Arshi FF: Distant Horizon - Chapter 3 Pg 12 - Page 14

Wow the update has so much info to keep up. I like your long updates thanks alot for taking so much time for readers like us.

Anjali and Arnav : Anjali is so correct in whatever she said , she has also lost her mother and she had expectations from her brother. I think she had to go through a lot alone , and I also think that she has to take a lot from Mama and Mamiji as Anrav was not there. Interesting way to look at a particular situation , the way Arnv spoke about his grandfather's will and the way Anjalo described it were poles apart and I will agree with what Anjali said.

Khushi : I Am really worried about her because she is doing alot for Payal and Akash , but when time comes they will not support her not they will help her in any situation.

Shyam : O am still in doubts about his character , why is he so adamant about Khushi marrying a rich guy and now he wants her to marry Arnav. Marrying Arnav will create more problems for Khushi as of now because no one likes him in the Raizada family and Payal simply hates him.

Arnav and Khushi : Khushi also knows that Rohan is not correct for her but I think she is still hanging on to him because she wants to avoid Arnav.Arnav has snapped at Khushi because he is also in 2 minds about her and at the same time he is very upset after the little outburst of Anjali

The reason you might not be getting may likes in the new forum is because less people know about it. Please dont feel disheartened , there are many readers who love your work and I am 1 among them. I do comment on all of your stories. I love your work a lot. You are a very talented writer

chapter 5

Payal is so selfish. She just uses the baby to coerce Khushi into going the extra mile. Khushi has to realize that she can't keep bailing them out. There will never be an end. She is already in deep trouble.

Rohan is another leech in her life. How conveniently he laid the blame for his own incompetence on Khushi. She is being stupid staying with him after this.

Shyam may try to use Khushi to get to Arnav. He has something up his sleeves. The fact that Anjali is unhappy speaks volumes.

Originally posted by: coderlady

chapter 5

Payal is so selfish. She just uses the baby to coerce Khushi into going the extra mile. Khushi has to realize that she can't keep bailing them out. There will never be an end. She is already in deep trouble.

Rohan is another leech in her life. How conveniently he laid the blame for his own incompetence on Khushi. She is being stupid staying with him after this.

Shyam may try to use Khushi to get to Arnav. He has something up his sleeves. The fact that Anjali is unhappy speaks volumes.

I totally agree and he did not even try to apologise to Khushi later , he is just an idiot

Read the story so far. As usual nice work. Looking forward for the update

Another lovely story ! Just loved the first 3 chapter.

chapter 6

Akash and his mother don't seem to have any sympathy for Arnav. To them he is just wrong. Akash is totally incapable of running his own affairs and that seems to be just fine with them. The blame always goes to someone else. Khushi has made a huge mistake taking that loan. Who will bail her out when the time comes?

Not sure what to make of Shyam and Anjali for now.

Can you give the link to chapter 6 m not able to find it in the fanfiction page

Originally posted by: rkrocks

Read the story so far. As usual nice work. Looking forward for the update

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/46

You need to scroll down the page to find Table of contents with links to next couple of chapters or check Kavi's blog at wordpress.

Cheers...

Originally posted by: avchowdhury

Another lovely story ! Just loved the first 3 chapter.

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/46

You need to scroll down the page to find Table of contents with links to next couple of chapters or check Kavi's blog at wordpress.

Cheers...