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Posted: 5 years ago
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He looked at entrance

She saw police holding a person

Nandu: sunil

Police: u know him mam?

Nandu: yeah ..he is my collegue…from few days he is torturing me to accept his proposal…day before yesterday I slapped him fr misbehaving with me..bt if I say to raghav he wont leave this guy..so I didn’t say anything

Raghav: I always told u don’t be too good to others…c now this idiot tried to defame u..he only sent this bloody letter n photos..i got doubt..i complained police..they found this guy sent those .

By saying this ragav started hitting him

Nandu got shock

Nandu rushed to him

She stopped him

Police took sunil asked nandu to give statement against him

Nandu agreed

Police left

She saw raghav whose face become red with anger

First time she saw him like that

Nandu hold his hands

Nandu: im sorry raghav fr not saying this to u

Raghav: its ok..not ur fault

Nandu: at one second..i was scared,..u believed those letters nn photos

Raghav smiled

Raghav hold her hands

Raghav:pagli..how u thought like that..even entire world says ur wrong..i believe my nandu is innocent

Nandu felt happy when he said my nandu

She felt blessed to him

She hugged him with happiness

Raghav surprised

Bt he understood he rsituation

He to hugged her back

Day by day nandu feelings towards raghav increasing

Nandu: really im in love with raghav? Then wat abt kunal..can love happened twice r..is it just infatuation on kunal?

Oh god please clarifyi m really confused

One day raghav and nandu r going in car

A small girl comig onway playing with ball all of sudden

Raghav tried to pu tbreak bt it lost its control

Car dashed to tree beside

Nandini went to semiconscious

Raghav too suffered some blood loss

His heart stopped when he saw his nandu like that

He didn’t find any one near by

He got down with great difficult

He took nandu in his arms

He hired auto which is coming

Nandu is in his lap

She is abt to go unconscious

Bt raghav tapping her continuously

Raghav: no nandu..u cant do it..wake up…u know na..ur raghav cant live without u..plz fr my sake don’t clz ur eyes…plz nandu

Nandu is trying to utter his name: ra….gha…vvv….i…..

By that time they reached hsptl

Nandu is in operation theatre

Kunal came to hsptl

He held as support fr raghav

Doctor said she is out of danger

Raghav n kunal thanked god

Nandu discharged from hospital

Raghav is looking at her with utmost care

Nandu totally fell fr raghav

She witnessed how raghav cried fr her in auto

She want to say I loveu ..bt she didn’t get words

Even now she didn’t understand how she should confess

She thought raghav married becz of her father

She know he cares her,protective fr her,,bt don’t know he loves her not

Edited by vardhinirosid - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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One day kunal came to meet nandu

He talked with her some time

And he went to kitchen where raghav preparing juice fr nandu

Kunal smiled

Kunal: she is lucky

Raghav saw him

Raghav: no im lucky

Kunal: ok both are…bt kunal I know u love her..u told me on ur mrg…bt did u confess her..

Raghav: no

Kunal: bt y?

Raghav: I don’t want her to accept me..becz I love her..its like doing favour..r doing with compromise as im her husband

I want her to love me truly..i will wait..even though she wont love me..i will stay as her shield entire my life

When I got to know she loves u…yes I felt bad..bt I wished u accept her love..becz I cant c her hurt…when she told u loved mouli..i didn’t feel happy that I will get chance..infact I felt sad seeing her state…at any cost I cant c her pain..im ready to bear any pain fr her..so im trying best to keep her happy

Kunal smiled

Kunal: I know my frined nandu is clever..im sure she will understand ur true love

Raghav: tq

Kunal left place

Bt another person who is hearing was shocked

Yes nandu who came to drink water heard their convo

Nandu: that means raghav loved me..bt he sacrificed his love fr me

She is in tears

Days gng on

Nandu is fit n finenow

Still raghav not allowing her to do work

Raghav left to office

At night he reached home

House is full of dark

He was confused

He switched on light

He found chit and a gift

he read chit :Please go n fresh up n wear this

Raghav confused

He opened parcel

He found white shirt

Raghav: where is she?

He freshed up and reached wore the shirt

He is looking super handsome

He found another chit

Come to the place from where u can c the moon..and ofcource ur moon is waiting eagerly fr u

Don’t be late ok

Now raghav is surprised

He thought fr while

He went to terrace

He found totally dark there

When he stepped in

Light started on

And crackers sound came

He looked up

And saw the sky filled with HAPPY BIRTHDAY RAGHAV lightnings

He was surprised

Then he heard swee tvoice singing happy birthday raghav

He found his nandu in sky blue saree..his fav clr

He lost in her

She came near to him

Nandu: happy bday to u raghav

Raghav: u remembered ?

Nandu: how can I frgt my lov…she stopped in middle

Raghav was keen to hear wat she is abt say

Ok lets go cut the cake

Raghav cut the cake

They both feed each other

Raghav: this is the best bday in my life nandu

Nandu: frm today everyday will b best

Raghav looked at her

Nandu blushed

Raghav felt some changes in nandu

Raghav: wat did u say

Nandu: nothing

Raghav pouted his lips

Now nandu don’t want him to upset him more

She decided to give best gif today

Nandu: can I ask something

Raghav: ha nandu

Nandu: wat I wont accept u my entire life

Raghav smiled: I wil llive my entire life by staying beside u being a friend

Nandu circled her two hands around his neck n pulled him towards her

Nandu: bt I cant stayas ur friend entire life

Raghav shocked: nandu

Nandu: becz I want to b ur wife..i cant sit beside u entire life becz I want to stay in ur arms entire to eternity .i don’t want just stay with u. bt .i want to reside in ur heart..i love u raghav

Raghav felt so happy..he never thought of this day

He hugged her tightly

Raghav: I love u too nandu

He cupped her face n hesitating to kiss

Nandu pulled hhim

She started kissing entire his face

Raghav too kissed her

She pecked his lips n it turned passionate

They r kissing n exprloring each other with tongue

Nandu: raghav make me urs

She said huskily

Raghav took her in arms and reached their room

And placed her on bed

He unbuttoned his shirt

He unpinned her saree

Nandu turned back with shy

Raghav switched of lights

He made her turn towards him

He started kissing her totally

Nandu is responding equally to his love making

They both became one

After few months nandu gave good news to raghav

And they both r cloudnine

Nandu gave birth to pari

And started living happily

All r totally involved in story

Nandu saw them who r watching without blinking eyes

Nandu: guys

Mouli: awww…so cute…raghav ur simply superb..tq fr making my bestie life beautiful

All clapped

Mouli winked at kunal

Mouli n kunal both whisteled

Ragnan confused

Mouli: ek seeti tho bantha haina fr such true love

Shiv ishan , kaya,muunal whisteled again

Nandu blushed

Shivangi: we want dance

Ishan: yes

Raghav took nandu to stage

He started dancing

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye (x2)

Haan hum badalne lage
Girne sambhalne lage
Jab se hai jaana tumhein
Teri ore chalne lage (x2)

Har safar har jagah
Har kahin ban gaye
Maante thhe Khuda
Aur haan wahi ban gaye

Haan hansi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye (x2)

Pehchaante hi nahi ablog tanha mujhe
Meri nigaahon mein bhi hai dhoondte wo tujhe
Pehchaante hi nahi ab log tanha mujhe
Meri nigaahon mein bhi hai dhoondte wo tujhe
Hum the dhoondhte jisey wo kami ban gaye
Tum mere ishq ki sar-zameen ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye (x2)

They danced passionately

He kissed nandu forehead lovingly


By the time pari rushed to him

Raghav took her in arms

And started dancing

Along with nandu

Aashiyaana Mera Saath Tere Hai Na
Dhoondhte Teri Gali Mujhko Ghar Mila
Aab-O-Daana Mera Haath Tere Hai Na
Dhoondte Tera Khuda Mujhko Rab Mila
Tu Ko Mila Lo Ho Gaya Main Qaabil
Tu Jo Mila To Ho Gaya Sab Haasil
Mushqil Sahi Aasaan Hui Manzil
Kyunki Tu..Dhadkan..Main Dil…

Rooth Jaana Tera
Maan Jaana Mera
Dhoondhte Teri Hansi
Mil Gayi Meri Khushi
Raah Hoon Main Teri
Tu Hai Tu Meri
Dhoondhte Tere Nishaan
Mill Gayi Khudi
Tu Jo Mila Lo Ho Gaya Main Qaabil
Tu Jo Mila To Ho Gaya Sab Haasil Haan
Mushqil Sahi Aasaan Hui Manzil
Kyunki Tu..Dhadkan..Main Dil…
O…

Tu Jo Mila Lo Ho Gaya Main Qaabil
Tu Jo Mila To Ho Gaya Sab Haasil.. Haan!
Tu Jo Mila Aasaan Hui Mushqil
Kyunki Tu Dhadkan..Main Dil

All clapped at sweet n lovely family

Edited by vardhinirosid - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Next raghav turned bottle

It stopped at karan

Ragahv: propose riya

Karan: wow…as ours is arrange marriage I didn’t get chance to declare my love in frnt of all..now I vl utilize it

Raghav: come on buddy

Munal: yes come on

Karan took her on stage

And took her palm n kissed lovingly

Karan: I love u riya

Riya: I love u too karan

They both hugged eachother

Munal ragnan shivangin ishan cheered them and shouted: wohhhhhhhhhhh

Song started playing

They started dancing

Misthi too joined them

Itti si hansi
Itti si khushi
Itta sa tukda chand ka
Khwabon ke tinkon se
Chal banayeinn aashiyaan (x2)

Dabe dabe paaon se
Aaye haule haule zindagi
Hothon pe kundi chadha ke
Hum taale laga ke chal
Gumsum tarane chupke chupke gaayein
Aadhi aadhi baant le
Aaja dil ki ye zameen
Thoda sa tera sa hoga
Thoda mera bhi hoga apna ye aashiyan

all couples joined them and started dancing

by that time rain started

as its open area

all rushed inside

while mouli to rushing inside

kunal held her hand

he started singing

Tum paas aaye
Yun muskuraaye

Mouli smiled He pulled her

She fell on his chest

She blushed

Tum paas aaye
Yun muskuraaye

He hugged from back

And started dancing


Tumne na jaane kya
Sapne dikhaye (Repeat once)

Ab toh mera.. dil
Jaage na sota hai
Kya karoon haye
Kuch kuch hota hai
Kya karoon haye
Kuch kuch hota hai (Male)

Tum paas aaye
Yun muskuraaye
Tumne na jaane kya
Sapne dikhaye
Ab toh mera.. dil
Jaage na sota hai
Kya karoon haye
Kuch kuch hota hai
Kya karoon haye
Kuch kuch hota hai (Female)

Naa jaane kaisa
Ehsaas hai
Bujhti nahin hai
Kya pyaas hai (Male)

Their dance turned passionate one

They poured their missed feeling fr each other

They lost in each other

Bt came out with our naughty couples cough

Ishan n raghav didn’t leave no chance to pull kunal legs

The day eneded happily

Munal went to radhika

They took her blessings

Ishan n shivangi took ishan parents blessings

Sandhya is happy a sher son is happy

And also she is happy fr her daughter mouli

Munal took blessings from ishan parents

Pandit fixed marriage

Munal and ishan shivangi haldi mehendi mrg held grandly and happily becz of their bestie kaya and ragnan

Ishan shivangi went to their room

They started their life with nhok jhoks

Ishan stopped shivangi who is buck bucking continuously by pecking her lips

Shivangi shocked

Even though she loves him and they touch each other..this is the first kiss to her

Ishan abt to move after she stopped buck bucking

Shivangi pulled him

and pecked his lips

And turned into deep kiss

Ishan shocked now

She bite his lips

Ishan: omg I never thought ur so wild

Shivangi: wat I have to do..when u r such a soft creature I have to wild na like ur tigress

Ishan: wat? Im not soft as u think

Shivangi: acha

Ishan: wanna c

Shivangi: im ready

He pushed on her bed

he Started invading her

Shivangi accepted him fully

Edited by vardhinirosid - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Mouli is waiting fr kunal

Kunal came to room

He was lost in his mouli beauty

He went to her

He held her hands

Kunal: shall I say one thing

Mouli nodded

Kunal: kuch kuch hotahai mouli

Mouli smiled

Kunal; kuch kuch hota hai kunal

He hugged her tightly

Kunal: I missed u so much..i missed our fighting's..missed our conversations..i missed u in every second of my life

Mouli; I missed u too

Kunal: plz promise me that u never leave me again..i cant live without u

Mouli: pakka wala promise..even u say go..i wont go.. I vl stick with u more and irritate u more

Kunal smiled

Kunal kissed her cheeks and the moved towards her lips

They both lost in each other

they r letting their emotions

kunal gave a brone crushing hug

mouli moaned: kunal

her husky voice making him crazy

he kissed her n gave bite to her lower lip

he removed her jewelry

kunal: I told u na..i like u d way u are are..no need of this jewelry

he removed her earrings..n kissed her ear..n removed her bangles..n kissed her hands..he slowly caressed from her hand to shoulder n reached her neck and remove her necklace..he caressed frome neck to her breast and reached her waist n removed her waist band and caressed her belly..mouli closed her eyes to feel his touch

he turned her back and removed her dhori

and unpinned her dupatta

she closed herself with her hand

he hold her chin and made her look into his eyes

he asked permission through eyes

she blushed

she take out her hands from covering

kunal took her in arms

and placed on bed

he removed his sherwani

and he started caressing her

and kissing her allover

mouli cant able to feel pleasure closed her eyes

kunal kissed her eyes

she opened slowly

he pecked her lips

he undid both of them and covered themselves with blanket

they both explored each other

and became one

their life became happy and blissful with love care fightings compromises

and to add thei rhappiness munal gave birth to baby boy

they name him aarav

and shivangi gavebirth to baby boy ansh

raghav and misthi with pari

karan and riya with misthi

ishan and shivang iwith ansh

kunal and mouli with aarav

lived happily thereafter

so guys im wrapping this story..i know this is so sweet story without much complications..bt wat to do I don’t like much tragedy…I hope u all liked it

and when I wrote story myself got laugh by seeing these many angles

shivangi loves ishan,ishan- mouli, mouli-kunal, kunal-nandini( at one point of time), nandini-kunal, raghav- nandini ha ha

please commet wat liked u..which pair u liked most..how u enjoyed this story..ur comments really means alot..

Edited by vardhinirosid - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#25
Omg di! OK I won't talk to you for sure as your broke your promise!! you said you won't go right then what is this? you disappeared suddenly like anything 😡😡II'm so much angry with...so so so angry with you
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Posted: 5 years ago
#26
do you know how much I missed you?😢😔
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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

surprising that ishan also has got a best friend.ishaan teasing her that her hands are rough so she must be his male friend n she hitting him ...both teasing each other was funny.shivangi as ishaan's best friend was a pleasant surprise.they were friends on naagin too.ishaan holding her hand n she saying that if he doesnt leave it he will have to hold it till the end of his life was intense.I think shivangi loves ishaan.that's why tears in her eyes

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Posted: 5 years ago
#28

good thay ishaan stopped kunal from going.riya knowing the truth from nandini n apologizing to maunal was nice.kunal's dialogues to riya were too good.I forgot to tell you that i am surprised to see karan wahi as riya's husband.in another ff also ada karan wahi are a pair

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Posted: 5 years ago
#29

ishan stopping kunal from going when he asked him a question...ishan pushing mauli towards kunal while dancing ...revealing that he knows about maunal love was unexpected. surprising that riya had told him the truth.ishaan's dialogues to maunal were so cute.ishaan asking if they think that he will not get any girl..girls are in queue for him...shivangi saying who will say no to him...ishan glaring at her was cute.does ishaan doubt about shivangi's feelings for him?loved ishaan telling that he is lucky to have maunal in his life as only they sacrificed for him..they chose friendship over love for him.loved ishaan keeping mauli's hand in kunal's hand.you write mauli instead of kunal there

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Posted: 5 years ago
#30

shivangi revealing her love to ishaan like this was unexpected. nandini said right to ishaan that our life becomes the best when we marry the person who loves us.ishaan telling shivangi that he is angry with her for not revealing her feelings before n asking why she didn't share it with him yet was emotional.wow ishaan proposing shivangi. .love confession was surprising n romantic. dance was so romantic. beautiful song

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