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Posted: 4 years ago

Notes & Questions

“He better be a really great guy Veev” Anu panted rubbing oil on Diya’s scalp as they sat in the master bedroom balcony on Saturday evening

“Hmm”

“MAAA” “Oucheee” Diya yanked her hair as Anu tried to rub hard

“Chup chaap baitho” Anu cursed

“Maa… you want her to dump her fiancé”

“Aisa nahi keh rahi hoon main”

“Khaana shaanadr ghar 100/10, kabhi financial planning nahi karni padegi, I mean she has the whole deal”

Diya went back on her phone

She obviously didn’t care for the adult talk

She moaned as Anu detangled her hair

“Jao jaakar diya karo, hogaya iska, choti kar deti hoon, subah naha lena”

“Ewww… I am washing it tonight, I cant be a telumal”

“Chupppp ek dum” Anu whispered

“Kya huaaa?”

“Dadi chillayengi raat ko nahayi to, she has a rule for every damn thing”

“DUDE DADI IS CRAY” Diya yelled

Viveka smacked her

“Shame on u, just shut up”

“Karuna se seekho, she never talks like this”

“Sure, Papa says you should not compare and NEWSFLASH MA COMPARES”

“Jao” Anu kicked her out

“AND I am telling Papa you are dissuading her from marrying a hot rich guy”

“Dissuading?” Anu was shocked

Viveka started to laugh

“I am not bunking classes and hanging out with cute boys OK” diya accused and walked off

“Chalo shuqr hai” Anu leaned back

Mother and daughter just swung back and forth on the swing

“I have a demon in flesh and blood for MIL Veev, I don’t wish that on anyone”

Viveka was emotional to hear her mother be so upset

“I had girls, I didn’t quit my job, I focused on my career, I make Papa cook, I have someone that comes in to cook when I am not in town, we have Chhoti (the cleaning lady) spending hours everyday doing all housework” “Every damn thing is a problem” “I don’t take style advise from Bua, I don’t buy a kundan set a month, I don’t buy jewelry from Fa’s stores on credit”

“I am sorry”

“I never want to willingly send u to a home where you will see worse”

“Hmmm”

“She will encourage her son to have an affair” Anu was unforgiving

Viveka felt like someone squeezed the life out of her

The thought of Raanav cheating on a business trip was not novel, it had crossed her mind a couple times, I mean wealthy men usually marry someone like Viveka to satisfy a parent, in this case Satyen

“I am sorry I should not have said that” Anu got up abruptly tipping over the jar of coconut oil

Lo and behold Dadi appeared like Krishna in the serial Mahabharat

“Kya giraaa?” she called out sprinting to the balcony, she was headed that way anyway, but how could she let a crisis go waste

“Ye lo… shaamo ko tel nahi girana chahiye, ghar mein shaadi hai aur tumhe kya kar diya”

“MERE se girah ai Dadi” Viveka said coldly

“Ma beti baithkar kya saazish mein lagi ho?”

“Ma mujhe bata rahi hain shaadi ke baad kaise ghar ke kaam mann se karna padega”

“Who to hai… isne to kabhi man se kiya nahi, tujhe sikha de rahi hai?”

Viveka wanted to squeeze the oil out of the rag on Dadi’s head

“Ma ko taane kyon kas rahi hain aap?”

Anu was washing her hands in the bathroom

“Tum chaar chaar ho ghar par, Dadu ne 3 baje pakorey maange Diya apne maal mein dukaan par thi, Na Karuna ne banayi na Naina ne”

“KARUNA NE BANAYI dadi” Viveka sat back on the swing

“Maine shuru kiya bas usne tal diya”

Anu tried walking off directly from the bathroom

“Do din se kam khaayi hoon main mere liye ek subzi aur bana liyo” she ordered Anubha

“Jee Amma” Anu left

“Raat ko zyaada khaogey aap to bathroom jaana padega” Viveka controlled a giggle

“”Pair Dadu ka toota hai mera nahi” “Waha sasural jaakar saasu ma se nahi karna aisi baat”

Viveka walked off after cleaning up and covering the shiny oily marble spot of the floor with a balcony floor mat

If Dadi fell then everyone would be dead

She helped Karuna with homework, knocked on Naina’s door and went to her room and texted Raanav

“Busy ho?”

“Just hanging with friends”

“All 1000 of them?”

“No a handful less”

“995?”

He sent a smile emoji

She paced the room, took a shower and returned to Papa’s note on her study desk “Do u want to watch the World Economic Forum talk? “On YT?”

She wrote a “I would love to” and took the note back to Papa’s night stand and pasted it there

He watched her walk away tho he was not on his work call yet

They both laughed

She helped Ma with serving dinner, Chhoti had come in to make the subzi Anu did not care anymore tho Dadi hated food made by the help

Though Chhoti was a fantastic cook

“Main Dadu Dadi ki roti bana leti hoon, aap sabki bana do” Anu told Chhoti

Viveka went back to her room when her phone rang it was Ishwar from her NGO

She talked to him for a few minutes and hung up and checked her messages

“Did u have a Q?” Raanav had asked

“Nahi… abhi nahi”

How can u tell him you’ve been told he will most certainly have an affair

“Uffff” she sighed walking over to the balcony

It was a muggy sticky Oct evening

Satyen didn’t have an affair… Smrita seemed happy

Why would Raanav

How would I deal with it if he did?

She stared down at kids playing American football

From the 10th floor it looked like the oblong ball, could have been rugby too

In twilight she was not sure

He called her

“Kidhar ho?” she demanded

He smiled “I am walking outside the pub”

“Kidhar hai pub?”

“GK1”

“No book readings?” he asked sensing she was upset about something

“Aaj nahi hai bataya na”

“Do u want to come over?” I can send the driver”

“No I have a hot date tonight”

“With who” he asked silkily

“Papa… watching a Davos video on social enterprise” she said quietly

“What is bothering you?”

“Tumhe kyon lag raha hai aisa?” she asked trying to keep her voice from quivering

“Because it’s a topic that makes u delirious with excitement”

“Oh I am excited” she said weakly

“U could have me fooled”

“Will you have an affair when you get bored of me?” she asked abruptly

She heard him suck his breath in in shock

“No I will not Viveka”

She felt hot tears flow down her cheeks, she nodded unable to get a response out, as her throat was closing in with emotion

She was cool level headed mature, pleasant, unperturbed one

They hadn’t even begun yet, she was overwhelmed already

Between Smrita’s behavior and her own personal moral compass questioning her about her brazen decision to ignore Naina’s feelings, Anubha’s experience with Dadi and the nagging fear that no matter what this whole thing is a bloody hoax that is bound to unravel some day

She sniffled

“Do u want to meet me?” he asked softly

“Arey nahi” “Sorry… main theek hoon” she laughed and pushed her glasses up with her signature “Ufff”

“Do u want to meet me tomorrow?”

“Kal Sunday hai, Bua ke ghar jaana hai”

“later?” “At 4?”

She blew her nose, and hit mute and shut her eyes and calmed herself down taking a few deep breaths

“Viveka?”

“I am sorry I should not have asked that question”

“I am fine” he said quietly

“Tum bhi pooch sakte ho mujhe” she sniffle chuckled

“I better not, because the odds of u being bored with me are far greater and sooner” he said softly flattering her

She felt her whole body shake and her eyes welled up with tears

“Oh how could he be so gorgeous and real” she let another “Uffff” escape

Edited by Nisha0604 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

I feel bad Viveka....Ranaav needs to seriously have chat with his mother. Does he not know how his mother feels about Viveka?

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Posted: 4 years ago

“She will encourage her son to have an affair” Anu was unforgiving

Viveka felt like someone squeezed the life out of her


Costly slip!!! Though she's not entirely wrong as Smri is wanting that affair to happen!! But still to be blurting it out like that in front of veev, She is all over the place like the gasket mess !! She needs to put a lid on it just for Viveka's sake!! Diya called her out!! Dissuading ?! Hmmm !! Not too far away from the mark!!! She needs to be careful !!!

She's tensed. She's worried , yes but such kind of of observations and statements are spilling over to Viveka , that's not exactly ideal. She can't live her daughter's life .... Viveka is an adult , it's her choice and she'll learn to manage her marriage !!!

Edited by Errrantnomad - 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Errrantnomad

“She will encourage her son to have an affair” Anu was unforgiving

Viveka felt like someone squeezed the life out of her


Costly slip!!! Though she's not entirely wrong as Smri is wanting that affair to happen!! But still to be blurting it out like that in front of veev, She is all over the place like the gasket mess !! She needs to put a lid on it just for Viveka's sake!! Diya called her out!! Dissuading ?! Hmmm !! Not too far away from the mark!!! She needs to be careful !!!

She's tensed. She's worried , yes but such kind of of observations and statements are spilling over to Viveka , that's not exactly ideal. She can't live her daughter's life .... Viveka is an adult , it's her choice and she'll learn to manage her marriage !!!

You took the words out of my mouth!

That is very hurtful to say to your daughter. I am not saying the doubts on their future are not valid but to phrase it like that will set up Viveka to start questioning herself and whether she is enough for Raanav. that is not who Viveka is or should become. She is not insecure.

Edited by kalavathi5 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

^^ also isn't it like she is thinking raanav have no mind of his own that he will dance on mom's tune (to think akash supported her so much?) Or that he's so horrible to do it in future. Is the class difference or smrita is her only reason for uneasiness or that she's not sure about her soon to be SIL too.

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In a marriage, both get to make the rules!! . In a good marriage, There are rules Expectations and yet there's enough freedom to be who you are. The most basic I would expect is NO CHEATING!!! Rich, middle, lower middle , traveling , no work travel.... doesn't matter!!

Anubha travels widely! Wouldn't an aspersion of an affair while being out for work hurt her and she'll die inside? Pause and think.... Anubha's successful work travel and promotions are testament to her dedication and brilliance. What if someone casually alludes to!! Oh you know she makes this international trips.... she recently got a promotion too.....

I might be be little too critical of Anubha but In the last few updates, I felt she's a little jaded(?) wary of extended relationships in general. After Dadi has moved in, it feels like Anubha too has developed claws.

Viveka has clearly said, once she commits there's no looking back for her but she also knows that that holds if the marriage abides to basic rules and expectations .

Edited by Errrantnomad - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Anu went a little too far. Once the words are spoken, you can not take them back. No matter which guy Viveka marries, the potential problems with the mother in law can never be ruled out. Even if she marries a middle class guy, the mother in law can still be horrible. Anu put up with it all her life, her daughter may have to do the same. What will make the difference is whether the husband supports her or not.

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Posted: 4 years ago

If a man wants to cheat his wife, he will, there need not be a reason for it. And such mentality exists in every class of the society. The richest of the richest to the poorest can practice adultery.

Anu had thought Abhishek was the best but he turned to be an a**hole.

I do get Anu's fears but accusing some one that he might practice adultery is not right.

Maybe Viveka should tell Anu about Abhishek


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Posted: 4 years ago

One does not need encouragement from someone to cheat. If they are going to do it, they will. If they will not, no enticement will make them.

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Originally posted by: coderlady

Anu went a little too far. Once the words are spoken, you can not take them back. No matter which guy Viveka marries, the potential problems with the mother in law can never be ruled out. Even if she marries a middle class guy, the mother in law can still be horrible. Anu put up with it all her life, her daughter may have to do the same. What will make the difference is whether the husband supports her or not.


Damn Right!!!! Yep!!

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