Daffodils TS RaGa Last part pg4 - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
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thanks for the pm!

superb update! well written!
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Awesome ending.
Loved it.
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This was such a Dynamic Chapter

Shivaay had guessed that they were royals in their past lives
just loved the entire chapter it was so vibrant
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Superb fabulous fantastic update dear
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Awesome update and ending dear Jas..⭐️
loved it and so b'ful pics ❤️
the songs ..the moments ..and esp Raga ..just amazing..
very b'fully writing..⭐️
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Beautiful journey of writting...
well done..
lovely pictures...
awesome



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Awesome update dear👏👏👏!!! Superb ending!!! Gayatri n ShivIka came back from trip... Indra ignored Gayatri... She felt bad... Gayatri apologized to Indra... Indra came to know his past life... Gayatri suggested Indra to be friends... She overheard ShivIka convo... Gayatri's green signal for ShivIka relationship... Aww Gayatri also fell for Indra😳... Gayatri said the three magical words to Indra❤️... ShivIka pool moments😳... Loved it to the core dear... Sorry for late...
My most favourite couples in this TS r ShivIka n RaGa... Most favourite scene r 'When Gaya realized her mistake...she felt guilty'... N 'Gayatri's sweet love confession through sweet'... Once again sorry dear for late...
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That was beautiful Journey...
beautiful pictures...
enjoy reading it... 👏 👏
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul



Plz write ur favourite scene

My fav scene is when the trio got glued to the book and felt themselves😳Also when Gayu got to know Indra is not lying❤️Also when ShiviKa sacrificed their love for their friend Gayu😳Also when Gayu got to know she reunited them and got herself with Indra😳😳

character

I liked everyone's character here...Can't pick one😊


n fav jodi n also y u like them.

ShiviKa (for Sanaya)😉, RaGa (they are so cute and the chemistry😳😳😳), ShiviKaYu❤️(I always wanted to see them in one frame😉)


Daffodils Part3




After holidays they went back to college.
Indra kept avoiding Gayatri and it hurt her.



Gayatri walked after him.
Gayatri:Indra..why are you ignoring me?
Indra looked at her in disbelief.
Indra:You are asking me this Gayatri?You only told me not to come near you.



Gayatri felt guilty.
Gayatri:I am sorry Indra.
Indra:Sorry?
He could not believe his ears.
Gayatri:I realized that I was wrong and you were right.Sorry for misunderstanding you.
Indra:I was right means?What did you understand?
Gayatri:You saw me as a Princess in your dream.It is true.I understood why you saw me in your dream.
Indra:How did you understand it?
Gayatri:For that you need to come with me to a place.
Shivay and Anika came.
Shivay:Gayatri is right Indra.We found out some unbelievable secrets.You need to know it.

Yes😊


Anika:You will be really shocked.
Indra:What secret?
Shivay:Come with us.
Indra:Ok.
Gayatri was relieved.

They took Indra to the Palace.
Indra:What connection has this half destructed bungalow to do with my dream?
Gayatri:It's not an ordinary bungalow.This is a palace where our story started.
Indra:Our story?
Shivay:Yes Indra.Look at the paintings on the wall.
Indra was shocked to see the paintings on the wall.
Indra:Gayu..you were exactly like this in my dreams.
Gayatri:I know Indra.It's because you were dreaming of me as I was your wife in your previous birth.
He was shocked.
She showed him the history book.He was shocked to go through the pages of the book.
Indra was so shocked that he did'nt know what to say.
Gayatri:Please forgive me Indra.
Indra looked at Gayatri emotionally.

Hume na tha pata
Ki tum aur mai yun


Gayatri:Please...
Indra smiled nodding his head.
She smiled.

😃

Hum ban jayenge
Oh.. dil ki raaste jo
Kitni alag the, yun mil jayenge



Indra:To be frank I was never angry with you Gayu..I mean Gayatri.But I was upset.

😊

Yeh ishq toh ek ibaadat hai
Jahaan sab kho ke, sab paa gaye hai



Gayatri:Call me Gayu.That's better.
Indra was very happy:Yes...Gayu..

Wow...So cute😳

She smiled.

Yeh ishq bale poora na ho
Yeh sab kehte hai ae
Reh jate hai



Gayatri:Don't be upset anymore.
He smiled nodding.
Gayatri:Indra..I am not saying that I fell in love with you.
Indra became upset.



Pyar ka pehl, ishq ka duza
Aur mohabbat ka teesra


Gayatri:But we can be friends.Right?
Shall we be friends?
He smiled holding her hand.

😃

Lafz aadha hota hai
Haan.. lafz aadha hota hai


They shared a sweet eye lock.

Koi to koi to yeh pataya
Yeh pyaar kyun hota hai(ETRETR).


Shivay-Anika were very happy.


👍🏼

Shivay-Anika were in the college backyard.
Shivay held her hand softly.

Kahin rok le gham Kabhi aankh ho nam Aawaaz de jab tujhe de
Yakeen Khud pe ho kam tanha ho jab hum Aawaaz de jab tujhe de

Anika:Shivay...why are you like this?We had a taken a decision.Right?
Shivay:I know Anika.We had decided to control our feelings for each other as Gaya does'nt like love entering our friendship.But after knowing our past I am not able to control my feelings.
Anika felt upset.

Uss pal mein saath dena
Haatho mein haath dena Ho jab gile toh gale se lagaana
O Jaana...

He pulled her close passionately and said:I feel that we took rebirth only to be with each other and not to be separated again.

Tujhse pehle bhi hum, Jeete the har mausam
Na yaadon mein khushbu thi na khawabon mein resham
Tujhko pakar sari, duniya hui hamari

They had an emotional eye lock.

😭

Tere shanay par sir rakhkay, gum hojate hai hum
Nazdeek tu rahe toh, humraah tu chale toh
Hum dhoop mein dhundle aashiyaana, O Jaana


Anika:No Shivay..this is wrong.Gaya will be so hurt.For us our friendship is more important.Right?
Shivay became guilty:Thanks for making me realize my mistake Anika.Otherwise we would have lost our friend Gaya and I would not be able to forgive myself ever.
They both wept.

Sabse khaas hai phir bhi, dil ke paas hai phir bhi
Tu hai dur duri ab ye kaise kam hogi
Milke hue the pure, kyu phir hue adhure
Ye khaamoshi ki rait kaise nam hogi Jaise ho do kinare
lamhe hai gum hamare, Manzar kaha kho gaya vo puranaa(IB)


Suddenly they saw Gayatri standing over there with teary eyes.
Shivay-Anika were shocked.
Anika:Gaya..it's not like you think.
Shivay:There is nothing between us.We are not dating secretly behind you.
Gayatri:But you both are hiding your love.Right?

Yes

Anika-Shivay were silent.
Gayatri:I was wondering why you both are not falling in love with each other even after getting reincarnated.Now I understood that I was wrong.You both are deeply in love with each other,but for me you guys sacrificed your love?
Shivay-Anika:Gaya...
Gayatri:Just for my friendship you both did such a big sacrifice.If you both wound your hearts like this for me I will never be able to forgive myself.I am ashamed of myself for being such a bad friend.

Shivay-Anika became upset.
Shivay:Don't say like that Gaya.You are the best friend we could get.That's why we don't want to lose you.

😊

Anika:For us you are more important.
Gayatri:For me you both are more important.Your happiness is more important for me.
Gayatri held their hands and joined together.

👏

Gayatri:You both should never leave each others hands.God gave you a second chance to live together.Don't lose it.Always be happy in each other's love.
Shivay-Anika were surprised.They smiled emotionally.
The trio had an emotional happy hug.

While walking Gayatri slipped only to be caught by Indravadhan.They shared a sweet pure romantic eye lock.

❤️

Koi to koi to ye pataya

Yeh pyar kyun hota hai




They broke the eye lock and Gayatri stood up blushing.He was also blushing.


Gayatri:Thanks.
Indra:No mention Gayu.
Gayatri looked at Indravadhan:I know that you expect me to love you.I know sometimes we both wonder why we took rebirth if we are not falling in love.But Indra..it's not easy for me.
Indravadhan looked at her.
Gayatri:My dad left us when I was small.I lost faith in love.But after reading our past love story I realized that eternal love exists in this world.
Indra:I understand your situation Gayu.But not everyone is like your dad.I love you unconditionally.I can never think of leaving you and hurting you.

😭

Gayatri said emotionally:I know Indra.

Yeh ishq to, ek ibaadat hai
Yeh ishq to, ek ibaadat hai


They shared an emotional eye lock.

Sawariya..
Sawariya..
Sawariya..(Ek tha raja ek thi Rani title song).



Prom night came...
All were dressed in beautiful gowns n suits.
Shivay held Anika's hand:I can't tell you how beautiful you are.
Anika blushed.
Gayatri:Very bad.Only Anika is beautiful?Not me?
Shivay giggled:But now only Indra has the right to admire your beauty.

Yes😃

Gayatri became shy.
Shivay pulled Anika to the dance floor.
They both swayed to the beautiful music.

Aasmaan sitaron se chalakne laga
Chand saa tu jo mujhmein chamakne laga (x2)
Rahun tere yoon paas main
Banu tera ehsaas main
Yaar jee loon aa teri har saas main
Shaam saa tu dhalta
Tu subah saa nikalta
Tere saaye mein chalta
Main hoon saath tere
Main hoon saath tere
Hai yehi iraada
Tujhe chahun khud se zyada
Dil se hai yeh waada
Main hoon sath tere
Main hoon sath tere (x2)


Seene mein tere pyar ki
Udti hai patange
Udke yoon hawa mein tera
Main aanchal hua..
Ho bheega hoon tere saath main
Barishon mein teri
Bikhri jo teri zulf toh
Main badal hua..

Romantic👏



Indra who came got lost in Gayatri's beauty.
Indra:In my dreams you looked like an Indian Princess.Now you look like a Disney Princess.

😳

She blushed.
Indra:May I dance with you?
Gayatri:If not with you,with whom will I dance Indra?

😃

He smiled.
They both danced romantically.

Teri kaali ankhein
Mere khwaab ka hai dariya
Main utar ke inme kho gaya

Hai yehi iraada
Tujhe chahun khud se zyada




Dil se hai yeh wada

Main hoon saath tere

Main hoon saath tere (x2)
Tere hi liye raat bhi

Din bhi main guzarun
Soye tu tujhe raat bhar main dekha karun


Gayatri and Indra were lost in each other.
She thought:Why i feel so different and happy with Indra?Why I am getting attracted towards him?When he is with me I feel complete.I don't see anything else when I am with him.If this is not love,then what is this?I think i should share my feelings with Indra.

Yes, plz do it😃

She blushed.
Indra said in his mind:Gayu says that I am only a friend for him.But Why I feel love in her eyes when she looks at me?

😉

Mujhme tu kuch is tarah se
Ho gaya hai shaamil


Tere bin chalun bheed mein
Toh tanha lagoon
Aaina ho koyi
Nazar aaye mujhko tu hi
Main bhi tera chehra ho gaya


Hai yehi iraada
Tujhe chahun khud se zyada


Dil se hai yeh waada

Main hoon saath tere (x4)( Shaadi Mein Zaroor Aana)



Days passed...

Shivay-Anika jumped into the pool together giggling.

O jaana
Khoya khoya rehta hai
Dil tadap ye kehta hai
Tu hai mere jeene ki wajah
O jaana..





They both splashed water at each other.

Ishq hai aansu ishq hai naghma
Ishq sukoon hai raahat hai
Ishq hai sehra ishq hai dariya
Ishq junoon hai zahmat hai (x2)




They moved closer to each other with romantic expressions.


Tanha adhoora sa
Khaamosh lamha sa
Tehra hua hai dil yahaan
Mehsoos kar le tu
Jazbaat ki khushbu
Khud se karun kya mai bayaan


Shivay was mesmerized with her wet look.They looked at each other passionately.


Dard hai jo halka sa
Khaab khaab chalka sa
Tu muskuraaye har jagah
O jaana..




He caressed the water pearls of her face.Feeling his magical touch she forgot everything else closing her eyes.

Khoya khoya rehta hai
Dil tadap ye kehta hai
Tu hai mere jeene ki wajah
O jaana..





He pulled her closer and closer.

Kis pe karun zaahir
Hain dard kya aakhir
Kyon sukoon mujh se khafa
Betaab lamhon mein




Anika could'nt bear it anymore and embraced him passionately.

❤️😳


Benaam aashqon mein
Yeh aaks kis ka ban gaya
Ghum ko aazmaane de
Dil ko chot khaane de
Kya h chale kuch to pata



The pool water witnessed their love.

O jaana
Khoya khoya rehta hai
Dil tadap ye kehta hai
Tu hai mere jeene ki wajah
O jaana.. O jaana o jaana..

-ishqbaaz


Indravadhan and Gayatri were chatting and laughing.

Gayatri:By the way I bought some sweets from the bakery.Do you love sweets?Would you love to share it?
Indra:Absolutely Gayu.I love it.
Gayatri:Then we will eat together.
She took the sweet box and fed him sweet with her hand.

Hume na tha pata
Ki tum aur mai yun



He loved to be fed by her.He fed a sweet back.

Hum ban jayenge
Oh.. dil ki raaste jo
Kitni alag the, yun mil jayenge



Gayatri:Indra...there is a a bit of sweet on your lips.
Indra:Oh..I will wipe it now.
Gayatri:No need.I want that sweet.I want to taste it.

😃☺️

Indravadhan gave her a confused look.
She smiled mischievously and moved towards his lips.He sucked the bit of sweet from his lips.He was stunned.

🤪

Yeh ishq toh ek ibaadat hai
Jahaan sab kho ke, sab paa gaye hai

He was numb.She smiled at him.

Yeh ishq bale poora na ho
Yeh sab kehte hai ae
Reh jate hai


Gayatri:Should I do it again to bring you back to senses?
A smile appeared on his lips.They both smiled sweetly.

😉

Pyar ka pehl, ishq ka duza
Aur mohabbat ka teesra


Indra:Yes,I want you to do it again.
She became shy.

😛

Lafz aadha hota hai
Haan.. lafz aadha hota hai


Indra:But before that I want to know why you did it actually. I know it was not to have the sweet.
Gayatri:You want to heart the 3 magical words from me.Right?

Yes

He smiled nodding.

Koi to koi to yeh pataya
Yeh pyaar kyun hota hai


Gayatri looked at his eyes deeply and uttered those words he longed to hear from her:I love you.

Koi to koi to ye pataya

Yeh pyar kyun hota hai



They shared a romantic eye lock.

❤️

Yeh ishq to, ek ibaadat hai
Yeh ishq to, ek ibaadat hai


They pulled each other closer only for a romantic union of their lips.

☺️🤪

Sawariya..
Sawariya..
Sawariya..(Ek tha raja ek thi Rani title song).



The daffodils Shivay-Anika and Indra-Gayatri drowned in their world of love and friendship living happily.

👏👏👏

The end

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