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Posted: 5 years ago

Pawan is one of those irritating characters who thinks he is an hero by butting in. Shubhra push him out. Don’t left anyone else control your work or your look (clothes or haircut). He is already being so controlling. He seems poisonous.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nisha - how’s the long weekend looking in your state. This week 3-4 families can meet as long as it is under 25 people. Slow opening. Let’s see. We aren’t doing much yet.

Can we have additional updates this weekend please ? 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

She should ask that ass**le to go F*** himself?!! Can you imagine how sweet life with Monga would be?!! Every minute , every second you would be second guessing every decision, every action, every word, every breath she takes.....it's not even been a couple of hrs since she set eyes on him and her mind voices are already shouting a 100 odd things .


This ordeal is getting tiring for her and for us. Why is she even putting up with this nonsense? Does she have a clue that she could be a bargaining chip in this whole haste farce of a non event?!!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

She doesn't want to move on if Tapan does not.

Pawan just gets creepier by the minute. He will never let her have any freedom. He will control every aspect of her life. Run for the nearest exit girl.

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Posted: 5 years ago

https://youtu.be/GxNIWEFtwMs


I liked this ! Kind of goes with the scene here.

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Posted: 5 years ago

E----c, Compassionate & Humanitarian

It could have been 7? or even before in Chicago, her phone buzzed when she was outside the portico for courtesy to see off Pawan

Her parents were there too

"Why?" he sent her fave question back to her

He made her weak in the legs just by three simple letters and a question mark

Like, what.. why?

She turned away from Pawan's Merc

Desperately to keep her connection with Tapan going

"I was curious" she told him

"Are you dating?" he asked without responding clearly

"You know Prasad"

"are you still dating him?"

"I saw him for a movie"

Pawan was looking at her as he tried to talk to her parents

"Nice"

"My parents"

"Yeah?"

"My parents.. umm.. found a guy"

"Great"

"His name is Pawan"

"K..."

"can you start dating?" she demanded

"Why?" he argued

"tapan please?"

He called her...

she turned startled as Pawan was right behind her

"Too many calls?" he reached for a hug and a smooch

Her mother was watching with great interest

She let her free arm touch his rib cage under his right arm and pulled away quick

"Good to meet you" she whispered nervously

"You know what we should do?

She couldnt hide the exasperation in her body language

She felt like a giddy teenager trying to get rid of her Mommy from her room so she could talk to her BF in peace

"I can text you?" she waved her phone at him

"This will take 5 minutes"

"Its my lawyer" she waved her phone again

"Thapliyal?" kya naam bola?"

He had actually seen the first few characters of Tapa"

"Yeah yeah" she nodded smiling weakly

Tapan was calling her again

she wanted to run upstairs lay in bed and talk all night

"Bebooo you are planning to return arent you?" Tara spoke out of turn

"aunty, I CAN DROP HER" pawan jumped up

"No, Ma I have to work" Shubhra almost sprinted backwards

"Are you sure?"

"You are too kind" she was getting increasingly flustered

"I am at her service aunty" Pawan laughed

"Godd!! Please... please make him leave" Shubhra begged in her mind

"Inni raat gaye, sahi keh rahi hai" Manik was fine with his daughter not leaving mehrauli

"I can text you" she waved her phone at him turned around and bolted

Did the stairs in threes, almost tripping, swinging from the hand rail at one point, tripping over a step

He called again

She panted "Hey" she gasped

""Where are you?" he panicked

"Umm.. nowhere" she mumbled slamming herself on her door opening and shutting it and leaning on it with eyes closed

That voice... it did things to her, lightheaded and woozy

the first time in her life she was behaving this way about a guy's phone call

She realized as she breathed hard

"Nowhere? where is that?" he asked innocently

"My Parents place" she said

"Oh? did he name it that?" he smirked, fitting name for a house that was built using loot

"Oh no" "No" she denied

"whats up?" his voice indicated amusement

"Nothing" she was tongue tied

"What was the question for?"

The familiar fluttering erupted again

"I was just curious" she tried to be cool

"Why are you so breathless"

"Umm"

"shubhra?"

"Dont say my name like that, or any other way" she begged internally

"I ran up the stairs"

"busy?"

"Yeah... my parents wanted me to meet this guy" she blurted

"And?"

"he was here today"

"Oh?" he didnt expect that for sure

"I told you" she claimed"

"You said THIS

He sent a screen shot

"He was here for lunch" she muttered

"And you were texting me about dating?" he was shocked

"I wanted to know"

There was complete silence

"I want to know" she insisted

He sighed

"Tapannn?"

"what?"

"You dont want me to know?"

"Nope"

"Got it" her heart sank in an instant a wave of shame washed over her

"I can tell you about Pawan" she coaxed

"I dont want to know. I dont want to know about him or Prasad, or any other guy... FFS shubhra" he cursed

"Forget I asked" she whispered

"Your parents picked someone for you? What happened to the bravado?'

"I claimed nothing"

"You are a liar Grover" he cursed

That admonition sounded quite e----c to her ears

"You think of me as Grover?" she asked in awe

Men liked to use last names when they hung out with their buddies she knew

"when you piss me off? YES!" he said not distracted

"i never said I wanted to choose my man Tapan" she pleaded

"Unless you are smoking something thats a clear lie, you said repeatedly your parents have given up on you"

"I didnt say that"

"I am going to start recording conversations"

"I told you men havent cared for me, maybe"

"dont twist the truth" he voice was gruff and angry

"I told you I hate Tinder"

"Erm... excuse me people go on Tinder to hook up not for happily ever afters"

she didnt know that... she knew nothing about men, hook ups, s---, casual s---, open, monogamous, closed? whatever it was called

He was her first in everything, passionate making out, caring, fighting, trying to impress him, annoy him

" I dont know that"

"I am glad your parents picked a guy and you had lunch with him and you are being compassionate and humanitarian by checking on me"

"Now you are mocking me"

"I am NOT" he growled

A long silence ensued

they were actually fighting over every word the other person was saying

they could never be harmonious

It struck them both at the same second

"We cant be friends" she whispered

"Bingo!" he said wearily

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Posted: 5 years ago

"I am glad your parents picked a guy and you had lunch with him and you are being compassionate and humanitarian by checking on me"


Ouch ...He already said it out loud. He didn’t want to talk about Prasad or Pawan or anyone else.

Now that she texted him and he called back multiple times before she could get to it, it is opening new doors. But this door is like those shutter doors, they keep opening and closing the shutter and peep and close it. Both are so afraid to actually open the door. Guy, open it, get the breeze in.

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Posted: 5 years ago

If we look at it Tapan and monga are immensely successful guys, equally good looking men, both cocky to a certain extent both even go the vegetarian way kale, lettuce, ghas phoos guys in eating discounting the fried and not so fried, but if you ask me the whole difference is the approach and mental make up of these guys.


With Monga shubhra gets the feeling that he is a walking talking mobile vitamin shoppe 😆shoved down her throat by a doctor ( Tara ) where as Tapan is her natural sunshine vitamin D 😳

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Errrantnomad

If we look at it Tapan and monga are immensely successful guys, equally good looking men, both cocky to a certain extent both even go the vegetarian way kale, lettuce, ghas phoos guys in eating discounting the fried and not so fried, but if you ask me the whole difference is the approach and mental make up of these guys.


With Monga shubhra gets the feeling that he is a walking talking mobile vitamin shoppe 😆shoved down her throat by a doctor ( Tara ) where as Tapan is her natural sunshine vitamin D 😳

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Errrantnomad

If we look at it Tapan and monga are immensely successful guys, equally good looking men, both cocky to a certain extent both even go the vegetarian way kale, lettuce, ghas phoos guys in eating discounting the fried and not so fried, but if you ask me the whole difference is the approach and mental make up of these guys.


With Monga shubhra gets the feeling that he is a walking talking mobile vitamin shoppe 😆shoved down her throat by a doctor ( Tara ) where as Tapan is her natural sunshine vitamin D 😳

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