Voh Ho Tum Sanam. PART 1 updated

Hi guys I am new here and am going to write a new fan-fic please leave lots of comments.


The characters in my fan-fic are...

-Kripa and Angad- they are happily married with twin girls that are 5 year old. Their daughter names are Shonali and Prerana.

-Kunal and Nimmo- they are also happily married couple with a 4 year old daughter named Ananya and are expecting another child because nimmo is pregnant.

-Prem and Aaliya-They are also married but unlike the other two couples they are not happy. Prem and Aaliya's wedding was forced upon by Prem's father because Prem's dad and Aaliya's dad were childhood friends. Eventhough Aaliya has feelings for Prem, Prem doesn't feel a thing for Aaliya.


-Mukti- She is not married to anyone but she did want to. She loved PRem and he loved her but they couldn't be together because Mukti wasn't rich and Prem'S dad hated middle class people.

- Anjali- She isn't married either. She isn't a good character but isn't totally bad either. She has shades of good to her character, but big spots of bad to it too. She loved Kunal but her never loved her he only loved nimmo.


- This is Natasha and Sharad. They are married too. Sharad absolutely loves Natasha but Natasha loves kunal. Even though sharad thinks natasha loves him and their marriage is going great it's really not. Natasha is doing everything she can to get kunal back.

-Summet-tina are also a couple but are not married yet. They are engaged and soon to get married. They are very good friends with Kunal-nimmo and Angad-Kripa. They love kids.




So this story is about how the different characters struggle to survive with their marriage. Even though their marriage life is great, it's still not prefect. THey have to adapt to situation to make themselves one. They have to ignore everything bad that comes their way.

HEY GUYS THERE'S THE TITLE SONG TO MY FAN-FIC.


Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai, dil yeh diya hai
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai, jisko pyaar kiya hai
Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai
Voh ho tum voh ho tum, voh ho tum voh ho tum (THEY SHOW ANGAD-KRIPA PLAYING WITH THEIR KIDS AND LAUGHING)

Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai
Tumhe paake dilbar mujhe lag raha hai
Meri zindagi mein na ab kuch kami hai
Ho, tumhe paake dilbar mujhe lag raha hai
Meri zindagi mein na ab kuch kami hai
Tumhaare labon pe jo bikhri kali hai
Voh shabnam nahin hai, vafa ki nami hai
Jisne mera chain liya hai, mera chain liya hai
Voh ho tum voh ho tum, voh ho tum voh ho tum(THEY SHOW KUNAL COOKING AND MAKING A BIG MESS IN THE KITCHEN WHILE NIMMO IS LAUGHING AT HIM)

Barbaadi ki taraf moda hai, kyoon moda hai
Jisne mera dil toda hai, dil toda hai
Barbaadi ki taraf moda hai
Jisne mera dil toda hai
Voh ho tum voh ho tum, voh ho tum voh ho tum -2 (THEY SHOW AALIYA CRYING AT A CORNER WHILE LOOKING AT HER WEDDING PICTURES)

Mohabbat mein tumne kisi roz dilbar
Mujhe apni baahon ka sahaara diya tha
Ho, mohabbat mein tumne kisi roz dilbar
Mujhe apni baahon ka sahaara diya tha
Meri chaahaton ko khayaalon ko tumne
Bada khubsoorat nazaara diya tha
Ab gham se rishta joda hai, kyoon joda hai
Barbaadi ki taraf moda hai
Jisne mera dil toda hai
Voh ho tum voh ho tum, voh ho tum voh ho tum -2( THEY SHOW PREM LOOKING OUT THE WINDOW THINKING ABOUT MUKTI)

Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai, dil yeh diya hai
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai, jisko pyaar kiya hai
Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai
Voh ho tum voh ho tum, voh ho tum voh ho tum - 2
(WE SEE MUKTI CRYING LOOKING AT PREM'S PICTURE)

Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai, dil yeh diya hai
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai, jisko pyaar kiya hai
Maine jisko dil yeh diya hai
Maine jisko pyaar kiya hai
Voh ho tum voh ho tum, voh ho tum voh ho tum - 2(WE SEE EVERYONE (except natasha,anjali,and sharad) IN THE SCREEN CONTINUE DOING WHAT THEY WERE DOING)

I HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE MY FAN-FIC AND PLEASE COMMENT OR I WON'T CONTINUE.

sounds interesting 👏 continue soon

sounds great!! cant wait for the first part!! and welcome to IF!! Watch out, this section/site is addictive 👏

interesting, cant wait for u to continue!!!!! 😊

sounds interesting
nice inro and title song
welcum to i-f and beware its v. addictive
start soon

thanks guys for liking the intro so much! i will continue soon! watch out for the first part till then please leave more comments because it encourages me to write better!

sounds great can't wait for the first part 😊

First i would also like to thank nimmo4kunal for providing me with the nimmo kunal avi. Thanks. and please give more comments i hope you like the avis and the new couple i have added.

PART 1

We see a beautiful house,then we zoom into a bedroom and see two people sleeping. It's very peaceful until two kids come stroming inot the room and start jumping on the people sleeping.

Shonali: mumma. utho, dekho prerana merko mera doll nahin derahi.

Prerana: yeh mera doll hai.

Shonali: nahin mera.

Prerana: mera

Shonali: mera

Prerana: meraaa! (starts pulling shonali's hair and kicking her)

Girl: beta shonali ko chor do! (we can't see the lady's face yet because it's covered with the blanket)

Prerana: nahin, mera doll de pehele.

Shonali: nahin.

Prerana: (gets angry and pushes her to the ground)

Shonali: (Starts crying loudly)

guy: uff! kripa utho apni roj ki duty khatam karo.

Kripa: (she gets up witha jerk and we see it's kripa) uffo angad kabhi to kuck kara karo.

Anagad: kar to raha hoon. soraha hoon.

Kripa: uff kis aadmi ke saath phus gayi mein. (gives a light push to him and gets up)

Prerana: mumma yeh mera doll hai!

Kripa: uffo ek doll hi to hai, share kar lo!

prerana:pur yeh mera doll hai.

Kripa. uff! (thinks for a while and gets an idea) theek hai yeh tumhara doll hai theek hai prerana. Shonali beta bolo kul kis ka birthday hai?

Shonali and Prerana: (shout) HUMARA!

Kripa: theek hai phir mein aapko(points to shonali) ek naya doll doongi theek hai.

Prerana: kya? theek hai yeh lo shonali yeh aapka doll hai(smiles at kripa expecting a new doll)

Shonali: nahin yeh tumhara hai! (gives the doll back!

Prerana: nahin! (hands the doll back)

This fight keeps continueing and they keep handing the doll back to each other expecting a new doll on their birthday.

Kripa: (annoyed) uff! yeh dono to kabhi nahin sudhar sakte. (walks off to the kitchen)

IN the KITCHEN

Kripa: (going through the cupboard) mein tung aagayi hoon is zindagi se. my only routine is get up,make breakfast,sen the kids to school, then clean the house. And my Dear husband never ever helps. IS aadmi ko to bus sona aata hai.

Angad: (comes from behind and hugs her) naraaz ho?

Kripa: no,no ofcourse not i am very happy, i am jumping with joy, dekho. (turns around to face angad)

Angad: (jumps two feet in fear looking at her face coverd in small pimples and her eyes having dark circles under them) Kripa tumhare shakul ko kya hogaya?

Kripa: kya hua? (doesn't realize how she looks)

Angad: tum kitni ug (realizes kripa is staring at him in anger) mera mutlab hai tum itni khubsoorat lag rahi ho, bas yeh thorese pimples aur yeh dark circles ke alawa you are gorgeus.

Kripa: KYA? (starts feeling her face) ahhhh! dekha mujhe pata that hamesha mein is ghar ka khayal rakhti reheti hoon mujhe apne liye time nahin hota. dekho! (brings her face close to angad)

Angad: umm! (moves a little far from kripa) don't worry sweetheart aaj tum break lo aur beauty parlor aur spa chale jao. ok honey now relax! mein jaake tyaar hojata hoon office ke liye. don't worry you're the most beautiful woman on earth. (hugs her)

Kripa: (hugs him back) thanks! angad jao aur kunal ko phone karo tum dono ek saath kabhi office nahin jaate, woh hamesha sota reheta hai aur late ho jaata hai.

Kunal and Angad work in the same office. Kunal is the president of the company and Angad is the Vice-president.

Angad: ok baba. (goes to his room and calls kunal)

We see another bedroom and a guy sleeping on it. while the phone is ringing away he is groaning in his sleep.

Lady: kunal! kunal phone! Kunal! (enters the room and sees he is sleeping) kunal! uff! (picks up the water jug and throws the water on his face)

Kunal: (gets up with a jerk and wipes of the water) ahhh! nimmo yeh kya hai?

Nimmo: (we see her face while she is laughing away) kunal! phone to uthao!

kunal: uff isliye tumne mujhpe paani..urgh! (he goes to pick up the phone but angad disconnect it)

Nimmo: dekha agar pehele uthate to baat ho jaati!

Kunal: (annoyed) ha! ha! ab bolo naashte ke liye kya hai?

Nimmo: uffo! abhi uthe ho nahaya nahin hai,brush nahin kiya, bus khaane peh utar aaye, bukhar kahinke, mote ho gaye ho!

Kunal: acha mein mota ho gaya hoon! apne aap ko dekho, aise lagta hai ki puri ki puri India ko kha gayi ho!

Nimmo: (forces a laugh) meri majboori hai! i am pregnant, that too 8 months okay. Aur tum to pregnant bhi nahin hoke aise dhikte ho!

Kunal: acha lekin pehele bhi kaunsi patli thi tum!

Nimmo: kunal!!!!!!!!!(disgusted by his joke)

Kunal: (laughs and runs into the bathroom)

Nimmo: abhi dekho kaise parega! (slowly runs after him)

Ananya: mumma! (comes into their room half asleep rubbing her eyes)

Nimmo: stops and looks back) ha beta!

Ananya: woh! meine jor ki awaaz suni isliye yahan aagayi!

Nimmo: (bites her tongue) sorry beta!

ananya: theek hai! mujhe bhook lagi hai!

nimmo: theek hai chalo! (starts to walk but the phone rings) tum chalo mein aati hoon! (picks up the phone) hello!

Preson: (doesn't answer)

Nimmo: hello!(just hears the preson breathing) hello! agar aap yeh prove karna chahate hai that you are alive, i get it! (angry) hello! gosh! (hangs up)

Person: (groans and puts the phone down)

Nimmo: uff! aaj ke log! (calms down) lekin phone pe that kaun?

nice part awesome 👏 coontinue soon