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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks alot mam🙏🏻🙏🏻Next to sosy this story is my favourite. Very interesting 👏🏻👏🏻🥳🥳🥳🥳

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Posted: 5 years ago

Dont want small ones . Whenever you are free pls update lengthy ones. Sorry for disturbing

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Posted: 5 years ago

Yes! This is the Shubhra we want to see. The one who doesn’t mind telling what she doesn’t like. It’s like Tapan is bringing a whole new Shubhra out. Nisha you really know how to shape up characters!!!!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

I can totally picture Simone Singh as Tara😃

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Posted: 5 years ago

I'm not sure guys. I would still want shubhra to fight her own battles . Its her battle with her parents and probably he got carried away meddling with her parents ordering Tara to back off . Today it's an issue and situation that has shubhra and Tapan on the same side. Tomorrow the issue, situation could be different , and if the warrior shoots his mouth off like how he did now and god forbid shubhra blasts him off for telling off her parents, it could get messy between the two.


Realy ? apology from a parent to a child? and vice versa ... how does that work? Especially in our culture? Then we would only have to be apologizing every second of the 24 hrs in a day for the liberties we take with our parents and the liberties they take with us children.


Yes, the daughter is in his bed in his house but It was not Tapan's place to order her mom off the way he did. What do you expect any mom to do? Oh okay beta, you have run away , you don't want to marry your fiancé, it's fine beta... come home whenever you please! What crap? Of course She's going to sunoafy her daughter to pull this kind of a stunt. It's not as if somebody tied shubhras mouth and hand when she said yes to marrying Pawan.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: jaschick

Glad that she was able to vocalize her dislike of Pawan to her without mincing words. New found courage and ability to make decision by just being with Tapan for a couple of days.


that was still not enough to get her courage to speak up against Tara when she is reigniting the old injuries and insults. Poor girl crouched and crying on the bed.

Thank god for Tapan stepping In and rescuIng her.


This poor girl crouched in her bed is a 30 yr old entrepreneur on her own merit Jas. If she can book a ticket to Chicago, she can fight her mom too. Tara suggested and pushed for her to meet Monga but who's decision was it to get engaged to him?!

So now if you decide to make your choice known now, don't cower and crouch and approach just one parent who's hapless anyways. She's making her plea to her father who anyways has no say in anything . If Tapan was actually having an influence on the way she thinks and does things, she would have been assertive against her mom and not just cower and cry like how she's doing now.

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Posted: 5 years ago

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I can totally picture Simone Singh as Tara😃


Yes her too! Before you mentioned I thought of kitu kidwani😊

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Posted: 5 years ago

This is the shub we want to see finally she atleast told her father

It's nice when people show care even if u can take care of themselves

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Posted: 5 years ago

A llllonnnggg one. I just cannot help getting these early morning and God forsaken hour brain storms🤣



I will say this. It's a huge call. Whichever way she swings now, there's no looking back. She needs to realize that and learn to be firm with her mother. When she decides to go ahead, pick up that damn phone and call that Monga guy too and tell him it's over. However a person he is, there was a commitment , you cannot up and leave the place as if he doesn't exist. If she doesn't leave a note to either her parents or her fiancé, of course they are going to get together and discuss where she could be. That Manik Grover sent a chabra to parul's is a natural follow up .


And that monga guy, he's going to be fuming , snoopy and sneaky too. What else do you expect him to do? He asked shubh. She said no there is nothing anymore between us . He called Tapan and was told a similar there's nothing between us. What monga feared is what eventually is happening to him . So one can't be expecting that there's going to be no fallout.


The reality that's hitting her now is entirely her doing. The least she can do is take responsibility now and tell Tara and Pawan monga it's over.


Her warrior of course is taking charge entirely for her business or personal problems . And that's extremely nice and caring of Tapan . But if we look at it , If her perceived individuality was her main problem around a controlling monga, isn't that the same problem around her warrior Tapan albeit in an altogether different manner?


Today a goon at the doorstep of parul Gagan's can be worrisome for their darling Arya's safety like how Tapan thinks. Her flying to Chicago is not the real problem. The real added irritation for everyone concerned here is actually the price shubh has to pay for going incommunicado for a week.


Shubra is an adult. She can and should take the Prasad ladoos she's getting from her family and her betrothed now. Yes it's sticky, but then it always was.


Nisha had earlier mentioned that shubhra's energy and feisty spirit comes in bursts on and off when she's around people whom she loves and that On her own , she's not somebody who can stand very firm. I guess It's a similar thing happening now. Nothing is majorly changed. Not yet anyways IMO

Edited by Errrantnomad - 5 years ago
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"What will I say?" she panicked sitting up, looking for her upper body clothing

He found them for her on the carpet and handed them to her as she sulked

"Kya kehkar aayi tum wahan se?" he grumbled

"Kuch bhi nahi"

"Shabaash!" he chuckled

"Tapannn" she turned around after hooking her b--

"Tapan tapan kar rahi ho, tumhe rula woh rahe hain" he shouted

He grabbed her phone off the bed, and turned back its volume

It began ringing again

"Lo ek aur call" he gave the phone back when it began ringing

She was trying to find her scuncie now, looking under the bed on the sides

"What should I say?" she crouched on the other side of the bed

"Kya dhoond rahi ho?" he demanded without taking her call

"My hair thing" she complained

"Answer the damn phone Shubhra"

It began to ring again

He went over to her side flipped the duvet and found it and handed it back to her, there was a knock on the door

"tapannnn" she squealed

"Ruko yaar"

"Umm.. hello" she sat on the bed

It was her Dad wanting to know who answered last time

"Its the man I am in love with" she said softly

"WHO? Prasad?" her Dad accused

"Umm.. no" she didnt say his name

"Ghar aa ja puttar baat to karen"

Irene was back to fix the shower head

Parul called again wondering who Chhabra was

He had to tell her to be careful, he didnt know how to do it

Gagan was already asleep

"Shubhra se baat karengi aap" he asked sprinting to the bderoom she was in

"I took a week off work Dad I have to show houses and find houses to show, I cant be here for ever... I cant marry Pawan" she said shaking,

"Haan to theek hai beta aap aa to jao"

"Mujhe do phone" Tara was hissing

"she is the most uncaring, foolish kid any body could have had" Tara was hissing so loudly even Shubhra could hear it

"I dont want to talk to Mom"

"Nahi nahi beta" Manik acted like he was her ally "Mwah.. come home raje"

"Dont pamper her Manik, she has no gratitude... if it werent for me she would have Pawan willing to marry her" Tara was belligerent

"RUKO YAAR" manik shouted at Tara

"Dad I am going to hang up" Shubhra spoke nervously

"She is 31... does she even realize?" Tara had to throw that on her face

"Bye Dad"

"Lo baat karo" Tapan handed her the phone, and picked on her bra strp gently

"Tapannnn" she shouted, he gently freed the scuncie and dropped it on the carpet again

She bend down to pick it up with hair all over her face

"Argh!"

He pulled the edge of her tee down primly over her exposed belly when she stood up

"Tch" she was exasperated

As she tried to tie her hair up after hanging up on the call with Manik

"Hello jee" Parul tried to stifle her giggle

"Hi! Parul" Shubhra sat back on the bed giving up on tying her hair

"Tapannnn please baat karne do" she whispered, begged with both hands joined in prayer

"To main yaha khara hoon" he grinned impishly

"Parul... hi! I am just clumsy" she claimed panting

"No worries, kaisi ho?" Parul wanted to hear her say she is at Tapan's house

"I am good"

tapan was gone

"Tum batao" Parul bit her lower lip in amusement

"i just showed up at his front door" Shubhra said softly

"Arey wah"

"Weve just been fighting" Shubhra said tactfully

"Bas?"

"Umm.. yeah" she mumbled

Parul wanted her to share some juicy detail

"I am so jet lagged" Shubhra huffed

"bas larai aur neend? Haan?"

"Your brother is..."

"Jerk? ass----? "

"NO.. I mean hes very umm"

"Kya...?"

"I am glad I came" Shubhra said finally

"i am too" Parul whispered

"He drives me crazy"

"sabke saath yahi haal hai" Parul laughed

"Wahin shaadi nahi kar lena achha, mujhe karni hai suki shaadi" Parul warned

"Hmm" Shubhra nodded blushing

"I am crazy about him Parul" Shubhra let it out finally

The women went into silence

"I saw it in his eyes... thanks for sharing that" Parul choked up

Shubhra teared up too

"Don't tell him" shubhra warned

"Why not?" Parul was shocked

"He already harasses me too much"

"Yeh baat hai?" Parul teased her back

Irene and Tapan showed up in the doorway

"I will call you back, Parul go to bed... its really late?"

"Getting rid of me? I get it" Parul chuckled

"Irene-Shubhra; Shubhra-Irene"

"Hi!!"

The women hugged each other

"she thought we were dating... I am sorry I have to say that to you I bet you find that insulting" Tapan laughed

"Shes gorgeous" Irene sighed

"He said his girlfriend was home" Shubhra shouted

"Oh yeah... and that too" Tapan winked

"I am just the person who he trusts a lot" Irene smiled stepping back a little

"Good to meet you Irene"

"Am I invited to the wedding?" Irene demanded

Tapan watched Shubhra blush

"Umm.. I dont know.. when we will get married.." "I just showed up one day" Shubhra declared nervously "So many people to fight"

"Oh yeah thatt" Irene listened

"When we do... or if we... you should come"

She looked at Tapan so he would voice his endorsement

His expression showed shock at her "IF we get married" line

"Whats going on?" he came back to enquire after bolting the front door after Irene left

"Its a mess Tapan" she sat down nervously

"Hua kya yaar"

"dad keh rahe hain waapis aa ja" "Nahi to main aata hoon,"

"Pawan is saying "Its Ok we can sort it out"

"Ask him to go beep himself" Tapan grit his teeth

"Dad is unwilling to even listen... meri sun nahi rahe hain"

"To?"

"Mere se shaadi karke tum mushkil ho jaogey"

"I get it... saving me huh?" he was pissed

Her mother had been texting her paragraphs

"I am ashamed of you Pawan tells me you are having an affair with that married man!!"

"Ive seen him at your Noida apartment, how did you even think I would let you hook up with some middle class loser?"

"Does he work at a bank pushing files? or does he own some godforsaken dukaan?"

Pawan was harassing her as well

"I am surprised you snuck off like that"

"Did you think about your Dad's reputation? I would say My family's as well but you obviously didnt care"

"theres just too much shit going on" she whispered

"About what?"

"Umm.. just drama" she spoke evasively

"Dikhao mujhe phone"

"nahi Tapann" she refused weakly

"Dar rahi ho?"

"TUMSE?" NAHI TO!" she was so sure, it didnt take a second to air that out

His expression softened

"To?"

"tapan mere Dad"

His jaw tighetened

"Mujhe DEKHNE do.... honeyyy please" he begged

She colored when he used the endearment he often used when he made love

"nahi, tum gussa karogey" she leaned on the wall tucking the phone in her back pocket

"Do mujhe phone" he crowded her

"You keep looking for a reason to fight" she declared

He laughed shaking his head

"Main ladta hoon?"

"haan"

"Achha phone do"

He pulled her closer, and in a swift motion pulled it out of her pocket and saw her Mom's next text tirade as it came in

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