Bepanah Pyaar Tujhse VaNi SamAina SS - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

I guess Vani had a tiff with each other because of which Bani broke up. Loved the understanding between Abhinav & Nikki.

The song sequences are romantic.

Sameer's thoughts irritate Naina.

I guess Naina is secretly in love with Sameer but is unable to express it.

Veeranshu stopping Bani from falling & their nok jhok in the car reminds me of srk-kajol nok jhok in DDLJ.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Part-1

Nice start..

Eagerly waiting to read more about veerashnu and Bani's chemistry..

Naina didn't regret it because she wasn't in love with veer

Thank you for the PM🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Thanks a lot.Part2 is also posted.


Originally posted by: Priyo0143139

Part-1

Nice start..

Eagerly waiting to read more about veerashnu and Bani's chemistry..

Naina didn't regret it because she wasn't in love with veer

Thank you for the PM🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Bani refused to marry him. He did not act that badly.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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She doesn't have to marry the guy right away. She can get to know him and then decide.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Bepanah Pyaar Tujhse....My love for you is boundless...Part 3

Veeranshu's and Bani's family members have gathered in the lawn for a get together.Naina is also present there.

Veeranshu's eyes are searching for Bani.
Gayatri:Bani won't come?
Savitri:She will come after finishing her work.
Veeranshu is relieved as he is dying to see her.
Suddenly he sees her coming..She looks damn beautiful.
Veeranshu's lips move:Lovely.
Bani notices her lip movement and understands what he said.She gets irritated.
She murmurs to herself:He is passing stupid comments on me.I expected it.Horrible creature.
G:Come Bani.We were waiting for you.
Bani smiles.

Bani:Sorry auntiji..my work did'nt get over on time.
G:It's ok.You came.That itself is a great thing.

Sameer:Poor bro was dying to see you.

Bani stares at Veeranshu.

He looks at somewhere else to avoid seeing her angry face.

They eat snacks.

SAMEER:Now let us play Antakshari.Veeranshu:Nikki...A song which starts with D.

Nikki sings:Dil meraa har bar yeh sunne ko bekarar hai

 Kaho naa pyar hai 
Dil meraa har bar yeh sunne ko bekarar hai Kaho naa pyar hai

Abhinav looks at her romantically 
and sings making her blush:

Ha tumse pyar hai, 
kee tumse pyar hai(Kaho na pyar hai).



Everyone claps hands seeing them expressing their love for each
 other through a song.Abhinav-Nikki smile.

They all sing.Now it's Bani's turn.

SAMEER:Start a song with 'K'.


Bani thinks for a moment and sings:
kaate nahi katate ye din ye raat
kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
lo aaj main kehta hu i love you...{Mr.India}.


Bani looks at Veeranshu.Veeranshu becomes very happy.
He thinks:Finally you confessed you love for me.
Sameer winks at Veeranshu.Veeranshu smiles.

Naina thinks:Bani sang such a romantic song from the movie ‘Mr.India’.

Naina imagines having a sensual sizzling dance on the same song.

Kaate nahi katate ye din ye raat
Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
Kaate nahi katate ye din ye raat
Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat


Lo aaj main kehta hoon i love you
I love you, i love you
I love you, i love you
I love you, i love you
I love you, i love you

Koi nahi bas tum ho saath
Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
Koi nahi bas tum ho saath
Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
Lo aaj main kehti hoon i love you


I love you, i love you
I love you, i love you
I love you, i love you
I love you, i love you


Kaisi hava hai dhuli dhuli
Aaj fiza hain khuli khuli
Kaisi hava hai dhuli dhuli
Aaj fiza hain khuli khuli


Saara nazaara naya naya
Dil ne pukaara piya piya
Saara nazaara naya naya
Saara nazaara naya naya
Dil ne pukaara piya piya
Dil ne pukaara piya piya
Piya piya piya piya
Tumne jo li angdaai hai
Phir baat vahi yaad aayi hai
Tumne jo li angdaai hai
Phir baat vahi yaad aayi hai
Lo aaj main kehta hoon i love you
I love you, i love you
I love you, i love you
I love you, i love you

Mahaka mahaka tera badan
Bahaka bahaka mera ye man


Mahaka mahaka tera badan
Bahaka bahaka mera ye man
Chhalaka chhala ka roop tera
Halka halka nasha mera
Chhalaka chhala ka roop tera


Halka halka nasha mera
nasha mera, nasha mera, nasha mera
Jab a hi gai main paas tere
Kah doon jo dil mein hai mere
Jab a hi gai main paas tere
Kah doon jo dil mein hai mere
Lo aaj main kehti hoon i love u
I love you, i love you
I love you, i love you
I love you, i love you


Kaate nahi katate ye din ye raat
Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
Koi nahi bas tum ho saath
Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat
Lo aaj main kehta hoon i love you
I love you, i love you
I love you, i love you
I love you, i love you(Mr.India).



Sameer notices Naina thinking of something.

Sameer:Where are you lost Naina?

Naina comes back to senses.

Sameer:Were you thinking of your dream man?

Naina blushes.

Sameer:Don’t worry.Your dream man will come to you one day. Any man will fall for you.But don't fall in love with any of them like the heroines of love stories.
The glow of her face vanishes.
Naina is worried about Sameer's attitude. She thinks:Sameer...why do you hate love stories?Why do you hate falling in love?Why don't you see my love for you?You are a dumb.
It starts raining.
Savitri:My God!Heavy rain.
G:Let us go.Sameer..take the car.Let us go home.
BANI:Auntiji..you all go.I'm not coming now.Let me stay here for some time.
G:But it's raining.
Bani:That's why.I love to be in the rain.
Gayatri smiles:Veeranshu also loves rain.
Bani looks at Veeranshu.He smiles.

Sameer:Mom..you go home.I will drop Naina and come.

Gayatri:Ok.
They all go back by car.But Veeranshu and Bani stay back.
BANI:Why did'nt you go back with them?
He smiles:Because i love this romantic rain.The atmosphere is so romantic.
He goes near Bani and looks at her romantically.She blushes.
He holds her arm.She smiles.They both forget themselves and dances singing

Tip-tip barsaa paani
Tip-tip barsaa paani
Paani ne aag lagaayi
Aag lagi dil mein to
Dil ko teri yaad aayi
Teri yaad aayi to
Jal uthaa mera bheega badan
Ab tum hi batao sajan
Main kya karu

Naam tera mere labon pe aayaa tha
Naam tera mere labon pe aayaa tha
Ho maine bahaane se tumhe bulaaya tha






Jhoom kar aa gayaa saavan main kya karu

Tip-tip barsaa paani
Paani ne aag lagaayi
Aag lagi dil mein to
Dil ko teri yaad aayi
Teri yaad aayi to
Jal uthaa mera bheega badan
Ab tum hi batao sajan
Main kya karu

Duubaa dariyaa mein
Khadaa main saahil par
Duubaa dariyaa mein
Khadaa main saahil par
Tu bijali bankar giri mere dil par
Chali aaisi yeh paagal


Pavan main kya karu

Tip-tip barsaa paani
Paani ne aag lagaayi
Aag lagi dil mein
Jo toh dil ko teri yaad aayi
Teri yaad aayi to chha gaya
Mujhpe deewanapan
Mere bas mein nahi
Mera mann main kya karu.

{Mohra}'.


Actually that was Veeranshu's dream.Without realizing it he holds her from behind.

Her face changes.She becomes really uncomfortable.


She stares at him.He cups her face in his palm.

Getting irritated she moves away from him.
She bursts out by slapping him:How dare you Mr.Veeranshu Singhania?
Veeranshu comes back to his senses:Bani!
BANI:That day you said that you didn't have any bad intention.You touched me to help me.But what excuse can you give me today?
VEERANSHU:I thought you love me.
BANI: How could you think that i will ever falling love with you?
VEERANSHU:You sang 'I love you'.
BANI:That was just a game.I sang it to win the game,not to express my love.I can never fall in love.I hate falling in love.I don't believe in love.
Veeranshu becomes upset.
She runs away.
His tears flow down.

Sameer-Naina are in the car.

Naina:This rain is so beautiful.I feel like dancing in the rain.

Sameer:You are crazy.Bollywood movies hace made you crazy.

Naina:It’s fine.This craziness is a fun.So stop the car.

Sameer:But why?

Naina:Stop the car.We will dance in the rain.

Sameer:Are you mad?

Naina pouts.

Sameer:Ok.You want to dance in rain.Fine.But why do you want to dance with me?

She blushes.

Naina:Please Sameer..for the sake of our friendship please dance with me.

Sameer:This mad girl!Ok.Only for the sake of our friendship I will dance with you in rain.Otherwise I hate dancing in rain like crazy.

Naina becomes happy.

Naina:Thank you Sameer.

They get out of the car and dances in rain.Naina is lost in sameer.


Chehre mein tere
Khud ko main dhoondhun
Aankhon ke darmiyaan
Tu ab hai iss tarah
Khwabon ko bhi jagah na mile

Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani
Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe







Yeh dilne ki khwahish
Yeh khwahish puraani
Ho poori tujhi se
Meri yeh kahaani

Kabhi tujhse utrun
Toh saanson se guzrun
Toh aaye dil ko raahat


Main hoon bethikana
Panaah mujhko paana
Hai tujhme, de ijazat

Na koi darmiyaan
Hum dono hai yahan
Phir kyun hai tu bata
Faasley...

Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani
Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe
Yeh milne ki khwahish
Yeh khwahish puraani
Ho poori tujhi se
Meri yeh kahaani

Na na... la la..


Hawaaon se tera pata poochta hoon
Ab toh aaja tu kahin se
Parindon ki tarah yeh dil hai safar mein
Tu mila de zindagi se

Bas itni ilteja
Tu aake ik dafa
Jo dil ne na kahaa
Jaan le...


Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani
Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe
Yeh milne ki khwahish
Yeh khwahish purani
Ho poori tujhi se
Meri yeh kahaani(Half girlfriend).



After some time Sameer stops dancing.

Sameer:Enough.I can’t dance anymore in this cold rain.

Naina becomes dull.They both return to the car.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Wonderful update dear💕

Awesome and beautiful 😍😍

I really loved the songs selected in the part they were awesome👏👏

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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thank you for the pm


Part 3

super update

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Part-2

Beautiful update ..Nice going

Song was beautiful ❤️

Now let's see what happens next

Thank you for the PM 🙂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Bepanah Pyaar Tujhse....My love for you is boundless...Part 4

Accidentally while walking along the road Bani hits Naina by mistake.
BANI:Oh sorry.
NAINA:It's ok.
BANI:You are Naina.Right?Veeranshu's ex-fiancee..?I had seen you at the engagement function and get together.
NAINA:Yes.I am Veeranshu’s ex fiancée.But Veeranshu and Sameer are my friends too.That’s why even after calling off our engagement I am still a part of their family.Now you are Veer’s real fiancée.
BANI: Unfortunately i am known as Veeranshu's fiancee.Good thing that you broke up with him.You are lucky to escape from a brat like him.
NAINA:Brat?Why do you call him a brat?Veeranshu is a nice guy.
Bani can't believe it.
BANI:Even though he dumped you on your engagement day you still respect him?I just can't believe this.
NAINA:I am not blaming him.In fact i'm happy that he broke our engagement.
BANI:What?
NAINA:Yes.Because i did'nt want to get engaged to him even though he was nice.Because i love someone else.
Bani is shocked.
BANI:Anyways Veeranshu is not nice.He...he..
NAINA:What did he do?
BANI:When it was raining,he touched me.Yuck.
NAINA:I'm not telling that he was right.Because touching a woman without her permission is wrong.But I know him very well.He may not have touched you with a wrong intention.He loves you sincerely.
BANI:Sincere love?It does'nt exist.
NAINA:It exists Bani.You think so as you have never been in love.I'm in love.So i know what love is.I know what Veeranshu feels for you.Don't lose him.It will be a loss for you.You will realize it later.

Bani remembers slapping Veeranshu.

She thinks:Did I do a mistake by slapping Veeranshu?

A car passes by.Veeranshu and Sameer are in the car.They get surprising seeing Bani and Naina together.They stopped the car and get down.They go near Bani and Naina.

Sameer:Hey girls!What a surprise!

Naina-Bani are also surprised.

Naina:This is really a surprise.

Veeranshu:How are you Bani?How are you Naina?

Naina:I am good Veer.

Bani does not reply to him.Veeranshu feels bad.

Sameer:Veer with his ex-fiancee and present fiancée.What a combination.

Naina giggle.Veeranshu just smiled.

Sameer:You all stand together.I will take some photographs.

Bani:But why?

Sameer: Veer standing with his ex-fiancee and present fiancée is a rare sight.

Veer:Are you mad?

Sameer:Please bhai.

Bani:Even I don’t think it’s necessary.

Naina:Let Sameer take our photograph.It’s for fun.Right?

Veeranshu and Bani do not say anything.

The trio stand together as per Sameer says.

Sameer clicks their photographs.

Naina:You also join us Sameer.

Sameer:Ok.

Sameer handed over the phone to another person and got him click their photograph.



The next day…

Bani goes to see Veeranshu in his office.He is surprised to see him.
She goes near him with a dull face.

Veer:Bani!You visited me.I can’t believe it.
BANI:I think i over reacted.I'm sorry Veeranshu.I should not have slapped you.


Veeranshu stares at her.
BANI:Won't you forgive me?
He does'nt say anything.
BANI:If you want you punish me.
VEERANSHU:So you are willing to get punished by me?
Slowly she moves her lips:Yes.
VEERANSHU:Ok,so i'm going to punish me.
Bani is nervous.
VEERANSHU:The punishment is..you have to dance with me.Now it's not possible to dance.But tomorrow evening you have to attend my official party.There you have to dance with me.
Bani can't believe her ears.She smiles.

They both burst into laughter.


Abhinav and Nikki go for a small trip.

They share cute romantic moments there.

He carries her on his back and walks.

Je tere dil vich hundi ae koyi galbaat
Mainu dasdi reya kar
Tu bas hasdi reya kar
Tu bas hasdi reha kar

They sit down and share a romantic eye lock with each other.


Je tainu aunda ae kise gallon gussa
Tu mere utte kad’di reya kar
Tu bas hasdi reya kar
Tu bas hasdi reha kar

They sit and chat a lot.

Oh sohne chehre de utte gussa jachda nahi
Tu hove russi te dil mera lagda nahi
Oh sohne chehre de utte gussa jachda nahi
Tu hove russi te dil mera lagda nahi
Ho mera lagda nahi





She lay on his chest romantically.

Je tainu lagge main vigad rehavan
Tu kaan mere kasdi reya kar
Tu bas hasdi reya kar
Tu bas hasdi reha kar


He carries her in his arms and twirls around and flowers fall from the tree upon them.


Hasdi reya kar, vassdi reya kar
Dil wali gallan saanu dassdi reya kar
Hasdi reya kar, vassdi reya kar
Dil wali gallan saanu dassdi reya kar

She pulls his cheeks cutely.

Je tere dil vich hundi ae koyi galbaat
Mainu dasdi reya kar
Tu bas hasdi reya kar
Tu bas hasdi reha kar

They enjoy being in a cute embrace while watching the sea waves.

Je tainu aunda ae kise gallon gussa
Tu mere utte kad’di reya kar
Tu bas hasdi reya kar
Tu bas hasdi reha kar




They both to a restaurant and have romantic dinner.

Oh sohne chehre de utte gussa jachda nahi
Tu hove russi te dil mera lagda nahi
Oh sohne chehre de utte gussa jachda nahi
Tu hove russi te dil mera lagda nahi
Ho mera lagda nahi

After dinner,Abhinav takes her to a dark place which was illuminated by lights and surprises her.

Je tainu lagge main vigad rehavan
Tu kaan mere kasdi reya kar
Tu bas hasdi reya kar
Tu bas hasdi reha kar


She becomes so excited that she looks at him romantically expressing her gratitude to him for doing this much for her.

Hasdi reya kar, vassdi reya kar
Dil wali gallan saanu dassdi reya kar
Hasdi reya kar, vassdi reya kar
Dil wali gallan saanu dassdi reya kar(
Hasdi Reya Kar).







Bani and Naina meet each other.
NAINA:So finally you apologized to Veeranshu.That's good.
BANI:But i'm scared to dance with him.
NAINA:You know Bani.You have to watch Bollywood romantic movies.You will know that partying and dancing with your fiance are nothing.Have you seen 'Dilwale Dulhaniya Le jayenge'?
BANI:No..never.I don't watch romantic movies.I hate love stories.
NAINA:That's your problem.You hate love stories as you have not watched romantic movies.You have to watch 'Dilwale Dulhaniya Le jayenge'.It's my favourite movie.If you watch it,automatically you will start believing in love.
BANI:Me believing in love?Never.
NAINA:I challenge you.Come with me.I have it's DVD at him.Watch it and see.
Naina plays the movie.
Naina and Bani watch 'Dilwale Dulhaniya Le jayenge' together.

Like Naina, Bani also becomes emotional.
NAINA:How is the movie Bani?Did you like it?
BANI:No.
Naina is shocked:You did'nt like this movie?How is it possible?How can you not like such a nice movie?I think you don't have a heart.
BANI:What i was trying to say it..i did'nt simply like it...but i just loved it.
NAINA:Really?Yes...i knew it.Now you say.do you like love stories?
BANI:I think yes.
NAINA:Wow!

Bani:By the way do you watch lots of movies?

Naina:Yes.Sameer and I watch a lot of movies together.But like you he also hates romantic movies.So we watch horror movies together.

Bani smiles.

Flash back....

Sameer and Naina are watching a horror film together.

Both are scared.Bani is so scared that she leans towards Sameer holding his hand tight.

Suddenly seeing a scary scene,she screams.

Sameer gets scared and he also screams.

Naina gets scared more hearing him scream and she also screams along with him.

Suddenly they realize that they both were screaming and stop screaming.

Sameer:You scared me Naina.

Naina:You also scared me.

Sameer:We got scared of each other.

They laugh.

Naina:It's all because of this horror movie.If it was a romantic movie this would not have happened.

Sameer smiles:But I would have fallen asleep.

They laugh.



Present...


Naina takes a red frock from her wardrobe.
NAINA:Though I bought this,i could'nt wear it.I think it will suit you more.You take this.
BANI:Hey..no...
NAINA:What are you wearing for the party?


BANI:This dress which i'm wearing now.


NAINA:Oh no!You will wear this for the party?Have you gone mad?It's too simple to wear for the party.You are going to be Mrs.Veeranshu Singhania.You have to look grand.

Naina makes her wear the red frock.
NAINA:Now you are too good Bani.
Bani smiles.

Party hall..
Veeranshu is waiting for Bani.
VEERANSHU:Where is Bani?Is she not coming?Was she fooling me to hurt me?May be.How could i expect Bani to melt so fast?
Suddenly he sees Bani entering the hall with so much of grace.His face glows.
Bani looks gorgeous in her red frock.
Bani is too nervous to look at him as she does'nt know how he will react to her make over.

Bani:Will he like my new look?If he does'nt like it....Oh no...


Veeranshu can't take his eyes off her.He goes near her.

VEERANSHU:You are so beautiful Bani.
She is relieved.Slowly she looks at his face.His eyes are touching her with so much of passion and love.She blushes.
VEERANSHU:Let me punish you now.
Bani smiles.
BANI:I'm waiting for you to punish me.
They smile at each other.He holds her hands and leads her to the dance floor cheerfully.

They sway to the music.
Veeranshu is lost in Bani.Unknowingly Bani also gets lost in him.
While dancing,she looks at him emotionally while he smiles at her.

Sameer goes near them and says:Guess now Bani bhabhi also fell in love with Veer bhai.

Bani becomes dull.

Veeranshu notices it and tries to divert her attention.

Veer:Come Bani..we will have dinner.

Veeranshu leads her to the dining table.They both have dinner together.

Veer:How is the dinner?

Bani:It is nice.

He smiles.

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