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CHARACTER SKETCH

Angad:18-born in January; he is a normal guy who is pretty popular. Many girls would love to go out with him. He goes out with a girl for at least a week. He has one sister(Aaliyah) who he loves. He beats up any guy who hurts his sister. His best friend is Josh.

Aaliyah:17-born in Decenber ; loves her brother. She is best friends with Kripa.She's a really sweet girl. She's also the only one who knows why Kripa doesn't go out with anyone.

Kripa:17-born in march; is a popular girl. She has no siblings. Her parents love her very much. Best friend is Aaliyah. A lot of guys have asked her out. She has slapped a lot of them. She had her reasons for doing so...Sweet person.

Josh:18-born in February; a nice guy overall. Best friend is Angad. Thinks Aaliyah is hot(hasn't asked her out cause she is Angad's sister). Knows Angad has a crush on Kripa(main reason why he hasn't asked her out).

That is the character sketch. Hope this clears up a few things.



-zakiyya &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; Part 1
He entered through the door. This was going to be the party of the year. He was so glad he didn't miss it. He had almost been grounded. All he had done was come home late on a weekday night. Gosh, parents can be so insufferable He was only an hour late. But oh well. He had apple polished his mom into letting him come to this party. Thank goodness his dad had also agreed to let him come. He didn't even want to think of what would have happened to his reputation if he hadn't come. Anyways, he was here and that's all that mattered. He walked over to his friends. This included the following people: Josh, Shabbir, Karan and some other guys.
Angad: hey guys.
Guys: hey
A: so what's happening?
Josh: oh nothing much. We just dared Karan to ask Tina for a dance.
A: You mean that girl in the red standing with all those girls around her?
Shabbir: Yeah.
A: Hope she doesn't say no to you in front of all those girl.
Vijay: We dared him to ask her in front of all those girls.
A: well good luck then, cause your gonna need it.
Karan: Hey What does that mean? & nbsp;
A: Nothing...
K: Oh yeah? I dare you to ask out Kripa Sharma.
A: What? Are you kidding me? She's never going to say yes. She says no to every boy that has asked her out and slapped him to.
J: Dude, don't look now, but she just walked through the door...
She came in wearing this:

http://www.tiffanydesigns.com/tdseasonf06/pages/6533.htm

Everyone turned to look. Kripa entered through the door. She knew almost every pair of eyes were on her. After all, she was just about the most popular girl at school. She looked around and headed for her group of friends.
A: -he's been staring at her all this while.- Wow. She is hot.
K: So why don't you go and ask her out? Or are you chicken?
A: Pssht. Of course I'm not scared. -But inside he knew he was. He was scared of what she might think of him. This was because he had a huge crush on her.- But can I ask her out privately?
K: Sure, as long as you do it.
A: Okay. Wish me good luck. And of course good luck to you to. You'll need it.
K: Sure, whatever. Now just go, will you?
A: Ok. Bye.


Hey! I hope you liked it! It's my first fanfic... I will try to continue asap. plz post your comments, complements and/or criticism. I won't really mind... 😊 Also, if you want, you can request a character sketch.

-Zakiyya

P.S. This is in Mumbai, India.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow great part cont soon wonder wat kripa will say i think she'll say yes i don't but i have a feeling she'll say yes 😆 but cont soooonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part!! aww hope she says yes 😉 ...is this attitude kripa?? 😉 continue soon its fab! 👏

p.s. kripa's dress is pretty 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: erier101

awesome part!! aww hope she says yes 😉 ...is this attitude kripa?? 😉 continue soon its fab! 👏

p.s. kripa's dress is pretty 😳



well usually she has an attitude. Don't get me wrong, she's nice n all, but it's a known fact that she will slap you if you ask her out... And i like her dress as well. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooo.. this'll be fun..lolz
is angad a casanova type or decent???

continue esoooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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IINTERESTING!!!!!!!!! 👏 LOVE kripa's dress!!!!!! 😃 continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

ooo.. this'll be fun..lolz
is angad a casanova type or decent???

continue esoooonn


He's a normal type of guy. But alot of girls like him(obviously...lol). He hasn't ever gone steady with anyone, yet. He usually goes out with a girl for a week, and if he really likes her, more then that.
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Originally posted by: lillzakz



well usually she has an attitude. Don't get me wrong, she's nice n all, but it's a known fact that she will slap you if you ask her out... And i like her dress as well. 😊

lol! interesting,..attitude kripa, slappin guys😆...hopefully she wont slap our dear angad😉 ..i like her character!😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg continue soon i wonder what kripa will do lol for her own good i hope she doesnt slap him lol cuz just maybe his crush will turn into anger and no one wants to be on angad's bad side lol continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I'm probably gonna continue today. the second part is almost done....

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