ArShi FF: Birds of a Feather Thread 2 Ch. 45 Pg. 11 [1/05/'19] - Page 9

Hello!

Thank you for the wonderful comments to the last chapter 🤗 Have lots of comments to reply to (will get to it soon!), but in the mean time, you can read the new chapter.

As promised, I updated this story in the new FF section (link below):

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/452

I will be updating the chapters in this new topic from now, so please check there 😊

Looking forward to your comments!

Archi

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Is that new fanfiction section? Would take some time to probably get used to that page!

My comments have been posted there.

Cheers

Hope his son stays awesome

An awesome update enjoyed reading this chapter .It was quite different from the previous chapters in the sense it did not dwell on the dynamics of Arnav and kushi’s relation or equation of romance between them but it was solely about the senior Gupta the man that he is today. I totally agree when you said at the end you are not defending him.

Alok Gupta as he is largely known as the great manipulative businessman or the chanakya of business is so due to his upbringing . The ropes of business had been drilled into him right from childhood he was taught to focus on business and making money. He was born in a male dominated society where women are relegated to the background or kitchen

The biggest irony is that all his life when he concentrated his energy on building the business and, today when he’s the wealthiest businessman none of his children want his wealth. So much so they don’t want to be in the same room as their father .For them their father is a visitor who met them at meal times or rather behaved formally or stern with them hence they hate him. His son Vihaan doesn’t want to take over the reins of the Gupta empire as he is tired trying to step into his father’s shoes or please him

Today after reading Garimas’s letter he is missing her ,he has realized he did not pay heed to her advice which she time again reminded him of being there for the children .

But one thing we can say is It’s not that Alok Gupta was a bad father or he hated his children but he never openly displayed his affections towards the children but Alok kept in contact with his children through his wife Garima who updated him every now and then about their children’s activities and studies.

Waiting to see kushi’s reaction when Vihaan tells her about his resignation from the company and she’s no longer bound by the promise she made to Alok Gupta regarding him.

Alok was doing what he was taught. The old generations lived like that. The man of the house was the ruler, and don't even think about going against him. No other opinion mattered.

Congratulations on new thread loving the site design!

Wonderful update, beautifully written

To be honest I don't know how i feel about Alok at the moment. I am feeling angry, sad, annoyed and sorry for him. He is still stuck with the old traditional ways which his father and grandfather taught him. But the way he played with Khushi's life and marriage, that was really sick . Khushi was really lucky to have good in laws.

Loved the way Garima wrote the letter to her sister. She understood her husband and children very well and also knew what's gonna happen in the future. Garima compromised and sacrifriced so many things but never complained to Alok.Her letters were really an eye opener for Alok .

I am really happy for Vihaan. Finally he stands up for himself and also got the perfect life partner.

This was so good thank you!

Originally posted by: xBabyAngelx

Waiting 😭😭

Updated it in the new FF section (link below):

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/452

Khushi's comment about their marriage not being real left Arnav with an ache. He is developing feelings too.

Khushi is right that she doesn't have to be married to not be interested in Ved. She doesn't have to tell him about her marriage. But Ved does need to be let down gently.