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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Aina, bakwas serial, Canapoem, ALL VERY VERY well written

THANK YOU!

A silly story is connecting us all I am so touched

Aina yes, I have often noticed the wealthiest people have very startlingly simple behaviors and character traits.☺️

Nisha the story maybe simple but it is your story telling,your humor and wit that makes it very engaging 😍 It makes one happy and a treat to read.


You relate everyday incident (Mathur's household) that we can relate to or airheads (Lekha) that we may know or have met. My description of the same would be inspid but your is engaging and relatable.

Thank you for writing and sharing Nisha. It has been a pleasure.

Shradha

Ps. Reminded me of something. Was new at work...one of the speakers a senior executive with everyday anecdotes woke a sleepy audience and we started paying attention..

Few years later was returning home late using public transport. There were two women chatting animatedly..and the executive was sitting behind them. I was working I think and I looked up and realize he was eavesdropping. Most probably making mental notes for his anecdotes😊 Guess I am trying to say you observe,listen and have ability to express in words ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nisha, is it the missing diamond earring or the saree he bought her at her NGO? 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: kizh72

Once upon a time there was a crashing into each other and a earring had atkofied on his shirt😆

Ha, that cream and red Bengali sari


No one, other than you can remember this vivid detail 😊🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hot & Hers

He flashed a perfect smile. They would have kissed but there were atleast 50 drunk 20 somethings jostling all over the terrace

“Ghar kab jaayenge?” she asked earnestly in his ear

“Now?” he asked surprised

“Tum saari raat bahar rehte ho?”

“He shrugged “Sometimes” he smiled arms folded paying her complete attention

His phone was ringing off the hook

“Your Dad, do you want to talk?” he asked politely

She grabbed it before he could finish and teared up

“This is my first phone call of the year Papa”

“Khush raho beta” he teared up too

“Ma kidhar hai?”

“Who Bua ke saath andar dance kar rahi hai”

“Aur aap?”

“Bas yaha akela baitha hoon” he laughed

“KYON?”

“Mazaak kar raha hoon, Fa hain, Mr Asthana hain, unke rishte ke log, Fa ke bhai, kam se kam 100 log hain, bas aap nahi ho beta”

“Main Gurgaon mein hoon Papa”

“Oh? Ghar par party nahi hui shaayad?”

“Nahi friends aaye hain suna hai” she heard the phone buzz many times

“Papa mera phone car mein hai, I will call you when I get home”

“Ma se baat karogi?”

Rakshit and Raanav were deep in convo about something funny

Then Raanav started talking on Rakshit’s phone

Lekha stood by her husband did not make any attempt to greet Viveka

“Naina hai?” “Wahan?” Viveka plugged her other ear and turned away from the terrace and watched the ground below as she asked

“Umm… aayi to thi” “Pata nahi kidhar hai” Akash said discreetly

Viveka wondered where she was

“Mayank hai kya naam hai uska? Karuna se baatein kar raha hai, saari shaam” Akash sounded worried

“Really?”

“Hmm… aap jao abhi, dher saari shubh kaamnayen beta” he yelled

“Jee aapko bhi PA”

She ended the call and turned to hand him the phone

He was missing

“Where did they go?” she asked Lekha

“Must be around” she looked up from her phone

“Did you have a good time?” Viveka asked politely

“Umm… I guess for a party in India, umm.. or u know whatever” she adjusted her hair

She looked like a million hot bucks Viveka noticed

In a skimpy red dress, her hour glass figure complementing the shape

“Lovely dress but aren’t you cold?” Viveka enquired

She had her shawl wrapped around her the last hour

“Oh no… Delhi is warm….” Lekha educated her

“Are your parents at u know… at the Parashar home?”

Viveka just could not come up with “OUR home”

“My Mom HATES that house….” Lekha told her as if it was an accomplishment

“OH WOW… WHYYY?” Viveka was shocked

“Dad would have demolished it and build a tasteful house”

“Its on the ASI list I think” Viveka’s turn to educate her

“Its NOT a French Villa OK” Lekha sounded pompous

“I guess not” Viveka agreed nodding

“When did you guys get here?”

“Oh this is our 8th party for the night”

“Oh? Mujhe 4 mein hi, ……. Meri energy exhaust ho gayi”

“You don’t do this much?”

“I go to parties but we stay in one person’s house, we have live theater, or poetry reading”

“YAWNNNN SISTAH” Lekha dismissed

“Its not that boring…. People drink and party all around” Viveka muttered mischievously hoping to gain Lekha’s approval

“HOPEFULLY” “SHEESH” lekha approved as expected

Viveka chuckled

“We never talk at home, I am glad we are talking moments after the year has begun” Viveka smiled

“I never see you” Lekha said in a rare moment of candor

“I don’t know where your room is, I can stop by” Viveka offered

“SEE EXACTLY, that house is a maze of WHITE MAN’S fantasy”

“Oh you mean the British?”

“Umm.. YEAHHH”

“It’s a beautiful house” Viveka said sadly

“I would rather Dad bought a 10,000 or 20,000 sq ft farmhouse some place with a nice pool”

“Tum bhi Dilli ki ho?” Viveka asked curiously

“OH “I” grew up all over the place” “Like your husband” she said proudly

“Did you two know each other?” Viveka asked wistfully “Rakshit didn’t go all over”

“Oh he did… but I am just adding context” Lekha explained

“I know the Parashar men for YEARS now”

Viveka nodded

“He was an underwear model, your husband” Lekha laughed

Viveka would have thought Lekha would love a British centerspread guy, but at this moment lekha wanted to be a “privacy loving elite”

“I told Rakshit I would have never married him if he had done something like that”

“I hope he didn’t do it huh… but too late now” Viveka laughed amused

She wondered how Lekha would react if Raanav were to produce that random product Rakshit had pitched

She laughed in her mind

Lekha excused herself after declining many calls and just walked off

Viveka turned toward the outside and thought about her conversation’

They really had nothing in common

She never could see herself telling Satyen he needs to raze the house, or exclaiming to Raanav I would never marry you if you did gross things like be an underwear model

She couldn’t do most of the things Lekha did so casually

She couldn’t even pull off that beautiful red dress

“I have rolls” she felt her waist and smiled

She wandered trying to find Raanav and finally found him as she began going down in the elevator

When she got off on the 3rd floor at the friend’s

“Kaha the?” she asked curiously

“Some one needed a jump” he said running his hands through his hair

“Are you mad?” he asked solemnly

“Aaj ladoongi tumse main? Aaaj to NY hai” she spoke like a child

Back home the sisters would say that for DAYS for EVERYTHING

“NY hai to first this, first that”

“NY mein hame yeh karna chahiye”

“Aaj ke din hum who bilqul nahi karenge”

“On NY day we have to see maximum hot guys because it sets a precedent to follow for the year”

“NY day we HAVE TO HAVE TO buy new outfits”

Papa indulged all their wishes

She missed her sisters

“Tomorrow then?” he checked in a deep voice

“Tum mujhse ladna chahte ho?” she asked pausing

“I don’t mind” he said shaking his head staring deeply into her eyes

Wonder what he means by that she thought….

“Suck it!” she pumped her fist in her mind to all the women that might have been turned on by him selling underwear

She smiled bending her head

“Tum lekha ko pehle se jaante ho?” she asked as they walked towards the friend’s apartment

“Hmm” he nodded

“She looks lovely tonight” she mumbled

“You think so?”

“Hmm”

“Atleast I began NY’s with a hot guy” she smiled as they entered the apartment to say goodnite

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved how Viv let herself loose, danced and had fun.i guess Raanav always wanted to see this uninhibited Viv, that no longer measures her actions around him.

It was good that she saw a side of real Raanav with his friends. It will help her to accept him.

Lekha is one jealous person. But she doesn't know that her retorts hardly affects Viv..

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Posted: 4 years ago

“Tum mujhse ladna chahte ho?” she asked pausing

“I don’t mind” he said shaking his head staring deeply into her eyes

I find this romantic.

Why would a guy fight with a you if he wasn't interested. And your relationship basically started coz of all engaging arguments you had with him.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Waiting for them to get back home, him to give her the missing earing and her reaction.

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Posted: 4 years ago

It’s sad that the rejection coming on top of everything else seems to be making her second guess herself in a sense. This is not the Viveka we saw in the beginning, who didn’t give two hoots on been called a maid/aupair, bent on snaring rich guys along with her sister by the very man she is in love with. She’s struggling to take things in her stride, not to be affected by the pettiness and snobbishness of Smrita and Lekha, missing the simple life style of her family.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved the title of the chapter Nisha. Actually love all the titles.


“Naina hai?” “Wahan?” Viveka plugged her other ear and turned away from the terrace and watched the ground below as she asked

“Umm… aayi to thi” “Pata nahi kidhar hai” Akash said discreetly


Viveka asks about Naina or wants her with her or share her thoughts with her so much. It is really heart warming reading about Viveka's love for her sister.

But I always wonder how much does Naina miss her sister and if she adores her sister as much Viveka does.

Viveka always wants to share her innermost feelings with Naina but Naina hardly shares anything with Viv.


Also where is Naina? Is she not at Bua's house? Is he out with Inder? Viv did not see Naina in any of these parties she visited.


“OH “I” grew up all over the place” “Like your husband” she said proudly

“Did you two know each other?” Viveka asked wistfully “Rakshit didn’t go all over”

“Oh he did… but I am just adding context” Lekha explained

“I know the Parashar men for YEARS now”


I also had one more observation.

Lekha always tells Viveka about how she knows Raanav from long or how she knows about where he grew or who his friends are etc etc

Once she even said that he probably never saw girls in sarees till he met Viv right.

Why does she want to stress that she knows Raanav better than Viv every time? Raanav too, most of the times evades questions about Lekha I feel.


I hope Viveka tells Raanav about their new year day ritual they follow at the Mathur residence. He can take her out on a date and also do some shopping.

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Posted: 4 years ago

This brought half a smile. 😊 An underwear and shirt model and now a lawyer. What a transformation 😊 Given he works for Satyen my assumption is he is good at his work....see one should not stereotype 😊 will he share his journey with Vi?


Anyway Vi feeling a bit lost after the NY celebration is understandable. Other than Ra, Lekha and Rakshit she really does not know anybody. She is new in this social circle. A people person she interacts with everyone and easily strike a conversation (Ra’s intern). So it is natural she does the same with Lekha today. She finds that they “Have nothing in common”...
Wonder if this was true of others she met today. No wonder she misses her family.

How will Vi and Ra navigate their differences and find common ground


Happy weekend😍


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