Sujal Kashish Ts: Dil ne aitbar kiya hai *updated* and complete

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ASRHOTNEZ

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hi all I have returned to the forum after a very very long time. I was an active member of the IPKKND forum but today I returned to write about my first favourite couple that is Sujal and Kashish of Kahin toh Hoga! I know it has been ages however I was rewatching the episodes and one thing that kept bothering me was Kashish's redemption after she starts taking revenge from Sujal..I honestly felt she did not need a third person for her to believe sujal was innocent. I felt it could have been much better so I thought I'll share my ideas through this three shot. I hope you all enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Ps: please ignore typos and formatting as I am doing this through my phone. This part is going to be quite lengthy.

Ts: Dil ne aitbar kiya hai

Part 1

This starts with the scene where kashish comes to meet sujal in jail to confess her deeds.

K: nafrat karti hun mai tumse..nafrat..

S: tum aaj bhi bilkul nahi badli aaj bhi tum jhoot bolte waqt mujhse nazrein nahi mila sakti...

K: kya bakwaas kar rahe ho tum?

S: tumne jo kuch kiya woh sab sach tha but jo kuch kaha woh sab jhoot...tum aaj bhi sirf aur sirf mujhse hi pyaar karti ho!

K: tum paagal ho chuke ho she says and walks away...

She stops her car on the road and is crying when she thinks of sujal...what is that man made of how can he still love her inspite of all that she did...how was he so casual about this whole thing? Does he not feel pain? How was he so confident that she loves him? How dare he say such things to her? Is he stupid to still love her and expect love in return...She doesn't deserve his love...tears kept rolling down her cheeks when Akshat appears and taunts her saying the same thing that she loves sujal and is just dying of guilt and this time when it came to her tears there was no piyush in the picture. Those tears were purely for the husband she had hurt so much. Those tears were because of the moral dilemma she was facing. Part of her wanted to run into his arms and soothe his pain while another part wanted to be happy because revenge was finally close but why wasn't she happy? Why? Why? Akshat's words stung kashish she was not able to make sense of anything!

Kashish returned home and went straight to her room, she sat there like she was numb and oblivious to the rest of the world, just then Mehek entered. She had come to give her sister a good piece of her mind.

M: Di?

Kashish was still lost in thought when mehek shook her shoulder a bit

M: DI!

K: Mehek tum kab aayi?

M: kuch der pehle jab aap shayad sujal bhaiya aur mere parivar ko dukh pohchane ka koi dusra plan bana rahi hongi! Sharam aati hai aapko DI kehte hue!

K: mehek!

M: aapko itna bura kyun lag raha hai, maine kya galath kaha...jis din se aap sujal bhaiya ki zindagi mein aayi tabse aapne unko sirf barbad kiya hai di, aapne unhe dukh ke alava kuch nahi diya!

Mehek's words pierced kashish because somewhere mehek was right.

M: maine sujal bhaiya jaisa acha insaan kabhi nahi dekha, kaash ke aap unse kabhi mili hi na hoti! Unhone aap ke pyaar ki khatir kya kuch nahi kiya...yahan tak ke khud ko mita diya...itna dard saha...unhone pyaar ki koyi had nahi chodi aur aapne nafrat ki koi had nahi chodi! Kitne badnaseeb hai woh jo aapse pyar kar baithe! Aap itni pathar dil ho sakti hain maine kabhi nahi socha tha! Aaj aap pe itna gussa aa raha di ke mai bata nahi sakti! Aapki wajah se vasu aunty ne veena aunty ka jeena haram kar rakha hai!

K: yeh tum kya keh rahi ho

M: woh veena aunty ko baatein sunane ka koi mauka nahi chodti...yahan tak ke batwaare ki baat chal rahi hai!

K: nahi!

M: kya nahi di? Jaaye jaake jashn manaye aap apne maksat mein kaamyaab hone wali hai...jis insaan ne aapse itna pyaar kiya woh jail mai hai...uski maa ka ro ke bura haal hai aur jis ghar ne aapko beti maana aapne us ghar ko tod diya di...jaaye khushi manaye.

K: pls mehek bas karo

M: kyun bas karun? Aapke harkaton ka kya anjaam hoga yeh kabhi socha tha aapne...aapke jhoote ahem ki wajah se sab khatam ho gaya di!

Jab apne sujal bhaiya ko choda tha main kahin na kahin apne aap ko zimmedar samajhti thi...har roz sujal bhaiya ko dekh ke mujhe bohot bura lagta tha di...mai hamesha yahi dua karti thi ke unko duniya ki saari khushiyaan mile...jis sujal bhaiya ki khushiyaan kahin na khain meri wajah se chini thi unhone hi mujhe meri khushiyaan lautayi...meri shaadi varun ke saath karva ke! Unhe toh bhagwan ki tarah poojna chahiye...mai itni khush thi di jab aapne shaadi ke liye haan kardi thi...mujhe laga ke jo meri wajah se ho nahi paaya woh rishta ab poora hoga! Par mujhe kya pata tha ki meri DI sab ke emotions ke saath khilwad karna chahti hai...

Kashish was crying bitterly by now...

M: Aur aap kis rishte ki duhaai de kar sujal bhaiya ko ghalath Thaira rahi hai? Woh rishta jo aapne majboori mein joda...woh rishta jo sirf samjhauta tha...woh rishta jo sirf sujal bhaiya ko ghalath saabith karne ke liye juda tha!

K: mehek yeh tum kya keh rahi ho...kya matlab hai tumhara...yeh sach nahi hai mai piyush se pyaar karti hun!

M: aapka vehem tha di! Aapne humesha sirf sujal bhaiya ko chaha...sujal bhaiya ki har baat se aapko farq padta tha...di you were living your life with piyush jiju in defiance...you wanted to prove sujal bhaiya wrong! You just wanted to satisfy your ego

K: bas karo mehek please

M: mujhe kehne dijiye di...you always addressed piyush as aap but sujal bhaiya as tum...we call people tum only when we are close to them...we say aap when you respect them...you respected piyush jiju as a friend and thought it was ur moral obligation to love him because he was your husband...in first few months of marriage only ul had so many trust issues and you conveniently blamed sujal bhaiya for ur failing marriage, it was easy to just put the blame on him...di if you and piyush jiju really shared a strong bond no 3rd person could shake it! You both blamed him just to live in the false belief that ur having a great marriage and it's because of someone esle ul are having problems...

Because of you two sujal bhaiya became stubborn and had to leave his house...ur coming close to piyush jiju was nothing but guilt that sujal is doing all this for you and sympathy because you felt bad for him...but it was never love...never ever...it was not sujal bhaiya who wronged you both but it was you both who wronged sujal bhaiya...

Meheks words were piercing kashish through and through...was mehek right...was she the cause of everything?

Sujal bhaiya toh aaye the na aapke paas maafi maangne...unhone toh aapko nahi choda...aur mujhe lagta hai ke selfish aap aur piyush jiju the! Jiju aapko chahne lage the di toh unhone faisla aap pe chod diya...unhe toh pata chal gaya tha na di ke sujal bhaiya aur aap ek dusre se pyar karte hain...woh bhi toh peeche hat sakte the! Woh sab jaan chuke the par nahi unhone aisa nahi kiya...unhe laga ke woh bohot bade ban gaye hain aapko sujal bhaiya se protect karke...aur aap ne apne jhoote aur khokle ego ke wajah se unhe nahi balke piyush jiju ko chuna...shaadi aur pyar koi khel nahi hai di...pyar me dhoka milne ka dard mein samajh sakti hun...Shaadi ke baad bhi jab aapko kisi ke zarurat thi toh aapne hamesha sujal bhaiya ko aapke saath paaya...aur aap kehti hain ki piyush jiju aapka pyar the!

Aap dono ne sujal bhaiya ka murder kiya hai...aap logon ne milke sujal bhaiya ko jeete ji maar dala...aap ki wajah se veena aunty ne bhi unhe ghalath samjha...aap dono ke ego ne sujal bhaiya ko andar se tod diya...lekin woh phir bhi jeete rahe aapko khush rakhne ki umeed mai...

Aap shayad bhool gaye ho ke jab factory mein aag lagi thi tab sujal bhaiya ne piyush jiju ko bachaya tha...unhe jiju ko maarna hi tha toh di woh unnhe aapki shaadi ke raat hi maar dete! Woh kyun apne bachpan ke dost ko maarna chahenge...kyun di...aapki soch pe sharam aati hai...

Sujal bhaiya ki problem yeh hai ki woh dil ke bohot ache hain is liye woh jo bhi karte hain khule aam sabke saamne karte hain...aapki tarah nahi jo peeche se vaar kare...

K: closes her ears...bas karo mehek bas karo please and she fell to her knees.

Mujhe nahi pata ke mein kya karun mein pagal ho rahi hun mehek...meri madad karo

M: di shayad aapko aaram ki zarurat hai...

Mai jaati hun veena aunty ko meri madad ki zarurat hai kal sujal bhaiya ki hearing hai...

Kashish's cries became even more louder she couldn't take it anymore...she would probably go mad...was mehek right...was she really that selfish that she didn't think about the man she claimed to love once upon a time! Was she the culprit and not him???...why was she feeling so broken? Why was she able to feel his pain? Why would she get so weak when it came to him? She had even given herself to him and that too she was the one who took the first step...if she Had to do this why did she give him the hope that they could be one again...was she successful in breaking him again?

Sujal she yelled and cried...

Mehek who was in the hall saying goodbye to her father heard her screams and decided to stay for a bit...

Prof Sinha and mehek both went into kashish's room to find her bawling on top of her voice.

Prof S: kashish beta kya baat hai?

Sambhalo apne aapko

K: papa mai kya karun mujhe kuch nahin samjh aa raha hai

Prof S: beta tum apni dil ki suno...beta sujal bohot acha hai...sach kahun toh mai bhi bohot guilty tha ke kahin na kahin mai tumhara aur sujal ka gunehgaar tha...par mujhe is baat ki khushi thi ke piyush jaisa samjhdaar ladka tumhara pati hai..woh tumhe sambhaal lega...par shayad bhagwan ko bhi tumhara aur sujal ka milna manzoor tha is liye kismat ne aisa khel khela...kashish sujal kisi ka qoon nahi kar sakta...tum apne dil ki suno beta ...saying that he hugged her and left the room.

K: mehek kya mai itni buri hun?

M: di buri aap nahi haalaath hai aur shayad sujal bhaiya ki kismat...di aur der hone se pehle sudhaar lo apne rishte ko

K: par woh saare saboot jo sujal ke khilaaf hai? Uska kya mehek kya mai bhool jaaon ke piyush ka qoon hua tha?

M: saboot? Di aapko un sabooton par yakeen hai aur apne dil par nahi kya aapko lagta hai ki sujal bhaiya sach mein aisa kuch kar sakte hain? Di problem yeh hai ki aapko yakeen nahi tha ke aapke saath aisa kuch ho sakta hai...aap phir sujal bhaiya pe apne gham ka blame daalna chahti thi kyunki unhone sabke saamne aapko piyush jiju ke puja par propose kiya...aap yeh nahi accept karna chahti thi ke sujal bhaiya sahi the...aap bas unhe blame karna chahti thi...aap shayad ji tod koshish kar rahi thi unhe proove karne ke aap unse pyar nahi karti...par sach toh yeh hai aap jitni bhi koshish karlein di aap sujal bhaiya ko bhula nahi sakti...

K: mehek tum shayad sahi keh rahi ho...main nahi jaanti yeh sab kuch kyun hua...mujhe sujal se ek baar un sabooton ke baare mein baat karni chahiye thi...maine kaise itni jaldi yeh maan liya ke sujal ghalat hai...ghalat toh mai hun mehek...shayad jo kuch tumne kaha ho woh sab sach ho...mujhe nahi pata mai pagal ho jaungi...shayad sujal ke liye mere pyar ko dabate hue maine uske saath bohot ghalat kiya...main jaanti hun mehek ke main sujal ke saamne hamesha kamzor pad jaati hun...maine uski jaan lene ki koshish ki mehek par woh mere liye itne zakhm seh gaya...kashish baar baar sujal ke saamne kamzor pad rahi thi par piyush ki widhva ne use sambhala...aaj mai kamyab ho gayi par phir bhi mere aakhon mein aansun hai mujhe sujal ka dard kyun mehsus hota hai...mai apne aap ko rok hi nai paati uske saamne...mehek inhi kamzor lamhon mein maine sujal ke saath pati patni ka rishta jod liya...main khud ko nahi rok paayi aur woh bhi piyush ke barsi ke din...nafrat hai mujhe apne aapse...mai kya karun mehek?And she couldn't control her tears.

M: di yeh toh achi baat hai na di...shayad yeh is baat ka sanket ho ke piyush jiju bhi aapko khush dekhna chahte ho...woh bhi aap dono ke rishte se khush ho...di ho sakta hai ki woh saboot jhoote hon...ek baar bas ek baar apni aakhein band karke socho di kya aapko waqai sujal bhaiya ghalat nazar aate hai...

Kashish thought of all the times she had spent with him and all the moments she had witnessed sujal and piyush's friendship...she had thought of the time when sujal helped pratham and anu get together...she thought of how he had told her frankly that he was the one who wanted her relationship with piyush to break but when that was happening he wasn't feeling happy about it because she was sad...later when she had spoken to anu..anu had told her all about how piyush and sujal kept aside their differences to help pratham..sujal could go to any extreme for his dear ones...his love had no boundaries...she thought of the times he supported her even after her wedding but never tried to take advantage of her...all he wanted was her happiness then how did she think that he would be The one to bring tears to her eyes by snatching her husband from her...how stupid could she get...she thought about how he had saved piyush from the burning factory and how he had indirectly helped them even though he claimed to ruin them. Oh God what has she done...her sujal could never be wrong...the sujal she once claimed to understand..afterall she was the one who had told him that he was a good person when he thought of himself as bad...she was the one who had said he was good in spite of his flaws...yes he couldn't have done that...how did she just believe any rubbish that the police said about him she should have asked him about it...she opened her eyes with a flash of realisation...

K: sujal kuch bhi kar sakta hai par mere aakhon mein aansun nahi dekh sakta...mehek main ghalat thi woh aisa kabhi nahi karsakta...mehek yeh maine kya kardiya! Mere gusse ne mujhe andha kardiya...kaash maine sujal se pehle hi shaadi kar li hoti toh 3 zindagiyan barbad nahi hoti...mai sujal ka saamna kaise karungi? Woh shayad mera shakl bhi nahi dekhna chahta...mein kaise mehek main kaise...

M: di aapko sach mein lagta hai ki sujal bhaiya aapko dekhna pasand nahi karenge? Jaaye di ab aur der mat kijiye sambhal lijiye apne zindagi...embrace the happiness that awaits you...forget everything else as a bad dream...

K: haan mehek mujhe sujal se milna hai abhi...use yeh batana hai ki mera dil uspe aitbar karta hai...mera dil maanta hai ki woh innocent hai...mujhe sujal ke saath rehna hai mehek...humare rishte ki shuruat hi ghalat fehmi se hui...hum dono ke rishte ko ghalat fehmiyon ne ek taraf she kamzor kiya hai toh dusri taraf se mazboot kiya hai! Mai sujal ke saath ek naye sire se ab khul ke jeena chahti hun...mujhe abhi jaana hoga

M: jaaye di time waste mat kijiye sujal bhaiya ko woh saari khushiyan de dijiye jinke woh haqdaar hain...go di go now she gave her a tight hug and watched with a smile as kashish ran to meet her sujal, sending a silent prayer to God to let everything fall in place.

To be continued...

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Edited by ASRHOTNEZ - 7 years ago

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Ok so it was sort of disappointing to see that there was no response even though there were quite a few views on this one...I request you to atleast hit the like button if you liked the story...or I'll just assume it was extremely bad...but I will post part 2 and 3 as I have already written it and for the sake of readers like me who come to the forum to find relatable stories. Thanks for viewing it at least.

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Part 2.

Kashish ran out of the house. This was it enough of all the drama in their life she was going to clear all their misunderstandings and the game of hatred. She was going to win her sujal back at any cost. She would do whatever it takes and she would pour her heart out to him today. She would do everything she could do to gain back his trust. With these thoughts in mind she took a taxi and reached the police station but to her disappointment the police man didn't allow her to meet Sujal as the visiting hours were over. She tried pleading with him but who was she kidding this wasn't a movie wherein the police would understand her love and let them meet. With a heavy heart kashish turned to leave when her eye fell on a photograph. Wait a minute wasn't this the same guy who had told her that sujal was the one responsible for piyush's death...what is going on how can his picture be on the board?

K: sir, yeh aadmi kaun hai?

Police: yeh ek chota mota criminal hai..logon se paise lekar unke kaam karta hai. Par aap uske baare kyun pooch rahi hai?

K: woh usi ne mujhe...kuch nahi. Thank you.

Kashish left from there but right now there was an indescribable storm within her...she couldn't understand what was happening! Part of her was overwhelmed with her new realisations and feelings while the other half was trying to make sense of the this Sodi guy! Did she get everything wrong all this while...was she just over impulsive and blinded by anger! She could die of guilt right now.

Meanwhile her father was worried about her as she was not in the right frame of mind when she left home. He paced up and down the hall when she finally returned

PS: kya hua beta tum aise kyun lag rahi ho? Kya kaha sujal ne?

K: papa mai usse nahi mil paayi

Ps: understanding that she needs some space hethought it was best not to ask any questions...theek hai kal subha mil lena abhi tum jaakar aaram karo.

Kashish was relieved as she needed some quiet time...she went to her room to have experienced the worst night of her life...all sorts of disappointing thoughts kept passing through her mind she couldn't sleep even for a bit.

The next morning kashish decided to solve the mystery of the sodi fellow and went straight to the dhaba where she had met him. On reaching there she learned the truth that when the accident happened sodi wasn't even in the picture but why would he lie to her who was behind all this...on probing further she heard the whole truth about the events that took place on the day piyush died. She was completely shocked and was ashamed of herself for believing all the lies without once trying to find out the truth...she hated herself she was breaking down when she suddenly remembered that it was Sujals court hearing she had to get there and save him at any cost...she immediately started on her journey to the court. Each minute felt like more than a decade. As soon as she reached the court she ran straight into the courtroom but too late...what she heard next shook her completely if there was anything else left in her to be shaken...

S: ji haan judge sahab, woh company meri hi hai, contract pe signatures bhi mere hi hain aur contract ko maine hi toda hai...

What the hell did he just say...what is he thinking? She let out an involuntary scream

SUJAL yeh tum kya keh rahe ho...

The court came to a chilling silence...veena and the rest of the family were wondering what this woman wanted why was she trying to disrupt the hearing now and what did she want...wasn't it enough that sujal had taken all the blame on himself. Vasu was the only one wondering why kashish seemed so worried...their thought process was broken when the judge asked kashish to wait for her turn to speak.

Fear gripped sujal she seemed to be so vulnerable at this point and if she would be called to the witness box she might confess all crimes she had done...oh no he would never let that happen at any cost...kashish was taken out of the courtroom because she was not in a condition to speak calmly...in a hurry sujal continued his statement and insisted that he was indeed guilty of the fraud he even gave his signatures for tallying. Akshat and the rest of the family were shocked...what was he thinking, this wasn't any joke...immediately Akshat stood up in Sujal's defence and requested for more time to prove his innocence, on account of the fact that sujal gave this statement under emotional pressure...

After the hearing Akshat visited sujal in jail and lashed out at him. He couldn't see his best friend in distress.

A: what the hell Sujal why did you confess to a bloody crime you didn't even do. You knew I would have proved ur innocence without even getting Kashish in the picture. She would be untouched! Why the hell did you do this stupidity without even consulting me sujal..why?

S: kashish ki khushi ke aage yeh bohot mamuli se baat hai akshat...wherever I maybe I just want to see her happy and if she is happy I will be happy...

A: what the hell sujal just stop it this is madness this is not love you are ruining your life...don't be stupid

S: this is my love for kashish Akshat and I understand your anger as a friend

A: just stop this nonsense sujal...kashish kashish kashish what is this rubbish aren't there other ppl in your life? What about your mother...what about others who want to see you happy...but no you have gone mad...just stop this sujal stop it for your own good. How do you even know that kashish will be happy with this...haven't you realised in all this while that she always needs you around to live her life.

S: there is no point arguing akshat I've taken my decision and soon the court will also take a decision...

Akshat thought it was pointless talking to a love sick sujal and he wouldn't be able to control himself if he heard more nonsense about sujals love for kashish. He walked off in a huff and to irk him further he found kashish outside the police station...his anger just reached another level at the sight of this self fish woman!

K: akshat sujal kahan hai?

A: what's your problem kashish? Woh wahin hai jahan tum use pohonchana chahti ho...

K: mujhe sujal se milna hai...

A: kyun? Kya chahti ho tum...are you not satisfied? He has voluntarily accepted all your crap...what more do you want from him...he's just a mad fool to love you... you think he didn't know what you are upto? He knew ur every move...use sab kuch pata tha par phir bhi tumhari khushi ke liye usne sab kuch saha...abhi bhi woh tumhare khushi ke baare mein soch raha hai...and look at what he has done...woh bohot badnaseeb hai ke tum jaisi ladki se mohabbat kar baitha...main is waqt sujal ko ek thapad maar kar samjhana chahta hun ke use yeh pagalpan chod dena chahiye..use tumhe chod dena chahiye...aur mera bas chalta toh main tumhe bhi ek thapad maar kar batana chahta hun ke tum kitni ghalat ho...just go away kashish stop torturing sujal...just stop it!

K: Akshat I know I'm sorry I know I'm wrong!..

A:just shut up kashish I don't wanna hear anything and you think one sorry is going to solve all this even if you repent for the rest of your life it won't be enough...and he walked away to calm himself down and go home...

Akshat was right she had a whole lot of damage control to do...and what did akshat say? sujal knew everything and yet he did not stop me...why? Why? Did he let me do all this to him..this man does he know anything else apart from love...how am I going to face him..she took a few trembling steps to try and reach him...she saw him crouched on that hard stone in the corner and her heart wrenched at the sight...what had she done...how she wished she could run into his arms and cry her heart out...oh wait again she was thinking about her pain what about him he was the one who needed as much love as possible...she walked up to him and stood there with tears brimming down her cheeks...he sensed her and walked.towards her...preparing himself to bear all the venom she would spit at him now...both of them just stood there for a while and allowed silence to do all the talking and finally she mustered some courage and said

Sujal why?

Now what is this why supposed to mean? What was she trying to ask him...?

S: kashish...

K: sujal why didn't you tell me..sujal why...

S: maine tumhe kya nahi bataya aur tum inti pareshan kyun ho...

K: pareshan nahi hun toh kya karun sujal mai apne aap se nazrein nahi mila pa rahi hun...sujal why didn't you tell me once sujal...I hate myself...what have I done...(cries) tum kis mitti ke bane ho sujal...tum kaise itna dard seh sakte ho...jab tum sab kuch jaante the toh tumne aisa kyun hone diya sujal...kyun (cries)...mai toh ab zinda rehne ke layakh bhi nahi rahi...

S: kashish yeh tum kya bole jaa rahi ho sambhalo apne aap ko

K: kaise sambhalun sujal kaise...ek tum hi ho jisne hamesha se mujhe sambhala...tumhare bina mai sambhal bhi nahi sakti sujal...kyun nahi bataya mujhe pehle sujal!

S: kyunki mere kehne par se agar tum maan jaati toh mera pyaar jeeth jaata par piyush ki patni haar jaati...woh sare saboot haar jaate jo mere khilaf hai aur woh sujal haar jaata jise safai dene ki aadath nahi hai...

Did she really hear him right...did he actually care about the relationship she shared with piyush and here she was blaming him for such a big crime.

K: sujal tumne ek baar bhi nahi socha ke jab mujhe sachai pata chalegi toh mujhpe kya beetegi...sujal tumne mere upar aane waali har musibat ko roka par kyun mere sar par aane waale itne bade paap ko kyun nahi roka...kyun sujal?

Yes its true sujal never gave that a thought

S:tumne sahi kaha kashish maine yeh ek baar bhi nahi socha kyunki tum jaanti ho ke sujal garewal lamhe mein jeene mein vishwas rakhta hai...I live in the present kashish...I didn't care about the past or future...all I knew is that u wanted revenge and that would mk u happy. If u r happy then I am happy...main kya karun kashish agar mera jeena marna uthna baithna, meri saansein sirf tumse hai! Kya karun agar meri zindagi tumho...aur agar meri zindagi yeh chahti hai ki main saza katun toh main uski khatir wahi karunga...

Kashish's sobs grew louder...

K: agar tumhari zindagi tumhe wapas paana chahti ho toh?

What did she just say? Was he dreaming?

Haan sujal bohot ho chuki humare beech yeh nafrat ab aur bardasht nahi hota! Main apne aapko tumse door nahi rakh paayi sujal...maine tumse nafrat karne ki bohot koshish ki par nahi kar paayi...tumhara pyaar hamesha meri nafrat se jeeta raha...shayad maine tumse nafrat kabhi nahi kiya shayad woh sirf aadhure sapnon ka gussa tha...haan sujal jab se mai yahan se wapis gayi mai sukoon se nahi reh paayi...sujal maine bohot socha aur phir mujhe ehsaas hua ke mera dil tum pe aitbar karta hai sujal...mai daudti hui kal raat tumhare paas aayi thi...par police ne mujhe milne nahi diya aur jab mai laut rahi thi tab mujhe us jhoote insaan ki sachai pata chali jisne tumhare naam pe jhoot kaha...mujhe woh mechanic bhi mila sujal...mujhe maaf kardo sujal...mujhe maaf kardo...sob...sob...sob

S: kashish

K: placing a finger on his lip..shhh bus mujhe kehne do sujal...mai khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paaungi...maine sab ka dil dukhaya hai...mujhe saza milni chahiye sujal har woh dard ke liye jo maine tumhe diye...shayad meri saza yahi hogi ke mai chah kar bhi tumhare paas na aasakun...hum sab ki bhalayi isi mai hai ki mai tumse door rahun aur sujal mujhe yehi saza milni chahiye kyunki tabhi mera praschit pura hoga...mai tumhare saath ke liye tadpungi tabhi mujhe tumhare akelepan ka ehsaas hoga...har ek pal jo mai tumse door rahungi woh mere liye saza hogi...

Has she lost her mind again she started talking any rubbish that came to her mind..after all this again...no way!

S: isse acha toh yeh hai ke mai yahin rahun...

K: nahi sujal aisa mat kaho

S: kashish tumhe ho kya gaya hai...yeh kaisi bakwaas kiye ja rahi ho...mujhe tumhara yeh faisla bilkul manzoor nahi hai...tum agar mujhse phirse door gayi to mai ji nahi paunga! Isse pehle ke yeh mauka bhi mere haath se nikal jaye...mai tumse woh kehna chahta hun jo tumne pehle kabhi suna nahi...mai tumse bohot zyada pyar karta hun kashish...I love you! I really really do...he moved his hand towards hers but stopped midway, this didn't go unnoticed by kashish who immediately reached out to him and started placing kisses all over his hand...

K: sujal...I...sujal I love you very very much...bas mujhe phirse yeh kehne mai bohot der hogayi...mai andhi hogayi thi kuch der ke liye...mai tumse bohot pyar karti hun sujal...aaj aisa lag raha ke main phirse ji uthi hun...mujhe farz ke rishton se finally azaadi mil gayi...I feel free par sujal mai kaise khud ko maaf karun...

S: places his hand on her cheek and she places hers on top of his...tum samjhti ho ki tum meri gunahgar ho na...tum chahti ho ke tumhe saza doon?

Kashish nodded her head...

Toh theek hai tumhari saza yehi hai ke tum hamesha mere saath rahogi aur mujhse door jaane ki baat bhi nahi karogi warna mai...

K: warna tum?

S: saari dunya ko aag laga doonga...kashish ghalatiyan toh mujhse bhi bohot hui hai..maine tumhe aur piyush ko bohot tang kiya hai...she placed her hand on his mouth

K: bas sujal ab hum pichli baaton ke baare mein baat nahi karenge...shayad hum dono apni apni jagah pe sahi the ya shayad ghalat is sab ka ab koi matlab nahi hai...sujal mai wada karti hun tumse ke ab mai tumhare har zakhm aur har dard so apne pyar se bhar doongi aur chahti hoon ke tum bhi bilkul aise hi karna...sujal mai chahti hun ke tum is case se jaldi riha ho kar mere paas raho...ab se humare pyar ki nayi shuruat hogi...humari zindagi..humare saath ki...aajse hum naye sapne sajayenge...aajse hum sirf ek dusre ke liye jiyenge...

Par pehle mujhe poore parivar se maafi mangni hogi khaas kar ke mamma se...

That was it both of them couldn't control their emotions any longer and let their tears flow while reaching out to each other...foreheads joined...hands clasped together they cried their heart out waiting for all the barriers to be gone from between them...life felt beautiful again...life had a new meaning and incomplete relationships were finally complete...

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Part 3.

The next day kashish went to meet sujal's family and apologise to all of them. As soon as she entered she spotted hrishi who lost his cool at the sight of her...

Hr: bhabiji wahin par ruk jaye...ab yahan kya lene aai hain aap?

She knew she had to take all the bitterness and insults everyone would lurch at her because she deserves it...

K: Hrishi mai tumse maafi maangne aai hun

Hr: band karo apna drama...maafi aur mujhse?

K: tumne sahi suna hrishi...mai ghalat thi aur maine sujal ko bohot dukh pohonchaya hai...par hrishi sujal ki khatir can we please keep our differences aside...we need to work together to save him...please..im sorry

Hr: only for my brother replied Hrishi coldly and walked away.

Kashish then went to veena...she was sitting on her bed looking at a picture of sujal...kashish felt a sharp pang of guilt at the sight of her..

K: mumma...

V: tum? Kya chahiye tumhe? Vasu yahan nahi hai...yahan sirf mai hun

K: mumma I'm sorry mumma! Please mujhe maaf kardo...maine bohot badi galati kardi mumma..sob..sob..sob...sorry...

V: tumhare sorry kehne se kya mera beta wapis aajeyga?

Kashish ran towards veena and sat on the floor near her...she held veena's legs...mumma mai sujal ko kuch nai hone doongi...mumma mai sujal se bohot bohot pyaar karti hun...mujhe sachai ka pata chal gaya hai...she narrated everything to veena

V: yeh kaisa pyaar hai tumhara ke jab kisi aur ne tumse jhoot kaha toh tumne mere sujal ko ghalat maan liya...agar tum usse sach mein pyaar karti toh tum use itni takleef nahi pohonchati...kisi ne kaha sujal gunehgaar hai...tumne maan liya..kisi ne kaha sujal begunah hai toh tumne yeh bhi maan liya? Yeh kaisa pyaar hai tumhara jahan vishwaas hi nahi hai...tumhare dil ne tumhe yeh sab karne ki ijazat kaise di?

K: sob...sob...sob'...mai bas piyush ko insaaf dilana chahti thi..

V: toh kya piyush ki khatir tum sujal ko maar deti?

Veenas words shook kashish didn't she already try that through the accident...what was she thinking...she had probably lost her capacity to think rationally.

Mai tumhe maaf nahi kar sakti kashish...tumne sirf mere bete ko hi takleef nahi pohonchayi balki mera bhi vishwas chakna choor kardiya...woh pyaar aur vishwaas wapis paane ke liye bohot waqt lag jayega...mera beta toh tumhare pyaar main pagal hai hi...uska main kuch nahi kar sakti par is waqt main tumhe maafi nahi de paungi...shayad mai tumhe maaf kar bhi doon lekin abhi nahi...bilkul nahi...

K: mumma mai us din ka intezar karungi...par mai aapse waada karti hun ki main sujal ko kuch nahi hone dungi...uske har zakhm ko apne pyaar se bhar dungi...aap mujhe jo saza dena chahein de sakti hai mumma...please I'm sorry...sob...sob...sob...

Veena reluctantly placed her hand on kashish's head..jahan bhi raho...kush raho and turned around pretending to sleep.

Kashish then went to meet CG and apologised to him...he was a little more softer than veena and said that his son's happiness was important...he was very upset with her but would forgive her if his son still wanted to be with her...

Kashish also called akshat and explained the whole truth to him..akshat had calmed down after that and was willing to gowith her to help sujal...kashish, Hrishi and Akshat went to the bank and made a DD of 50crores and gave it to the CEO of IWB...the case was widthrawn and Sujal was free of the case...

In the courtroom everyone was happy except vasu...all the family members went to hug sujal one by one...kashish also wanted to run to him...she took a step forward and saw veena who gave her a warning stare to stay away from her son...kashish ran outside and went straight home...sujal followed her...

Kashish reached home and ran to her bed where she threw herself on a pillow and started sobbing...well she deserved it...she heard someone open the door and thought it was kannan or charu...just then she heard his voice

Kashish...she thought she was dreaming and obviously he couldn't be here..when she heard it again...Kashish

She couldn't take it and turned around to see him standing near the door...in an instant she got up and flung herself into his arms...sobbing as hard as she could...

They were hugging after what seemed to be eternity...sujal wanted to cherish this feeling...he hugged her back with equal rigour...through that hug they expressed their feelings for each other, exchanged promises and poured out every single thought/ feeling from their hearts...it was a hug like no other...it was more instense than the hug they shared on the night they consummated their marriage...they did not break the hug yet...

K: sujal sab mujhse itni nafrat karte hain..

S: nahi kashish sab tumhe maaf kardenge...mere saath ghar chalo...

K: mai wahan nahi ja sakti...main kisi se nazrein nahi mila sakti sujal...aur is waqt mujhe kuch aur dekhna aur sunna nahi hai bas mujhe tumhare paas hone ka ehsas chahiye...mujhe yahan se le chalo...jaha sirf hum dono hon aur koi nahi

S: kya kaha tumne? Kya tum sach main yeh chahti ho?

K: haan tumne sahi suna..

S: phir toh yeh bohot mushkil hai...aisa shayad nahi ho sakta...mujhe nai lagta aisa kuch possible hai...

K: kyun sujal kya hua? Maine aisa kya maang liya?

S: manga toh tumne kuch nahi hai par agar tum mujhe aisi hi pakdi rahi toh mai hil bhi nahi paunga...tumhe kahin le jaana toh bohot door ki baat hai...waise I'm not complaining but agar tumhe sach mei kahin jana hai toh you have to loosen your grip on me...waise tum itni bhaari kab se hogayi?

K: kashish blushed and moved away..then she realised what he said...kya tumne mujhe mota kaha?

S: nahi yeh maine kab kaha...bas kaha ki tum thodi bhaari ho gayi ho...

K: sujal she said with fake anger and punched him on the shoulder...

S: laughed...yes after ages he laughed heartily and said humara din ek arguement ke bina pura kaise ho sakta hai...

K: nahin sujal mujhe aur nahi ladna...bas..ab hum ladai nahi karenge...promise?

S: meri zindagi ke liye kuch bhi...I promise...

Both of them could finally see the old sujal and kashish that had once fallen in love...they had found themselves again...they were free of all family duties and obligations...it was just them...they both felt so light...and happy...

S: kya tum mere saath farm house chalogi?

K: nahi sujal wahan nahi...ghalat fehmiyon ki shuruat wahin se toh hui...

S: acha baba theek hai toh palampur chalte hain...waise aap ko ek room se koi aitraaz hai ya do room book karun?

K: tum ek hi room book karoge aur woh bhi room no. 206...

S: aapka hukm sar aakhon par and he pinched her cheek lightly with love only to get a bright smile in return

...

Kashish and sujal had reached palampur after a sweet drive during which they stole few glances at each other and few light touches here and there.

On entering the room both of them had flashbacks of those cute moments they shared.

S: lijiye madam, yeh raha aapka room no.206

K: thank you sujal..iss room se humari kitni meethi yaadein judi hai...aur ek baat ki khushi hai ki woh chudail archie nahi hai...mere dimagh mei ulti seedhi baatein bharne ke liye...usne toh saara mood kharab kar diya...

S: aur tumne uski baaton pe vishwas kyun kiya...kya mai tumhe us tarah ka insaan lagta tha...

K: mujhe bas dar tha sujal...tum mere boss the aur...

S: rehne do kashish...tum fresh hojao mai tab tak aag jalata hun...

K: theek hai...

After a while when the fire was crackling high...kashish got some coffee for sujal...chalo ab coffee peetein hain sir?

S: sir? Yeh kya tha?

K: bas tumhe chida rahi thi sir and she started giggling...

Seeing her happy again and that too because of him filled sujal's heart with happiness...

S: theek hai toh project 7 ke baare mein tumhara jo khayal hai woh tum soch ke file tayyar kar dena...aur is project ka starting date bhi fix karlena...samjhi tum? Aur file mujhe aadhe ghante mein chahiye!

K: theek hai sir mai sab kar lungi par yeh project 7 kya hai? Please thoda samjha dijiye...

S: woh kya hai na meri mumma ghar main akele bored hoti rehti hai...unhe chote bachon ke saath rehne ka bohot shauk hai...toh unhe khush karne ke liye...mai yeh project shuru karne waala hun...

K: kaisa project sujal...mumma ke liye hai toh I'm sure bohot acha hoga...main tumhara iss mein saath dungi...par yeh project hai kya?

S: of course tumhare saath ke bina toh yeh pura bhi nahi ho sakta...tumhi toh sabse important ho...

K: toh bolo mujhe kya karna padega...

S: zyada kuch nahi tumhe bas ek achi mummy banke mere 7 bachon ke peeche bhagna padega mumma ke saath...

K: kya tumhare 7 bachein bhi hain? Yeh kahan se aaye? Woh bhi mere bina...kashish bit her lip after she realised what she said...

S: maine toh tumse pehle hi kaha tha ke mujhe 7 bache chahiye...yaad nahi?

K: tum ab tak use leke serious ho...mai toh mar hi jaungi...abhi se tum mujhe bhaari keh rahe ho tab pata nahi kya karoge...sir aapka yeh project 7 meri taraf se reject ho gaya hai kyunki yeh itna bakwaas idea hai...

Sujal started laughing and seeing him laugh warmed kashish's heart and she tried to tickle him

S: laughing and wriggling...arey yeh tum kya kar rahi ho...stop kashish...pls ab bas karo...

Both of them burst into fits of laughter and hugged each other to calm their breaths...sujal sat on the carpet against the sofa and kashish settled herself next to him keeping her head on his heart and wrapping her arm around his waist...

S: some music?

K: shh..no...mujhe sirf tumhari dhadkanon ko sunna hai...ab hum baatein nahi karenge...sirf ek dusre ko mehsus karenge aur yeh khamoshi baat karegi...

Sujal smiled at her and held her shoulder in approval...her head was on his chest and his arm was around her...they relished the feeling of each others presence until they fell asleep.

The next morning Kashish woke up just like she had on their first visit here...she looked at Sujal sleeping...he just looked like a sleeping baby with such a pure heart...how could she hurt him so much...she leaned a bit and kissed him on the cheek, then got up to freshen up but he held her hand and whispered iss se khubsurat subha meri zindagi mein kabhi nahi hui...I love you kashish...

K: I love you too

S: ek baar sujal ke saath kaho na...

K: I love you sujal, I love you and I love you so much!

He was the happiest person on earth..

Waise tumhari har subha ab isse bhi zyada khubsurat hogi aur yeh Mrs. Kashish Sujal Garewal ka vaada hai...

Sujal grinned from ear to ear indeed life was going to be so beautiful now..afterall he had his life his kashish all to himself now...

He got up and played the song thoda sa pyar hua hai...he twirled kashish around just like he had on the road in the rain...they both laughed and danced..looking forward to the next few days they would spend in palampur..

S: thank you kashish meri zindagi mein wapis aane ke liye...thank you mujh pe aitbaar karne ke liye

K: thank you mujhse itna pyaar karne ke liye...mere dil ne tumpe aitbar kiya hai sujal!

The song plays...Dil ne aitbaar kiya hai...tumpe humraahi..thoda sa pyaar hua hai...thoda hai baaki...

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