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Hello 🙋🏻‍♀️

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I am glad that you all are excited about the upcoming story and also about the new entries of Lankeshwar family 😊🤗

Till now we have seen, Suvarna, Manda and Sulochana, and in today's part, there is another member making an entry, so do read... 😁😁

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Also, moving towards some funny and entertaining track, here we go with it's start 🤪

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*****

The worker opens the door for the boys to enter the palace. Ram, Bharat, Lakshman and Shatrughan moves towards Dashrath who was already settled at the couch.

DASHRATH- welcome sons.. kya bat hai.? Aaj sham me hi wapis agaye.?

Questioned Dashrath checking for the time on his wrist watch.

RAM- yes papa, we have a meeting with US clients at night.. so we have to prepare for that..

Ram answered him telling Dashrath their schedule for the night. Lakshman moves his sight around him and then looks at Dashrath.

LAKSHMAN- baki sab kaha hai.?

Dashrath keeps his newspaper aside, which he was reading, and removes his specs answering Lakshman.

DASHRATH- Sumitra aur Manvi to gaye hai market.. Urmila and Shruti are there in kitchen.. aur.. upar terrace pe, tumhare maa ke classes chal rahe hai..

Said Dashrath with a smile making the boys confused.

BHARAT- classes.?

DASHRATH- dance class.. tumhari bhabhi, Kranti ko dance sikhati hai, don't you people know.?

Dashrath's words made the boys startled. They looks at each other and then at Dashrath just to confirm what he just told them.

SHATRUGHAN- seriously.? Matlab char manjulika kum the? Ki ab maa bhi usme add horahi hai..?

Said Shatrughan in a joke for which Bharat hits him on his back of the head. Dashrath laughs at his words.

DASHRATH- ab kya kare? Apni bahu se kuch sikh rahi hai, it's good for her..

Ram smile at his words and looks at the direction of the terrace upstairs.

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It was almost night, the day moving towards its completion. The sun has settled down, with a pinch of orange color left in the sky and the moon moving towards the top, to shine and to create a beautiful night. The surrounding seems to be so soothing adding the beauty of it to Siya, who was at the terrace of the house, preparing herself to again showcase her one of the dance. Kranti, who was standing near her, was waiting for Siya to start her today's class, as at that time both of them were a teacher-student duo.

Siya forwards her right hand towards the sky and then brings the same hand near her heart placing it softly on her chest, in coordination with the song's lyrics.

Raat ko jab chaand chamke, jal uthe tan mera,

Main kahoon mat kar o chanda is gali ka phera...


She turns to look at Kranti and actioned her to follow. Kranti hesitate to start when Siya moves towards her and holds her hand pulling her towards the centre. Siya actioned her to follow the similar step by moving her right hand up.

Raat ko jab chaand chamke, jal uthe tan mera,

Main kahoon mat kar o chanda is gali ka phera...


Siya puts her right foot forward and then turns with a 360 degree around herself having her hand postures and indicating Kranti to follow her.

Aana mora saiyan jab aaye

Chamakna us raat ko jab

Milenge tan man, milenge tan man...


Kranti too follows her, trying to imitate the exact hand gesture. Siya corrects her by keeping Kranti's left hand on correct position and by moving her right hand fingers properly in a "Mayura" mudra.

Piya tose naina lage re, naina lage re

Piya oho piya,

Ho piya haan haan piya...


Kranti bit her lower lip in hesitation and moves aside indicating Siya to complete the song. Siya started moving herself with the last lines of the songs in a semicircular motion with her hands moving in the air.

Ho piya tose naina lage re

Jaane kya ho ab aage re, naina lage re

Piya tose naina lage re...


Kranti started clapping for her and Siya turns to switch the music off from her cellphone.

KRANTI- bravo.. wonderful..

Kranti expresses her appreciation while Siya smile at her gesture.

SIYA- thank you maa.. and by the way.. you were awesome..

Said Siya, appreciating Kranti's efforts too. Kranti giggles at her words and Siya settled herself on the chair, to remove her ghungroos.

KRANTI- kuch bhi.. I don't think so, mujhse dance wagera hoga..

Said Kranti nodding her head in a denial. Siya keeps her ghungroos in the box and placed it on the table, turning towards Kranti.

SIYA- aisa nahi hai maa.. roz practice karenge na, to atleast you'll become smooth..

Kranti smile at her and nods her head in agreement.

KRANTI- Siya.. you are really very good into this.. why don't you use your talent in a proper way. ?

Suggested Kranti, telling her to use her dancing skills somewhere in the practice.

SIYA- mere liye dance to meri hobby hai, ise career banane ke bare me, socha hi nahi kabhi..

Said Siya lightly nodding her head sideways.

KRANTI- but you should think about it.. only a suggestion huh..

Siya nods at her in agreement. She takes her cellphone from the table to check it's time.

SIYA- Ram ka message, office se nikal chuke hai.. one hour before..

Siya reads the message from the screen and turns to face Kranti.

KRANTI- to ab pohoch gaye honge charo.. let's see..

Both the ladies got up from their position and moves downstairs to find the boys having a talk with Dashrath. While Urmila and Shruti were also present now.

LAKSHMAN- ayiye ayiye.. guruji.. hogaya aaj ka paath pura.?

Said Lakshman in a dramatic way looking at Siya and Kranti.

LAKSHMAN- terrace ke tiles wagera to check kar liye na maa aap ne.? Kuch tut fut to nahi gaya.?

Everyone laughs at his joke as he teases Kranti for her dance. Siya settled down beside Ram while Kranti moves towards Lakshman and catches the hold of his right ear.

LAKSHMAN- aau maa...

KRANTI- tum jaise shayari karte ho, atleast usse better to dance karungi hi me..

Urmila burst into laughter hearing Kranti's words making Lakshman to pout at her getting angry. Sumitra and Manvi too enters there gaining everyone's attention.

SHRUTI- layiye choti maa..

Shruti runs towards her taking the bags from her in a help.

SUMITRA- areh wah.. aaj kam se jaldi chutti.?

Questioned Sumitra looking at the boys.

BHARAT- no choti maa.. rat me meeting hai.. usi ke liye jaldi aye hai..

Manvi scrunched her eyebrows looking at him in confusion.

MANVI- ab kya meeting.?

RAM- US clients.. isliye rat me hai.. what to do.? Work is work..

Said Ram looking at the four girls who didn't react anything.

RAM- come on then.. let's get fresh fast and be ready for this..

Ram continued looking at the files and then at his brothers who nods in agreement. The four of them got up from their place moving towards their room while the girls kept on looking at them...

*****

Shruti enters the room after their dinner and her eyes went wide looking at the condition around her.

SHRUTI- Shatrughan..?

Shruti almost shouted his name while Shatrughan turns around to face her, who was standing near the wardrobe searching for his documents. He looks at her direction around the room, and found the papers, files and other folders spreaded around the bed and the couch. He again motioned his eyes to look at Shruti who was now staring him.

SHATRUGHAN- sorry baby.. kal subah samet dunga..

Said Shatrughan in a apology and again turns towards the wardrobe. He took the hold of a document file kept beneath his shirts and pulls it vigorously making the clothes to fall on the ground.

SHRUTI- Shatrughan....

Shruti yelled again, this time more loudly, moving towards him. She looks at the fallen clothes and then at him.

SHRUTI- kya kiya tumne ye.? Aram se nahi kar sakte tum.?

Shruti shouted at him while Shatrughan started moving towards the table, ignoring her.

SHRUTI- and why the hell you keep your files here in the cupboard near the clothes.?

Shruti picks the clothes from the ground and moves towards him.

SHATRUGHAN- sorry Shruti.. but please.. kal daat lena.?

Said Shatrughan in a pleasing way making Shruti to look at him in confusion.

SHATRUGHAN- abhi jaldi me hu..

Shruti takes a deep breath hearing his words and keeps the clothes on the table, above his file, gaining his attention.

SHRUTI- tum to hamesha jaldi me hi hote ho.. subah office jane ki jaldi, rat me meeting ki jaldi.. when exactly you are not in a hurry.?

Questioned Shruti almost in a complain while Shatrughan looks at her.

SHATRUGHAN- iska answer bhi.. kal dunga..

Shatrughan lightly pinched her cheek while Shruti gave a look at him. Shatrughan takes his files again making the clothes to fall on the ground.

SHRUTI- areh.?

Both of them looks at the floor and then at each other. At the next moment, Shatrughan smile at her while Shruti frowns at him.

SHATRUGHAN- sorry..

He jumps over the clothes making Shruti to look at him in shock and started running from there, leaving the room.

SHRUTI- oh god..

Shruti looks annoyed looking at the whole room and then at the direction from where Shatrughan had left...

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Urmila was standing with her hands folded, having an angry look on her face, staring Lakshman who was collecting his files from the table. He turns to look at her for once and again moves his sight towards his files.

URMILA- I am waiting for you to answer..

Said Urmila in a deadly tone making Lakshman to look at her again.

URMILA- kitne din chalne wala hai ye.?

Urmila again questioned him regarding his work pressure and busy schedule nowadays.

LAKSHMAN- ab iska koi answer thodi hai Mila..kam hai.. to hai..

Said Lakshman moving his head sideways. He takes his files and moves towards the bed where his laptop and phone was kept.

URMILA- we people too work Laksh.. but kya kabhi hamare "us time" me, mene kam ko bichme laya hai.?

Urmila asked him another question sounding disappointed. Lakshman sighed giving a look at her.

LAKSHMAN- behes nahi karte.. please..

Urmila's eyes grew wide hearing his ignorance filled answer. He gave a light smile and moves closer to her.

LAKSHMAN- sorry.. please.. and thank you..

Urmila looks at him in confusion for his three different words.

LAKSHMAN- sorry kyuki me busy hu aur mujhe jana hai. Please because allow me to go.. and ...

Lakshman stops in between and hold Urmila from her waist.

LAKSHMAN- thank you isliye... kyuki tum mujhe ek pyara sa kiss de rahi ho..

Urmila rolls her eyes in disbelief and pushed him away from her.

URMILA- don't paster me with these words..

Urmila shows her disappointment towards him and continued with her complaints.

URMILA- kya fayda inn sab ka.? Jab aapko abhi jana hai..

Lakshman scratches his forehead not understanding what to say further. Their conversation got interrupted by Shatrughan.

SHATRUGHAN- bhaiya.. chalo..

Lakshman and Urmila looks at him, Urmila with anger and Lakshman nodding his head in agreement.

URMILA- arahe hai..

Urmila shouted at Shatrughan making him to gulp his fear.

SHATRUGHAN- baap re.! Yaha taapman bohot garam hai kya.?

Shatrughan continued his joke for which Urmila gave a stare at him. Lakshman watches both of them one by one and then turns towards Shatrughan.

LAKSHMAN- tum jao.. me araha hu..

Lakshman actioned him through his eyes while Shatrughan giggles understanding his request.

SHATRUGHAN- good night bhabs..

Shatrughan teases her waving his hand at her.

URMILA- me agar waha aayi, to tumhe thappad padega ha Shatrughan..

Said Urmila in a warning but Shatrughan kept on giggling at her. She was about to run towards him to hit him when he runs from there and Lakshman again holds Urmila near him.

LAKSHMAN- come on Urmila.. mera good night kiss de do.. mujhe jaldi jana hai..

Urmila kept on being stubborn, looking at the other direction. Lakshman smile at her and gave a peck on her right cheek. He started leaving the room taking his stuffs while Urmila kept on looking at him getting disappointed...

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Bharat enters the room getting back from the washroom, wiping his wet face with his towel. His eyes falls on Manvi who was standing in front of him.

BHARAT- kya.?

Asked Bharat in confusion looking at her unknown stare.

MANVI- aap sachme ja rahe hai? For the meeting.?

Questioned Manvi looking annoyed with her husband's over work.

BHARAT- jhut me kaise jate hai Manvi.?

Bharat handed his towel to her and moves towards the bed making Manvi more annoyed.

MANVI- joke tha ye.? Kyuki bohot jyada bakwas tha..

Said Manvi following him towards the bed. Bharat smile at her and takes his phone in his hold, dialing Lakshman's number.

MANVI- Bharat.. me aap se baat kar rahi hu na..

Manvi yelled at him, witnessing him getting busy on his call. He actioned her to wait a minute for him and started speaking on the call.

BHARAT- Lakshman.... Blue pendrive liya..?.... Ok.... Ha me aata hu.... Ya.....

He disconnects the call after talking with Lakshman and turns to look at Manvi.

BHARAT- hmm.. so what you were saying.?

Questioned Bharat to her, moving a step closer. Manvi sighed and was about to answer when Bharat's cellphone rang.

BHARAT- ek minute..

He excused himself and answered the call from Lakshman.

BHARAT- ha bolo..... Nahi that is in the office itself..... hmm.....

Manvi looks at him in disbelief and settled down on the bed watching him having a talk. After a moment Bharat disconnect the call and looks at Manvi who was staring him getting angry.

BHARAT- aap gussa hai kya.?

Asked Bharat getting confused. Manvi gave him a fake smile and got up from her place to face him.

MANVI- nahi nahi... Bilkul bhi nahi.. me kyu gussa karungi.?

Said Manvi in a sarcastic tone while Bharat smile at her. He holds her from her shoulders.

BHARAT- you are so understanding wife Manvi.. thank you.

Manvi's blood started boiling hearing his words. She controlled her anger and again gave a fake smile to him.

MANVI- ofcourse... You be busy for the whole day and night. Me aise hi smile karti rahungi..

Bharat's smile decreases as he understood her taunt. He immediately removed his hands from her shoulders and cleared his throat before he speaks.

BHARAT- sorry Manvi.. but.. I hope you understand..

MANVI- ha ha.. bilkul..

Manvi kept on giving him sarcastic replies while Bharat didn't said anything further. He looks at his watch for the time and then faces Manvi.

BHARAT- you have a sleep ok.. me.. chalta hu..

Manvi didn't replied him, and continued looking at him in a disappointment. Bharat turns to leave the room while Manvi folded her hands feeling angry with his behaviour...

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It was very late when they complete their meeting. Ram opens his room's door without making any noise as he knows Siya must be sleeping. His eyes falls around the room as the lights were still on and Siya was not on the bed but on the couch, resting her head at the back, having her eyes closed. Ram closed the door behind him, keeps his laptop on the table and moves towards Siya.

RAM- shayad mera wait kar rahi thi..

Said Ram looking with a disbelief at Siya. He settled down beside her and looks at her sleeping uncomfortably. He takes the hold of her left hand which was in an uncomfortable position on the couch and placed it properly near her lap, without disturbing her sleep. He looks at her lightly frowning expression on her face, which was due to the pain she must be feeling on her neck. He moves closer to her and lightly touches her neck, trying to take its hold, so that he makes her to sleep comfortable. By the process, Siya opens her eyes immediately and turns to look at Ram.

SIYA- Ram..??

Ram immediately pats her head lightly, actioning her to relax.

RAM- relax... You can sleep..

Siya lightly shook her head and settle down herself getting comfortable on the couch.

SIYA- aap ab aarahe hai.? I was waiting for you..

Ram smile at her and placed his hand on her cheek.

RAM- kyu kar rahi thi ? Sojati aram se..

Siya again shook her head and then looks at the bed and then at Ram.

SIYA- now you sleep.. have some rest..

Ram takes a deep breath and nods at her in no.

RAM- it's almost 4:30.. ab kya sona.?

Siya's eyes grew wide hearing the time from him.

SIYA- aap log rat bhar kam kar rahe the ?

Ram didn't answered her and just gave her a light smile.

SIYA- aise to aapki tabyet kharab hojayegi Ram.. not fair..

Siya started complaining to him while Ram nods his head lightly.

RAM- thodasa work pressure hai.. but it's ok..

Siya still didn't look convinced. Ram closed his eyes for a while, as he was feeling tired.

SIYA- thak gaye hai.?

Ram opens his eyes to look at her and at the next moment he rests himself on the couch, keeping his head on her lap. He takes her right hand in his hold and closed his eyes while Siya caresses his head with her left hand.

RAM- sorry Siya.. do din se aap se ache se baat nahi ho payi hai..

Ram still has his eyes closed while Siya shook her head in disbelief.

SIYA- I know.. and it's not fair at all..

Said Siya in a complain while Ram smile hearing her words. She thinks about something and turns to look at his face.

SIYA- that's why I was hesitant towards the pregnancy thing..

Ram immediately opens his eyes and turns upward to look at her. He didn't said anything while Siya continued.

SIYA- you're already busy. Ab isme how you're going to concentrate on this..?

Siya pouts in a complain while Ram again smile at her. He again got back to his position and closed his eyes.

RAM- don't think that way.. I am all yours..

Siya nods her head in disbelief and continued caressing his head.

RAM- aap so jayiye.. I'm not going to sleep now.. thode der me office ke liye nikalna hai..

Said Ram still having his eyes closed while Siya sighed hearing his words.

SIYA- sshhuu.. just rest for sometime..

Siya scolded him while Ram didn't said anything further. She smile at his expressions and rests herself on the couch, watching him having a sleep...

*****

Manda and Sulochana were working in the kitchen while few ladies were helping them. Manda takes a vessel and hands it to a worker.

MANDA- put this on the table, po.. (go..)

The worker nods at her madam and takes the bowl near the dinning table.

SULOCHANA- Amma..

Manda turns to look at Sulochana when she was calling her. Sulochana looks at the two ladies at a distance and whispered to Manda.

SULOCHANA- Atthai se firse baat hua.?

Manda looks at her when she asked about Suvarna. She shook her head in no while Sulochana didn't reacted to it.

MANDA- I had called her last night, when your Appa was busy in his work..

Manda gains her attention, while continuing her work of chopping the vegetables.

MANDA- but she didn't picked my call..

Sulochana sighed hearing her words and continued with her work.

MANDA- apne Anna ki hi behen hai na, unhi ke jaisi hai, stubborn..

Said Manda nodding her head in disbelief with the behaviour of Suvarna. Suddenly both the ladies heard the sound of the conch and turns around to look at the direction. The other moment, they look at each other with a smile. Manda continued her work while Sulochana kept on looking at the direction. After few seconds, when the sound stopped, Sulochana turns to face Manda.

SULOCHANA- hamara ghar ka morning, chithappa (father's younger brother) ka shankh play kiye bina, complete hota hi nahi..

Said Sulochana with a wide smile for which Manda nods her head in agreement. She turns to continue her work and kept on talking with Manda.

SULOCHANA- Amma.. in my one year of married life, there was not a single day when I didn't saw chithappa doing puja.

Sulochana said in a compliment showing an impressive expression on her face. Manda smile looking at her and said.

MANDA- tumhari shadi ko bas ek saal hua hai na.? Meri shadi ko almost 25 years complete hone wale hai.. aur inn 25 years me aisa ek bhi din nahi tha, jab mene tumhare chithappa ko puja karte hue nahi dekha.

Sulochana looks at her getting surprised while Manda nods her head in yes. She moves towards the washbasin and started cleaning her hands.

MANDA- jabse shadi hui hai meri, tabse dekhti arahi hu. Vaibhav tab bhi aise hi the, and today also he is the same.. shant aur samajhdar..

Sulochana smile hearing Manda praising her brother-in-law. She nods her head in agreement while Manda moves towards Sulochana again, wiping her hands with the hand towel.

SULOCHANA- yes. Iss family me, wohi to ek normal hai.. Arumai! (Nice!)

Said Sulochana in a joke for which Manda chuckled at her words. At the next moment, Sulochana thinks something and turns to face Manda again.

SULOCHANA- I wonder Amma.. do bhaiyon me, itna farak kaisa ho sakta hai.?

Manda's smile lessened hearing her comparison for Vaibhav and her husband. Sulochana turns to look at the direction near the temple and said.

SULOCHANA- chithappa.. itna acha.. and.. Appa..?

She said "Appa" looking at Manda who bows her head down feeling disappointed.

SULOCHANA- sorry Amma.. I didn't meant to hurt you..

Sulochana immediately apologize holding Manda's hands while she smile looking at her daughter-in-law.

MANDA- jo sach hai, wo hai Sulochana.. what is there to get hurt.?

Said Manda in an obvious tone while Sulochana still felt bad for her. Manda shook her head placing her hand on Sulochana's cheek.

MANDA- come on..Pokalam.? (let's go.?) Puja khatam horahi hai..

Sulochana smile at her words and nods in agreement. Both the ladies leaves the kitchen, moving straight towards the other side of the living area, where the temple was situated. They stand at a distance from Vaibhav, who was dressed in his white color "angavastram" and matching "dhoti", with a "chandan tika" on his forehead, and was praying to the Lord Murugan, having his eyes closed and his hands joined.

VAIBHAV- Om Saravana Bhava.. Om Saravana Bhavaya Namah.!!

Vaibhav muttered the mantra under his breath and opens his eyes to look at the lord's idol. Manda and Sulochana too joins their hands for the prayer while Vaibhav turns to look at them with a smile.

VAIBHAV- good morning Anni..

Vaibhav greets Manda with a smile for which she reverts him with a smile.

SULOCHANA- good morning chithappa..

Vaibhav turns his face to look at Sulochana. He placed his right hand on her head giving her blessings.

VAIBHAV- god bless you..

SULOCHANA- abhi me aur Amma, yahi baat kar raha tha. That our morning can't be good without listening your morning puja..

Vaibhav giggles hearing her words. He folded his hands and continued.

VAIBHAV- "hamara" matlab only you two right?.. because baki sab to mujhe dikhayi nahi de raha..

Said Vaibhav in confusion turning his eyes towards the living room to find other family members missing. Sulochana hits her hand on her head.

SULOCHANA- Aiyyo Murugan chithappa.! (Oh God Uncle.!) Iss ghar me kisiko jaldi uthne ka habit nahi hai..

Said Sulochana in a complain for which Vaibhav nods in disbelief. She turns to face Manda when something strikes her.

SULOCHANA- Amma.. I will just come.. aapka beta utha ya nahi, usko dekhna hai.

Manda nods at her and Sulochana excused herself leaving from there towards the staircase, moving upstairs at her room. Vaibhav turns to face Manda who was looking at Sulochana's direction.

VAIBHAV- Anni..

Manda turns to face him.

VAIBHAV- ghar me sab theek hai na.?

Manda's expressions lightly changes hearing his question. She looks lightly baffled while Vaibhav continued.

VAIBHAV- is there anything related to Suvarna.?

That was another shock for Manda when Vaibhav took Suvarna's name. She gulped her fear trying to figure out the answers to give him while Vaibhav observed her expressions.

MANDA- Vaibhav.. please give me some time..

Manda breaks the silence and looks at him with a pleading face.

MANDA- me.. jald hi.. aapko bata dungi, once I get to know about everything..

Vaibhav smile at her and nods in agreement for which Manda sighed in relief. The other thought came in her mind and she immediately continued looking at him.

MANDA- aap.. apne Anna se kuch mat kahiye..

Vaibhav understood why she is denying to discuss about Suvarna with his "Anna". He very well knows the "sibling battle" between his elder brother and younger sister and their "not so good" relationship. He again nods his head in agreement.

VAIBHAV- don't worry Anni.. Oyvetunkal (Relax)..

Manda smile at him. He turns to face the God again and joins his hands for a moment, and finally leaves from there towards his room. Manda watches him going and then thinks about Suvarna. She shook her head in disbelief and prayed the God for her family...

*****

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Vaibhav Lankeshwar, Suvarna's second brother and is way too opposite of his other two siblings. He took the decision not to marry at his own will, and considers Sulochana as his own daughter. Truthfulness and tranquility are the main highlights of his nature. ❤️

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Ji ye charo to bas kam me hi lage hue hai, apni biwiyon ko to dekh bhi nahi rahe 😲 agar Rajrishi girls ke gusse ka peak point pohoch gaya, tab kya hoga?😧😱 Bhagwan bachaye inn bhaiyon ko.....

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Song: "Piya tose Naina" Guide (1965 movie)

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Siya Kranti dance track suggested by- "Goldie" thanks for the suggestion dear ☺️

Edited by Saumya96 - 4 years ago
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I was eagerly waiting for update. Thanks for the episode Saumya. Char manjulika kum the, oh god this Shatrughan is so funny. And the song chosen was also beautiful, again you are too good at that, I know. Kranti is also funny, kya answer kiya hai Lakshman ko shayari se related. Then the scenes, the three girls are so irritated with their husbands, maza agaya padh ke. And bechari Siya to rat bhar Ram ka wait karte rahi. Not fair Ram, aisa kaise chalega. And then the entry of Vaibhav, superb. I mean you know exactly the tamilian tradition and you exactly write the same (though I am not a tamilian but my best friend is, so I know little about their culture). Now I go to know ki mera track kis tarah ane wala he, you are going amazing dear. Please continue soon.

Love,

Sammy

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it Saumya dear💕

Awesome and beautiful 😍✨❤

Are waah 🤗🤗 you fulfilled my wish of Kranti & Siya dance jugalbandi 🤭 but yes it was really good & new for Kranti😊

Haddh hai 4 4 Manjulika 🤣🤣🤣 or ab Kranti is also one 😂😂 cool😎

Poor boys are quite busy & their wife's are loosing patience ☹️☹️ I felt the most for Siya she was genuinely concerned about Rams health which he is ignoring in all this

Coming to Lankeshwar family😊 so siblings are adverse from each other but at least Vaibhav is reliable person for frustrated ladies ☺😊

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon☺

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