SKR FF 3:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 144 - Page 20

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Posted: 4 years ago

Woah woah woah what was that 😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩... Let me breathe properly and calm my nerves down. I am feeling as if my whole body is set on 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥.... Iss aag ko shaant krne ke liye koi to solid solution khojna padega because I had gulped down complete one bottle of water in one go after reading this episode but still my heart is beating so fast and breathes are coming in irregular pattern... I am in my own la la land girl......

Well well well starting from the beginning....

Yaar ab to iss Suvarna ka naam padh kar hi mera aisa reaction hota h na ki ... Ye phir apni beizzati karwayegi... Matlab Kahan se late hain ye log itna sara talent roz apni beizzati karwane ka ..Ye pagal h ,poori pagal infact pagal nhi psycho h aur ab ye baat poore office ko samajh m aane lagi h ...😝😝😝😂😂... Matlab khud ko kya samajh ke rakha h isne haan ... She is simply a employee working in Raghuvanshi enterprises for the company and not someone personal to Ram that she want to talk to Boss directly for every single thing...ab to meko lagta h iska Anna bhi jaan bujh kar isse ghar se jaane diya hoga aur Amma vapas aa raha h isliye hi pareshan h ye usko vapas bulane ke liye.. afterall iss yedi ko jhelna is impossible....

😎😎😎😎😎😎😁😁😁😁.... Ab soch rhi hogi Somu ki yedi ke bare m baat krte hue khud bhi ye yedi ho gai kya jo aise emoji daali h ..

To hold on abhi itni jaldi m pagal nhi hone vali... Ye emoji to isliye ki mere khurafati dimaag m phir se kuch khurafati idea aaya h... Ab na padhna chaho to bhi bataungi hi...😝😝😝... To suno ye Suvarna Ram ko lekar vaise hi itna pareshan rehti h plus office na aane ke reason ko lekar betaab h to what if ye kisi colleague se pooche ki kyu nhi aa rhe boss aur vo colleague usse ye bataye ki Ram apne honeymoon pe gaya h vo bhi teste honeymoon pe🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈.... Bechari ko itna zor ka jhatka lagega na seedha apne Anna ke ghar ja kar giregi ... Ya phir kahin heartattack se upar hi na nikl le 🤣🤣😂😂....

O bhai ye kya ho raha h... Kranti to Ram Siya ke bacchon ki planning kr rhi thi pr har baat m peeche rehne vale Bharat kahin issi kaam m baazi na maar le 🤣🤣🙈🙈.. matlab bade Miyan bade Miyan chote Miyan subhanallah 🤣🤣🤣...phir Ram bhi sochega ki meri biwi se flirt krte krte bhaisahab apni biwi ke saath baji maar ke gye aur hum bade bhai ban kar hi bethe reh gye😂😂😂....

Waah ji waah Kranti and Sumitra Rajrishi girls ki maa hi lagti h aur Raghuvanshi boys ki in laws ... Kitni khush h apne ladko ko tadpa kar🤣😆... Koi na Raghuvanshi boys ne bhi naak nhi katai man's hi liya apni biwiyon ko😎😎😎...

Hello travel agency 📞📞📞📞...meri Antartica ki tickets kar dijiye please kyunki yahan ki garmi sehan nhi ho rhi...🙈🙈🙈...

Matlab yaar ye chote Raghuvanshi kehne ko chote h but ..........iske aage mere paas kehne ko kuch nhi h kyunki iske aage meri zuban seal ho gai thi infact abhi soch soch kar Sharma rhi hoon 😊😘😘😘😘😘....

Please please please update soon.....

Love you dear

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Posted: 4 years ago

Oyyyyeeee..... Mana ki mene bola ki update padhne ke baad ki aag control karne ka solid solution chahiye but ye kya tha.... abhi to padhkar apne la la land m udd hi rhe the ki new pm dekha aur ye double Update h ye soch kar aur upar udne lage the ki promo padhkar dhadam se khwabon ki duniya se neeche aa gire😳😳😳😳😳😖😖😖... Yaar ye kyu hota h ki khushiyan aati hi h ki dukh ke badal peeche peeche aane lag jate h....

But one thing I am confident about is that no matter how big the problem is going to be but they are going to be more strong and come back together like never before....😊😊😊....

Well eagerly waiting for the future track too as kehte h na ki duriyan do dilon ko aur paas lati hain... Hoping for the best...

Update soon 🥺🥺🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonali00

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Only one request after reading this... don't finish it on a sad note...no permanent separation of Ram n Siya please😌

Baki everything will work.. but not permanent one😶

Never... Sad note pe end to bilkul nahi hoga 🤗

Aur end to abhi itne jaldi hoga hi nahi..

So don't worry and enjoy the updates ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: golden_aura

That was heart breaking💔💔

But i hope things go positive for them😔 as true love is always tested ☺


That was indeed the sad part ...

But yes, as you said... Positivity is definitely going to come.. true love has to be tested...❤️

Stay tuned ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Khyati55

Woah woah woah what was that 😍😍😍🤩🤩🤩... Let me breathe properly and calm my nerves down. I am feeling as if my whole body is set on 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥.... Iss aag ko shaant krne ke liye koi to solid solution khojna padega because I had gulped down complete one bottle of water in one go after reading this episode but still my heart is beating so fast and breathes are coming in irregular pattern... I am in my own la la land girl......

Well well well starting from the beginning....

Yaar ab to iss Suvarna ka naam padh kar hi mera aisa reaction hota h na ki ... Ye phir apni beizzati karwayegi... Matlab Kahan se late hain ye log itna sara talent roz apni beizzati karwane ka ..Ye pagal h ,poori pagal infact pagal nhi psycho h aur ab ye baat poore office ko samajh m aane lagi h ...😝😝😝😂😂... Matlab khud ko kya samajh ke rakha h isne haan ... She is simply a employee working in Raghuvanshi enterprises for the company and not someone personal to Ram that she want to talk to Boss directly for every single thing...ab to meko lagta h iska Anna bhi jaan bujh kar isse ghar se jaane diya hoga aur Amma vapas aa raha h isliye hi pareshan h ye usko vapas bulane ke liye.. afterall iss yedi ko jhelna is impossible....

😎😎😎😎😎😎😁😁😁😁.... Ab soch rhi hogi Somu ki yedi ke bare m baat krte hue khud bhi ye yedi ho gai kya jo aise emoji daali h ..

To hold on abhi itni jaldi m pagal nhi hone vali... Ye emoji to isliye ki mere khurafati dimaag m phir se kuch khurafati idea aaya h... Ab na padhna chaho to bhi bataungi hi...😝😝😝... To suno ye Suvarna Ram ko lekar vaise hi itna pareshan rehti h plus office na aane ke reason ko lekar betaab h to what if ye kisi colleague se pooche ki kyu nhi aa rhe boss aur vo colleague usse ye bataye ki Ram apne honeymoon pe gaya h vo bhi teste honeymoon pe🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈.... Bechari ko itna zor ka jhatka lagega na seedha apne Anna ke ghar ja kar giregi ... Ya phir kahin heartattack se upar hi na nikl le 🤣🤣😂😂....

O bhai ye kya ho raha h... Kranti to Ram Siya ke bacchon ki planning kr rhi thi pr har baat m peeche rehne vale Bharat kahin issi kaam m baazi na maar le 🤣🤣🙈🙈.. matlab bade Miyan bade Miyan chote Miyan subhanallah 🤣🤣🤣...phir Ram bhi sochega ki meri biwi se flirt krte krte bhaisahab apni biwi ke saath baji maar ke gye aur hum bade bhai ban kar hi bethe reh gye😂😂😂....

Waah ji waah Kranti and Sumitra Rajrishi girls ki maa hi lagti h aur Raghuvanshi boys ki in laws ... Kitni khush h apne ladko ko tadpa kar🤣😆... Koi na Raghuvanshi boys ne bhi naak nhi katai man's hi liya apni biwiyon ko😎😎😎...

Hello travel agency 📞📞📞📞...meri Antartica ki tickets kar dijiye please kyunki yahan ki garmi sehan nhi ho rhi...🙈🙈🙈...

Matlab yaar ye chote Raghuvanshi kehne ko chote h but ..........iske aage mere paas kehne ko kuch nhi h kyunki iske aage meri zuban seal ho gai thi infact abhi soch soch kar Sharma rhi hoon 😊😘😘😘😘😘....

Please please please update soon.....

Love you dear

Aag laga di.... ShruGhan me aisa, to LakshMila ke time swimming pool me hi kudna padega 😆🤭

Ye jo tumne Suvarna ke liye bola na.. mujhe GHKPM ki patralekha yad agayi. I don't know if anyone of you watches that show, but ye Suvarna ka character waisa hi hai, yedi 😆

Aur Suvarna ko jab pata lagega, ki Ram honeymoon pe gaya hai, uske pehele to wo ye sochke behosh hogi ki Ram shadishuda hai... 🤐🤐 Aila, ye mene kya bol diya ? Suvarna ko pata nahi hai.?? 🤔🤔 Well......

Bharat.... Sunega to khud pehele Sharma jayega 🤭😂 kash ye dialogue Urmila aur Shruti uske samne bolte, hai na....

Antarctica kaise jaogi yar, abhi to teen baki hai..... Uske liye aur teen din wait karo, then directly Antarctic jana.. 😂

Stay tuned for tomorrow's update ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Khyati55

Oyyyyeeee..... Mana ki mene bola ki update padhne ke baad ki aag control karne ka solid solution chahiye but ye kya tha.... abhi to padhkar apne la la land m udd hi rhe the ki new pm dekha aur ye double Update h ye soch kar aur upar udne lage the ki promo padhkar dhadam se khwabon ki duniya se neeche aa gire😳😳😳😳😳😖😖😖... Yaar ye kyu hota h ki khushiyan aati hi h ki dukh ke badal peeche peeche aane lag jate h....

But one thing I am confident about is that no matter how big the problem is going to be but they are going to be more strong and come back together like never before....😊😊😊....

Well eagerly waiting for the future track too as kehte h na ki duriyan do dilon ko aur paas lati hain... Hoping for the best...

Update soon 🥺🥺🥺

I know promo was heart-wrenching 💔

But wo kehte hai na.... Khushiyan apne saath dukh ki jhalak bhi lekar hi aati hai ..

But yes, they are going to stand strong, all eight of them.. ab SiRa ke life me problems ayengi... To uska impact LakshMila ManRat aur ShruGhan par bhi hoga... But.. then... Their love is strong enough to cope up with everything....

Stay tuned ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Not fair Saumya. Not at all fair. Aisa promo, itna heartwrenching kyu? I am so much heartbroken by reading those few lines. Yar, inko sachme nazar lagne wali he. Why can't the happy days stays forever? Why they have to go? Why the so much in love people have to bear the pain? Mujhe bht dar lag raha he, for all the four couples. Yar jitna ho sake utna ye track ko late shuru karna aur ek bar shuru hogaya to jaldi end karna. Continue soon.

Love,

Sammy

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Thanks for the promo...at least you consider sira as a part of ramayana or modern ramayana a bit right????.... unlike other os and sira ffs which has only got the most fav laksmila ,manrat and shrugan in the story titled as siyaram os or ff..😒... sorry for the words....and a great thanks for whatever you did.... which made me happy .... bye...😊...

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Originally posted by: Srinivasan.R

Thanks for the promo...at least you consider sira as a part of ramayana or modern ramayana a bit right????.... unlike other os and sira ffs which has only got the most fav laksmila ,manrat and shrugan in the story titled as siyaram os or ff..😒... sorry for the words....and a great thanks for whatever you did.... which made me happy .... bye...😊...

All the four couples are integral part of Ramayan. And this story is modern day Ramayana, we have all the four couples ka fans with us.. 🤗

So don't you have to get disheartened, just be with the story.. your favourite couples ka scene will also be coming up ...,

Stay tuned ❣️☺️

P.S. Check your inbox and do read my message. It's a request.!

Edited by Saumya96 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you for loving ShruGhan part in yesterday's episode 🤗

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Someone is making an entry in the Lankeshwar family 😯 Who..???

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Also, today it's LakshMila special, the song is suggested by one of our reader "Goldie" ❣️

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Have a happy reading...!!!

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*****

At a distance of few kilometres from Lonavala, Duke's Nose is a tourist point situated between the two twin cities of Lonavala and Khandala. The cliff is in shape of a pointed nose like structure, that is why it is called as Duke's Nose. Activities like trekking, hiking and rock climbing are the main attraction for the enthusiastic tourists, but others can just relax and enjoy at the cliff top witnessing its beautiful scenery around.

The Raghuvanshis opted to have their picnic at the Duke's Nose point. Relaxing under the beautiful cloudy sky, having their all time favourite siblings bantering with the girls complaining Ram and the boys getting scoldings from him, the boys asking Siya to take their side, and Siya very possesively taking their sides, and so on. Lakshman, in his multi color funky t-shirt and black tapered pants, took a wafer in his mouth, while turning towards Manvi.

LAKSHMAN- but think about their helplessness too na bhabhi..

Manvi scrunched her eyebrows at the word "helplessness". She was dressed in her grey color checked top and black color bottoms.

MANVI- what helplessness.? Isme kaisi majburi.?

Urmila immediately nods in agreement turning towards Lakshman.

URMILA- mauke ka fayda uthana, is the better word for this..

Dressed in her white color plain t-shirt and blue tapered pants, Urmila gave another sentence to Lakshman denying his words. The boys and the girls were having a discussion, or let us call it as an argument, regarding the history of the country, where the Rajas and Maharajas were allowed for multiple marriages.

SHRUTI- correct.. koi Raja chahe, to bol sakta tha na, ki bhai gift dena hi hai, to golds de, diamonds de, apna castle de de.. but nahi.. war jitne par unhe gift kya milta hai.? Rajkumari of that particular place..??

Shruti uplifts her both the shoulders, not actually getting satisfied with the men in the historical era. She was dressed in ocean blue color crop top and denim jeans structured pants.

SHATRUGHAN- areh.??

Shatrughan interrupts this time, gaining everyone's attention towards him. Dressed in beige color t-shirt and dark mustard color pants, Shatrughan looks getting wondered towards the girls.

SHATRUGHAN- abb uss time aise hi hota tha to kya kare.? Abb wo raniyon ko problem nahi thi ek dusre ke sath behene bankar rehne me, then why you four are arguing.?

Shatrughan points towards the four girls sitting in front of them, who shook their head again getting dissatisfied.

BHARAT- inko to bass mauka chahiye hume oppose karne ka..

Said Bharat, looking at his two brothers. He has opted for black and brown mixed color full sleeves t-shirt and black pants. Manvi immediately gave a slap on his left shoulder.

SIYA- baat oppose karne ki nahi hai..

Siya interrupts, giving a counter sentence to the boys, this time supporting her sisters, and why not, this time the topic was of something related to a "woman' happiness". She was dressed in floral printed chocolate color top and off white ankle length pants.

SIYA- baat hai.. hum log kya sochte hai, wo point aap sabko batane ki..

Bharat took a deep breath, turning towards Ram who was silently listening to their debate. He was dressed in strips design white color informal shirt with dark blue jeans.

SIYA- that time, woman's happiness, her point of view, what she wants, that was all pointless. Koi nahi sochta tha.. isliye they had to adjust with their sautans..

The girls nods at her in agreement turning towards their husbands.

SHATRUGHAN- par jo bhi ho bhabhi.. rehti to sabhi beheno ki tarah thi na.. khushi khushi.. ek saath..

Shruti immediately throws the empty bisleri bottle at her husband and he looks at her getting amused.

SHRUTI- why are you repeating the same thing, beheno ki tarah, khushi khushi..??

Shruti pouts getting slightly possesive for his words and Shatrughan giggles at her.

LAKSHMAN- aur Raja bhi to.. sabhi se ek jaisa pyaar karta tha.. bhale hi sau raniyan ho.. bhai mehel to har ek ka alag alag banwata tha..

Lakshman and Bharat clapped their hands in a high-five while Ram chuckled at their words.

BHARAT- ha.. taki koi do ek dusre ke samne aaye hi na.. jhanjhat hi nahi..

The boys again laughed at their joke while the girls frowned at them.

URMILA- very bad you people are.. and thank god ki now multiple marriages are not allowed..

Urmila sighed in relief looking at Lakshman who uplifts his one eyebrow giving a smirk at her.

RAM- agar abhi allowed hota bhi.. to don't you people have that confidence on your husbands ki wo aap logo ke alawa kisi aur ke bare me nahi sochenge .??

Ram asked the question to each one of them, completing his sentence at Siya. He waited for her to speak and after a thought of a moment, she answered.

SIYA- bharosa to.. hai.. but..

RAM- but..??

Ram immediately questioned her in surprise, at the "but" in the sentence.

MANVI- bharosa hai jiju.. but darr ya possessiveness keh lijiye.. wo bhi to hai na..

Ram smile looking at Siya who made a face agreeing to Manvi's words.

SHRUTI- ab ladke to hote hi hai aise.. khubsurat ladki dikhi nahi ki chal diye waha..

The boys looks shocked at her sentence for all the men in the world.

BHARAT- oh hello.. that was so typical.. all men are not same..

Bharat immediately answered her from the side of entire men community in the world.

URMILA- kyuki we girls, specially the wife, are there to control you all. Aise gardan pakad kar rakhti hai na hum..

Urmila took the hold of Lakshman's neck from back, showing them the exact meaning of her words.

LAKSHMAN- ok theek hai.. maan liya.. aap log jit gaye..

Lakshman bows his head in front of the girls, accepting their "haar" as always.

LAKSHMAN- maan liya ki uss time Rajao ko, apni biwi ki fikr nahi hoti thi. Bas? khush.?

Lakshman again continued, having a pinch of favor to accept what girls are saying.

MANVI- what khush.? Dil se thodi maan rahe hai aap log, you just want to end the talk.

Said Manvi having understood Lakshman's smart way for which he shook his head in disbelief.

SHATRUGHAN- to abb hamare pas koi aur option available hai kya.?

Ram laughs at their ongoing banter which he knows that can never get settled at a particular point, as in, in Shatrughan's words - "Mandawali".

RAM- ok ok.. let it go now.. why we are arguing with this..?

Siya too nods her head in agreement and then continued.

SIYA- hum log to Pitthu khelne wale the na.?

Siya points towards the stones and the ball, which were lying at their side.

URMILA- ha.. let's play.. it's pointless to argue with these people..

Urmila shook her head sideways, getting up looking at Lakshman who tried to catch the hold of her wrist.

SHRUTI- what are the rules.?

Questioned Shruti as Urmila and Shatrughan started building the pyramid with the seven stones. Pitthu or in proper English called as seven stones games, in a street game where one team builds the pyramid with the stones and the opposite team tries to stop them.

BHARAT- isme kya rules.? We will make our own rules..

Said Bharat with a pinch on attitude in his voice.

LAKSHMAN- haa.. and the rule is, ladkiyan har round harengi.. aur hum jitenge..

Said Lakshman teasing the girls and immediately he got a slap from Siya at his back.

SIYA- aisa koi rule-vule nahi hai..

Lakshman caresses his back having a pout on his face as he got a nice hit from his bhabhi. Meanwhile Urmila and Shatrughan completes their work of building the pile. The boys and the girls stood at the opposite side of each other, having the stone pile between them. Urmila threws the ball at Ram, who catches it in his hold.

RAM- ok.. we are starting..

Ram aims the pile and was about to throw when Siya stopped him.

SIYA- wait wait..

Everyone looks at her as she paused the game. She points towards the boys and actioned them to move a little back.

SIYA- piche hatiye aap charon.. you people are standing way too close to the stones..

Ram immediately agreed to her by taking two to three steps back while the other boys looks at him getting amused.

SHATRUGHAN- bhaiya.. bhabhi ne agar kaha ki wo hath se Pitthu girayengi, to kripa karke ha mat keh dena..

Shatrughan teases his eldest brother, as Ram always agrees with Siya's every said words. The girls laughs at Shatrughan's words while Siya gave him an angry stare.

RAM- let's start now..

Ram again aims towards the pile and throws the ball, only to be catch by Shruti at the other end, without touching the pile.

SIYA- areh areh..!!

Siya teases him making a disappointed face for which Ram gave a look at her.

MANVI- come on Shruti..

The girls clapped for Shruti as now she aims the ball towards the pile.

SHATRUGHAN- nahi hoga usse...

Said Shatrughan, giving a wink at Lakshman and Bharat, as in he is quite confident about his wife. Shruti moves a bit closer towards the stones when she heard the boys yelling at her.

LAKSHMAN- oye.. cheater.. you can't come closer..

Lakshman points his finger towards Shruti who made a face at him. She throws the ball towards the pile and Lakshman catches it in his hold, again the pile didn't moved an inch.

SHATRUGHAN- dekha..? Told you usse nahi hoga..

The boys clapped their hands with each other teasing the girls.

MANVI- ha theek hai.. you hit the stone now.. let's see what you do .

Said Manvi placing her hands on her waist, looking at Lakshman. He shows her an attitude having a smirk on his face and started aiming towards the pile again.

SHATRUGHAN- come on bhaiya.. come on..

Shatrughan started cheering him while Lakshman shows his hand towards him, trying his best to concentrate on the tower.

SHATRUGHAN- we have to win bhai.. dhyan lagake haishhahh..!!

Lakshman closed his eyes in frustration and hit the ball to Shatrughan for his continuous blabber.

LAKSHMAN- chup.. dhyan lagane doge tum tab na me karunga..

Ram caresses Shatrughan's head as he got scoldings from Lakshman. The girls kept on laughing at the two brothers and Bharat again passes the ball towards Lakshman.

URMILA- all the best Laksh..

Urmila smile at him widely while Lakshman again tried to concentrate on the pile. He throws the ball on the pyramid with his full force but again it went towards the opposite direction towards Siya.

BHARAT- arey yaar..

Lakshman hits his punch in the air and turns to look at Shatrughan who covered his eyes with his palms, saving himself from Lakshman's stare.

LAKSHMAN- ye sab iske wajah se hua hai..

The girls again hooted for the boys teasing them while Ram gave a clap to Siya, as now she is going to throw the ball.

URMILA- come on dii...

The girls too cheers for her for a moment and Siya started aiming towards the pile. After aiming for a moment, she immediately threw the ball and the stones gets scattered everywhere with the hit.

"Yaayyy..."

The girls shouted in joy while the boys looks disappointed.

RAM- bhago..

Ram instructs them to catch the ball while the girls runs towards the centre to collect the stones, as they have to build the pile again and the boys have to catch the ball to hit the pile before the girls completes their task.

MANVI- jaldi...

Manvi points towards a stone which was at a distance and Shruti runs to take its hold. Bharat took the ball in his hold and threws it on the pile, again breaking the half built pyramid.

BHARAT- ball...

Bharat points towards the ball again and the girls again tried to build the pyramid. Ram catches the ball in his hold meanwhile Siya looks for the last stone which has to be placed at the top. Ram turns to hit the direction when he witnessed Siya moving towards the stone at a distance.

URMILA- dii jaldi..

Urmila gets impatient asking Siya to bring the stone while Ram stops in between not, hitting the pile, giving a chance to Siya.

LAKSHMAN- bhaiya.? Throw..

Lakshman ask him to throw the ball for which Ram nods at him in agreement. He again aims at the pile and found Siya who was about to place the stone on the top.

SHATRUGHAN- roma roma roma...

Lakshman and Bharat looks at Shatrughan getting confused while Shatrughan corrects his jumbled words properly.

SHATRUGHAN- maro.. maro ..

Both the boys shook their head in disbelief as Shatrughan was saying to hit the ball using the word "maro". They looks straight where the girls have already won by completing the pile.

BHARAT- bhaiya..??

"Yess..!!"

The girls embraced each other wrapping their arms around each other in a group hug and started jumping and celebrating their victory.

SHATRUGHAN- kya kiya bhaiya ?

Ram smile at the girls and hit the ball in the air, looking towards his brothers.

RAM- let them win.. they are happy after a long time..

Said Ram still looking at the direction of the girls while his brothers too turns towards their wife now having a smile on their face. Yes, the girls were actually happy after a long, they were angry with their husbands, but now, the trip has actually made them to remind their childhood...

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Manda enters the living room to witness few workers doing their work of cleaning the area properly and few placing a proper white sofa cover on the couch.

MANDA- arey.? You all haven't finished yet.? Atai vekamaka ceyyunkal. (Do it fast.)

Manda lightly scolded the workers around her, who now started moving their hands fast, finishing their work. They knew that their madam doesn't behave in that way, but today her fearness made her to yell and get disappointed with everyone. And why not, her mother-in-law is returning today.

MANDA- and what about the preparations for the dinner.? Are they done ?

Questioned Manda, to one of the maid, who lightly nods at her in agreement.

MANDA- Trishala kaha hai.? Bulao usko..

The maid again nods at her and leaves from there towards the kitchen to call Trishala. Manda holds her hands with each other tightly, getting impatient looking at her around.

MANDA- clean that properly.. Amma should not find any dust on the table..

Said Manda pointing towards the teapoy while the two workers nods at her in agreement. Sulochana shook her head in disbelief, as she was moving towards her mother-in-law, listening at her words.

SULOCHANA- Amma..

Manda turns towards her left to find Sulochana, who was about to say something. But before she could say, Manda interrupts her with a question.

MANDA- Amma ka room clean kiya.?

Sulochana nods her head in agreement and Manda shoots her with another question.

MANDA- Chandan sticks rakhe table par.? And what about red chutney.? Amma will not eat dosa without red chutney..

Sulochana sighed in disbelief looking at her mother-in-law's impatience for her mother-in-law.

SULOCHANA- relax Amma.. everything is done..

Sulochana finally got a chance to say anything to Manda. She holds Manda with her shoulders, caressing them to let her relax.

SULOCHANA- why are you being so tensed.? Aur jiske liye aap tense horaha hai na, that lady doesn't bother anything about you..

Manda motioned her eyes to look at Sulochana's slightly complaining and slightly angry face.

TRISHALA- madam..

Both the ladies turns towards Trishala, who has came near them from the kitchen.

MANDA- Trishala.. everything prepared.?

Trishala looks at Sulochana for a moment and then again at Manda nodding in agreement.

MANDA- you handle everything Trishala.. Amma should not complain about anything..

Said Manda with a requesting tone for which Trishala again looks at Sulochana.

TRISHALA- Sulochana madam sahi bol raha hai. You are unnecessarily worrying about Kaikasi madam..

Manda closed her eyes for a moment, listening the same thing from both the ladies.

TRISHALA- you will get a headache if you kept on overthinking..

Sulochana agreed with her and placed her hand on Manda's shoulder.

SULOCHANA- aur overthinking bhi kiske liye Amma.?

Manda placed her fingers near her eyes, as she felt an urge of ache in her head.

SULOCHANA- jo lady ne aapka efforts ko twenty five years se appreciate nahi kiya, wo aaj kya karega.. Atu mutiyata kariyam.. (It's impossible..)

Trishala nods her head in agreement, feeling bad for Manda, while she opens her eyes to answer both the ladies standing in front of her.

"Hogaya mera burayi karke...?"

The three ladies turns towards the main door as they heard a heavy, deep and angry voice, and they know who it belongs to.

"Tum saas bahu, ek mauka nahi chodta, to talk bad about me.."

A lady in her off white and peach color south silk saree, having a long gold chain in her neck, her half white grey color hair tied in a bun with a gold medium size stud fixed at her right side of the nose, enters the main living area, looking towards them. The workers hurriedly moves towards her, and took her luggage from the driver who was following her. Trishala bows her head down standing at her same position while Manda and Sulochana hurriedly moves towards Kaikasi.

MANDA- Vanakkam Amma..

Manda joins her hands together, greeting her mother-in-law with a sweet smile. While Kaikasi kept on staring at them getting angry.

MANDA- Eppati irukkirirkal.? (How are you.?)

Manda continued asking her having a smile on her face but Kaikasi didn't answered her anything. Manda turns towards Sulochana and actioned her to greet Kaikasi.

SULOCHANA- Vanakkam Paati..

Sulochana, as a courtesy and to respect Manda's actioning, wished Kaikasi gaining her attention.

KAIKASI- mera aane se, tum dono ka gossip incomplete reh gaya.. you both can continue..

Kaikasi taunts them, pointing towards both Manda and Sulochana and started moving towards the couch to settle herself down. Trishala brings a glass of water for her and Kaikasi gulped it in a go looking at the ladies.

MANDA- how is everything at Madurai Amma.? Chitti (mother's younger sister) theek hai.?

Manda asked her further about Kaikasi's sister at who's place Kaikasi has visited in Madurai.

KAIKASI- sab theek hai. You tell me about here. Why Vaibhav asked me to return soon.?

Kaikasi forwards the empty glass back to Trishala, who leaves from there towards the kitchen, leaving them alone to have the family talk.

MANDA- Amma. You have a rest for now.. Vaibhav has gone to office.. once he returns, you can have a talk with him. Cari.? (Right.?)

Sulochana travels her eyes between Manda and Kaikasi, saying nothing between the two. Kaikasi got up from her place, pointing her finger towards Manda.

KAIKASI- you don't suggest me, what I should do.. just ask Vaibhav to meet me as soon he returns..

Manda lightly nods her head in agreement while Kaikasi turns towards her room, which was situated at a corner of the living room. Sulochana shook her head in disbelief as she saw Kaikasi leaving from there.

SULOCHANA- why Amma.? Why don't you answer her back.?

Sulochana frowns at her folding her hands while Manda sighed looking at her.

MANDA- call your Chithappa and tell him about Amma's return.

Manda directly ignored Sulochana's question, not because she don't want to have any argument, but because she don't know the answers of Sulochana's questions. Sulochana nods at her lightly while Manda leaves towards the direction of the kitchen...

*****

Song: "Bahon Ke Darmiyan" Khamoshi: The Musical (1996 movie)

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Lakshman skid vigorously the matchstick over its side of the box and took the burning stick near the white color candle placed at the candle stand, at the corner of their room. The dark room gets lighten up with the yellow flame of the candle, not only giving the light but also giving the warm sensation to the cool atmosphere around the room. He got an automatic smile looking around the room, thinking about the next moments of love he is going to have with his wife. His eyes caught Urmila, the next moment, who has stepped in front of him, at a distance. He uplifts his one eyebrow looking at her, wrapped herself with the white color cloth around her, covering herself from shoulders till her feet, as in hiding the blue dress from his stare. As Urmila motioned her eyes to look at him, Lakshman immediately keeps the matchbox on the table aside and started moving towards.

He stood in front of her, both of them looking into each other's eyes. Lakshman took the hold of the white cloth and immediately pulls it away from her. He witnessed her dressed in the same blue color A line dress, sleeveless and having fine cut near the waistline. Both of theirs smile immediately increased and at the next moment Urmila wrapped her arms around his neck, hugging him.

Bahon ke darmiyan

Do pyar mil rahe hain...


Lakshman closed his eyes and wrapped his arms around her back, holding her tightly in his grip. Urmila closed her eyes, moving her face lightly, touching her cheek with his cheek.

Bahon ke darmiyan

Do pyar mil rahe hain...


He released her from the hug, while Urmila turns her face to look at him, still having the same smile curved at her lips. She placed her hand, covering her eyes lightly and rests her forehead bending on his chest, hiding from his stare.

Jaane kya bole man, dole sunke badan

Dhadkan bani zuban...


Lakshman giggle at this side of his Mila and cups her face with his one hand, trying to make her to face him again. When she shook her head lightly, Lakshman placed a soft kiss on her hair.

Bahon ke darmiyan

Do pyar mil rahe hain...


Urmila opens her eyes, removing her hand from her eyes looking at him. He placed his hands on her waist and she bends towards his neck, giving him a soft peck on his skin.

Jaane kya bole man, dole sunke badan

Dhadkan bani zuban...


Lakshman takes her both the hands in his hold while Urmila took a step away from him, still smiling looking at his eyes. He caresses her bare right arm till her shoulder moving close to her when Urmila closed her eyes.

Baahon ke darmiyan...


Urmila uplifts her shoulder lightly with his touch. Lakshman moves closer to her from behind and wraps his left arm around her waist from back, lightly caressing her right cheek with his right hand.

Khulte band hote labon ki yeh ankahi...


He travels his finger, touching her jawline and bare neck giving a slight sensation of tickle to Urmila. She placed her hand on his other hand which was on her waist, tightening her grip on him.

Khulte band hote labon ki yeh ankahi

Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi...


He bends near her shoulder and removed the hair tendril from her shoulder, before giving a kiss on her skin.

Mil yun ki daud jaaye nas nas mein bijliyan...


Urmila immediately turns to face him, placing her palm on his chest. She smile looking at him and moves towards his back, wrapping her arms around him in a back hug.

Bahon ke darmiyan do pyar mil rahe hain...


He holds her hands which were resting on his chest and tilts his face to look at her. He turns half way to look at her and cups her face with his one hand, trying to move closer to her.

Jaane kya bole man, dole sunke badan

Dhadkan bani zuban...


Urmila took a step back and runs from there, not allowing him to move further close while Lakshman closed his eyes, smiling for his failed attempt.

Baahon ke darmiyan...


Urmila was sleeping on the bed on her one side when she experienced Lakshman's touch on her hair, which he was keeping at side to have a visibility on her bare shoulder.

Aasman ko bhi yeh haseen raaz hai pasand...


He make her to turn towards him, resting her back on the flat surface of bed. Urmila, now witnessing Lakshman without his t-shirt got an automatic smile and her heartbeat started making a loud sound. She closed her eyes as Lakshman kissed her forehead lightly.

Aasman ko bhi yeh haseen raaz hai pasand

Uljhi uljhi saason ki awaaz hai pasand...


He slides his one hand under her neck, pulling her lightly upwards near him and touched his nose near her neck taking a deep breath.

Moti luta rahi hain sawan ki badliyan...


Urmila puts her hand on his shoulder and Lakshman motioned his eyes to look at her face. She placed her hand on his cheek softly while Lakshman tightens his grip on her neck.

Bahon ke darmiyan do pyar mil rahe hain...


He pulls her towards her, now resting himself on the bed and Urmila above him. Lakshman put her hair behind her ear while Urmila smile at him.

Bahon ke darmiyan do pyar mil rahe hain...


After a moment of stare, Urmila rests her head on his chest, giving a soft bite on his skin for which Lakshman closed his eyes, tilting his face towards her head.

Jaane kya...

Jaane kya...


He placed his hand on her waist, touching her skin from the slight cut of the dress while Urmila digged her nails on his arms with his touch.

Bole man...

Bole man...


Lakshman lightly caresses her waist and travel his hand near her sleeve on shoulder, pulling it down. Urmila got a shy smile, closing her eyes more tightly.

Dole sunke badan

Dhadkan bani zuban...


The candle kept on melting, getting reduced, with the flame dancing more getting increased with each passing moment for the closeness of the two loving souls in front of it...!!!

Baahon ke darmiyan...!!!

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*****

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Kaikasi ka entry hogaya 😯 Now how Vaibhav will tell her about Suvarna and how she is going to react for that.??

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Done donaa done with LakshMila...😍

Stay tuned tomorrow for ManRat special 🔥😍

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KAIKASI LANKESHWAR: Vaibhav, Suvarna and their Anna's mother, head of the Lankeshwar family. The arrogance in their blood has been gifted by her, also rude towards Manda and ultimately towards Sulochana too.

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