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Jai Shree Ram

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Posted: 6 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal
Nice start arjun ke shuruaat ke episode ki yaad dila di arjun aur riya ek dusre ko jante hai arjun ko yaad nahi aa raha aur riya arjun ka naam sunke tension ho gai kaise jante hai ek dusre ko fab dear eagerly waiting for nxt per pehle jaldi se dono other stories la update de do aur kitna intezaar thanks for pm

Thank you so much Di

Yeh story show ki plotline ke saath saath hi chalegi. 😊

Actually maine Niyati ke do update likhe the aur ab wo mujhe mil nahi rahe. I'll update it as soon as I finish re-writing them. Sorry

Edited by Aquabutterfly - 6 years ago

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Jai Shree Ram

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Posted: 6 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan
Awesome update
Love it

Uff described the scene of roshni's murder N arjun's pain very well..

Oh so Riya already know arjun.. How?

Please continue soon

Thanks for pm

Eagerly waiting for next part

Thank you so much Di

I'll let the story clear all your doubts and questions 😊

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Arjunasr
Wonderful update.
Again that nightmare.
It's really heart wrenching.
First meet of Ariya is similar to that of the show.
But Riya knows Arjun?
Is there any connection between the two?
Continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Thank you so much dear

This entire story has the same format as the show. The initial few chapters will cover Ariya's portrayal according to the show but with different thoughts in mind. 😊

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: zubiya92
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm

Thank you so much dear

I'm glad you liked it 😊

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Vampire2468
Beautiful start 👏Loved it ❤️Wonderful update 😳Poor Arjun scared getting the nightmare of Roshni's death 😒Ariya scene was sweet and mysterious...What's the connection between them?Update soon

Thank you so much dear

You'll know the connection between them as soon as the story begins opening secrets 😊

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: bloomie
yes of course you had to raise a million questions with the first update itself, I should have seen that one coming when i read the prologue.
Anyway,
amazing update
loved it
that nightmare was really horrible
So he's entered ETF
And Riya knows him but he doesn't
My imagination is running wild at the moment
Right from messed up memories due to accidents or manipulations to Riya being the Sikandar?
I hope you do update this one frequently.
cont sooon

Thank you so much dear

Hehe...even you know that a thriller is only fun when there's a little mystery to it (I've learned this from you 😉). Remember those questions so you can find the answers when the story moves forward.

Oh my...that is one amazing imagination. But I can't say anything without giving away the storyline 😊

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Kafe
Loved the start
I feel so bad for Arjun, that poor guy
I'm glad Riya has Shree!!
So Ariya know each other but Arjun doesn't remember her... I've got so many questions already..
Hope you update soon

Thank you so much dear

Ask away. I might be able to answer some. Or I guess you can wait for the story to do the job 😊

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: nitris23
Awesome start
Love it
Love ariya first meeting
Plz continue soon
Thnxfor pm

Thank you so much dear

I'm glad you liked it 😊

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: RiyaA123
Wow
Awesome
The sync between the original and ur own added emotions and storyline is amazing
Do pm me
N update soon
Thanks for the pm

Thank you so much dear

I'm glad you noticed the sync between the two 😊

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Jai Shree Ram

@Aquabutterfly

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Posted: 6 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: KaziRume
First chapter hi itna interesting hai to age age kya hoga...
The way you described Arjun's pain, anguish and helplessness was just marvelous.Hope Arjun will soon get ride of this nightmare.
Their first encounter reminded me the first episode..
It's like Ariya knew each other and Riya could clearly remember but Arjun couldn't.
Thanks for PM.
Update a little soon that you usually do.

Thank you so much dear

I hope that you find every chapter of this story interesting. There's a lot more to come and hopefully I can match up to the expectations this first chapter has set. 😊

Next chapter will most probably be posted tomorrow.

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