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Posted: 5 years ago
#11

pari mishti are damn funny n pranksters.pari mishti making maunal fight was funny.maunal playing football n cheating each other...fighting ..mishri stopping them was funny.maunal rain dance was so passionate romantic n beautiful.

it's midnight now.will read the rest tomorrow

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Posted: 5 years ago
#12

its shocking n sad that maunal parted ways silently.wanted kunal's pov after the rain scene.oh no...mauhan wedding.now kunal realized that riya lied to kunal about mauli having bf. his anger is justified

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Posted: 5 years ago
#13

finally riya admitted the truth.riya confessing to kunal that Mauli loves him only n kunal getting a shock was lovely.riya asking kunal to leave was painful.what an entry by raghav.what an unexpected twist that pari is raghnan child n pari was living with kunal since last 6 months bcz of ragnan busy schedule.oh so that day kunal went to help nandini to admit her dad to hospital.good that kunal realized his love for mauli after she left n confessed it to nandini.maunal seeing each other.. mauli controlling herself from hugging kunal was painful.maunal confession. .mauli saying that she can't hurt ishaan..kunal saying that she loves him thats more than enough for him to live his whole life was touchy.can you please show the fb of how nandini got ready to marry raghav n fell in love with him?

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Posted: 5 years ago
#14

in the last part I think in one place you wrote roli instead of mauli.

thanks for liking my kkhh.are you talking about my srk kajol kkhh?

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Posted: 5 years ago
#15

tq jasmine..it really means a lot...i know ur waiting fr this story..so i took whole day n completed this story..and yeah i read ur srk kajol story..loved..did u write kkhh on any other couple? oh i wrote roli name..sorry yar..i didnt get time to recheck.i will correct it..u know na my love towards rosid..which make me do small mistakes

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Posted: 5 years ago
#16

Here ishan is waiting for some one restlessly

Sandhya came to him

Sandhyan: arey fr whom ur waiting impatiently

Ishan: maa this idiot na…she is wastefellow in entire world

Sandhya chuckled

She understood to whom he Is addressing

Sandhya: arey itna gussa on ur partner in crime

Ishan; then wat ma ..she told she vl come10 days before my mrg…bt till now no address

While he is busy in complaining to sandhya

Some one closed his eyes

Sandhya smiled by seeing the person

Person sighed not to reveal name

Sandhya: ishan guess who

Ishan touched person hands

Ishan: offo this hands r so rough then definitely one of my male bestie

By next minute he received hit on his head

Sandhya understood war will start now..she left the place as she know if she stay there she vl become bali ka bakra

Person; u idiot…how can u say im guy…n my hands r rough? Hello future miss world here

Ishan started laughing

Ishan: shakal theek se dekho aine mein…bilkul bandhar jaise

u stupid…I wont leave u..she started hitting him

ishan stopped her from hitting him

ishan: my mrg yar..ateast spare me fr these 2 days

she smiled

ok not now…after ur mrg..mouli n me together make u count stars

ishan: my mouli is not like u..so sweet she is

she; take care

ishan: fr wat

she: too much sweetness lead to diabetes

ishan: jealous kiddo…I know ur jealous as I got beautiful n sweet girl in my life

she: uff..y should i..infact im feeling sad as mouli got chimpanzee in her life

ishan: oyy ur saying chimpanzee..i wont leave u shivangi ki bachi ( mouni roy as shivangi)

shivangi tried to run

bt he hold her hand tightly

shivangi tried to come out of his hold bt his hold is tight

shivani: ok if u wont leave my hand now..u have to hold it entire life

ishan got shock

he left her hand immediately

a tear escaped from her eyes bt she wiped it without knowing ishan

and started laughing

shivangi: ha ha…u thought im seriousna..wat to do ..some times v have to use tricks to win

ishan took deep breath

ishan: ur impossible

shivangi;ok mr groom im going to c ur bride..u njy here

ishan: I vl also come..i vl introduce her

shivangi: no need I can do it myself…u go n get ready

(ishan n shivangi r partners and ofcourse best friends…shivangi know ishan love abt mouli bt didn’t meet her till now)

Edited by vardhinirosid - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#17

Shivangi left the place

Ishan saw kunal is going

Ishan: oyy kunal wr r u going

Kunal wiped his tears before ishan could c his face

Kunal: I got some important work yar.. i need to go

Ishan: y u r looking upset

Kunal: nothing like that…ok bye

Ishan: wat? Do u think I vl allow u to go?

Kunal: please yar its important

Ishan: no way…and did u frgt…u only said nothing is more important than friend…now ur leaving ur friend in his crucial phase

Kunal: ishan but

Ishan: no ifs n but…ur staying here until my mrg that’s final

Kunal atlast accepted

Nandu met riya

Nandu hugged riya

Bt riya didn’t react

She saw raghav with pari in his arms

She looked at him confusingly

Nandu saw this

She smiled

Nandu: he is my husband raghav n my daughter pari

Riya got shocked

Nandu told entire truth to riya

Riya got tears

By that time karan came to them

She saw riya in tears

He hold her shoulders for support

Riya: I did a sin karan….becz of me true lovers r suffering

Ragnan n karan felt bad

They didn’t understand how to console her

At that time kunal came there

Riya saw him n rushed to him

She folded her hands infrnt of him

Riya: im sorry kunal..i know im not deserve ur frgvness..i made u suffer these many years n in future also u r going to suffer becz of my rash decision..im so sorry

Kunal smiled

Kunal hold her hands: don’t be…its not ur mistake..its my foolishness as I didn’t realise my love at right time n its my fate as I didn’t have mouli in my destiny…im not at all angry at u..when I learnt how much u care for mouli..how much u think abt her…how much u suffered when u saw her in pain.i felt so happy..she is lucky to have u in ur life..now smile like a good girl

Riya smiled lightly

She hugged kunal

Kunal too hugged him

He saw karan there and misthi too

Riya: he is karan my husband..n misthi my daughter

Kunal: wow that’s osum.both r looking made for each other..and I know misthi..she is pari friend na…she is so cute n also cares pari just like u care fr mouli

Riya smiled

Riya went to mouli

She asked forgivness to mouli

Mouli hugged her and said its not her mistake

Edited by vardhinirosid - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#18

At evening

Mouli introduced ragnan to ishan

Ishan introduced shivangi to mouli

Ishan : ok guys its boring..lets play spinthe bottle

I wil spin bottle

When it stops

That person can ask another person any question and the other person should answer

Munal, ishan shivangi,ragnan, riya and karan r players

First ishan turned the bottle

Its stopped towards kunal

Ishan: ok kunal…I know some one there in ur life..who is she

Kunal had no answer

Mouli ragnan n kaya( karan n riya) r tensed

Mouli and kunal looked each other with pain

Kunal acted like he had to do important call

He was abt to go

Ishan held his hand

He made him sit in his place again

Ishan pulled mouli on stage

And started dancing

O Mehndi LagaRakhna
Doli Saja Ke Rakhna
Mehndi Laga Rakhna
Doli Saja Ke Rakhna
Lene Tujhe O Gori
Aayenge Tere Sajna

By saying this he pushed her towards kunal

All r shocked

Mouli: ishan

Ishan: wat u both thought…if u don’t say ..cant I know the truth

I know u both love each other

When kunal said his name then I got some doubt if he is ur kunal

Bt I brushed my thoughts

When kunal told riya is his friend

Then I was almost sure

I decided to ask riya

In mean while riya came to me

( riya remembered her convo with karan

Karan im feeling guilt ..im reason fr this mess

Karan: then urself clear that mess

Riya looked at him shockingly

Karan: tell the truth to ishan..)

RIYA told me abt u both

munal looked at riya she nodded her head postively

Ishan:wat u thought mouli..dont u know me..yeah I love u that doesn't mean u can sacrifice ur happiness fr me..before love .....you r my friend..even I marry I vl be in guilt as I feel I snatched ur love

And he turned to kunal

And u ..wat u thought? To become hero by sacrificing ur love…

Kunal: ishan

Ishan: chup…by the way wat u all thinking…don’t I get any girl except mouli…u know wat girls will be in queue fr me ..wat u say shivu darling

Shivangi smiled

Shivangi: ofcourse ..who say no to this bandhar

Ishan glared at her

All laughed

Ishan hugged kunal

Ishan: im so happy to have u in my life..u guys decided to sacrifice ur love fr me…no one thought to do sacrifice fr me till now....bt u both guys did it…tq fr coming to my life

Kunal: im so happy to get u in mylife..when it comes between love n friendhip..u picked our friendship..

All felt happy

Isha hold mouli hands and gave her hand to mouli

Sharmila felt happy after seeing he rdaughter heart full smile after years


That place filled with happiness

Edited by vardhinirosid - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#19

Shivangi: I think v stopped game in middle

Ishan: yeah lets play

Kunal spinned bottle

It stopped towards shivangi

Kunal: confess anything to any one u wish to

Shivangi closed her eyes

Shivangi: ishan u said no one sacrificed any thing except munal..bt truth is even before I sacrificed for ur happiness

Ishan is confused

Ishan: shivu..wat r u saying

Shivangi; I sacrificed my love fr u fr ur happiness…im in love with frm the day v met..bt when I came to know u love mouli I suppressed my feeling

She said with tears

All r shocked

She rushed fr there

Ishan still in shock

He remembered his moments with shivu

Nandini kept hand on his shoulder

Nandini: I know ur confused ishan..bt only thing I can say…with experience im saying..u vl be happy when u get person u love bt ur life will become best when u get person who loves u more than anything

I hope u will take right decision

After some time

They saw shivangi coming out with her bag

Mouli: wr r u going yar

Shivangi: I don’t know how I did..bt without my knowledge I poured my heart out..now I cant face ishan..he might hate me

Ishan: ha .nafrat hai thumse..i hate u fr not revealing ur love to me..i shared everything to u..bt u didn’t shared this to me..y?

Shivangi in tears

Ishan kneeled down

Ishan: I know becz of me u suffered alot..even though ur in pain u plastered smile on ur face fr me…will u give one chance ..i vl never let u plaster fake smile..in fact I vl fill ur life with REAL happiness..will u marry me

Shivangi smiled

Shivangi: yes I vl

Ishan put ring to her finger

All clapped

Shivangi hugged him

Shivang: I love u ishan

Ishan: I love to my tigress

All coughed to reveal their presence

Ishan took shivangi to dance floor

And started dancing passionately

(SajdeMein Yoon Hi Jhukta Hoon

Tum Pe Hi Aa Ke RuktaHoon

Kya Ye Sab Ko Hota Hai

Hum Ko Kya Lena HaiSab Se

Tum Se Hi Sab BaateinAb Se

Ban Gaye Ho Tum MeriDua

Sajde Mein Yun HiJhukta Hoon

Tum Pe Hi Aa Ke RukhtaHoon

Kya Yeh Sab Ko HotaHai

Hum Ko Kya Lena HaiSab Se

Tum Se Hi Sab BaateinAb Se

Ban Gaye Ho Tum MeriDua

Khuda Jaane Ke MainFida Hoon

Khuda Jaane Main MittGaya

Khuda Jaane Ye KyunHua Hai

Ke Ban Gae Ho Tum MereKhuda)

They lost in each other

They came out after listening claps

Edited by vardhinirosid - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#20

They again started playing

This time mouli spinned the bottle

It stopped before nandu

Mouli smiled

Mouli: I wish to know ur love story

Nandu blushed

Raghav: arey ur friend is asking something…tell her na

Kunal: arey raghu..stop teasing her…v know how shy person she is..stop making her embrace

Mouli: nandu plz tell na

She said pouting her lips

Raghav: yeah she vl tell..only after u both stop romancing under the table n concentrate on our story

Kunal immediately removed his hand from mouli hand ..which he held tightly till now

Mouli glared at kunal fr making her embrassed infrnt of all

all chuckled

Kunal smiled awkwardly

Kunal: ok nandu u start

Nandu: after knowing kunal loves mouli…my heart was broken

And I cried a lot

And raghav consoled me( munal know abt raghav frm their clz days only..nandu used to say abt him)

And dad health started deteriorating

And his wish is to c my marriage with raghav

As he know kunal is no more part of my life

My dad talked with raghav n asked him to fulfill his wish

I didn’t understand wat to say

At that time im not ready fr marriage

Ragav came to me

Raghav: nandu I know u love kunal..n ur not ready to marry..its ok I vl try to talk with uncle u don’t worry

Nandu: no raghav..dad health is not well..i don’t want him to suffer more..im ok with this mrg

Raghav: ok nandu..and don’t worry..this mrg is fr ur dad health..so I wont take any advantage..v vl stay like how v used to be before..

Nandu: im sorryragahv..becz of my selfish reasons u r going to suffer

Raghav: wat r u talking nandu..he is father to u..bt he is more than that fr me..he is guardian to me..im in this postion becz of him..he financially helped me to reach this stage..he treated me like how he treats u..im doing this fr him

Few days latter

Raghav and nandu married

Kunal too came n wished them

During sr

Its really awkward for both of them

Bt raghav eased the situation

He removed all decoration

And he slept on sofa

Bt that night he fell from sofa

Nandu woke up

He felt bad fr him

She asked him to sleep on bed

He hesitated

Bt she made him agree

They both sleep on bed

Mrng raghav woke up

He found nandu sleeping like flower

He smiled

He just gazed at her

Raghav to himself: I know nandu its difficult to u to accept me..bt I vl wait until ur heart melts..

Nandu woke up

She saw raghav who is gazing at her

She too lost in his eyes

They shared an eyelock

They came out of world

They felt awkward

Raghav left place

Nandu; wats happening to me..i loved kunal ..bt y I lost in raghav

She brushed her thoughts

Days r going

Nandu falling fr raghav caring, understanding nature..bt she is not realizing her love

When she gets fever..she c pain in raghav eyes

When she smiles she find happiness in his face

She is confused

Raghav goes to office and comes at night

Nandu feeling bored

Raghav understood her

He asked her to join in job

She applied fr job

Raghav became more than bestie

She feels comfortable with him

When realized she understood even kunal and she had some compatibility issues

Bt she and raghav were perfect each other

From few days

Some sort of tension raghav saw in nandu face

Raghav: nandu wat happened

Nandini: nothing raghav

Raghav to himself:some thing wrong

Next day raghav got letter

Raghav opened it

Hi im ur wellwisher..so im writing this…ur wife nandu..she is not good like she act..in her clz she had so many love tracks..im also sending proofs

Raghav saw some intimate pics of nandu

He is shocked

Letters fell down frm his hand

Raghav left from the place

Nandu who came with cup of coffee to raghav

Didn’t find raghav

She saw letter n photos

She was shocked

Nandu: who wrote this..raghav read this? Did he mistaken me..this thought itself piercing her heart

She got tears

After some time she saw raghav coming towards her with serious face

Nandu: raghav..woh

Raghav stopped her from talking

Edited by vardhinirosid - 5 years ago

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