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Posted: 7 years ago
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SYNOPSIS

It's been 6 years after the show ended on TV. It starts from there onwards.

Kriyansh and Swaron are in a relationship and D3 academy runs smoothly under there instructions. But after few years the whole D3 team had to get separated for some reasons and they all left dancing. Swaron got engaged secretly but because of some family issues they broke apart. Kriyansh are still together where Rey handles his father's business and kriya is a Dancer/Actress. After the breaking of D3 team none of them have ever reconciled except Nilesh and Simmi staying together and Amar and Bharat as such.

This ff begins 1 year after swaron's break up.
This ff is of SwaRon TaaRey & TaaYam.

Taani is returning India after 7 whole years. She has been called here by someone which will be later revealed. A lot of things had happened with her in past due to which she has changed completely in her life which will be clarified in the future updates.
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PS- Guys thank you for all the love and support you have shown towards me please continue doing so in future as well. I will update chapter 1 on Sunday but if i don't get a good response i can even postpone it. So if you are eager to read the ff then press the like button and comment big in order to show your excitement.

With love
Ishani
Edited by princess_ishu - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
synopsis is very interesting ...
different concept..
really want to know what happened with taani in last 6 yr..
swaron break up ho gya ..
puri D3 team separate ho gyi par q??
looking forward to read dear
updated next part soon..
cant wait to read chapter 1.. please update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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OMG!! This is awesome. I have been waiting for some good TR ff's. Not many ppl are writing on them these days. So thank you for this.
Its a wonderful concept. Pls continue.

The teaser is a bit confusing. Y is Swayam angry on taani.😕 And Kriya is asking Rey to do the same thing that Taani did though the reasons are different. I wonder how will Rey take this.
Chapter poora hoga toh samaj aa jayega 😊 Update soon. :)


Edited by dmgd3 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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A very good and awesome synopsis or rather I would say prologue was also .
Do update dear . waiting for more snippets of the story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: gudiyataray

synopsis is very interesting ...
different concept..
really want to know what happened with taani in last 6 yr..
swaron break up ho gya ..
puri D3 team separate ho gyi par q??
looking forward to read dear
updated next part soon..
cant wait to read chapter 1.. please update soon
thanks for pm


There is a lot to unfold.
Chapter 1 will be posted today itself.
Thanks for you lovely Comment
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: dmgd3

OMG!! This is awesome. I have been waiting for some good TR ff's. Not many ppl are writing on them these days. So thank you for this.

Its a wonderful concept. Pls continue.

The teaser is a bit confusing. Y is Swayam angry on taani.😕 And Kriya is asking Rey to do the same thing that Taani did though the reasons are different. I wonder how will Rey take this.
Chapter poora hoga toh samaj aa jayega 😊 Update soon. :)



True said and thanks for your support
Stay tuned chapter 1 will be posted today itself.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: atulaya_taarey

A very good and awesome synopsis or rather I would say prologue was also .

Do update dear . waiting for more snippets of the story


Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I really wanted 2 very important people to be present at the time I post my first chapter but alas they both tare not here sweetie (2111_shweta) and sweatheart (Ta_Sha) I miss you both. These two are my inspiration so I really wanted them here but nevertheless i want you both to be well and healthy.

Okay enough of my bak bak enjoy reading guys.
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CHAPTER 1


The sun rose slowly waking up every creature of this world. The birds started chirping and humming, disturbing her sweet slumber. It was after a very long time she was sleeping peacefully like this. She slowly started fluttering her eyelids clearing her dreams, a small smile crept her soft lips. She sat up in the bed stretching her arms shooing the laziness out of her body. She climbed down the bed and slit the curtains of her room, feeling the cool breeze she embrace herself. She then took shower and quickly got ready for her day ahead.

Girl : "Aaj ka din bohot khaas hai... Pata nahi sab kaise honge... Ugh pata nahi mai sabse kab milungi" she said checking out of her hotel room and headed towards her car. She sat in the car and called someone "sab much ready ho gaya hai na" she said on the phone and quickly hunged up "aa rahi hu mai" she said smiling ear to ear at herself.

* * * * * *

(scene shifts- at the same time)

A guy was sleeping peacefully watching some unfulfilled dreams. He woke up ant sat on the bed, palming his face he slightly rubbed his eyes to get a clear view of the scene around him but without his acknowledge a small smile crept on his lips.

Guy : "Pata nahi aaj bohot ajeeb feel ho raha hai... Lag raha hai jaise kuch bohot acha hone wala hai... Aaj bohot saalon baad aisi feeling aa rahi hai jaise..." he couldn't complete his sentence, not finding suitable words to do so. He didn't understand his own emotions, that why was he feeling so content today after years. But he shrugged himself with a broad smile and brushed his hairs with fingers, he got up the bed and entered the washroom to get ready for the eventful day ahead.

* * * * * *

(scene shifts- at the same time)

A guy just woke up from his sleep and smiled at himself remembering the dream he just saw or rather the dream he always saw but soon the smile faded as reality hit him hard. He got up from the bed and to his cupboard and took out a picture of her's.

Guy : "Ek saalon ho Gaye hai tumse mile huye.. Uss raat ke baad tumse baat tak nahi huyi... I wish ki mai sab thik kar pata... I so wish..." he said caressing her photo and tears brimmed in his eyes but suddenly he felt as if he shouldn't cry rather smile "pata nahi..par aisa lag raha hai... Jaise sab thik hone wala hai... Jaise tum wapas aane wali ho... I just hope so.." but saying so he remembered all their fights and arguments over his family he hermes up and kept her photo back. Anger and disappointment was clearly visible on his face but to cool his nerves he went for hot shower. Unknown to him this day was going to bring a lot many changes in his life.

* * * * * *

(scene shifts- at the same time)

The room was completely messed up and all the things were either broken or torn. A girl was sitting on the floor beside the bed hugging his photo frame. She had dry tears on her face and fresh tears brimming in her eyes ready to fall any moment. She rested her head back on the bed and weeps silently cursing herself for everything wrong in her life.

Girl : "Ek saal ho gaye...par tumne mujhse baat karne ki kosish tak nahi ki... Itni nafrat karte ho tum mujhse..." she said breaking again. In all these months every night used to be the same for her, but today was different. It was a new day in her life, she had a new hope in her life, she quickly wiped out the tears and looked into his photo again" par Aur nahi... Aaj sab kuch thik how jayega... I know would sabse kuch thik kar degi" she said confidently and stood up strong to face the upcoming day with all her might.

* * * * * *

(few hours later)

Everybody was busy with their own respective works; miles away from each other but suddenly they all received a message at same time which says

"VISIT COLLEGE SHARP AT 11:30. A HUGE SURPRISE IS WAITING FOR YOU AT St. LOUIS.
from VP SIR."
They all were shocked to see such a message after years but decided to visit there college which always made them happy. So they started pacing quickly and finished there works by 11 and left for college individually.

* * * * * *

(scene shifts - at st. Louis College)

Swayam and Sharon entered the college at same time from different gates unknown to each other's presence. Swayam was busy checking his mails and Sharon was engrossed in her thoughts and suddenly 'BANG'. The both banged at each other.

Swayam/Sharon in unison : "Sorry"

They finally looked at each other after a whole year, there was so much to say but not a single word escaped their lips. They were just looking into each other's eyes drowning into them. But their eyelock broke by a shriek call "Sharon... " they both looked at the direction of the voice and saw Simmi coming down the stairs.

Simmi : "Sharon.. Swayam tum dono yaha " she asked confused by their presence but suddenly something striked her "Ohh... Tumhe bhi VP Sir ka message aya tha kya".

Sharon : "Yeah" she was only able to say this and an awkward silence prevailed between them. She looked at Swayam every next second and he looked here and there trying to escape her gaze. Suddenly he saw Nil walking down the same stairs as Simmi.

Nil : "Hey guys what a pleasant surprise" he said greeting the two with side hugs and passed a casual smile to Simmi.

Swayam : "Tum dono ek sath aaye ho" he said pointing at nil and Simmi out of curiosity.

Nil : "Ab ek sath rehte Hai to ek sath hi aayenge na" he said giving him an awkward smile and Swayam nodded taking in the information.

Gradually Amar, Bharat and Vicky also joined them and greeted each other formally. It was getting really uncomfortable for all of them to gell up with all of them after years of separation. Lastly Rey and Kriya entered hand in hand and Rey passed a genuine smile to everyone but no one seemed interested and specially Sharon she ignored him royally. Kriya came to them first and hugged everyone one by one.

Kriya : "Guys tum sab bhi yaha how.. I am so happy to meet you all... Itne saalon baad" she said smiling ear to ear "waise tum sab ko bhi message aya tha kya" she asked out of curiosity and everyone nodded in response "Ohh... To mujhe kyu nahi aya... Mujhe to Rey new bataya isliye mai aa gayi unke satsat" she exclaimed getting confused. But all this while Rey was lookin at Swayam and Sharon but both of them didn't gave any response to him. So he chose to remain silent.

The discomfort was killing everyone present there but to their fortune a peon came and informed them that VP Sir us calling them in his cabin. They headed towards his cabin and again Swayam and Sharon was about to enter together so they stopped in there way and looked at each other and they again shared a short eyelock which was disturbed by everyone's pushing them apart to enter the cabin.

* * * * * *

(in VP Sir cabin)

VP Sir : "Hello guys" he said looking up towards his ex-student "good morning how are you all" he said warmly to all.

Everyone in unison : "Fine sir... How are you sir" the all said smilingly.

VP : "good good... Well aap log yahi soch rahe honge na ki maine aap sabko itne short notice pe yaha kyu bulaya hai ..." the all nodded in agreement and he continued "As I said aap sab ke liye ek surprise hai..."

Vicky : "What is it sir... We are getting impatient" he said with excitement.

VP : "Well wo kaafi bada hai to uske liye hume auditorium jana hoga so follow me..." he said heading towards the door and everyone else followed him quietly thinking about the surprise.

* * * * * *

(in auditorium)

They all entered and saw complete blackout.
Bhara :" Abe... Yaha itna andhera kyu hai bhailog" he said getting irritated to which VP chuckled.

VP : "just a second" he said excusing himself.

Everybody neared to the stage and stood quietly waiting for VP to return but suddenly spot light fell on stage and they saw a girl dressed in white shorts and a white shirt tied around her tiny waist and white brallete above which she wore a transparent crop top. She was wearing a mask to hide her face. Rey was looking at the opposite direction to search something but suddenly felt cool breeze around him as if he felt someone's presence, someone who was close to him, someone who was close to his heart. He turned to face the stage and saw the girl standing in front of him. He was confused by his own emotions.

* * Music begins * *

Hmmm
Ni mai yaar manana ni
Chaahe log boliyaan bole
Ni mai yaar manana ni
Chaahe log boliyaan bole
Ni mai yaar manana ni
Chaahe log boliyaan bole

Mai to baaz na aana ni
Chaahe zehar sautane ghole

(she slowly twirled her upper body and arched back, she lifted her lower body laying on the floor and raised her right leg up then she semicircled her leg and landed on her knees and bent her body)

Mukhadaa us ka chaand kaa
Tukadaa kadd saru kaa butaa
Usaki baanh kaa har hal koraa
Lagta swarg kaa jutaa

Ni mai yaar manana ni
Chaahe log boliyaan bole
Mai to baaz na aana ni
Chaahe zehar sautane ghole

(she high kicked with her left leg and stood up straight, she twitched her fingers and moved her belly in sync she took a half turn removing her transparent top and did combination flips landing smoothly on her feet)

Yaar mile to
O yaar mile to jag kya
Karna yaar bina jag sunaa
Jag ke badale yaar mile
To yaar kaa mol dun dunaa
Mai to nai sharmaana ni
Chaahe log boliyaan bole
Chaahe log boliyaan bole
Mai to sej sajaana ni
Chaahe zehar sautane ghole
Mai to sej sajaana ni
Chaahe zahar sautane ghole

(she clutched her hairs showing her back and moved her belly with the beats perfectly she waved herself and bent showing her face to everyone and did a free fall landing on a sitting position with left leg folded and right leg at her side, she held the right feet and stretched it high and followed a cartwheel after it)


Thirak rahi mere
Pair ki jhaanjhar jhanak
Rahaa mera chudaa
Ud ud jaaye aanchal
Mera khul khul jaaye judaa

Ni mai yaar manana ni
Chaahe log boliyaan bole
Mai to baaz na aana ni
Chaahe zehar sautane ghole

(she stood up straight and did popping, she put her legs on each side and sat down half holding her knees then she jumped high stretching them and sat down in several position)

* * Music ends * *

She stood up still and slowly removed her mask. Everyone stood dumbfounded looking at her after years but soon coming out oh their reverie the all spoke in unison (-kriya ) "Taani"

(Yes the girl was TAANI, yes she is a brilliant dancer and a bold girl now)

Taani : "Bhai" she could only see her bhai before anyone else. She ran to him and hugged him tight "Bhai I missed you so much" she said still hugging him with concern filled voice.

Swayam : "I missed you too Taani" he said caressing her hairs but soon she pushed him away.

Taani : "Haan isliye to 7 years me ek baar bhi call nahi kiya... Ek baar bhi nai" she said cutey pouting showing her anger to which Swayam held his ears and murmured a cute 'sorry' and she melted in seconds. She hugged and greeted the gang and finally came to Sharon.

Sharon : "Taani..." she said softly but pain was evident in her voice. Taani caressed her hairs and lovingly patted her back soothing her pain.
Taani : "Sab thik ho jayega... Don't worry" she said slowly so that no one could hear them. Sharon nodded weakly and took a deep breath before breaking the hug. Taani looked at her for one last time before meeting the last person(she thought it might be) to meet.

She turned toward her right and saw Rey, her Rey, her prince charming looking at her with a broad smile on his face she stretched her arms ready to hug him but didn't find him responding the same way so unwantedly she removed her eyes from his intoxicating ones and trailed down towards his hands and saw another pair of arms wrapped around him, then she hesitantly looked at the person holding hiss hand so protectively and as soon as she saw her with Rey, her smile faded and she murmured 'KRIYA' she started packing back with this not only in auditorium but also in life. Where she was lifeless, lonely, broken. Where her life was filled with darkness. Where she was breathing but not living. She couldn't feel anything but grief. She shattered with every step of hers. She crashed with a hard chest and turned around knowing it was her bhai she hugged him tight. This time as if depending on him.

Taani : "Mujhe ghar jana hai..." she could only say that and Swayam found it weird but didn't protest.
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PS- I am really very upset by the response 😭 I really work hard on writing the chapters it takes days to complete one and also posting them... Please its a heartily request to all of you please support me and take 2 mins to comment they are the only energy boosters I have. But I will keep my promise and post chapter 1 by tonight. Also you all show some love towards me by commenting and liking my posts. Thanks to all of them who liked and commented on my post.

With love Ishani
Edited by princess_ishu - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you for updating eagerly waiting for the 1st part to be updated, loved the part, update next part soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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hey...
nice update
loved taani entry..
kya sharon ne taani ko bulaya h wapas
hope sab thik ho jaye jaldi sharon aur swayam ke bich mai..
hope taani pure team ke bich jo problem h wo jaldi short out kar de..
rey sharon aur swayam ek dusre ko ignore q kr re? aisa kya hua h inke bich mai?
feeling bad for taani..
kaash kriya ki jagah taani hoti rey ka hath pakde huye..
one question kriya ka character positive hai ya negative?
hey bas jaldi se taani aur rey ko taarey bna do
dear your story is very interesting.
wating for next update
thanks for pm
Edited by gudiyataray - 7 years ago

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