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Posted: 4 years ago
#61

The one thing that can make them put the other in a bucket and be judgmental is , if Ranaav has union issues and thinks Viveka will side with the union , while viveka assumes Ranaav never has to struggle to achieve his dreams.


Staying in a Marriage can also mean being complimentary to each other instead of chasing elusive equality.


May be viveka should explain what drives her passion to do more for the people she helps while Ranaav explains how the grass is not always green on the other side. Might be a long drawn process to understand each other in this aspect but they will put in the effort if they feel that their relationship is worth the time , thought and care.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#62

Nisha..can we see naina's individual story too...other than just her equation with Viveka..?!?!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nisha can we get one more update .. please

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Kudos to you Nisha. This was awesome. It is incredible,authentic. Loved how much you covered here. No short cuts for this couple..no wonder she is not flying to Khargpur next month. 😘


We hold the bar of understanding (of even the unknown) higher for our loved ones. We are unhappy,angry about something and we land up being unhappy with loved ones.

Viv expected Raanav to guess her unhappiness (not getting accepted) and managed to get into a polite unnecessary argument with him. The guy is astute and pretty straight forward and voiced her inner thoughts..that he being Satyen son had it easy at work. He was pacing in the morning..maybe the afternoon off with friends was needed and nothing to do with NY celebration? Someday in future the couple will pick up each other unsaid cues.


Satyen is not just making polite conversation with her but is actively listening and fully engaged .

"You sound like he is a student” Satyen muttered looking deeply into her eyes" or when she dejectedly said that her grading does not go into transcripts.

That irrelevant huh?” Satyen poked .

He can only do so much (chiding Raanav for not introducing Viv to the guests)..eventually it is on the couple. Not everyone who works in wall street is a bean counter. So look forward to how you slowly remove some of their blinkers for each other. 😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
#65

Proud & Passionate

Smrita and Satyen both observed Raanav and Viveka closely for their own reasons. Satyen observed them to spot tension, and he did spot a reservoir full that night. Smrita watched them to make sure there was no love, and boy was she happy!!

Satyen believed from the very time he saw Viveka and Raanav size each other as adversaries that they belong together, something about them told him clearly they would have an incredible marriage.

It would be a union of equals!

Both fiercely independent and fiercely possessive

Rakshit was his non confrontational, peace making shy son who easily let himself be led in life

Raanav was the exact opposite

Viveka, did not wear her achievements as a badge but every word that came out of that mouth seemed to rile his handsome son

She owned the room, wearing her glasses and her carelessly tied knot, whether in her saree or gorgeous tussar silk outfit ( like tonight)

She didn’t get bogged down by his wife’s Smrita’s expectation to look a certain way or say certain things to fit into the highest echelons of Delhi society

His friend Gujral was considered “kingmaker” in political circles, Viveka held her own…

And boy did she!

Rakshit and Lekha fed each other food and cooed and leaned on each other’s shoulders and fondled each others’ shoulders and waist and cheek and neck and felt each other up as discreetly as they could

Raanav and Viveka stood close to each other the chemistry was crackling but they avoided touching each other in anyway

When Viveka turned accidentally at the buffet and slammed into Raanav they looked at each other, and didn’t offer an apology or smile to the other person

She did not choose to sit next to him at dinner, he chose to mingle with people he found interesting o chat with

His friend Swastik showed up with his girlfriend for a bit and Raanav was in his element laughing and socializing

Viveka met with them and stepped away to hang with Mrs Sethi and Mr Gujral who appeared greatly interested in talking with her

Sarika was a replica of Lekha Tandon, and did not have any desire to be seen with Viveka Parashar

Satyen noticed after dinner as the guests wandered waiting for dinner to be removed and dessert to be served Raanav walked over and bend down holding her elbow and said something in her ear

Satyen wanted to be a fly…

“I don’t think I want to go” Viveka said looking at him deeply

“Have something more important?” he accused

“Yeah, you can say that” she nodded

“Then you wont mind if I stay up late”

“I don’t think I have… ever… have I?” she taunted him gently

They were both giving it back to each other

“I am bringing Sarika with me” he said bending down into her ear

The music was not loud but the clattering of fine china was

“Lekar jao… zaroor” she nodded into his collar. They owed each other serious love making, but it was not going to happen tonight

He stood straight … Viveka caught an errant tendril of her hair stuck to his 9 PM shadow and pulled it back hurriedly

He stepped back to assess her reaction of announcing he was going away for the might

“Tumhari cousin hai raanav, tumhe lagta hai mujhe bura lagega?” she asked simply refusing to give him a win

“Got it” he nodded blandly almost feeling her waist but withdrawing his hand forcefully

He wanted to say he hated her outfit because he could not feel her waist like he did with sarees

“You can hate my outfit all you want, but with that jaw I am letting you nowhere near my skin tonight” she told him with her eyes

But he didn’t

He left her alone

Satyen received a call from Akash Mathur around 10:45 PM

Akash had texted him first

“Soye nahi aap?”

“Arey kaha sir friends aaye hain, looks like everyone is happy I made it” satyen teased

Satyen walked away towards a quieter part of the sprawling house to take the call

Smrita watched him walk away as Nupur stressed over her life’s many “luxury dilemmas”

“Pahunch gayi Viveka”

“Jee jee, aapko text nahi kiya usne?”

“Umm.. nahi bhool gayi hogi shaayad”

“My friends adore her Akashji”

“Achhi baat hai Khushi hui Sir”

“Arey aap Sir na kahen bilqul”

“Chaliye Bhaisaab keh loonga”

“nahi nahi SATYEN kahen… aapki beti hame Dad nahi keh paati”

“Achha? Hmmm” Akash worried

“Don’t worry its all new” Satyen reassured him

“She is very cautious and formal usually, she does not jump to conclusions like a true economist”

“My son is smitten hum yeh baat bilqul maan lenge aapki”

“Haha… chalo its good they agreed to marry sirjee”

Satyen did not tell Viveka’s Dad Viveka and raanav were circling each other like prey all evening.

Hoping for the first sign of weakness to destroy the opponent

“Aap log aa jaayen Sunday ko, NY bhi aa raha hai, us din Savi hamari ghar par pooja rakhti hain, aap log us se pehle aa jaayen Sir, lunch par

“satyen keh deejiye aa jaayenge, waise ban kya raha hai?”

Akash listed the whole menu including whether it will be chhoti rayi or badi rayi ki chhaunk

Satyen then explained how adrak has to be grated and not diced for some UP subzis

The men gushed over each others’ culinary knowledge

Satyen explained how his grandparents would dote on him at the “royal” (Smrita’s words) haveli in Rajasthan

Then they both hugged each other virtually because their foods were so similar and how much they loved each others’ love for food

They were kinda goofy but totally real

“Viveka ka mood achha ho gaya hamey Khushi hai Satyen ji”

“Who to hamesha khush rehti hain” Satyen smiled

“Aaj asal mein who reject ho gayin Kharagpur se”

“Arey rey… I did not know that”

“Phir mujhe bhi batana nahi chahiye tha shaayad, aap kripya SHOW na karen sir”

“Bilqul nahi” satyen promised

Satyen realized how protective Akash must feel

He knew!!

Two days ago his own son had dropped the legal ball on the Singapore under sea pipeline deal due to his lack of oversight on transfer price clause and not reading through that Power Engineers has actually a smaller equity participation on the whole deal as previously thought in the JV agreement

Raanav had spent the last two days on the phone trying o persuade the legal partners on the side, but to no avail

Satyen had given him the benefit of doubt of being a newly wed, caring for the parent in hospital etc. but Raanav was hard on others professionally and extremely hard on himself and so there was little Satyen could do for the sense of loss Raanav felt

“Bache aaj kal ke kaafi ambitious hain” Akash sighed upon hearing silence for a while as Satyen pondered

“Jee sir” Satyen nodded

“You must be laughing… even YOU are ambitious and successful… I should not include you in my generation of non achievers” Akash laughed

“Kar leejiye bhaisaab mazaak hum aapke culinary sibling jo ho gaye” Satyen nodded not taking offence

“Jee culinary bhaisaab” Akash cracked himself up as always…

Satyen walked back to the courtyard as he spotted Raanav leaving with Rakshit and Lekha and Sarika, and his friends, Viveka turning to look at him, and their eyes meeting across the vast room

She quickly turned away, when she realized Raanav had caught her staring

But did not bother to come back and give her the customary high society spousal hug and peck on the cheek (peck on the lips if it was a young couple)

He was going to just watch them for now and not intervene he decided…

Edited by Nisha0604 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#66

Happy Valentine's day every one❤️

Don't stop here nisha .Thanks for update🤗


Nisha can we get one more update pls if possible

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: bakwas_serial

Kudos to you Nisha. This was awesome. It is incredible,authentic. Loved how much you covered here. No short cuts for this couple..no wonder she is not flying to Khargpur next month. 😘


We hold the bar of understanding (of even the unknown) higher for our loved ones. We are unhappy,angry about something and we land up being unhappy with loved ones.

Viv expected Raanav to guess her unhappiness (not getting accepted) and managed to get into a polite unnecessary argument with him. The guy is astute and pretty straight forward and voiced her inner thoughts..that he being Satyen son had it easy at work. He was pacing in the morning..maybe the afternoon off with friends was needed and nothing to do with NY celebration? Someday in future the couple will pick up each other unsaid cues.


Satyen is not just making polite conversation with her but is actively listening and fully engaged .

"You sound like he is a student” Satyen muttered looking deeply into her eyes" or when she dejectedly said that her grading does not go into transcripts.

That irrelevant huh?” Satyen poked .

He can only do so much (chiding Raanav for not introducing Viv to the guests)..eventually it is on the couple. Not everyone who works in wall street is a bean counter. So look forward to how you slowly remove some of their blinkers for each other. 😍

Kudos to you for writing this lovely comment!

They have hardly spend any time together since the time they met. And the relationship from the start has been under a cloud; named Naina, Inder, Smrita....😆 It is not surprising that they are not able to read each other, especially the ones that they want the other to pick up on.

From the new chapter we know that both are smarting from professional set backs. Something they are not comfortable about letting the other know it feels like, it is about being vulnerable in front of the other. They have not reached that point as yet.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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“Aaj asal mein who reject ho gayin Kharagpur se”


That line sort of choked me up. It has a father's love and concern for his child rolled into it. The need to know that she is fine. And it is interesting that he called up Satyen to enquire after her.


Raanav and Viveka, both reeling under professional set backs and probably thinking the other won't understand.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I am really feeling sad for Viveka today again. I get it why she called of the wedding earlier.
Ranaav it would have been nice you had shared that with Viveka.
sharing your shortcomings would have been first sign of trusting Viveka.
but you didn’t.

Neither is Viveka willing to trust him to share the news.
how are they suppose to live together?

Who will break the ice ?

Not sure who is more wrong or wronged?
happy that Satyen didn’t intervene. He shouldn’t.
Nisha, when will you take us out of this misery.
Viveka generally is so mature. Can she be bit more mature with her relationship? Maybe she is not as of now as she sees this as short term arrangement.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: PriteeMisra

I am really feeling sad for Viveka today again. I get it why she called of the wedding earlier.
Ranaav it would have been nice you had shared that with Viveka.
sharing your shortcomings would have been first sign of trusting Viveka.
but you didn’t.

Neither is Viveka willing to trust him to share the news.
how are they suppose to live together?

Who will break the ice ?

Not sure who is more wrong or wronged?
happy that Satyen didn’t intervene. He shouldn’t.
Nisha, when will you take us out of this misery.
Viveka generally is so mature. Can she be bit more mature with her relationship? Maybe she is not as of now as she sees this as short term arrangement.

If everyone is mature and pleasant then there is no story left😉

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