SKR FF 2:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 146 - Page 75

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Posted: 4 years ago

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Posted: 4 years ago

Aaj hai Sunday aur Sunday ko dhamakedar episode na ho aisa kaise hoga 🤔

Wo bhi hamari iss story me, jo ki unpredictable hoti hai 😁

So here wo go...... 🤩

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*****

Next day, Siya was in the kitchen, the stove flame was kept on under a vessel, in front of her. Though she was physically present there, but mentally was far away from her work busy in the thoughts of yesterday's function, when they have visited Kranti's friend, and all the gossips and suggestions which she was receiving from the ladies around her for her "good news". She could easily figure out Kranti's excitement from her face when the ladies were discussing about her future grandchildren. She remembered the conversation she had with Urmila and the girls'eagerness too for this news. The next moment came into her mind was of Ram and her conversation and their discussion to plan the baby again. Though they were planning for the baby few months back, and she was not feeling nervous at that time, but she don't know why she is feeling nervous this time. May be because these few months were difficult for Ram and Siya and she need the time for that "mental peace" again. May be because she thinks that Ram has started something new in his work and he will not be able to give his whole time. May be because she has learnt something new in her life from the part few months, something called as struggles. She was feeling confused about the n number of questions thinking lots of things at the same time. The vessel in front of her started burning from its base due to the high flame. Sumitra enters the kitchen and her eyes falls on Siya and the vessel.

SUMITRA- areh.. Siya...

She runs towards Siya and switches the flame off gaining Siya's attention. She looks at the vessel and then at Sumitra and then again at the flame.

SIYA- ss.. sorry choti maa.. mm.. mera.. dhyan nahi tha..

Said Siya confirming with the stove flame whether it is switched off. Sumitra smile at her lightly.

SUMITRA- jab dhyan kam par na ho, to iska matlab hota hai ki dhyan kisi bohot gehri soch me hai..

Siya motioned her eyes to look at Sumitra and found her smiling. She wondered for Sumitra's words, and her presence near her at the right time when she is busy in her thoughts.

SIYA- whenever I am stuck between something, you are always around me.. to help..

Said Siya with a sigh of relief while Sumitra chuckled at her words.

SUMITRA- shayad.. ise hi best friend kehte hai.? You know, best friend institutions..

Sumitra winks at her while Siya nods at her lightly, smiling away. She take a pause for a moment gathering words to speak with Sumitra.

SIYA- yesterday.. we visited Kavita aunty right..

Siya started telling her about the function while Sumitra nods at her lightly, listening to her tensions.

SIYA- to.. waha.. you know.. everyone were more interested in my news, rather than in Preeti's celebration..

Said Siya in disbelief thinking about the gossips. Sumitra waited for a moment and at the next, started laughing keeping her hand on her mouth. Siya looks at her in confusion.

SUMITRA- so..sorry...

Said Sumitra between her laughs while Siya pouts at her.

SIYA- aap has rahi hai choti maa.? You know it was really very embarassing for me..

Sumitra stopped her laugh after a while. She looks at Siya who was still sounding annoyed.

SUMITRA- sorry.. but kya karu.? Mujhe pata tha that this thing will happen..

Siya's eyes grew wide in shock while Sumitra still giggles at her reaction.

SIYA- kaise.?

Asked Siya sounding confused with Sumitra's confidence.

SUMITRA- experience kehte hai ise..

Sumitra smirks at her making Siya more confused.

SUMITRA- inn logo ko aur koi kam hota hai kya? Siway dusro ke ghar ke gossips and news ke alawa..?

Said Sumitra in an obvious tone for which Siya nods in agreement.

SUMITRA- pehele to.. hamare family problems ko lekar everyone were doing gossips. And now.. they will be more interested to hear the four good news from our house..

Said Sumitra nodding in disbelief. Siya takes a deep breath and bows her head down. Sumitra notes her expressions and placed her hand on Siya's shoulder.

SUMITRA- why are you worrying.?

Siya uplift her head to look at Sumitra.

SUMITRA- didi ne kuch kaha kya.?

Siya immediately shook her head denying.

SIYA- ab tak to nahi.. but.. unke face ki excitement dekh ke.. I'm sure that this thing is coming soon..

Sumitra again smile at her words. Siya turns completely towards Sumitra and continued.

SIYA- pata nahi choti maa.. I don't know the feeling which I am feeling right now.. but.. thoda tension, thoda darr aur.. thoda ajib lag raha hai..

Sumitra kept on looking at her listening to her emotional turmoils while Siya took a pause collecting the words to tell her about her feelings.

SIYA- mene aur Ram ne ... Iss bare me bat ki thi.. bohot pehele.. humne.. planning bhi.. Matlab we were ready for this..

Sumitra smile lightly understanding her words and gave a nod at her.

SIYA- after that, these things happened with us..in our family.. aur fir.. we decided to postpone our plans..

Sumitra bows her head down for a moment and then again looks at Siya with a smile.

SIYA- ab.. jab sab theek hogaya hai.. ye baby wali bat, firse.. kisi na kisi tarike se.. mere samne arahi hai..

Sumitra looks confused and Siya observed her expressions.

SIYA- Matlab.. dono papa, dono maa.. ye tino.. aur fir kal wo log.. everyone are excited and ready to hear the news from us..

SUMITRA- and what about you two.?

Asked Sumitra suddenly, interrupting her while Siya gulped saying nothing.

SUMITRA- baki logo ka chodo.. tell me about you and Ram..

Siya takes a deep breath and again remembers the conversation with Ram she had.

SIYA- he said that, everything is dependent on me.. if I am ready, then only we can think..

Sumitra smile hearing her words. She placed her hand on Siya's shoulders.

SUMITRA- to bas fir.. jab itna understanding husband mila hai.. then why to get worried.?

Siya smile at her lightly and started thinking again while Sumitra observed her silence.

SUMITRA- me samajh sakti hu.. this is very difficult decision to take.. but then you are not in a hurry right.?

Siya nods at her in agreement while Sumitra continued.

SUMITRA- baki logo ke bare me sochke, you don't have to take your decision Siya. I know you have gone through something really tensed mental health, isliye tum darr rahi ho koi bhi decision lene se pehele.. hai na..?

Asked Sumitra for which Siya smile at her. Sumitra has correctly guessed what she is going through. Siya shook her head in yes for which Sumitra smile at her.

SUMITRA- please don't do that.. daro mat, aur aram se socho.. I will suggest you to take your whole time..

Siya smile at her and nods her head in agreement.

SUMITRA- aur jo bhi hai, discuss it with Ram.. usse kuch mat chupao Siya..

SIYA- ji choti maa..

Sumitra smile looking at the confident smile on Siya's face while Siya holds Sumitra's hands tightly thanking her for her words...

*****

The boys were busy in their work sitting in Ram's cabin. Ram was busy in his laptop while Bharat who was standing beside him, was telling him something looking at the file he was holding. Lakshman and Shatrughan were sitting at the chairs in front of Ram busy in their own work.

BHARAT- that's it bhaiya.. remaining is for the second slot..

Ram nods at him and takes the file from Bharat's hold. He started signing the document when they heard a knock at the door.

SUMANT- Ram...

RAM- yes Sumant ji..

Sumant enters the cabin as Ram gave him the permission.

RAM- Sumant ji.. take this summary from Bharat. And start working accordingly. Guide the related staffs about this meeting..

Said Ram forwarding the file to Sumant and told him about their one of the project work. Sumant nods at him in agreement.

RAM- anything else Sumant ji.?

Asked Ram asking him about the reason he has came there.

SUMANT- Ram.. we were thinking about the recruitments right.? To uske liye kuch.. four CVs we have finalized.

Sumant started telling him about the new recruitments looking at his iPad while Ram nods at him.

SUMANT- when do we call them for the final interviews.?

Ram checked with his schedule in his phone while the boys kept on looking at Ram.

RAM- Sumant ji.. I am busy for the whole week..

Said Ram while Sumant nods at him lightly. He thinks something looking at his brothers and then answered Sumant.

RAM- but.. we can do one thing.. only director's interview is remaining right.? So these three could manage that..

Said Ram looking at Bharat, Lakshman and Shatrughan making them shock.

LAKSHMAN- bhaiyya.? Hum..?

Asked Lakshman getting amused while Ram nods at him.

RAM- why not.? Post par nam mera ho bhale hi, but we four are same in this..

The brothers smile hearing Ram's words for them. Ram looks at Sumant.

RAM- what's say Sumant ji.?

He smile at Ram and nods in agreement.

SUMANT- as you say Ram..

The boys looks at each other and then at Ram who was smiling at them.

SUMANT- I will send you three the list of the candidates with their CVs..

Said Sumant looking at the boys who nods in agreement. He leaves from there while Bharat turns towards Ram.

BHARAT- bhaiya are you sure.?

Ram gets up from his chair and smile at Bharat.

RAM- ofcourse I am sure. Interview hi to lena hai tum tino ko.. what's the big deal.?

Said Ram looking at his brothers who smile at him nodding in agreement.

RAM- look at their CVs and decide the date to call them. Ask Aman to type the email for the call of interview.

Bharat nods at him. Ram gave a light pat on Bharat's shoulder and at the next moment he takes his cellphone in his hand.

RAM- me thode der me ata hu.. Siya se bat karke..

Said Ram dialing Siya's number while the brothers nods at him. He excused himself leaving from the cabin while Lakshman's eyes falls on Shatrughan who was yawning spreading his hands in the air.

LAKSHMAN- ise dekho.. ye ek to hamesha khata rehta hai, ya sota rehta hai..

Said Lakshman giving a slap on Shatrughan's head.

SHATRUGHAN- kya bhaiya.? Kal rat meri nind puri nahi hui hai.. that's why I am feeling sleepy..

Said Shatrughan drinking a glass of water while Bharat and Lakshman looks at each other in confusion.

BHARAT- nind puri kyu nahi hui.?

Asked Bharat scrunching his eyebrows while Shatrughan choked hearing his words. He remembers the last night romance with his wife and then looks at Bharat and Lakshman's suspicious eyes.

SHATRUGHAN- aise hi.. aap dono ko kya hai.?

Said Shatrughan keeping the glass back while Lakshman laughs at him.

BHARAT- what.?

Asked a confused Bharat for which Lakshman shook his head.

LAKSHMAN- kuch nahi.. aise hi..

Shatrughan felt embarrassed while Lakshman kept on laughing at him. They heard a knock at the door, getting interruption in their moment.

AMAN- may I come in sir.?

BHARAT- come in..

Aman enters the cabin moving towards them and forwards a file towards Bharat.

AMAN- CVs for the new recruitments, sir..

Bharat started looking at the files while Aman waited for them standing with his hands tied together at his front.

BHARAT- four candidates are there right.?

Aman nods his head in agreement while Bharat forwards the file to Lakshman and Shatrughan.

SHATRUGHAN- Tanvi Bhat... Ramesh Prabhakar... Suvarna Lankeshwar... Shivam Verma...

Shatrughan took their names by looking at their CVs. Lakshman's eyes falls on one of the CV. He takes the hold of resume and looks confused.

LAKSHMAN- Suvarna Lankeshwar... Chennai.?

Lakshman gets confused looking at her birth and education place and then at Aman.

LAKSHMAN- wo chennai se yaha kyu job karne arahi hai.?

Aman gave a "don't know" expression for his boss's question.

AMAN- how.. would I know.. sir.?

Said Aman in an obvious tone for which Lakshman nods at him lightly.

LAKSHMAN- ya.. how would you know.. strange it is, but..

Said Lakshman again looking at the girl's resume. Bharat and Shatrughan scrunched their eyebrows looking confused at his words.

BHARAT- what is so strange.? She must have completed her education here.. in Mumbai..

Said Bharat while Lakshman shook his head denying.

LAKSHMAN- no bhaiya.. dekhiye na.. everything is pursued from Chennai..

Shatrughan rolls his eyes at Lakshman's "unwanted things" and started collecting the spreaded files on the table while Bharat gave a look of disbelief at him.

BHARAT- itna interest hai na reason janne me.. to ask her at the time of her interview..

Shatrughan giggles at him while Lakshman forwards the file back to Aman.

LAKSHMAN- I was just asking casually.. I don't have any interest to know about.. whatever that girl's name is.. Sukanya.. what..?

Asked Lakshman to Aman who answered him immediately.

AMAN- Suvarna, sir.. Suvarna Lankeshwar..

Said Aman correcting him while Lakshman rolls his eyes.

LAKSHMAN- ya whatever..

Lakshman shook his head and continued with his work while Bharat indicates Aman to leave. The boys got busy in their work, waiting for Ram to complete his call...

*****

Siya gave the medicines to Dashrath as they were resting themselves in the living area.

DASHRATH- thank you..

Dashrath took his medicine and gulped a glass of water, handing the empty glass to Siya. She looks at his expressions which were seems to be tired.

SIYA- aapki tabyet theek nahi lag rahi hai kya papa.?

Asked Siya in a concern while Dashrath shook his head.

DASHRATH- theek hai beta. Bas thodasa tiredness feel horaha hai..

Said Dashrath resting his back on the sofa. Kranti came near them and settled down beside Dashrath.

KRANTI- wo to hoga hi na.. aapko kaha tha evening walk ke time, to walk slowly.. but you didn't listened to me..

Said Kranti nodding in disbelief. At the other moment she turns towards Siya.

KRANTI- meri to ye sunte hi nahi hai Siya..

Said Kranti in a complain while Siya gave a look at Dashrath.

SIYA- papa.. not fair .

The girls along with Sumitra came there having their evening tea with them.

SIYA- aap maa ke sari bate manenge.. hai na.?

Siya points her finger towards Dashrath while he nods looking at Kranti.

DASHRATH- jabse shadi hui hai, yahi to karta aya hu Kranti. Aage bhi karunga..

The girls giggles hearing Dashrath's words while Kranti smile in disbelief. The door bell rang and one of the worker opens it to welcome the boys.

SUMITRA- arey kya baat hai.? Aaj bhi jaldi agaye..?

Asked Sumitra getting amused while the boys settled down on the couch to rest themselves.

LAKSHMAN- hum to papa ki bat follow karte hai choti maa.. wo kehte hai na, jitna zaruri hai utna hi kam karo..

SHATRUGHAN- true.. rest of the time is.. family time.. hai na papa.?

Shatrughan questioned Dashrath for which he nods in agreement at his both the sons.

DASHRATH- absolutely right son.. kam to life time chalte rahenge, but family time has to be enjoyed everyday..

Everyone smile at him agreeing to his words. Urmila and Shruti started serving them the tea with some snacks.

RAM- papa.. new recruitments ke liye we have finalized four interns. Kal unke final interviews honge, which these three will be conducting.

Said Ram with a smile looking at his brothers for which Dashrath gets happy.

DASHRATH- areh wah.. very good..

The boys smile hearing their father's praise while Kranti interrupts.

KRANTI- Ram... final interviews.. director conducts right ?

Questioned Kranti for which Ram smile at her nodding in agreement.

RAM- ha maa.. to director hi to conduct kar rahe hai.. me karu ya ye tino kare, ek hi baat hai..

Kranti smile genuinely hearing his words. She looks at Bharat Lakshman and Shatrughan and then again at Ram having a proud smile.

BHARAT- waise maa.. hume adat nahi hai, but we are in a learning phase.. sikh jayenge..

Said Bharat looking at Dashrath who shook his head.

DASHRATH- absolutely you all will do that.. I believe..

Kranti again feels happy listening to their conversation. She remembers the days when she used to feel doubtful about the same conversations. She shook her head in disbelief for her "stupid and unnecessary thinkings" that time.

SHRUTI- oh wow.. look at this dii..

Shruti exclaimed showing her phone's screen to Urmila.

SHRUTI- aapke favourite actor ki movie release hui hai..

Urmila gets excited looking at her cellphone while the boys gave a look at them.

URMILA- wow.. kitna cute dikh raha hai na..

Said Urmila looking at the picture for which Lakshman's eyes grew wide in shock. Manvi hits Urmila's back and actioned her about Dashrath and Kranti's present.

URMILA- sorry papa..

Urmila looks embarrassed for which Dashrath laughs at her.

DASHRATH- areh it's ok beta.. you all want to go for the movie.?

Asked Dashrath while the girls smile at him getting excited. Dashrath motioned his eyes to look at the boys who shook their head denying.

KRANTI- areh kyu.? Weekend par ho aao na, what's the problem.?

Said Kranti for which Lakshman sighed in disbelief.

LAKSHMAN- ek din to milta hai maa to rest.. usme bhi hum inn logo ko movie le jaye.?

Urmila pouts at him folding her hands getting angry.

SHATRUGHAN- wohi to.. aur inko bas movie to dekhna nahi hoga.. shopping bhi karenge wo alag..

Said Shatrughan nodding in disbelief while Shruti gave a look at him.

MANVI- ha to we will go by ourselves. We don't need you all to take us..

Said Manvi for which Urmila and Shruti nods in agreement.

RAM- areh nahi nahi.. we all will go.. Saturday night..? Chalega.?

The girls gets happy while the boys looks frustrated.

BHARAT- kya bhaiya..!

SUMITRA- acha hai.. tum log weekends pe kahi jaya karo.. waise to har din kam me lage rehte hai sab.. weekends should be utilised with each other na..

Said Sumitra taking the girls'side while Ram smile at her nodding in agreement. They continued having their tea while talking with each other...

*****LakshMila special*****

At night, Lakshman moves downstairs searching for Urmila who was doing her last chores of the day at the dinning table.

LAKSHMAN- mila.. kitni der ?

Urmila turns to face him and at the next moment gave him an angry stare.

LAKSHMAN- areh.? Ye kya tha.?

URMILA- gussa..

Answered Urmila immediately continuing her work while Lakshman giggles at her. He moves towards her standing behind her.

LAKSHMAN- movie ke bat pe na.?

Urmila didn't answered him and kept on doing her work while Lakshman moves closer to her.

LAKSHMAN- you didn't got my point.. Sunday to, ek dusre ke sath room me band hokar spend karne wala din hota hai..

Said Lakshman in a whisper while Urmila motioned her eyes at her right side to look at him.

URMILA- so unromantic..

Urmila commented nodding her head while Lakshman folded his hands.

LAKSHMAN- lagta hai mere kan kharab hogaye hai.. you are saying romantic and mujhe unromantic sunayi araha hai..

Urmila sighed in disbelief and was about to leave from there when Lakshman caught her hand. He smile looking at her while she didn't turned to face him, still looking angry.

In lamhon ke daaman mein

Pakiza se rishte hain...


He takes a slow steps towards her and holds her other arm from his other hand while Urmila tilt her face to look at him.

Koi kalma mohabat ka

Dohrate farishte hain...


Lakshman uplift his one eyebrow having a smile on his face while Urmila scrunched her eyebrows showing her anger towards him.

Khamosh si hai zameen hairaan sa falak hai

Ek noor hi noor sa abb aasmaan talak hai...


Lakshman's smile widened looking at her reaction and he bends near her giving a light kiss on her cheek closing his eyes.

Nagmein hi nagmein hai jagti soti fizaon mein

Husn hai sari adaon mein

Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein...


Urmila lightly pushed him away while Lakshman opens his eyes and again smile at her. He turns her to face him and takes the cleaning cloth from her hand keeping it aside on the table.

Oo..nagmein hi nagmein hai jagti soti fizaon mein

Husn hai sari adaon mein

Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein...


They both kept on looking at each other for a while doing the further conversation with their eyes. Lakshman immediately picks her up in his hands while Urmila looks lightly surprised.

Kaisa yeh ishq hai

Kaisa yeh khwaab hai

Kaise jazbaat ka umda sailab hai...


She bows her head down looking at his stare, hiding her smile while Lakshman smile looking at her melting anger. He started moving towards the stairs.

Kaisa yeh ishq hai

Kaisa yeh khwaab hai

Kaise jazbaat ka umda sailab hai...


He started climbing up the stairs towards their room while Urmila clutched his t-shirt tightly near his chest.

Din badle raatein badli batein badli

Jeene ke andaaz hi badle hain...


Lakshman and Urmila enters their room and he makes her stand on her feet. She looks at him while Lakshman turns to close the door behind them.

In lamhon ke daaman mein

Pakiza se riste hain...


Urmila gulped at his action and Lakshman turns to face her. She took a step back taking the hold of her dupatta tightly while Lakshman takes a step towards her.

Koi kalma mohabat ka

Dohrate farishte hain...


Urmila smile and was about to run backwards when Lakshman catches her right arm tightly, making her to stop.

Mmm... Samay ne yeh kya kiya

Badal di hai kaya...


Lakshman smirks at her for which Urmila giggles at his expressions. He pulled her towards him making her to fall on his chest.

Tumhein mene paa liya

Mujhe tumne paya...


Lakshman placed his one hand on her back and placed his other hand under her face while Urmila closed her eyes. He smile at her and kissed her lips softly.

Mile dekho aise hai hum

Ke do sur ho jaise madham

Koi jyada na koi kaam

Kise raag mein...


She immediately opens her eyes and smile at him while Lakshman takes her in his embrace, hugging her tightly.

Ke prem aag mein

Jalte dono hi the tan bhi hai maan bhi

Maan bhi hai tan bhi...


She released him from the hug and goes towards the bed while Lakshman followed her. Both of them rests themselves on the bed looking at the ceiling.

Tan bhi hai maan bhi

Maan bhi hai tan bhi...


Lakshman holds her one hand tightly still staring the ceiling while Urmila turns her head to listen at his words.

Mere khwaabon ke is gulistaan mein

Tumse hi tum bahar chai hai...


He turns his head to look at her while she smiles, both of them staring each other lovingly.

Phoolon mein rang mere the lekin

Inmein khusboon tumhi se aai hai...


Lakshman started moving closer to her while Urmila bite her lower lip to hide her smile. He touched her shoulder with his lips making Urmila to close her eyes.

Kyon hai yeh arzoo

Kyon hai yeh zustzu

Kyon dil bechain hai

Kyon dil betaab hai...


She digged her nails on his back while Lakshman sucked her ear lobe holding her other hand tightly in his grip.

Kyon hai yeh arzoo

Kyon hai yeh zustzu

Kyon dil bechain hai

Kyon dil betaab hai...


They both looks at each other having no expressions on their face. At the next moment Lakshman looks at the side lamp and switches the lights off.

Din badle raatein badli baatien badli

Jeene ke andaaz hi badle hain...


Again Lakshman and Urmila motioned their eyes to look at each other in the darkness of the room. He rests his back on the bed and pulls her towards him.

In lamhon ke daaman mein

Pakiza se riste hain

Koi kalma mohabat ka

Dohrate farishte hain...


Urmila caresses his face lightly while Lakshman kissed her palm staring in her eyes. Both of them moves closer to each other and embrace each other in a hug.

Nagmein hi nagmein hai jagti soti fizaon mein

Husn hai sari adaon mein

Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein...


Urmila closed her eyes and placed her hand on his back while Lakshman wraps her waist pulling her more towards him feeling her presence...

Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein...!!!

*****

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Shock laga laga laga, shock laga 😳😧😮😯😲😱 Aage I'll not say anything 🤫

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Haan ji, to LakshMila bhi hogaye, now 2 more to go... Stay tuned for that ❣️

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Song: "Inn Lamhon ke Daman mein" Jodha Akbar (2008 movie)

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Posted: 4 years ago

Yaarr aap aise kyun karti hai??

Suvarna Lankeshwar 😭😭😭 ab yeh kyun aayi hai??

Yeh kya pareshaani khada karegi inke life mein? Aur yeh wahi toh nahi jo sabse takrati rehti thi..

Areee apni patni ke munh se kissi aur ki tareef woh bhi ek hero ki sunke koi pati nahi jaayega picture dekhne 😸😸

Mila bhi na 🤦🏻‍♀️😂😂😂

Laksh ne jaise manaya..🙈🙈 ab toh Mila ko koi shikayat nahi hogi Laksh se. 😘😘❤️❤️

Two more to go. 🙈🙈 Thank you for such an amazing update 💓❣️ and PM 🤠

Waiting eagerly for next update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Sunday ko dhamakedar episode na ho aisa kaise hoga, ye padhke hi na mujhe pata lag gaya tha kuch to gadbad he. And then sachme high voltage ka shock lag gaya. Let me start with the first scene, my favourite Sumitra after a long time we had a scene of Siya and Sumitra, and they literally are best friends. Sumitra ne sahi kaha, when Siya has a husband like Ram then why to get worry for anything. Then moving towards office scene, yar ek to itna suspence, mujhse handle nahi ho raha. And when I read that four names, tab to meri heart beat itni badh gayi ki me kya batau. Ab jaldi se suspence khatam karna yar. And then the romantic sequence of LakshMila, kya idea nikala Lakshman ne manane ka. Finally inke bich koi haddi nahi ayi and they had a romantic moment with a beautiful song. Waiting for tomorrow's update.

Love,

Sammy

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it dear Saumya

Awesome and beautiful part🤗🤗

Siya confusion & her hitch was obvious as it was important decision of life

I liked how Sumitra answers her confusion like a true friend & guide 🙂

Ram too is now relaxing by sharing his work with his brothers which is important

I am happy that Kranti & Dashrath are relaxing themselves after this phase

Hmm 🙄🙄 Swarna seems to be known but I will not spill the beans right now 😉

Last & not the least Lakshman & Urmila were too beautiful😍 just loved it

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon☺

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Posted: 4 years ago

Superb update♥️

First Siya n Sumitra scene was very soothing and beautiful... they are indeed best friends...finally Siya shared what's going inside her...she is stuck between her heart n mind😊

Then office one.. it's good to see how Ram is motivating his brothers to take initiative in every thing and even everyone in the family supporting them..and Kranti getting more clarity of her thoughts with every passing day..😊

Ho gayi entry inki bhi finally🙄...ab dekhte hai yeh kya krengi inki life mein 😐

And then Lakshmila ka romance🤭....they changed weather more hot☺️....our romantic n bold couple is back on track😅..

Continue soon...

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Posted: 4 years ago

"In lamhon ki damaan mein" to mein hi behek gayi! You know what, love you! From their nokjhok to their romance (via Lakshman ka ajibsa excuse for not going to movie on Sunday 😜)....☺️I won't say much, 'it's so beautiful that makes me wanna cry'! Thank you ❤

I felt really bad for Siya, I just hope she listens to Sumitra and don't feel forced to have a child. Sumitra is as usual wise, these eight must be grateful to have her in their lives.

Suvarna Lankeshwar? Lankeshwar? This name itself made me to skip a heartbeat. I am feeling like closing my eyes and ignore what might come in future 😰

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Posted: 4 years ago

Dhaya hai Khuda ne zulam hum dono par

Tumhe lajawab lekhan dekar aur mujhe usse padhne ka mauka dekar

Iss saare jahan mein bemisaal ho tum..

Tumhare lekhan itna lajawab h ki lakhon ke liye misaal ho tum..

Ufff itni garmi.. mene to do baar ac temperature recheck kiya hai and I seriously doubt ki meri ac m problem h or else heat radiating from your story is suppressing the cool air...

Now starting from the beginning

So good to see that Siya found a bff as Sumitra to whom she can open up about her fears doubts tension and problems without hesitation.. because in such situations a girl needs a support other than her husband who can help her out in gaining mental peace and love..and no one can be as good as Sumitra in such situations....

Finallllyyyy after Pawan Suvarna is going to mark her entry in the story.....🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐.. hope she don't create problems because abhi to khushiyon ki shuruaat h...but I know as long as they are together no problem can disturb them..

Bharat is back to his dumb form itni si BAAT nahi samajh paya ki raat mein jaage kyu ...😂😂😂😝😝... But Lakshman is really smart 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓 jhatt se samajh gaya ladka😂😂🤣🤣...

I really enjoy the cute sweet banter of Kranti and Dhashrath..they are too cute...

Well Ram knows very well that a husband should never deny her wife in anything... Only if he wants to live a healthy happy married life.... Tabhi to beta turant hi ready ho gaya ...😂😂😂😝😝😝😝🤣🤣. I literally felt that Lakshman's eyes must have popped out from their sockets listening to Urmila praising other man that too infront of everyone 🤪🤪... Well no doubt Shatrughan knew very well that Girls are not going to settle down by movie only ... But jab Ram bhaiya ne bol diya hai to pocket dhili karne ke liye tayaar ho jayen sab😝😝😂😂....

And now about our sizzling couple I will just say the shayari I have read somewhere..

Aafat Toh Hai Woh Naaz Bhi Andaaj Bhi Lekin,

Marta Hun Main Jis Par Woh Adaa Aur Hi Kuchh Hai

Mujhe Duniya Ki Eidon Se Bhala Kya Vasta Yaaro,

Humara Chaand Dikh Jaye Humari Eid Ho Jaye.

Roj Ek Taaza Sher Kahan Tak Likhun Tere Liye,

Tujhme Toh Roj Koi Nayi Baat Hua Karti Hai.

Wo Kahte Hain Hum Unki Jhoothhi Tarif Karte Hain,

Ai Kuda, Ek Din Aayine Ko bhi Jubaan De De.

Wo Surkh Honth Aur Unn Par Zalim Angdaaiyan,

Tu Hi Bataa Ye Dil Marta Na Toh Kya Karta.

Ye BeKhayali, Ye Libaas, Ye Gesu Khule Huye,

Seekhi Kahan Se Tumne Ye Adaayein Nayi-Nayi....

Altogether it was Lovely update..

Update soon dear 💖💖💖

And Suvarna ke naam se hi darr lag raha hai.. hope koi problem nahi ho....🥺🥺🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: karuna_kini

Yaarr aap aise kyun karti hai??

Suvarna Lankeshwar 😭😭😭 ab yeh kyun aayi hai??

Yeh kya pareshaani khada karegi inke life mein? Aur yeh wahi toh nahi jo sabse takrati rehti thi..

Areee apni patni ke munh se kissi aur ki tareef woh bhi ek hero ki sunke koi pati nahi jaayega picture dekhne 😸😸

Mila bhi na 🤦🏻‍♀️😂😂😂

Laksh ne jaise manaya..🙈🙈 ab toh Mila ko koi shikayat nahi hogi Laksh se. 😘😘❤️❤️

Two more to go. 🙈🙈 Thank you for such an amazing update 💓❣️ and PM 🤠

Waiting eagerly for next update

Dil ko churaana neendein udaana, Bas yehi mera kusoor.. 😁😁 Badshah to nahi hu, but Saumya zarur hu 🤪🤪 Suvarna ke bare me kya hi kahu.. khud jan lena next episode me..

Stay tuned ❣️😜

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sammy04

Sunday ko dhamakedar episode na ho aisa kaise hoga, ye padhke hi na mujhe pata lag gaya tha kuch to gadbad he. And then sachme high voltage ka shock lag gaya. Let me start with the first scene, my favourite Sumitra after a long time we had a scene of Siya and Sumitra, and they literally are best friends. Sumitra ne sahi kaha, when Siya has a husband like Ram then why to get worry for anything. Then moving towards office scene, yar ek to itna suspence, mujhse handle nahi ho raha. And when I read that four names, tab to meri heart beat itni badh gayi ki me kya batau. Ab jaldi se suspence khatam karna yar. And then the romantic sequence of LakshMila, kya idea nikala Lakshman ne manane ka. Finally inke bich koi haddi nahi ayi and they had a romantic moment with a beautiful song. Waiting for tomorrow's update.

Love,

Sammy

Kuch to gadbad hai daya, pata lagao 🤫😁 gadbad to hogi hi, kahani me twist jo agaya hai...

Suspense dena to Mera kam hi hai baccho... Wait for the next episode 😉

Stay tuned ❣️

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