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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks a lot 4 the lovely comment.But which telugu movie?Bcz this story is not inspired by any movie

Originally posted by: Mg13



Thanks for the pm..
It gives me feeling of some movie .I had watched it in telugu and old movies..like gayatri hate love thing and both anika and shivay hiding there feelings for her..maybe there is her past or she is also facing her previous birth memories that's why running away from indra .
Awesome pics. .specially edits are fabulous of shivay anika. .and there dance as well.
At end they might have seen her pics of her previous birth

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank u so much friends 4 the support


Daffodils Part2






There was a painting where Shivay was dressed like a Prince.



In one painting Anika and Gayatri were dressed like Princesses.

There were paintings where Anika and Gayatri really had a royal look.



There were paintings where Indravadhan and Gayatri were sitting together in a royal manner.


Gayatri:What is all this yaar?
Anika:How come we all look so royal here?We look like the people of old dynasty.
They laughed.
Anika:Must say..Shivay ..you look like a King.So handsome and royal.
Gayatri:Right.Shivay looks the best.But we are not less than him.We look like the real Queens of an old era.
Anika:Ya..right.
Shivay:Girls...be serious.Just think how we are in these paintings.Who did our paintings?And how come Indra and Gaya are together in the painting?
Gayatri:I doubt if it's a prank by that Indra.He imagines me as a Princess.Who knows whether he put his imagination in the canvas?
Shivay:Don't say rubbish Gaya.This is an old palace and the paintings look really old.Indra cannot have any hand in this.
Anika:I think Shivay is right.
Gayatri:Then what is the meaning of all this?
Anika:We have to find out.
Suddenly her eyes fell on a book.It was about Gupta Kingdom.
She opened the book.There too she saw the pictures of her,Gayatri ,Shivay and Indra.
Anika:Guys..look here.
They too got shocked seeing the pics.
They started reading the book.
The King Shashi Gupta and Jhanaki Gupta had two daughters.The Princess Surbhi and Princess Gayatri.
Surbhi and Gayatri were best friends.
The little the King and the Queen knew that Surbhi was in love with the Rival Kingdom's Prince Shiv Chandra.
Surbhi who wanted to live like a free bird dressed like an ordinary girl and went to a forest to enjoy the life of an ordinary girl.There the Prince Shiv Chandra came for hunting.
Surbhi was dipping her hands in the river water and enjoying.

Suddenly she heard a tiger roaring.She got scared to see a tiger coming towards her.She screamed running.Shiv heard it and followed her voice.He witnessed the tiger approaching Surbhi.He sent a sharp arrow to the tiger and it struck the tiger terribly.The tiger fell down dead.Surbhi was relieved.Surbhi looked at Shiv.
Surbhi thought:Guess he is a Prince.
Surbhi:Thank you very much.I owe my life to you.
Shiv was lost in her simple beauty.


Kehne ko Jashn-e-bahara hai
Ishq yeh dekhke hairaan hai
Kehne ko Jashn-e-bahara hai
Ishq yeh dekhke hairaan hai



Shiv:Who are you?
Surbhi's lips shivered.
She thought:He should not know my identity.
Surbhi:My name is Surbhi.I stay here only.
Shiv:I am the Prince of Chandra Kingdom.
Surbhi was shocked.
She thought:Oh my God!He is our rival.I must go from here.
Surbhi:I am going.
Surbhi ran away.
Shiv:Hey stop...

Surbhi did not listen to him.Shiv became dull.

Surbhi and Shiv could not stop thinking of each other.They craved to see each other.
Surbhi:I should go there in disguise of an ordinary girl to that forest again.He may come there.
Shiv:I must go to the same forest.She may be there.
Surbhi and Shiv reached there.As they expected they saw each other.They were lost in each other.
O jaana...
Shiv: After seeing you that day I could not forget your face.I was longing to see you.To be frank I came here only to see you.
Surbhi became emotional:Even my heart was only you.I also came here only to see you.
Shiv became very happy.

Phool se khusboo khafa khafa hai gulshan mein
Chupa hai koi ranj fiza ki chilman mein
Sare sehmein nazare hain
Soye soye vaqt ke dhare hain
Aur dil mein koi khoye si baatein hain

Ooo hooo...
Kehne ko Jashn-e-bahara hai
Ishq yeh dekhke hairaan hai


Shiv cupped her face in his hands:I think love happened with me at first sight itself.
Surbhi:Me too.
Shiv:We will become one.

Phool se khusboo khafa khafa hai gulshan mein
Chupa hai koi ranj fiza ki chilman mein
Kaise kahen kya hai sitam
Sochte hai ab yeh hum
Koi kaise kahen woh hai ya nahi humare


Surbhi looked at his eyes emotionally:We can never be one.
Shiv was shocked:But why?

Karte to hai saath safar
Faasle hain phir bhi magar
Jaise milte nahi kisi dariya ke do kinare


Surbhi:As you think I am not an ordinary girl.I am the Princess of your rival Kingdom.I am Surbhi Gupta.
Shiv was shocked:Then why are you dressed up like an ordinary girl?Why are you here?
Surbhi:Because I wanted to live like a common woman at least for some moments.I love simplicity.
Shiv:Now I love you more.Which other Princess prefers a simple life instead of a luxurious life?I love you Surbhi.I want you.I always wanted a simple girl like you as my life partner.Our parents may be rivals.But we are not.
Surbhi smiled emotionally:I love you too Prince Shiv.



Pass hain phir bhi paas nahi
Humko yeh gum raas nahi
Seeshe ki ek diware hai jaise darmiya
Sare sehmein nazare hain
Soye soye vaqt ke dhare hain
Aur dil mein koi khoye si baatein hain
Ooo hooo..


They had an emotional embrace.

Kehne ko Jashn-e-bahara hai
Ishq yeh dekhke hairaan hai
Phool se khusboo khafa khafa hai gulshan mein
Chupa hai koi ranj fiza ki chilman mein
(Jodha akbar song)

Surbhi shared this only with her dearest sister Princess Gayatri.She supported the lovers.
Gayatri:True love is a luck.You both are lucky,
Surbhi smiled.
The princess Surbhi wrote love notes for Princess Shiv on leaves and gave them to the doves who were her pets.
Surbhi:Please make sure that the Rajkumar Shiv gets it.

The doves carried them to the Prince Shiv making him very happy.
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The Prince Shiv wrote love notes back on leaves and sent them to Surbhi through the same doves.
Shashi Gupta arranged Princess Gayatri's Swayamvar.Lots of Princes came for the swayamvar.Gayatri got attracted towards only one person.It was Rana Indravadan Singh Deo;The prince of Amerkot.
She prayed secretly to make him win the challenge given to him by the King Shashi Gupta.
There was a huge sword kept over there.They contestants tried to pick it up only to fail.But Indravadhan Rana picked it up easily winning the challenge.Gayatri's happiness had no bounds.
Gayatri went towards him:Congratulations Ranaji.I wanted only you to win.

Yeh ishq toh ek ibaadat hai
Jahaan sab kho ke, sab paa gaye hai


He smiled:Thank you Princess Gayatri.It's my biggest happiness that I won this challenge.I am so lucky to get the most precious woman in this world as my life partner.

Yeh ishq bale poora na ho
Yeh sab kehte hai ae
Reh jate hai


Flower petals were thrown on them by others.Indravadhan removed a petal from her face.She blushed.

Pyar ka pehl, ishq ka duza
Aur mohabbat ka teesra

Lafz aadha hota hai
Haan.. lafz aadha hota hai
Koi to koi to yeh pataya
Yeh pyaar kyun hota hai


They shared a romantic eye lock.

Yeh ishq to, ek ibaadat hai
Yeh ishq to, ek ibaadat hai

Sawariya..
Sawariya..
Sawariya..(Ek tha raja ek thi Rani title song).




Indravadhan and Gayatri's wedding was conducted in a grand manner.



Gayatri waited for her man on the flower bed.Finally he arrived.He held her passionately from behind.


She could feels goosebumps when his body touched hers.She could feel his hot breath on her neck and unknowingly she closed her eyes feeling his touch.


He took a red rose and gave it to her.She smiled.

He took another rose and plucked the petals.
Then he blew them at her romantically.

She was blushing.
He placed her on the flower bed.
Again he threw the flower petals on her soft skin.Then he picked them up one by one with his lips.He covered her with his body making love with her.


In Lamhon Ke Daaman Mein
Pakiza Se Riste Hain
Koi Kalma Mohabat Ka
Dohrate Farishte Hain

Khamosh Si Hai Zameen Hairaan Sa Falak Hai
Ek Noor Hi Noor Sa Ab Aasman Talak Hai
( Nagmein Hi Nagmein Hai Jagti Soti Fizaon Mein
Husn Hai Sari Adaon Mein
Ishq Hai Jaise Hawaon Mein )... (2)

Tanana Dom Ta Dom Tanana Dom Ta Dom
Tanana Dom Ta Dom Tanana Dom Ta Dom
Tanam Tanam Tanam Tanana Dom Tom
Tanana Dom Ta Dom Tanana Dom Ta Dom
Tanana Dom Ta Dom Tanana Dom Ta Dom
Tana Dom Tom Tana Dom Tom Tanana Dom Tom
Dom Tom Tana Nana Dom Tom Tana Dom
Dom Tom Tana Nana Dom Tom Tana
Ohhoo
Dom Dom Tom Tana Nana Dom Tom Tana
Dom Tom Tana Nana Dom Tom Tana Nana

Kaise Yeh Ishq Hai
Kaisa Yeh Khwab Hai
Kaise Jazbaat Ka Umda Salab Hai

Kaise Yeh Ishq Hai
Kaisa Yeh Khwab Hai
Kaise Jazbaat Ka Umda Salab Hai
Din Badle Raatein Badli, Baathein Badli
Jeene Ke Aandaz Hi Badlein Hai
In Lamhon Ke Daaman Mein
Pakiza Se Riste Hain
Koi Kalma Mohabat Ka
Dohrate Farishte Hain



Shiv and Surbhi met each other in the forest.
Shiv:I can't wait anymore to make you mine Princess Surbhi.
Surbhi:Even I can't wait anymore Prince Shiv.Each moment which is spent without you is very painful for me.
Shiv:Let us get married.
She smiled.
Shiv and Surbhi got ready for their Gandhar Vivah.

Surbhi made a garland with flowers plucked from the forest and made Shiv wear it.

Hum ne jo tha nagma suna
Dil ne tha usko chuna
Yeh dastaan humein vaqt ne kaise sunai
Hum jo agar hai gumgee
Woh bhi udhar khush to nahi
Mulakato mein hai jaise ghul si gai tanhai


Surbhi:My Swayamwar is over.I have chosen you as my husband.
Shiv smiled.

Milke bhi hum milte nahi
Khilke bhi gul khilte nahi
Aankhon mein hai baharein dil mein khiza
Sare sehmein nazare hain
Soye soye vaqt ke dhare hain
Aur dil mein koi khoye si baatein hain
ooo hoo
They shared a sweet romantic eye lock.
Kehne ko Jashan-e-bahara hai
Ishq yeh dekhke hairaan hai
Phool se khusboo khafa khafa hai gulshan mein
Chupa hai koi ranj fiza ki chilman mein(Jodha Akbar).


They walked around around the sacred fire claiming each other as spouse.

He caressed her face passionately.She pulled him closer to her.
He tasted her lips only to claim every inch of her body.
They became one in every sense.

Samay Ne Yeh Kya Kiya
Badal Di Hai Kaya
Tumhe Mene Paa Liye
Mujhe Tumne Paya

Mile Dekho Aise Hai Hum
Ke Do Sur Ho Jaise Madham
Koi Jyada Na Koi Kaam
Kise Aag Mein
Ke Prem Aag Mein
Jalte Dono Hi The Tan Bhi Hai Maan Bhi
Maan Bhi Hai Tan Bhi
Tan Bhi Hai Maan Bhi
Maan Bhi Hai Tan Bhi

Mere Khwaabon Ke Is Gulistaan Mein
Tumse Hi Tum Bahar Chai Hai
Phoolon Mein Rang Mere The Lekin
In Mein Khusboon Tumhi Se Aaye Hai

( Kyon Hai Yeh Arzoo
Kyon Hai Yeh Zustzu
Kyon Dil Bechain Hai
Kyon Dil Betaab Hai )... (2)
Din Badle Raatein Badli Baatien Badli
Jeene Ke Andaaz Hi Badle Hain

In Lamhon Ke Daaman Mein
Pakiza Se Riste Hain
Koi Kalma Mohabat Ka
Dohrate Farishte Hain

Khamosh Si Hai Zameen Hairaan Sa Falak Hai
Ek Noor Hi Noor Sa Ab Aasman Talak Hai
Nagmein Hi Nagmein Hai Jagti Soti Fizaon Mein
Husn Hai Sari Adaon Mein
Ishq Hai Jaise Hawaon Mein
Ishq Hai Jaise Hawaon Mein...(Jodha Akbar).

The common people who witnessed their secret wedding spread the news and it reached the ears of Shashi Gupta and Shakti Chandra who was Shiv's father.
Shashi slapped Surbhi.
Shashi:Are you not ashamed to do Gandharv Vivah with our rival being a Princess?
Surbhi:I loved a person.I did not do any sin.I will love only Prince Shiv till the end of my life.
Shashi slapped her again.

The King Shakti sent a goon to kill Princess Surbhi.As he ordered the goon entered Surbhi's room secretly and squeezed her neck till she lost her breath and dropped her body down.


Her dasi found her lifeless body lying down

She screamed:Rajkumari Surbhi is no more.

All who came there was shocked and shattered to see her corpse.

Gayatri's tears had no ending when she lost her sister.
Indravadhan wiped her tears:Please don't cry.Your tears are precious.
Gayatri:My sister was my life Ranaji.I lost her.
Indravadhan:But you are my life my lady.If pain affects your face,my heart breaks.
Gayatri embraced him trying hard to control her tears.He caressed her to soothe her.
Sawariya..
Sawariya..
Sawariya..(Ek tha raja ek thi Rani title song).


Knowing what his father did to his beloved Shiv was shattered.
Shiv:Pitaji..you killed Surbhi for me.Right?
The King Shakti was silent.

Shiv:But you can't win.
Shiv stabbed himself with the sword and died.Shakti sreamed:Shivvv

The death of the Prince Shiv and the murder of Princess Surbhi increased the enmity of the two Kingdoms and they arranged a war.Both Kingdoms destroyed terribly shedding their blood in the war.

Time passed...

Gayatri adorned herself in front of the mirror.

Indravadhan went near her and whispered in her ears:Beautiful!
She blushed.

Hume na tha pata
Ki tum aur mai yun


He took a shining crown and kept it over her head.

Hum ban jayenge
Oh.. dil ki raaste jo
Kitni alag the, yun mil jayenge



Indra:Without this accessory how can your look be complete?

She smiled.

Yeh ishq toh ek ibaadat hai
Jahaan sab kho ke, sab paa gaye hai

They both had a royal breakfast together


Sawariya..
Sawariya..



and went to their thrones.

Sawariya..Sawariya..(Ek tha raja ek thi Rani title song).

The Mughal invasion caused destruction in Amerkot which belonged to Rana Indravadan.
The Mughals looted them and in the attack Indravadhan got deeply injured.Gayatri could not bear it.
Gayatri:Ranaji...
Indravadhan held her hand:As I told you before don't cry.I can't bear your tears.I want to die seeing your happy face.
She cried:No..nothing will happen to you.You can't leave me Ranaji.
Indravadhan:Who said I am leaving you?In all the 7 births I will follow you.We will reunite in the next birth Gayatri.
He closed his eyes.
Gayatri screamed:Ranajiii
She fell on him crying.Gayatri could not live without her Ranaji.So her heart beat stopped taking her life away from her body.

Anika,Shivay and Gayatri were in tears reading the book.
Anika:They had a tragic love story.
Gayatri:That time Gayatri could not live without Ranaji.
Shivay:Guys..why do they resemble us?Why Gaya and Indra had same names in past too?
Anika:What are you trying to say Shivay?
Shivay:Don't you think that we are their reincarnation?
Anika and Gayatri were stunned.
Gayatri remembered Indra telling her that he used to see her as a Princess in his dreams.
Gayatri:It means Indra was telling the truth.I simply misunderstood him.
Shivay:Gaya...I think Indra dreamt of you as you were his wife in the previous birth.
Gayatri said emotionally:May be.
Anika:It means we also took rebirth to reunite?
Shivay-Anika shared an emotional eye lock which went unnoticed by Gayatri.

Kahin rok le gham Kabhi aankh ho nam Aawaaz de jab tujhe de
Yakeen Khud pe ho kam tanha ho jab hum Aawaaz de jab tujhe de
Uss pal mein saath dena
Haatho mein haath dena Ho jab gile toh gale se lagaana
O Jaana...

Tujhse pehle bhi hum, Jeete the har mausam
Na yaadon mein khushbu thi na khawabon mein resham
Tujhko pakar sari, duniya hui hamari
Tere shanay par sir rakhkay, gum hojate hai hum
Nazdeek tu rahe toh, humraah tu chale toh
Hum dhoop mein dhundle aashiyaana, O Jaana

Sabse khaas hai phir bhi, dil ke paas hai phir bhi
Tu hai dur duri ab ye kaise kam hogi
Milke hue the pure, kyu phir hue adhure
Ye khaamoshi ki rait kaise nam hogi Jaise ho do kinare
lamhe hai gum hamare, Manzar kaha kho gaya vo puranaa(IB)
Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13


Awesome pics 😃
And I just love the dialogue between ranaji and gayatri.
Frankly saying ..there were too much I mean half of the story of anika shivay ..you should named it with both of the couple.
I only love to read on raga.
So 3 of them got to know about there previous birth ..and it was shivay who guess .it that they must be king and Queen in that book.
Now gayatri can trust on indra that he was saying only truth. But I love her character here.
It's first time I read it ..it's like a movie.
All in all fabulous part 👏
All scenes and dialogue were same as old saga.
I feel like as if I am watching it..


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thanks a lot 4 the lovely comment.But which telugu movie?Bcz this story is not inspired by any movie


Yeah di. .I know it's your own concept..
I just said that..gayatri's character. Like she hate love thing and taunt indra always like she is unknown of anika shivay love story which they are hiding for her there friend ..it's all I have watch it in few of movies that is old specially and telugu also I guess. And I can't remember which movie..
😃
But your concept is for sure very different from all ff I have read till now 😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15
thanks a lot.Actually here anika is not SC.So I can't name it as a shivika ff

Originally posted by: Mg13



Awesome pics 😃
And I just love the dialogue between ranaji and gayatri.
Frankly saying ..there were too much I mean half of the story of anika shivay ..you should named it with both of the couple.
I only love to read on raga.
So 3 of them got to know about there previous birth ..and it was shivay who guess .it that they must be king and Queen in that book.
Now gayatri can trust on indra that he was saying only truth. But I love her character here.
It's first time I read it ..it's like a movie.
All in all fabulous part 👏
All scenes and dialogue were same as old saga.
I feel like as if I am watching it..


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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

thanks a lot.Actually here anika is not SC.So I can't name it as a shivika ff



oh yes. i can understand 😛
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Awesome superb nice fabulous update dear
Thanks for pm
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superb update! well written! thanks
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Awesome update ⭐️
and so sorry for late comment ..😳
loved it but want to read more of Raga..
so they got to know that they might be the reincarnation ..of princess and prince.
hmm
pics are lovely too ..❤️
thanks for pm Jas dear.😃
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Awesome update!!
Lovely pics.
Very beautifully written.

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