Summer Palace Drikshit,Asya,Ronakshi,Mehrya,AdYa SS - Page 7

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They met some people who know the history of the Palace.

One person named Tej:Shaurya..you the young Prince of this Palace.Still you don't know the history?

Shaurya bowed down in shame.

Tej:Today's generation is like that.They don't want to know anything about their ancestors. They just need fame from the ancestors.Pathetic.

Another person named Andy:You are proud of your grand father as he was a great King.But do you know how he was?Do you have the guts to bear the truth?

Shaurya:I am willing to face any bitter truth now.My friends and I just want to know the truth.Only then we can get peace of mind.

Andy:Then listen....

Flash back....

Prince Karn and Princess Uruvi were deeply in love with each other.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Ek Dil Hai
Ek Jaan Hai
Dono Tujhpe…
Dono Tujhpe

Qurbaan Hain
Ek Main Hoon,

Ek Imaan Hai
Dono Tujhpe
Haan Tujhpe
Dono Tujhpe
Qurbaan Hain
Ek Dil Hai…
Aaaaaaaaaaa…
Ishq Bhi Tu Mera Pyar Bhi Tu
Meri Baat Zaat Jazbaat Bhi Tu

Parwaaz Bhi Tu Rooh-E-Saaz Bhi Tu
Meri Saans Nabz Aur Hayaat Bhi Tu
Mera Raaz Bhi Tu
Pukhraj Bhi Tu

Meri Aas Pyaas Aur Libaas Bhi Tu
Meri Jeet Bhi Tu, Meri Haar Bhi Tu
Mera Kaaj Raaj Aur Mizaaj Bhi Tu…
Mere Ishq Ke,
Har Maqaam Mein
Har Subaha Mein,
Har Shaam Mein
Ik Rutba Hai,
Ek Shaan Hai

Dono Tujhpe
Haan Tujhpe

Dono Tujhpe
Haan Tujhpe

Dono Tujhpe
Qurbaan Hain

Ek Dil Hai
Ek Jaan Hai

Dono Tujhpe…

Dono Tujhpe

Qurbaan Hain

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa…(Padmavat).

One day Shaurya's grand father happened to meet Uruvi and fell in love with her at first sight.

He proposed to her:Rajkumari Uruvi...seeing you the emotion of love aroused in me.I imagine you as my wife.Will you be my life partner?

Uruvi became upset.

Uruvi:Please forgive me Maharaj Harihar..but my heart goes to Rajkumar Karn.I can only be his wife.I cannot imagine anyone else in his position as my life partner.

Harihar burnt with the pain of rejection.

He considered Prince Karn as his biggest enemy.

Harihar fought against Karn in the war.

He won the battle by killing him and acquiring his Kingdom.

Uruvi was shattered seeing Karn lifeless near her.

But before Uruvi could mourn his death Harihar

married her forcefully.

Harihar tried to touch Uruvi romantically.Uruvi shoved him with hatred.

Uruvi:Don't dare to touch me.I am only for Karn.

Harihar:You are forgetting that Karn is no more.

Uruvi:Even though Karn is not in this world our souls are connected.You thought that by killing Karn you can get me?Then you are a fool Maharaj.I will never let you win.

Uruvi took a bow and arrow to kill him shocking him.

But at the right time Harihar held her hand preventing her from killing him.

He threw away the bow and the arrow.

Harihar:I love you a lot Rani Uruvi.But my love for you is not more important than my life.So as self defense I have to do something which I hate the most to do.

Uruvi:You do anything.But I will finish you as you murdered my Karn brutally.

Uruvi took a knife from the near by table and tried to stab him.But Harihar stabbed her to save himself.

Urvi fell down dead.

Harihar felt upset.

Harihar:I really love you Rani Uruvi.But you made a mistake by trying to kill me.I can't forgive you for that.

Present....

Tej:After that Harihar married another woman.She is your real great grand mother Shaurya as she was the one who gave birth to your grand father.The people say that Uruvi's soul is still roaming around without any peace.She is craving to take revenge.

Shaurya:But my great grand father who did injustice to her is not alive now.Then what revenge she has to take?

Andy:She hates your palace as her blood fell there and her biggest enemy Maharaj Harihar stayed there.So she wants to kill whoever stays there.So not only in this place but she will follow you guys anywhere you go in this place.Because she knows that you all stay in that palace.

Mehek:I think Aditya was right.She saw your great grand mother Uruvi's spirit when we went out.

Zoya:Ya..possible.

Rakshit:We did a blunder by not believing Aditya.

They all returned to the palace.

Shaurya:I can't believe that my great grand father was so cruel.Everyone respected me as I am his grand son.But now I am ashamed to be his grand son.

Rohit:But these are speculations.We have no proof.None of your ancestors are alive to confirm whether it's true or not.

Sonakshi:It could be true Rohit.Otherwise why would anyone try to kill the innocent people like us?Who else can be so angry with us to kill us?

Rohit:That is also a point.

Drishti:I think the woman who killed Alekha and tried to kill me is Rani Uruvi.

Zoya:If so,I think Rajkumar Karn's soul is also with Rani Uruvi and his spirit only tried to kill me.

Rakshit:May be.

They all looked at Uruvi's picture on the wall.

Karan:Can't believe that she is a cruel revengeful soul who wants to kill innocent people like us just because we stay in this palace.

Shaurya:Let us all leave this palace to save ourselves.

Drishti:No Shaurya.We should put an end to this problem.If we leave this Palace will remain haunted forever.As the heir of this Palace don't you think that you need to purify this Palace?

Shaurya was confused.

Mehek:Drishti is right Shaurya.As the heir of this Palace you have some responsibilities.You need to protect your palace from evil spirits.

Drishti:I think we should conduct a puja to get rid of the spirits.

Mehek:But Drishti...when somebody pushed me to the pool I did'nt feel that it's a spirit's job.I felt that it's a human being.

Asad:Though I experienced the spirit's power here that day when I tried to save Zoya from the killer I also did'nt feel that it's a ghost.

Rakshit:It's so confusing.

All were in a dilemma.

The next day...

All of them entered Drishti's room singing happy birthday song to her.

She smiled.

Rakshit:In the evening we are planning a small celebration.So be ready.

Drishti:So much happened here.We don't know whether our friends are alive or not.Now how can we be in a mood to party?

Rakshit:No Drishti.Everything will be alright.I really feel that nothing has happened to our friends and all of them will return once we trap the killer or the Uruvi-Karn's ghosts who are after our blood.

Drishti:I hope it really happens.Missing all of them.

Zoya:We also miss them all.

Mehek:But we can't just live in tension.We need celebration also.

Sonakshi:And how can we miss our dearest friend Drishti's birthday celebration?

Drishti smiled slightly.

Rohit-Sonakshi went for shopping to buy a dress for the party.

Sonakshi:Rohit...I am confused.Which dress should I wear for the party?

Rohit picked up a purple dress.

Rohit:This one will look good on you.Simple and elegant.

She smiled.

Rohit held her from behind.

Rohit:I can't wait to see you in this dress.

She smiled.

Rohit:When you wear this dress I will...

Rohit lifted her up in his arms.

Rohit:I will carry you in my arms like this.

Sona:Rohit...what is this?Put me down.It's a public place.

Rohit smiled:No..

Sona:Rohit...

Manager of the shop came seeing it with a shock:Romance is not allowed here.Go home and romance.

Rohit-Sona got embarrassed.Rohit put her down.

Rohit:He is jealous.

Rohit-Sona burst into laughter.

Drishti got ready.

Drishti:I don't have the lipstick which matches my dress.I feel incomplete.

Mehek:Sonakshi has this colour lipstick.

Drishti:But she has gone for shopping.

Zoya:So what?We are her friends.If you take her cosmetics box from her bag she won't say anything.So take it from her bag.

Drishti:Ok.

Mehek took Sonakshi's bag and opened it.

Drishti searched for the cosmetics box.Suddenly a photograph fell down from her bag.

Zoya took the photograph.

It was their group photograph which has Sonakshi,Karan,Rohit,Rakshit,Drishti,Yug,Alekha,Asad,Zoya,Aditya,Aliya,Mehek and Shaurya.All the faces excluding Sonakshi's face was circled.

Zoya was shocked.

Zoya:Look at this photograph.

Mehek and Drishti looked at it and got shocked.

Zoya:Is Sonakshi the killer?

Mehek:Is she the woman who attacked Drishti and stabbed Alekha?

Drishti:How is it possible?The same time Sonakshi was with you all.

Zoya:Right,Sonakshi was with us when you and Alekha got attacked.But this photograph in her bag shows that she has something to do with the murder.Otherwise why only her face is not circled in this photograph?

They all got confused and tensed.

Is Sonakshi the killer or the real killer/ghost is trapping her?

Oh god past was so bad poor urvi and Karan.

All feel bad not to believe Aditya.

All are dilmema whether it's gosht or human.

I too feel it's human can't say.

Drikshit scene cute.

Rohit and Sonakshi scene were Lovely.

They found photographer from Sonakshi bag.

I don't why but sometimes I doubt on Karan or may be ghost weird guessed update soon

Karn and uruvi would have every reason to be revengeful. But are they the ones killing everyone? If the picture is to be believed, it could be plot using the ghost story to dispel suspicion.

If this is s plot, whats their motive?

Nice update

Love it

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Cont soon

Part 7

Fantastic Part

Its true that all these couples should decide to leave

this palace but then again it might be difficult for all

to make that decision

Drishti is right

how can Sonakshi be the killer , no it has to be

this spirit or ghost

The flashback scenes of Karn and Uruvi reminded me of Raabta but the story was change, I just got reminded by seeing Tejasswi crying over his death

Maharaj Harihar married Uruvi and tried to romance her but Uruvi hates him

She tried killing him but got killed instead

All are in a dilemma

RoNakshi shopping scene was romantic

I think the murderer is Karan

Impressive update..... well written!

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Summer Palace Part 8

Sorry for not showing much couple romance.

Zoya:I can't understand one thing.If Sonakshi is behind the murder attempts then what about the revengeful ghost Uruvi and Karn?We had felt the power of supernatural force when Asad tried to open the door.

Drishti:Even Aditya and Aliya witnessed an evil spirit.

Mehek:Oh God.It's so confusing.But now I think we should concentrate on Sonakshi.One by one we will solve all the riddles.

Zoya:I feel that Sonakshi is not alone.She has a helping hand for sure.Who can be that person?

Mehek:It can be Rohit.

Drishti:No.I don't think that it is Rohit as he is very innocent.

Zoya:That is also right.

Mehek:But we thought that even Sonakshi is innocent.But she betrayed us.So we can't trust Rohit also blindly.

Drishti:I think we should not judge anyone in a hurry.Even though we got this photograph from Sonakshi's bag we need more proofs to conclude that Sonakshi is the culprit.What if the real killer is trying to divert our attention to Sonakshi?

Zoya:Yes.We will patiently try to find out the truth.Till then we should tell this matter to anyone else..not even to our boy friends.

Mehek:Yes.

Drishti:Ok.

Drishti cut the cake

and fed it to Rakshit.

Rakshit:Drishti...will you feed me cake on every birthday of yours forever?

Drishti smiled:Are you proposing me like this Rakshit?

Rakshit smiled:You can interpret it any way.But I need your answer.

She blushed.

Drishti smiled looking at him:Whatever...I promise you that till the end before everyone ,I will feed you my birthday cake.

He smiled.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Mehek:Hey Drishti....the cake is only for Rakshit?

Zoya:Feed us also cake.

Rakshit and Drishti blushed.

Drishti fed the cake to others.When she reached near Sonakshi her fingers shivered.

Sonakshi:What happened Drishti?

Zoya and Mehek gestured 'no' to Drishti.

Drishti hid her fear and faked a smile and said:Nothing Sona.

Drishti fed the cake to Sonakshi.

All the couples danced.

Sholon si sholon si
tere ankhon ki yeh roshni
kiske liye hai kiske liye hai
chandni chandni,

tere chehre ki yeh chandni
kiske liye hai kiske liye hai
tera muskurana nazar yun jhukana
tera muskurana nazar yun jhukana
mere liye hai bas mere liye hai
sholon si sholon si
tere ankhon ki yeh roshni
kiske liye hai kiske liye hai
chandni chandni tere chehre
ki yeh chandini
kiske liye hai kiske liye hai
samjho mera joh ishara hai
joh bhi hai mera woh tumhara hai
samjho mera joh ishara hai
joh bhi hai mera woh tumhara hai
lehar mein koi hoon khoyi

manzil toh hai tu kinara hai
yeh meri adayaein yeh meri wafaein
yeh meri adayaein yeh meri wafaein
tujhko pata hai sab tere liye hai
sholon si sholon si
meri ankhon ki yeh roshni

tere liye hai tere liye hai
chandni chandni mere
chehre ki yeh chandni

tere liye hai tere liye hai
haske dikha do deewane ko
jo ho raha hai ho jane do
haske dikha do deewane ko
jo ho raha hai ho jane do
dil ki ye uljhan zubaan pe
aati hai toh aa bhi jane do

yeh hothon ki narmi
yeh sanson ki garmi
yeh hothon ki narmi
yeh sanson ki garmi

mere liye hai bas mere liye hai
sholon si sholon si
teri ankhon ki yeh roshni
kiske liye hai kiske liye hai
chandni chandni tere
chehre ki yeh chandni
kiske liye hai kiske liye hai
tera muskurana nazar yun jhukana
tera muskurana nazar yun jhukana
mere liye hai bas mere liye hai(Shabd).

After the dance the boys got drunk.

Suddenly Drishti,Mehek and Zoya noticed that Sonakshi is missing.

Drishti:Where did Sonakshi go?

Zoya:No idea.But I feel that she is up to something.

Mehek:Oh no..

Zoya:What happened Mehek?

Mehek:Look at the boys.Karan is missing.

Zoya:Oh no...Is she targeting Karan now?It is easier for her to finish Karan secretly in this circumstance.

Drishti:Oh no.We should save Karan.

Zoya:Yes.

They rushed out.

They ran towards Karan's room.

They were shocked to see Sonakshi near Karan.

Sona:Karan,I know what you feel for me.You love me.Right?Don't try to hide from me anymore.I realized that you love me.

Karan's eyes became wet.

He said emotionally:Yes,I love you a lot Sona.

Drishti:Damn it.Karan is revealing all his real feelings as he is drunk.

Mehek:What do you mean?

Drishti:Karan loves Sonakshi secretly.

Zoya-Mehek were shocked:What?

Drishti:Yes.He was hiding his love as Sonakshi loves Rohit.But now Karan is not in his senses as he is drunk.So his feelings are coming out before Sonakshi.

Sonakshi:I also love you Karan.

Drishti,Mehek and Zoya were shocked.

Mehek:What is this Sonakshi saying?

Karan was surprised:What did you say?You love me?

Sonakshi nodded.

Karan:Then Rohit?

Sona:I realized that it's not Rohit,but you are my true love Karan.

Karan could not believe it.

Karan became emotional:Sona!

Sonakshi started singing and dancing around Karan in a seductive manner.

Karan forgot himself and started dancing with her.

Drishti,Mehek and Zoya were shocked.

Ang laga de re
Mohe rang laga de re.
Ang laga de re
Mohe rang laga de re
Main to teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

Jog laga de re
Prem ka rog laga de re
Main to teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

Ram ratan dhan
Lagan magan man
Tan mora chandan re
Ujli kori preet pyaasat
Rang laga de re

Karan forgot himself and started dancing with her passionately.

Ang laga de re
Mohe rang laga de re
Main to teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

Raat banjar si hai
Kaale khanjar si hai
Raat banjar si hai
Kaale khanjar si hai
Tere seene ki lau
Mere andar bhi hai
Tu hawa de ise
To mera tan jale
Jala de re sang jala de re
Mohe rang laga de re
Main to teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

Raas hai raat mein
Teri har baat mein
Raas hai raat mein
Teri har baat mein
Bolo main kya karoon
Aise halaat mein
Hoon main teri malang
Tu hi mera nasha
Chadha de re bhang chadha re
Prem ki bhang chadha re
Main to teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

Jog laga de re…
Prem ka rog laga de re
Main to teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

Ram ratan dhan
Lagan magan man
Tan mora chandan re
Ram ratan dhan
Lagan magan man
Tan mora chandan re
Ram ratan dhan
Lagan magan man
Tan mora chandan re
Ram ratan dhan
Lagan magan man
Tan mora chandan re
Ram ratan dhan
Lagan magan man
Tan mora chandan re(Ram Leela).

Drishti:Sonakshi is taking advantage of Karan's innocent love for her and like a fool Karan fell in her trap.

Zoya:I never thought that Sonakshi is so cunning.We should stop them.

Mehek:Karan should not get trapped by Sonakshi.

But before they could go near them,Sonakshi took a knife

and stabbed Karan.

Karan's body started bleeding and his blood splashed all over Sonakshi.She had a victorious smile on her face.

Drishti,Mehek and Zoya were shocked.

Sonakshi tried to stab him again.But Karan held her hand.

Karan:Sona..we love each other.Then why did you do this to me?Why did you betray me?

Suddenly Sonakshi caught Karan by his neck

and pushed him.

Then she stabbed him again and he closed his eyes.

Sonakshi blew air at him and his body disappeared.Sonakshi smirked.

Drishti,Mehek and Zoya got scared and ran away.

They reached a room far away from Karan's room.

Mehek:What was happening there?

Zoya:It means Sonakshi is a ghost.I can't believe that Sonakshi is a ghost.

Drishti:I think Sonakshi is possessed by the revengeful spirit Uruvi.

Mehek:Even if Sonakshi is possessed by Uruvi,she is dangerous as Sonakshi is now Uruvi.So we can't confront Sonakshi now.

Drishti:Yes.Now I feel that Sonakshi aka Uruvi killed our friends and made their bodies disappear like she killed Karan and made his body disappear.

Mehek:I also feel like that.

Mehek,Drishti and Zoya became very upset.

Drishti:But I feel that there is something more than we saw.I feel that the whole truth is not unveiled before us.I think to know the full truth we should open the door of that hidden room.

Zoya:What are you saying Drishti?How can we open the door?You know what happened to Asad when he tried to open the door.

Drishti:I remember well.But if we wear amulet nothing will happen to us.No evil spirit can harm us.We can open the door without any obstacle.

Mehek:Ok.We will do that.

They met a temple priest and got amulets from him.They tied the amulets and went near the door.They were scared to open the door.But Drishti opened the door.

Zoya:Drishti,are you alright?

Drishti:Yes.I am perfectly fine.This is the magic of the amulet.So the evil spirit could not stop me from opening the door.

Mehek and Zoya were relieved.

They entered the room.

There were many paintings made by Shaurya's uncle.Mehek,Zoya and Drishti were shocked to see some of the paintings.

Do you really think that it's Sonakshi who killed Karan?If it's not Sonakshi then who ?Or do you think that Sonakshi is a spirit?Or is Sonakshi possessed by the spirit?

So no one told even their bfs about Sona

Rakshit and Drishti cake scene was sweet

Dance was passionate

Boys were drunk and so Sona went to Karan and manipulated him by her fake love

When she stabbed him, I was reminded of Tara from ishq mein marjawan 😂

Felt sad seeing him sad

I told u earlier I m missing PreMar, thnx for the PreMar dance scene

Good that the girls decided to unlock the door wearing amulets

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