😘...and then the second update....hayeee... laptop ka screen saver bi siya...hayeee ram kithna pyar karogae apnae biwi ko... hayeeeeee..😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘....I am telling you....ram....be my hubby na......🤭🤭🤭🤭😅😅😅😅...lol...and then the ram laksh talks💓...that suvarna ka toh Kya kehna....🔥🔥🔥🔥...burn burn....jal jal kae Kal ashes ban jayegi..😅😂😂😂....and the last siya urmi part,💓💓...then the emotional flash backs 💓💓💓💓... loved it baby doll...loved it....I too had small tears at the corner of my eyes...😢...abbb waiting for the update .... love you baby doll...miss you too 💓💓💓.....hug you🤗🤗🤗...love you 💓💓💓... Jai siya ram ❤️.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Srinivasan.R

Ummm... sorry somu....Mae nae ithna bada galthi kardi....I am so so so so so so sorry for not reading your updates for 2 days...and also for not commenting and liking.....I am so sorry...😔....maaf kardo babydoll...😢....I love you babydoll💓...I miss you babydoll....💓I love you I love you I love you... sorry baby.... sorry darlu😘...sorry cutie🤭...sorry sweetie 💓....sorry sweetheart 💓💓💓💓...abbb maaf zaror karna.........💓💓💓💓😰😥😥😥😥...abb Mera sorry time finish 🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅🙅.....abb blast time start............. ........................................Mae aaj login ki.... updates kae pm check ki.....but you didn't pm me 😲....jao somu...I am angry on you....😡....I am not talking to you...🙅...very bad you are....my angry baby dragon...kua hua....2 din nahi thi....toh bool jaogi..😡😡😡...Mae tumsae bohoth naaraz Hoon...abbb mujae bi manao ...Jaesae raghuvanshi boys nae apni biwiyon ko manaya...haaannnnnnn.... mujae manao manao manao...😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😂.abb mujae tumharae out of the world updates sae manao....manao ...manao.....😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠......🤣🤣😂😂...hey just kidding.... don't take it seriously ....but I AM hurt ....becoz tumnae bujae bool dii....so abb I will be eating your updates from today just like my favorite noodles.... despiratly..... hurriedly.... aggressively.....Soo jaldi update kardoooooooo......

Yahan saans Lena hai toh..... tumharae update chahiyeeeeeeeeeeeee jaaannn💓💓💓💓.... update karoooooooooo....💓💓💓💓💓💓.......


And now let's hop into the last two updates......

My god....I was hoping and jumping..... ye ye ye ye.....suvarnaaaaaaa😈😈😈😈😈.....bang on.....😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏....I loved to see siya walking into raghuvanshi office like an angel...😇... actually you know what....I was imagining the same scene a few days back....like siya coming to office.... meeting suvarna.... suvarna ka misunderstanding.... everything.... every little thing I thought in my mind....and you ....you brought it in our updates....🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭... you know what...this was the best episode 😏💯💯💯💯....Maza aagaya...😅...and our siyaram💓💓💓💓💓💓💓...hayee.... bracelet..💓💓💓...and then the flying kiss again....😍😍😍😍😍😍.... suvarnaaaaa🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💥💥💥💥....jal Raha haiiiiiii. ......haaannnnnnn....😂😈😂....I just LOVEED it...muuuuhhhaaa😘😘😘...and then the second update....hayeee... laptop ka screen saver bi siya...hayeee ram kithna pyar karogae apnae biwi ko... hayeeeeee..😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘....I am telling you....ram....be my hubby na......🤭🤭🤭🤭😅😅😅😅...lol...and then the ram laksh talks💓...that suvarna ka toh Kya kehna....🔥🔥🔥🔥...burn burn....jal jal kae Kal ashes ban jayegi..😅😂😂😂....and the last siya urmi part,💓💓...then the emotional flash backs 💓💓💓💓... loved it baby doll...loved it....I too had small tears at the corner of my eyes...😢...abbb waiting for the update .... love you baby doll...miss you too 💓💓💓.....hug you🤗🤗🤗...love you 💓💓💓... Jai siya ram ❤️.

So finally welcome back 😜🤩🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

No need to say sorry, I know all of yours exams are going on, may be.!

So don't say sorry, I am not at all angry 😜😜

Aur dusri baat to madam Hema, you've not accepted my friend request, to me kaise PM karu.? Batao batao 🙄

Aajkal me bhi thoda busy chal rahi hu, aaj kal last part is remaining of the update... May be I will need some time, uske baad update karti hu 😘❤️

And yes, story is moving towards lots of ups and downs, jaha Raghuvanshi family ka happy moments bhi hai, Lankeshwar family ka sad moments bhi hai, Suvarna ka angry moments bhi hai, SiRa ka emotional moments bhi hai aur sare couples ka romance bhi hai❤️❤️😍😍

So be tuned here, kyuki kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hai 🤐

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Posted: 4 years ago

Good evening 🤭

A late update today.!

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Mixed emotions in today's part- Love ❤️, happiness 😍, teasing 🤪, laugh😁 and also emotional 🥺.!

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So fasten your seat belts and let's start with today's ride ✈️

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Song: "Muskurane ki wajah" CityLights (2014 movie)

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It was already the dusk time, when the boys returned back from their work. They found Kranti and Sumitra in the living area, having their evening tea doing their gossips. The boys took ten minutes break, resting them on the couch, having a short conversation with their both the mothers. They enquired about Dashrath, for which Kranti answered that Manvi has took him for a walk in the garden. And before they ask about other girls, both the ladies said they are unaware about their exact location in the house. After which Kranti asked the boys to get freshen up.

Ram enters his room and travelled his eyes around to find the room empty, Siya was not there.

RAM- Siya...

He called her, looking at the direction of balcony, but he didn't found her coming; next he looks at the direction of the washroom, but again no sign of her. Then Siya must be downstairs in the kitchen or doing any other work, thinks Ram. He loosen his tie and keeps his bag on the side table, when something on the bed caught his eyes. Ram removes his blazer and put it on his bag, again looking at the direction of the bed. He has immediately recognised the clothes, but to have more confirmation he started moving towards the bed. A smile crept on his face, looking at his and Siya's wedding sherwani and lehenga. When Siya was arranging the room in the afternoon, she has decided to show the clothes once to Ram, before she keep them back in the upper shelf, that's why she had placed them on the bed. Ram touches his red color sherwani and immediately all the memories of that day came in front of his eyes. His eyes falls on Siya's red lehenga, the lehenga which she wore that day, when she has became his forever. Ram took the net heavy bordered red dupatta in his hold when Siya's picture flashed in his mind, that picture when she was all ready in the bridal avatar. He caresses the dupatta very softly, it looked delicate and he don't want anything to get damage or break of that beautiful piece. He could still feel the Cologne smell which Siya has applied that day, the dupatta still have her touch on it. Siya enters the room and looks at Ram, having the red dupatta in his hold. She smiles at his action of caressing the cloth and moves towards him, gaining his attention towards her.

SIYA- aaj safai kar rahi thi. Socha aapko ek baar dikha du, after which I will place them back in the shelf.

Siya gave him the explaination for why she have placed their special clothes on the bed. Ram smile at her and again turned his eyes towards her dupatta.

RAM- kitne baar bhi dekho, hamesha wahi feelings deta hai yeh shadi ka joda.

Siya nods her head lightly, getting agreed to him. Ram motioned his eyes to look at her and something got into his mind. He immediately unfolds the dupatta and moves closer to her, spreading the dupatta around her back, covering her all.

SIYA- arey.!

Siya looks surprised at his sudden act while Ram folded his hands smiling at her.

RAM- always perfect.!

Siya giggles at his reaction and turns her eyes towards the dupatta, holding it near her chest.

SIYA- Ram.. ek baar na inn kapdo ko dry cleaning ke liye de dete hai.

Said Siya, looking at the whole cloth, caressing it's border lightly. The heavy border still looks new, but she has a fear of it getting torn or anything like that.

SIYA- these heavy zari clothes, should be regularly dry cleaned.

She motioned her eyes to look at him, after completing her sentence, and found him still smiling at her.

SIYA- kya.? Aise kya dekh rahe hai.?

Asked Siya having a confused look looking at Ram's face.

RAM- arey? Apni biwi ko dekh raha hu. Kisi aur ke nahi.

Ram immediately caught her right wrist and pulls her towards him, holding her back from his left hand.

RAM- aur me apni biwi ko kitne bhi der tak aise dekh sakta hu, no one is asking me tax for that.

Siya laughs at his words, resting her hands on his chest.

SIYA- ok. Dekh lijiye. Permission granted.!

Siya, playfully gave him the permission and Ram smirks looking at her.

RAM- chaliye na Siya, firse shaadi kar lete hai.

His sudden words made Siya's eyes to grow wide in a happy surprise. Whenever they have a look at their "shaadi" clothes, she hear the same sentence from her husband.

RAM- again that first meeting, again the engagement, that phase between engagement and marriage, our phone calls, our late night talks, sabhi rasmein sabkuch, firse...

While Ram said those words, their journey from the first meeting till their wedding automatically flashes in front of both of theirs eyes, giving them a happy smile.

SIYA- itna sab firse.?

Asked Siya in a surprise and Ram immediately nods his head in a big yes.

SIYA- hmm... To uske liye to mujhe Delhi jana hoga na.

Ram looks confused and Siya nods her head lightly, continuing her words.

SIYA- Tabhi to aap baarat layenge aur tabhi to me bidaa hokar aaungi. Firse.!

They continued their plannings for their imaginary second wedding, and Ram scrunched his eyes thinking about her plan.

RAM- why.? You don't have to go anywhere.

He denied, tightening the grip on her back, with his hand.

SIYA- areh? Fir kaise wo long distance phone calls honge.?

Siya gave a valid point, pressing her smile, as in teasing him, for which Ram gave a look at her.

RAM- we will skip that part then. We will repeat everything, but not the distance thing.

He has stated his decision, in a very childish way, while Siya started laughing at his reaction.

SIYA- aap, aur aapke plannings.! Ekdum atrangi hai. Whether it is regarding a cricket team or else this firse shaadi karte hai wala idea.

Ram smile at her words and leaves her hold, while Siya removes the dupatta from her body, now folding it very carefully.

RAM- atrangi nahi hai, loving hai. I can fall in love with you for the infinite time.

Siya stops her work and motioned her eyes to look at him, his words. He always says something like that which makes her to smile genuinely, feeling out of the world feeling.

RAM- my heart can stop it's beat many a times, when we both will act to meet for the first time.

It happened that day, Ram's heart beat skipped it's palpation, when he saw Siya for the first time, in person.

RAM- I can take those sacred vows moving around the fire, for millions of times.

Ram placed his right palm on her right cheek, staring straight into her happy eyes.

RAM- I can make you mine, again and again, over and over, always for eternity!

He has said the last sentence in a husky voice, making her all emotional again. These days, Siya get easily emotional with almost everything. And when it is related to her and Ram, or about their upcoming future, then the water is always ready to flow from her eyes. Ram has started saying that she is already having her mood swings, what will happen when the actual phase starts.? They both kept on looking at each other, both having a warm smile on their faces, reading each other's feelings through their stare. After a long pause, Ram moves an inch closer to her and gave a soft touch of his lips on her left cheek, after which again both look at each other.

RAM- ek na, song yaad araha hai.

Said Ram again in a low voice, breaking the beautiful silence between them. Siya narrowed her eyes lightly, asking him about the song and Ram puts his hand in his pocket to take his cellphone out. He taps his fingers on the screen and within a minute started playing the song, which he wants to dedicate his wife at that moment.

Muskurane ki wajah tum ho

Gungunane ki wajah tum ho...


Siya got an instant smile listening to the first line of the song. Both of them again motioned their eyes to look at each other, the ever so romantic filmy pose- the eye lock with the smile.

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na

O re piya re...


After a moment, Siya shook her head lightly in disbelief, for the selection of the emotional Arjit Singh song. Ram keeps his cellphone on the bed and takes Siya's hands in his.

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na

O re piya re...


He bends his head towards her hands which he were holding and gave a kiss on her back of the palms, closing his eyes feeling her touch.

O re lamhe tu kahin mat jaa

Ho sake toh umr bhar tham jaa...


Ram opens his eyes and looks at her again, actioning her with his eyes to come closer to him. And within a moment, Siya wraps her hands around him, resting her head on his chest while Ram wraps his hands around her, both closing their eyes.

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye naa

O re piya re...

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye naa

O re piya re... piyaa re...


Siya opens the wardrobe to take Ram's t-shirt and pant with his towel. She turns around to find him standing at her front. Siya placed the clothes on his hands and ask him to get fresh, pointing towards the washroom.

Dhoop aaye toh, chhaanv tum laana

Khwahishon ki baarishon mein

Bheeg sang jaana...


Ram scrunched his eyes and shook his head in no. He points his finger towards her, actioning her to help him to have a bath herself. Siya's mouth fell open in shock with his daring wish and she gave pat on his chest for which he started chuckling at her.

Dhoop aaye toh, chhaanv tum laana

Khwahishon ki baarishon mein

Bheeg sang jaana...


She turns him around towards the direction of the washroom and started pushing him by placing her hands on his back. Siya opens the door of the washroom and asked Ram to get inside and he again nods in denial. Siya pushed him again inside and closed the door from outside.

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na

O re piya re...

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na

O re piya re... piya re...


Ram came back from the washroom, wiping his wet hair, when he looks at Siya who was placing their "shaadi ka joda" in the upper shelf standing on the stool. He keeps the towel on the bed and moves towards her wrapping his hands around her legs.

Jo mile usme kaat lenge hum

Thodi khushiyaan thode aansu

Baant lenge hum...


Siya looks at him in surprise and Ram made her to get down on the floor, picking her in his arms. He showed his palm to her and actioned her that he will keep the dresses in the shelf, she don't have to do the "majduri" work.

Jo mile usme kaat lenge hum

Thodi khushiyaan thode aansu

Baant lenge hum...


Siya nods her head obediently and Ram stood on the stool immediately. He forwards his hand towards her and Siya gave him the bags. He put those bags in the shelf and closed the door properly, taking care of the delicate clothes. He gets down from the stool and asked her if there is any other work remaining for which Siya shook her head in no.

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na

O re piya re...

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na

O re piya re... piya re...


Ram holds her hand and takes her towards the bed, pulling her with him. He settled down on the bed and hands the towel to her, pointing towards his head, asking her to dry his wet hair.

Muskurane ki wajah tum ho

Gungunane ki wajah tum ho...


Siya smile at him in disbelief and stood behind him, wiping his hair with the towel. Ram smile and closed his eyes, feeling the out of world treatment from his wife and Siya smile looking at Ram's childish demands to her.

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na

O re piya re...


After completing her work, Siya gave a light pat on his back, asking him to get up but Ram catches the hold of her both the wrists, pulling her towards him, as in her arms were wrapped around his neck from back.

Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na

O re piya re... piya re...


They both smile looking at each other and Siya brushes her nose with his, giving a slow head to head collision. Ram again gave a kiss on her nose, and both of them stood there for sometime, near each other, having some more time with each other...!

Piya re...

Wo o ho... oo...!

*****

The ladies are gathered at the dinning area, doing the arrangements for the dinner. Kranti, settled down at her chair, and was cleaning the plates by a cloth while Sumitra cleans the glasses and bowls. The four girls, brings the vessel and bowls, one by one from the kitchen to the table.

KRANTI- areh Sumitra, ek baat batani to reh hi gayi.!

Kranti suddenly remembers something and she gains Sumitra's attention towards her, who was doing her work at a distance.

KRANTI- woh.. inke cousin bhai hai na, Jaipur me jo rehte hai.

Sumitra narrowed her eyes lightly, trying to remember about their one of the relative, and she lightly nods her head.

KRANTI- unke bete ki shaadi hai. Inhe call aaya tha aaj, and invitation card bhi aaya hai.

Kranti gave her one of the good news of their family, though a "durr ke rishtedaar" but still it is an event in Raghuvanshi family.

SHRUTI- wow shaadi.!

Exclaimed Shruti, as she has kept the casserole on the table, listening Kranti's words.

SHRUTI- Jaipur me hai kya maa.?

Kranti nods at her in agreement with a smile and Shruti's expressions grew more excited.

URMILA- wow.. Jaipur is such a destination wedding city.!

Urmila, added to Shruti's words, in her ever so excited tone, while Shruti nods her head showing her excitement for the wedding to be happened in Jaipur. Isn't the state of Rajasthan have so many destination wedding cities.?

LAKSHMAN- kiski destination wedding hai.?

The ladies looks at Lakshman, who has entered the dinning area along with other gents.

KRANTI- arey "destination wedding" nahi hai. Wo log wahi rehte hai, Vivek hai na, uski shaadi hai, next month.

Dashrath nods his head as he already knows about the news while the boys looks confused at Kranti.

SHATRUGHAN- kon Vivek.?

Shatrughan asked while settling down on his chair. Sumitra gave a pat on his back.

SUMITRA- bhai tum logon ka. Tum logon ko to aadhe se jyada rishtedaar pata hi nahi hote.

The girls, who has now came there from the kitchen, giggles hearing the "fact" from Sumitra.

KRANTI- ekdum sahi kaha. Kids these days are so practical and formal.

Kranti shook her head in disbelief and started serving Dashrath with the food.

DASHRATH- acha hai yeh topic nikla hai, I mean Jaipur shaadi ka. Because we have to attend the wedding.

Everyone around turns to look at Dashrath in surprise.

BHARAT- Jaipur? Shaadi me.? Papa aap bade ho aayiye na.

Said Bharat, not in a mood to attend any wedding of the relative which they don't even remember.

LAKSHMAN- wohi to. Hamara kya kaam hai waha.? Hum to jante bhi nahi kisiko.

Lakshman added a sentence to Bharat's denial, lightly nodding his head.

SHATRUGHAN- aur waise bhi, hamari family me there are total eleven number of people. Aadhi bhid to hum logon ke wajah se hi ho jayegi.

Shatrughan has cracked a joke, giving a high-five to Lakshman and everyone laughs at his words.

KRANTI- arey? In a way, yeh to ghar ki hi shaadi hai na. Aur kitna time hogaya hai sabse mile hue.?

Kranti said, having a mood to attend the shaadi. Why not, the ladies are always ready to attend any function or gathering.

LAKSHMAN- maa, aapke liye to durr ke mama ke mausi ke bhatije ki poti ki shaadi bhi, ghar ki hi shaadi hogi.

Again everyone started laughing with Lakshman's long family relations riddle, while Kranti pouts at him angrily folding her hands.

RAM- but maa, seriously, we can't attend the function. Atleast, me to nahi. Sorry.!

Ram politely denied, smiling at Kranti who turns to look at Siya to know her reaction, but she only smiled at her husband's decision.

URMILA- kyu jiju.? Counseling ke liye chutti le sakte hai, family function ke liye nahi.?

Asked Urmila, not in a serious way, but just to add a doubt in Kranti's mind. Kranti too nods her head looking at Ram, getting agreed with Urmila.

RAM- counseling ke liye ek dinn ki chutti ki baat kar raha tha me. Jaipur jane ke liye, atleast three days off hojayega.

Ram said directly looking at Urmila who giggles for teasing him and doing her work of adding ghee into the fire for Kranti.

RAM- and papa, abhi Lonavala se wapis aaye hai, to I can't take off again.

Ram again denied to attend the function, smiling at Dashrath and Kranti, who now has to agree with him.

DASHRATH- acha theek hai. To Ram nahi, to Siya bhi nahi. Hai na.?

Dashrath asked both of them who smile together, saying nothing.

KRANTI- yeh to obvious hai, aap kya question puch rahe hai.?

Again everyone laughed at their mother's words while Ram and Siya scratches their head smiling getting embarrassed.

LAKSHMAN- cut me from the list too. And ofcourse Urmila too.

Urmila gave an obvious look, as she already knows that if not Ram then not Lakshman too.

SHRUTI- aapko nahi jana hai to mat jayiye, Urmila didi ko to jane dijiye.

Said Shruti in a teasing tone, it seems the girls are in a mood to tease their bhaiyas and jiju.

LAKSHMAN- me nahi jaunga to wo bhi nahi jayegi. I will not let her go without me.

Lakshman throws the napkin on Shruti, making her mouth to shut, while Shruti was still giggling.

SUMITRA- mazak mat karo tum log.

Sumitra interrupts their laughing and teasing session, gaining everyone's attention.

SUMITRA- didi ko seriously batao. Who all can attend the wedding.?

Asked Sumitra looking at each one of them amongst the kids and she got no response from anyone.

KRANTI- areh.? Kisiko nahi aana hai kya.?

Kranti asked again, for the confirmation and again no one said anything.

MANVI- maa, hamara bhi office me kaam hai. So it would not be possible for us too.

Said Manvi, giving her explaination and looks at Siya who smile looking at Kranti.

SIYA- actually maa, already Lonavala trip ke wajah se bohot dino ka gap hogaya hai na. Isliye kaam bohot pending hai.

Kranti gave a nod, completely understanding their work schedule.

BHARAT- same for us maa. Papa, we have lots of work assignments in line. To.. hum bhi nahi...

Bharat uplifts his shoulders nodding his head in no while Kranti's face drop having a disappointed expression.

KRANTI- everyone of you are busy.? Abb kya karenge.?

Asked Kranti turning towards Dashrath, who was silently listening to their talks.

DASHRATH- areh to kya hua.? If kids are busy, we three can go.?

Dashrath points towards Kranti and Sumitra, who looks at each other first and then at him.

SUMITRA- me.? Mujhe bhi aana tha.?

Asked Sumitra in surprise, she thought she will not be going anywhere but for her surprise Kranti and Dashrath had together nodded in agreement.

KRANTI- ofcourse. I think he is right.

Said Kranti agreeing with Dashrath's idea. Lakshman and Shatrughan immediately looks at each other, having a smirking and fishy expressions, as in both of them had thought the same thing.

DASHRATH- hmm.. baccho ko rehne dete hai, hum bade hi Jaipur ho aate hai.

Dashrath repeated his words again, while having a spoon of his food. Kranti first nods lightly, and then turns to look at Siya who was also busy with her food. She thought something and immediately denied with the idea.

KRANTI- arey no.

Dashrath scrunched his eyebrows at her sudden denial.

KRANTI- yeh bacche to apne kamo me busy rahenge. Upar se Siya ka counseling chal raha hai. Someone has to be at home to take care of everything. Kya pata kuch zarurat pade to.?

Lakshman and Shatrughan's shoulders drop in disappointment, as they thought their "plan" is not going to get fulfilled.

SIYA- maa.? Please don't cancel anything for me.

Siya denied at Kranti's words and she looks at Ram.

SIYA- Ram hai na. Aur baaki sab bhi to hai. I will be fine.

Kranti was again about to speak when Shatrughan interrupts her.

SHATRUGHAN- maa hum hai na. Bhabhi kale saath, we will take her care.

Shatrughan actioned towards the girls who nods in agreement.

URMILA- yes maa. Office ke kaam me, how can we forget didi.?

Kranti smile at her and nods her head lightly. Again the happy smile crept on the face of both of the "shaitans" and they hides their smile looking at each other.

SUMITRA- otherwise, I can stay for Siya.

Sumitra has interrupted, gaining everyone's attention.

SUMITRA- Didi waise bhi me kya karu waha aake.?

LAKSHMAN- areh kyu.?

Lakshman immediately interrupts Sumitra, as he witnessed the elders again moving towards the cancellation of their trip.

LAKSHMAN- aapko jana chahiye choti maa. Warna maa bore hojayengi waha.

Kranti nods her head in a big yes looking at Sumitra. Lakshman indicates Shatrughan to speak and he immediately added his words.

SHATRUGHAN- aur waise bhi choti maa, kitna time hogaya hai, you have not been out of Mumbai.

Sumitra scrunched her eyebrows in confusion at Shatrughan's words.

BHARAT- arey? Abhi to Holi par hum sab Delhi ho aaye the.

Lakshman and Shatrughan hits their head, when Bharat said a valid point, giving one more reason to Sumitra to cancel her trip.

BHARAT- choti maa, if you want to stay, then ruk jayiye.

Shatrughan, who was sitting beside Bharat, gave a pinch on Bharat's lap.

BHARAT- aaahh..!

Bharat reacts looking at Shatrughan, who actioned him through his eyes asking him to keep quiet. Ram observed the eye conversation between his brothers, while everyone looks confused.

MANVI- kya hua.?

Manvi asked him the reason for his shout and Bharat gave a confused smile at her.

BHARAT- chiti.. thi shayad.

Manvi scrunched her eyes for the reason and Bharat looks at Sumitra, changing his words.

BHARAT- Holi ko to bohot time hogaya. Right choti maa.. aapko jana chahiye shaadi me.

Sumitra was again about to deny but was interrupted by Kranti.

KRANTI- no arguments now. abb bas decided, we elders are going, leaving these kids alone.

Kranti stated her decision pointing towards the kids while Sumitra smile at her nodding her head, getting agreed. Lakshman and Shatrughan sigh in relief looking at each other, which got noticed by Ram and Bharat. They both look at each other, and gave a confused expressions.

URMILA- but maa, hamari anniversary ke period me to nahi hai na shaadi.?

Urmila asked with a pinch of fear on her face for which Kranti shook in no.

KRANTI- no. Uske baad hai.

The girls sighed happily, as they don't want the elders to be missing on their first anniversary. Ram hits his elbow to Lakshman, who was sitting on his right side, gaining his attention towards him. He actioned Lakshman to come closer, so that he can whisper the question near him.

RAM- yeh kya ishare chal rahe the.?

Asked Ram looking at everyone but whisperes at Lakshman, asking him about the actioning between him and Shatrughan. Lakshman hides his smile with his hand, his eyes on everyone and then answered Ram.

LAKSHMAN- bade ghar par nahi honge. Bas hum aur hamari biwiyan hongi.!

Ram turns to look at his smirky smile and at the next moment giggles at him. He again turns his eyes towards everyone and found everyone busy with their food.

RAM- kya kya chalta rehta hai tum logon ke dimag me.!

Lakshman pressed his smile while Ram bows his head down, saving himself from getting caught by anyone. He will hide from everyone but not Siya, she had gave a pat on his hand and actioned him asking about the reason to smile. Ram lightly shook his head in nothing. They all continued with their food, talking and discussing about the Jaipur wedding.!

*****

Next morning, Manda was busy in the kitchen with her daily routine work, preparing the food for her family. Her family, because she look at them like that, her people. Though she has got married to Raghvan unwillingly, but still she has tried her best to accept her husband's family wholeheartedly. When she has entered the house before 25 years, Kaikasi has not at all accepted her. The very first reason, because Manda was not of their community, tamilian community, and secondly she didn't fit into the definition of wife which Kaikasi wanted for her eldest son, moreover a daughter-in-law for her. Raghvan's father has accepted Manda, but then his presence was not for long as he died within a year of their marriage. Manda has always tried to win Kaikasi's heart, to hear soft words, words of appraisal from her, but always got disappointed. She only had Vaibhav for her support, he has looked her as his sister, his Akka (elder sister).! After Indrajeet was born, Manda found a reason to be happy in her lifeless life. The little tiny hands when touched her face, all her pain and heartbreak went to secondary and the primary and most important thing in her life became Indrajeet. Her happiness had no bound, till Raghvan interfered in the mother son love. He used to keep Indrajeet with him for the most of the time, which made Manda sad and disappointed. Hence, from childhood only, Indrajeet used to be with his Appa. The child Indrajeet has seen almost everything of his Appa's work, what work his Appa do in the office, not only the jewellery business but also the "other business" which he is into. Manda felt scared for that, the things which she didn't want her son to learn, his own father made him to learn that. And hence, Manda could not bear the seed of humanity and good upbringings in Indrajeet, all thanks to Kaikasi and Raghvan.

The "cooker's" whistle made Manda's thoughts to break. She motioned her eyes to look at the whistle and she kept on looking at it. The evaporated water moved out from the cooker in form of heat and Manda stared it without blinking her eyes for once. Another whistle and still Manda's eyes were on it. Trishala came near her, and stood beside her looking at Manda first and then at the cooker.

MANDA- band kardo Trishala. Pressure jyada hojayega to cooker phat jayega.

Her words indicates something else and she relates it with the cooker and its whistle. Trishala turned the stove off and turns towards Manda, who got again busy in her work of chopping the veggies.

TRISHALA- what happened madam? Me aapko do teen dino se dekh raha hai, you seems to be so tensed.

Asked Trishala, in a worried tone. Manda has definitely got a friend slash sister for her in that house. The things which she could not share with Vaibhav, the women talks, she did that with Trishala.

TRISHALA- you are not well or what.? Ninkal nanraka irukkirirkala? (You are feeling good?)

Trishala placed her hand on Manda's right shoulder and she stopped her work in the middle.

MANDA- answer my question Trishala.

Trishala nods her head lightly, waiting for her Madam to ask the question.

MANDA- agar, koi baccha apni life me best kam karta hai, to uske parents ko appreciation milta hai, for bringing him or her up like that. Cari? (Right?)

Trishala smile at her lightly and nods her head in agreement. Manda turns to face her and continued asking further.

MANDA- what if the kids have not done anything like that, and have only made mistakes in their life.? Tab bhi kya parents ki upbringings par sawal uthte hai.?

Trishala could witness the pain in Manda's eyes. She immediately got to know that it's Indrajeet who has hurt Manda. Is it that way what Manda is asking? When a person is doing "bad things" around him, then are the parents to be blamed? Because somewhere the child didn't got that upbringings and the parents went unsuccessful in their teachings.?

MANDA- tumhe yaad hai, when Indrajeet was in ninth standard, he had a fight with one of his classmates? He has hit that boy so hard ki usko sarr par stiches aagaye the.?

Manda remembered one of the incidents of Indrajeet's childhood. Something has happened in the school and Indrajeet got into a fight with his classmate. Indrajeet, being short tempered and hot minded, have hit that boy on his head by pushing him to the glass window. Trishala nods her head in yes as she remembered the incident.

MANDA- uss time, Amma ne mujhse kaha tha, that I didn't took care of Indrajeet. Uske gusse ke piche ka reason, me hu, Ataittan Amma connal (that's what Amma said)

Kaikasi has blamed Manda that time, calling her a careless mother. Not because the boy got hurt by Indrajeet, but because she thinks that what if something would have happened to Indrajeet that time.? That was the only incident when Kaikasi was disappointed with her grandson, after which he never gave a chance to his Paati and Appa to get disappointed.

MANDA- was that a truth Trishala.?

Asked Manda with her painful voice. She wanted to know the reason of years back incident. She is in deep thoughts with Indrajeet's behavior towards Sulochana. As a mother, she was thinking that she has made a mistake in his "parvarish".

TRISHALA- nahi Madam. What did you do.? Kaikasi madam to hamesha aapko galat hi bolta hai.

Trishala started explaining her to not think that way and to blame herself.

TRISHALA- aapne to pura try kiya tha madam, to teach good life lessons to Indrajeet. But, wo ho nahi paya, Atu unkal tavaru alla (that's not your fault.)

Manda nods her head in no. Her eyes has started becoming moist again. They were moist from last two days, thinking continuously about Sulochana.

MANDA- ek insan agar kuch galat kare na, then the finger gets automatically pointed towards his mother. Only a mother.!

Manda has literally started blaming herself for Indrajeet's behavior. But what did she do ? Why she is blaming herself, just because she is his mother?

MANDA- me Indrajeet ko ek acha insaan nahi bana payi Trishala. Usne apne Appa se to bohot kuch sikh liya, but uski Amma use kuch sikha nahi payi.

Trishala felt bad for her. She has always seen Manda like this, broken hearted feeling lifeless and not happy in her life. Everytime Manda used to share her sorrows with Trishala, she used to be strong and make Manda understand. But when she used to be alone, she used to cry for her madam's pain.

MANDA- I have failed as a mother.

TRISHALA- no madam.

Trishala has immediately interrupted Manda, not allowing her to say anything like that against herself.

TRISHALA- you have not. Murugan janta hai, you've always been best in your every role. Whether it is a wife, a daughter-in-law, a sister-in-law or else a mother.

Manda wipes her tears which were on her cheeks. She don't want Sulochana or Vaibhav to witness her like that. Trishala smile at her and again placed her hand on Manda's shoulder.

TRISHALA- kami aap me nahi hai madam, kami to inn logon me hai. Jo aapka acchayi nahi dekh sakta. Avarkal kurutarkal (They are blind)

She was absolutely right, the "kami" is in Lankeshwar family and not in Manda. They are the one who doesn't deserve wife like Manda and Sulochana, they are the one who doesn't deserve good people in their life.

TRISHALA- aap, Vaibhav sir, Sulochana madam, yeh family aap teeno ko deserve nahi karta. Isliye, let them be and let them suffer. Unko unka haal par chod do.

Manda bows her head down, feeling more emotional. Not for herself but for her family, who's mind and thinkings are so low that they are in this position, towards their destruction.

TRISHALA- Murugan kabhi kisike saath galat nahi karta madam. Dekhna, soon all of yours pain are going to get vanished.

Trishala had that confidence in her voice while blessing her madam. Manda motioned her eyes to look at her and Trishala caresses her shoulder lightly. Manda immediately wraps her arms around her in a hug, and closed her eyes.

MANDA- thank you Trishala. Nanri (thanks)

She whispered while saying those formal words and Trishala kept on caressing her back.

TRISHALA- don't worry. Sab theek hojayega.

She has again prayed for Manda while closing her eyes. And Manda too nods her head lightly, hoping for the same...

*****

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Ram ki muskurane ki wajah to Siya hai😍, aur hum sabki puri Raghuvanshi family hai 🤗

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Elders are planning to leave the house for few days, hopefully iss few days me kuch anhoni na ho 💔💔💔 The kids has said that they will take Siya's care, hopefully they do that..............

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Manda 🥺 Nothing to say for her.! I am speechless 😶

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Thanks for having patience 🤭 Stay tuned guys ❣️

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The whole Ram-Siya sequence was adorable It's so cute of Ram that he expressed his feelings regarding those sweet memories. The expression of even small loving memories may look nothing, but actually they are everything. That's what life partners want from each other- love, respect, priority.

Dinning table sequence was enjoyable! The way Shruti and Urmila got excited hearing about Jaipur shows their innocence being the younger ones. Siya and Manvi,being the elders, nicely explained to Kranti why they cannot attend the wedding. Loved how Lakshman announced if he won't go, Urmila cannot ❤️And that small brothery moment among the boys... I really love it when you show these moments of brotherly or sisterly bonds.

Manda... how hard it is for her to see everything going beyond her control. Not hearing any word of appreciation from the people she expects really hurts. And then her own child, supporting and doing wrong deeds- how heartbroken she must be! People often forget that raising a child is the responsibilities of both father and mother. Whenever something bad happens people point finger at the mother, and if something good happens all praise goes to the father! But Indrajeet is the product of his father's upbringing. I hope one day Manda will find her voice to strongly understand that its not her fault.

Thank you for pm 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Yaar .. I literally don't know how to start , what to say, what to think, .. my brain is numb now.. I don't know why but each and every single sentence of today's episode was bringing a sudden wave of fear and making me emotional, even that romantic part of Siya Ram, teasing session of siblings all of these were making me emotional, I don't know if I am becoming a cry baby now or its because of the fear of future track or because of the emotions of Siya you are portraying but this silence before the storm is dreading me to the core, I know that I always say that just be optimistic and see the positive side and enjoy the present because these are the memories which you will cherish and help you sail out in future problems but I myself is unable to do so.. And girl whether it's about today or everyday, whether it's about Siya's point of view today or Manda's heartbreaking thoughts, everything touched me and especially Manda's words hit me so hard .. Hats off to yaar, I don't know how but everytime you awoke a new feeling and emotions.. The lines now I am going to say are only for you today because today's episode made me so so so emotional that I just want to say for you.

You shower my world with sunshine, and wash away the clouds

I want you to see and realize, how wonderful a person you are

Just like my favorite songs tells us, girl you are a star

A star so bright and shiny, you lighten up all my days

In my life forever, I hope you will always stay

Your beauty comes from deep within, deep within your heart

In love I've been since I met you, in love from the very start

What will take for me to convince you, show you how much talented and deserving you are

Always hold your head up high, be proud of the person you've become

The happiness and joy you brought into my life, warms me like the sun

Sometimes I wonder if you are a magician

Waving your magic stick and bringing all new unknown feelings even in a heartless person..

One thing I know for sure is that

You have a heart of gold

Because all the feelings and emotions you bring can never be written easily..

It's your heart you keep ..

And no matter how old I will grow,

No matter wherever I will be,

No matter whatever I will be,

But one thing I can swear is that I will never gonna find a friend like you,...

So I wish I never loose our friendship..

Love you my superstar rockstar Somu 💖💖💖💖💖

And Not to forget ...

5 DAYS TO GO SOMU😘😘😘😘💕💕💕💕

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it dear Saumya

Awesome and beautiful part 🤗🤗

Hmm 🙄🙄 Mr. Ram Raghuvanshi aaj kal laalchi ho gaye hai 😄😄 shadi dubara karni hai... Fir cricket team ke bhi taiyaari hai 😂😂 but that scene was really beautiful😍✨❤

I loved how he got nostalgic & demand for marriage again 😇 Song added more spice to the entire scene 🤗🤗 Ram & Siya were really beautiful

To ab marriage invite in Jaipur main bade jaa rahe hai 😄😄 or bacche kaand na kare aisa ho sakta hai 🤨🤨 ... Shatru to is really on toes to send all three in marriage

Isharon isharon main plan bhi bata diya 🤭🤭 but jo bhi ho dhamaal to hone wala hai & party bhi bahut zoordaar hogi anniversary ke 😊

So moving to Raghvan villa .. I regret go say that what Manda said was partially true as due to her weak stand against her husband Inderjeet has become replica of his father today doing all this

Not intentionally but she had insecurity in her relationship with Raghvan which is understandable but the day Raghvan started involving inder in his activities she should have at least confronted them but yes she was alone & helpless too as Raghvan would have done worst then

Kaiksi ko kya bolu she should have she is even worse than her son she never taught her son to take care of his relationships so what else will happen 😔 but Trishala at least gave some courage to Manda

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Superb update♥️

SiRa's scene took my heart away..song added beauty to it what a perfect song you thought..they perfectly compliment each other in every way😍...their love n emotions increase with each passing day and may be that will make them strong to reunite in future ♥️

And then dining table banter toh humesha mast hota hai😅...ladko ka shaitan and romantic mind chal hi jata hai.....unhe romance ka tarika mil jata hai..itni shiddat se jo chahte hai😛..

Manda's thought and situation is heartbreaking...she deserves better than this Lankeshwar family🥺...yaha toh daughter-in-law ki respect toh dur unhe human bhi samjhte dhang se...

Continue soon😍

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Lovely update. There was love, family bonding, brothers time and a mother and wife's pain too.

Ram Siya are seriously the most adorable couple. No matter how many years pass by their love is going to be the same for each other and I think that is the best part about SiRa.

Waah badon ke jaane ka plan ban gaya. Lekin Kaash uss time Lankeshwar's ki buri nazar inn le naa pade. Khaaskar jab Kranti aur Dasharath mein se koi nahi hoga. Ram ko kon sambhalega.

Lekin kuch bhi kahi Ram Lakshman Shatrughna planning bada acha karte hai. Like waah. Bade bhai ko shaadi karni hai phir se aur choton ko apni biwiyon ke saath time spend. Bharat bechaare ko sirf kaam 😂😂

Manda ki koi galti nahi hai. Ab bache jiske saath rahenge uni ke jaise toh banenge na. Aur Indrajeet ke gusse ka karan Kaikasi aur Raghavan hi hai jo bachpan se usse badhava dete aa rahe hai. Trishala ne sahi kaha time aayega zaroor Sulochana Vaibhav aur Manda ke khushi ka aur Kaikasi, Raghavan, Indrajeet, Suvarna ke dukh aur ant ka.

Thank you for PM.

Eagerly waiting for next chapter 😊

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I literally don't have words. Because in each update now, I could actually feel that silence, the tufan ke pehele wala shanti, that thing. And I don't know why, but it gives automatically tears in my eyes. I am so flown into the story, that I can actually feel bad and broken for the all time lively Raghuvanshi family.

The episode started beautifully. Ram asking to get marry again and then Siya ke teasing answers. They are so mature and understanding couple, I could feel the pure love in their conversation. The song perfectly suits the situation. The song too have that unknown silence, emotional silence. Aur wahi aaj dikha episode me bhi. I am crying Saumya.

Dinning table scene as usual badhiya tha. The kids are so funny, aise khurafati ideas Lakshman Shatrughan ke dimag me hi aate he. Bharat ka pinch wala scene mast tha. I love how Lakshman whole heartedly haq jamata he Urmila par, they are so bindas and bold couple. So elders jaipur ja rahe he, but I think promo padhkar ye khush nahi balki darne ki bat he. Siya is going to get kidnap in that period? Na Dashrath honge aur na Kranti and Sumitra, who is going to handle Ram that time? He will be so broken. Yar I don't want to imagine that part.

Manda, my heart aches for her. She is true, jab bhi kuch galat hota he ek mother ko bi blame karte he. It's not that she has failed as a mother, Indrajeet has failed as a son. Aur ab in sab villian logo ka ant hoga tabhi ye tino Manda Vaibhav and Sulochana khush reh payenge aur Lankeshwar family me khushiya aayengi. I hope that happens soon.

Continue soon Saumya, I know it's difficult track going on. Still we all readers will try to not cry.

Love,

Sammy

PS. Ek song suggestion, separation ke pehele. The old Judai movie, anil kapoor, sridevi and Urmila Matondkar, uska title song, ek pal chain na aaye.

Just a suggestion, that song is so emotional.

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