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Posted: 5 years ago

Hardly surprising from pawan . Yes it's irritating but I would still give it to him here. What else can we expect from a control freak here

He obvio is not getting the full promise from shubhra here on the commitment part.I mean we are talking about a guy here who probably calendarizes even his brushing teeth , lunch , bfast dinner time. If he could program his ablution activities, he would do that too without skipping a beat!!!

I'm assuming he will not even trust his paid sources if he puts them to snoop on shubhra and Tapan! The thing he will do is ok I'm going to ask him straight . He does exactly that!!!


In a way it's good! Tapan now knows that time is running out. Carpe Runem! Carpe Diem! Seize the run! Seize the Day!


Gather ye rosebuds while ye may—you never know what tomorrow will bring.Youth is a fleeting thing, so gather ye rosebuds while ye may.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Take over or Take your breath away

She didnt come to know of his spying until much later,

The way he would pry was when they met for lunch in GK II

when he had gotten her to share enough details for his FB prowl

Just more digging from him

"Are you working in Delhi now?"

"I have three offices" he smiled proudly

"Oh?"

"Bangalore Delhi, Hyderabad"

"Ooh! I love biryani" she gushed

"I will bring you some next time I go"

"Oh no "

"Of course I will no problem shubhra, aakhir aapki icchha sar aankhon par

He placed a hand on his head

His ripping muscles on full display on his arm

she tried not to look clearing her throat at the obvious display of manliness

He had ordered a shrimp salad for her

she wanted to eat their lachha parantha and paneer bhurji her friend Nidhi had recommended that over WA that morning

"You don't have any cheat meals?" she asked

"rarely, discipline bhi koi baat hoti hai na"

"Woww... I will fail miserably"

"Kyon?"

"Mere friend ke ghar shaadi thi I was invited to so many functions, I ate and ate and ate... maine ek kilo halwa kha liya hoga" she laughed hysterically almost snorting trying to hold it down

His expression changed to curiosity

"The friend in NOIDA?"

"Yeah she lives in an adjacent building"

"Oh yeah u told me... Thapliyal right?" he was deliberately wrong

"No, Acharyas" Shubhra said guilelessly

"Haan haan tumne woh pic dikhayi mujhe"

She smiled and nodded

"The mother is your friend?"

"Yeah Parul is super sweet you can meet her when ever we meet in NOIDA I have a standing invite to dinner at her place"

"Why?" he was shocked

"Kyon ki main bas Maggi banati hoon"

"Your Hindi is so different"

I didnt speak much growing up, only English”

“Ah, you should learn Punjabi and Hindi my beeji will espect it” he squeezed her hand

“Gosh! Punjabi is so difficult”

“I can teach you... badle mein kuch le loonga” he squeezed again suggestively

She pulled away as if stung

“Umm..”

S-- games with him was not exactly something she was visualizing

“Kya hua?”

“Kuch nahi”

“Honeymoon mein kamre mein zyaada rahenge bahar kam aisi jagah dhoondooga jo bahar bakwas hai”

He cracked himself up

“We don’t even know when the wedding is so we shouldnt rush” she offered

“Let me plan it” he assured her

“Hmm”

“Kya hua?”

“Kuch nahi” she ate quietly

“Abhi yaar yahan ladna shuru mat karo”

He was dellusional she thought, she was not even mad at him, just a cold resignation

He was assuming she cared enough to fight

No... she fought with few

She fought with one... a man that inflamed, exasperated and bothered her, infuriated her

She didnt feel anything for this dude why would she argue?

He was umm... she stopped herself from saying anything else in her mind

“Our first fight” he declared like a pompous ass

“I am fine, pick any place no really!” she smiled

“Jaanta hoon yaar tum chidi hui ho”

“Gawd!!” she cursed under her breath inaudibly, SMH virtually, laughing at his preposterous conclusion


He had after a day called Tapan to ask about Shubhra



~~~

Tapan had called Parul on FT that night after flinging his phone

“mera phone toot gaya mujhe aap ipad mein text karen”

“KAISE?” she was shocked

“Umm”

“Kya hua?”

He didnt say anything just changed the topic

A week later he called her again

“Di aapki baat hui Shubhra se?”

“nahi to, aajkal kam aati hai kyon?”

“Did she say anything?”

“she said her parents had found a guy they want her to meet”

“Ah”

“Kyon?”

“He called me to ask me how intimately I knew her” he said

Parul was stunned

“DID HE?” “OMG!” Parul was stunned

“Is your FB profile public?” he demanded

“Ruko dekhti hoon”

“Oh shit...” tha shaayad for a few days, when I was tryingt o clean it up I accidentally toggled it”

“What about Kusum’s? Nitin’s?”

“Pata nahi, poochhon?”

“Umm.. no I will” he said grimly

“Kya hua?”

“Looks like the slimeball has lurked and scavenged around”

“Slimeball?” Parul was shocked

“I really didnt care for that call, I flung my phone on the wall”

TAPANNNN” Parul gasped

“I know” he mumbled apologetically

“Did you tell Shubhra?”

“No I didnt” he said quietly

“WHYYY?”

“Why should I?”

“tapan yeh to galat hai... agar Nitin ne Kusum ke kisi male friend/BF/coworker ko call kiya hota to tum kya karte they?”

“I would have punched his teeth right in” Tapan was still livid

“Is she going to marry him?”

“I don’t know” “i guess?”

“tapann... main kuch kahoon?”

“Nope you stay out of it”

“I cant”

“No, dont”

“tapan please”

“Di, no”

“usko kaise maloom hoga phir?”

“she should figure it out” he said

That was all hunky dory until the person that took his breath away, spiced up his life, irked, riled and provoked him every waking moment happened to call him as soon as she found out

“WHAT did you say to him?” she demanded as soon as he answered

her call

They were going to have a bloody messy fight now...

~~~

Edited by Nisha0604 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Is she even hearing herself Nisha!

Woah! And She wants to introduce this jerk to parul!!!


How much more patronizing and condescending can pawan get? Every atom of his being is about displaying superiority, wanting every molecule around him to move or behave the way he wants them to?


I don't get a couple of things! One ...What stops her from saying no to this alliance!

Two .... what does she want Tapan to say about this situation ! Does she expect him to say ...oh ! Gentlemen don't kiss and tell ... since you are asking pawan , I have to confess... yeah dude! She's smoking hot! We had our moments ! Oh BTW she's got a sexy navel piercing that can make any man's loins go hard!! It's your turn! Go for it man!?

Did she want Tapan to tell all to pawan! I doubt that!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Can we get one more pls

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Posted: 5 years ago

She is a coward

She doesnt have the guts to come clean with Pawan and ask him to FO, doesnt have the courage to confront Tapan and tell him she is in love with him

She keeps telling herself "This is the right thing to get Tara off her back" permanently

Edited by Nisha0604 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

She is a coward

She doesnt have the guts to come clean with Pawan and ask him to FO, doesnt have the courage to confront Tapan and tell him she is in love with him

She keeps telling herself "This is the right thing to get Tara off her back" permanently


Yep! She keeps making these suicidal decisions now and then! I would think a known devil is better than an unknown ... how long will Tara continue to be a monkey on her back!!! Three? Four , five yrs!!! Compare that to a life with that know it all jerk!! Give me Tara any day!!! All you need is good earplugs to ward her off!

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Posted: 5 years ago

She is not a self confident person, her energy comes in bursts, and with select people, Tapan, Parul and Arya...

Saurabh, her Dad to a certain extent


She has given up

She wants to just go with whoever her Mom wants her to at this point

Her heart wants Tapan, but her mind knows he has scammed her and her Dad

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

She is not a self confident person, her energy comes in bursts, and with select people, Tapan, Parul and Arya...

Saurabh, her Dad to a certain extent


She has given up

She wants to just go with whoever her Mom wants her to at this point

Her heart wants Tapan, but her mind knows he has scammed her and her Dad


Aiyo. Why is this girl in such a mess ? Poor thing. Will she fight with Tapan and spill out her love

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nisha - can we have one more ?

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Posted: 5 years ago

Shub should not marry just to get her mother off her back unless she is sure . It can cause emo turmoil and loss of peace of mind

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