24/03/21 A Jeeva Shiva SS part16 p. 33 epilogue p.34 - Page 16

Originally posted by: ssoujanya

Very nice 👌......heart touching....❤

Dr. Vineet is awesome....... he narrated her own story to her for her realisation and he succeeded in it...

I always wanted pakhi to have to proper relationship with Samrat and stop thinking about Virat and a move head in her life.....

Actually Pakhi and Samrat's story can also be very beautiful if properly taken care of.... they can be parallel leads......

Eagerly waiting for next part.... please give soon....

Yup he is.

I too see potential in this couple. They can be parallel leads. Now when I think about it they kinda remind me of Tapasya and Rathore. That was one beautiful couple.❤️

You are so good with emotions and expressing them.

At times while reading it feels as if it’s not just a fan fiction but probably a writer narrating her own ordeals/experiences.

Thank you for this great read🙂

Originally posted by: Srijeeta06

You are so good with emotions and expressing them.

At times while reading it feels as if it’s not just a fan fiction but probably a writer narrating her own ordeals/experiences.

Thank you for this great read🙂

Fortunately these ordeals/experiences are not mine😆But I do understand what you mean❤️❤️

Thankyou so much🤗

Woww I loved the character of Dr vineet.

He answered the chakrams very well

WOW!!! you have written in so beautifully!!!

It's getting interesting plz update soooon !!

Can you plz upload by tomorrow?plz

This was awesome really love the chapter🤗

LOVE IT. LOVE IT. LOVE IT

I had told you in the beginning of this story that I wont be able to handle this story ( give the beginning was tragic). And you told me not to read it( for my own good).

But see, here I am reading it again and again.

I am loving this story, like you have described POVs of the characters so well❤️

Originally posted by: Tasu06

This was awesome really love the chapter🤗