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Posted: 20 years ago

Hmm, Krips portrait in that Sari, that angad had on his mobile.. He can paint right??

I would have thought he would have the candlelight dream date on the terrace with her, but its morning so that is out.

I cant think of anything else!😕 Sorry sweety!!😳

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Posted: 20 years ago
cant wait plzz continue soon!!!😃
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: KYPH_fan

Hmm, Krips portrait in that Sari, that angad had on his mobile.. He can paint right??

I would have thought he would have the candlelight dream date on the terrace with her, but its morning so that is out.

I cant think of anything else!😕 Sorry sweety!!😳

ok u will see really soon! 😛

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Posted: 20 years ago
i actually have no idea of the surprise😕, but cant wait. post the nxt part soon.😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
ummmm................ no clue!!😕 plz just tell us!! srry write it 4 us!!😳 hey i hav gotten an idea: a painting of her and Angad????
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Posted: 20 years ago
keep guess i will put the next part up really soooooon
neha9 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
i will post the next part in abt 20-30 mins
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Posted: 20 years ago

Kripa: Angad surprise kha hai?

A: Ho oh kripa. kuch deer aur. ok ek kaam kartha hai lets have breakfast first.

K: Ya waisa koi bura idea nahie hai. I am really hungry.

They smile, and have breakfast.

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After breakfast. K: Angad mujhe heart attack hona wala hai.

A: Kripa. stop kidding, u are to younge to have an heart attack.

K: But anagd, their is always a first time.

Anagd laughs.

A: Oh oh Kripa, tum bhi na. Kya main is hona wala heart attack ki waja jan saktha hoo

K: Waja ho tum

A: MAAAAA?

K: Ya, look ab mujhse aur intzaar nahie hota. Please mujhe batao, whats the surprise.

A: Ok ruko main abhi aata ho

K: Ok jaldi karna.

A: Dont worry issa pelha tumha heart attack ho main wapis aaoga, tumahara aakhari waqt main main tumahara saath raho gaa.

K: SHUT UP!!!!!!!!

Anagd runs upstairs while Kripa waits, he comes down carrying some thing large, all in brown paper.

K: Yeh kya haa

A: Kudh Kekhlo.

Kripa exictedly rips the warppig, and when its all done she looks at it amazed.

A: Kaisa laga...

K: Its... Its... Beautiful.

A: Kripa aapni kuch ki tareef karni band karo...

Its a huge picture of Kripa in that black sari. Its painted with soft edges, and look like a real picture. Kripa is so shocked that Angad could remember her wearing the outfit in such detail. (u were rite kyph_fan 😛) Sudennly kripa has tears in her eyes.

Angad moves towads her. and holds her sholder.

A: aa Kripa, tum roo kyun rahi ho.

K: Kykuni aaj tak kisi na bhi mujhe itna aacha gift nahie diya. U are such a sweetheart.

A: Ya that i know.

K: Stop it angad.

A: OK lakin roona tho band karo. he wipes her tears and says, thats not it! I have one more thing for u!

K: Ab kya...

A: Hold on. he comes back with two boxes.

Kripa opens the First one and Finds a dark blue, more like royal blue dress, its strapless, extremly shiny,

K: Angad thats gorgeous,

A: Good! now open this one.

Kripa unwraps the the other box, its a velvet jewelery box, she opens and finds and Dimond set, Earrings, Braclet, and neckless. Kripa dosent reply

A: Kripa... how is it.

K: Angad that so beautiful, and elegant, but...

A: But?

K: Angad main yeh nahie la sakthi.

A: (cofused) lakin kyun..

K: Angad thats just to expensive. No tum yeh wapis le loo.

A: No kripa, its not expensive, its fake. 😆

K: WHAT?

A: Ya!

K: Oh ok! Tho main la loo gi!

A: Good!

K: Thanks Angad.

A: Ur welcome! Ok ab kya karna hai.

K: Matlab.

A: Movie?

K: Um... SURE!

So they go to see a movie.

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A: Kripa lets watch Naina...

K: Yuck, how about Pahali

A: No! Not a love story.

K: Ok tho phir mujhe bhi horror movie nahie dekni.

A: Kripa PLEASE!!!!!!

K: Angad no!

A: Yes

K: No

A: Yes

K: No

A: Yes

K: No

A: Yes YES YES

K: No NO NO

A: NO NO NO

K: Yes Yes YES!

A: I knew it, meri best friends hamash vo hi karago jo uska best friend chaya ga!

He takes Kripa's hand gets the tickets and basicly pushes Kripa into the theater.

(In the theather)

A: Tum horror movies kyun nahie dekti

K: Kykuni mujhe daar lagtha hai.

A: Oh. Kripa... my 2 years old baby. Dont worry Papa is here.

K: Angad i am goona kil u! Kripa gets hold of angad's neck but not to tighly.

A: (SCREAMS) HELP, KRIPA CHORO MUJHE. The everyone in the theather turns and looks at them. Kripa lets go of angad.

A: Oh opps. Kuch nahie bahi. hum aapni play ki rehersal kar raha tha

Everyone looks at them irrated and turns back. (The previews are still playing)

K: Anagd tum ghar chalo, tumha batati ho

A: Kripa.

K: Kya?

A: U know aagar tum is dukniya ki aakri ladki hogi tho bhi main tumhse shaadi nahie karo ga

K: Really how cute! 😡

A: Aur nahie tho kya. Tumahara kya pata ek din mujhpe gussa ho ka tum mera koon hi kardo.

K: Vo tho main waisa bhi karna wali hoo.

Angad dosent have anything to say and just makes a face at her.

And finally the movie starts.

Angad is really into the movie, while Kripa is just really scared. As the movie keeps going Kripa keeps moving closer to angad, after the first hour she has grabbed Angad's arms really tightly.

(I havent seen the movie, its too scary for me to 😆)

The movie is still on and Kripa is sweating now. Too scared. Thinking Angad tum ghar chalo tumahara tho main koon hi kardo gi. phir agli bar tum nahie tumahara booth dekna aayga movie ko. 😆

Kripa is still looking at the screan when sudennly a gush of blood is shown all over the screen, kripa gets sacred and hides her face on angad's chest.

A: Kripa kya hua?

K: (Still hiding her face) That was really disgusting.

A: Oh oh kripa please. Please teek sa batho.

K: No jaab movie katham ho gi mujhe batadana

A: Ok. ek mint. please sift ek mint ka liya move ho. Kripa moves her eyes still closed. Angad lifts up the arm rester and tells kripa she can come back. So until the movie is over kripa is hugging anagd hiding her face. Angad is comfortable and puts his armns around her. Finally when the movie is over. everyone is left. and Angad and Kripa are left.

Angad looks down at kripa who is sound asleep. Angad looks at her sweetly and runs his hand through her hair saying, Kripa... utho!

K: Zzzzz

A: Kripa movie is over!

K: Finally wakes, Oh sorry!

A: Its ok ab chala!

K: Ya. and they leave!

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Angad drops Kripa off and leaves to his house.

Kripa watches TV, reads a few chapters from her book and then goes on to check her E-Mail.

She looks through. There are two that she needs...

The First one is by her mom Naina,

Beta,

It will take me a few more days here. Sorry about that. Take care of yourself. Hope you had a awesome B-day! See you in a few days.

Kripa delets the message and read the next one. She is really happy after reading it and then right away she Think of angad.

K: Iisika tho mujhe intazaar tha tho phir main... mujhe doohk kyun ho raha hai. Aur main Angad ka baara main kyun sooch rahi ho. Vo bhi kush ho ga jab usko pata chala ga. Lakin phir main itni udaas kyun ho. Why am i feeling scared to leave Angad. Why?

She picks up the phone and dials Angad's number, no one picks up.

K: Damn. She picks up the phone and dials his cell

K: Angad.

A: Oh hi Kripa!

K: Hi.. kya tum mujko please mil saktha ho.

A:Ya. is everything ok.

K: Tum milo. i will tell u.

A: Ya but kaha

K: Juhu beach.

A: Ok i will be there.

K: Ok bye!

I will cont the rest later hope u enjoyed. 😛

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Posted: 20 years ago
awwwwwwwwww such a cute part. fake diamond necklace.😆😆😆. that was hilarious. and i forgot to mention in my last post angad said "i love u" to her in the part before this 1. did he really mean it or was it just a friendly one😕. neways post the nxt part soon.
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Posted: 20 years ago
another SUPRISE????????? wat is w/ u n suprises??? newayz the stry waz sweet!! i luv this Angad then the 1 in KYPH-REAL!!😆

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