arshi story the compensation ( epilogue up on pg 53;22 june2018) - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
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thank you ...
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Originally posted by: kayarose

Nice one. Keep going.

now the real story starts.thanks for the comment
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: pirl18

Hey dear.. thanks for all the pms.
I was busy so I will read arshi ff n will comment;)

tell me how is it when you finish reading and comment who you think is sayantani
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Uzii

WoW both fought bravely but i felt so bad for khusi as shashi even didn't acknowledge her efforts.

don't feel bad for her .she didn't deserve that Shashi so it s good he is dead . Arnav is there to acknowledge her efforts
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

khushi fighting with sword bravely was interesting. Arnav encircling her when she tried to hurt him was romantic. so cruel of shashi to slap khushi.loved arnav's reaction.khushi fighting against Arnav to protect shashi was nice .but sad that shashi prefers to die than being protected by khushi..

thank you for the comment .you will get more of Khushi scenes from now and guess who is sayantani
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pinkcat

Loving the story.. Pls update soon

I shall update by tomorrow morning
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Originally posted by: Suhaniy

I shall update by tomorrow morning


Thank you
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awsm update. eagerly waiting fr nxt
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Chap-7

MAUKE AUR SAMJHOTEIN (OPPORTUNITIES AND COMPROMISES)

Note: this is an extremely imp chap so read each line carefully.

In the royal court of aaranya, emperor aaryamann sat on the magnificent throne while mayuri sat with Anjali on a couch to his left. Arnav sat on a different couch in the right while shyam too occupied a seat in the right.

Khushi entered the hall , small tingling sounds echoed in the hall not of the anklets which she was supposed to be wearing being a girl but of the chains which bound her wrists and ankles lest she escapes .the soldiers had a hard time dealing with her as she wouldn't let them bind chains on to her . It was only when she fainted due to dehydration that she was chained. She was facing the ground, her hair unkempt, her eyes swollen due to a sleepless night which she spent crying over her broken vow to save shashi's life .arnav was shocked to see her state and now he felt guilty that somewhere he too was responsible for this state of hers.

"the war has peacefully ended ,declared the royal minister "and it has taught a lesson to all sub kingdoms of aaranya of what shall be the consequences of betrayal .we have acquainted 10 new kingdoms in our territory and the royal treasury is filled. All the families who lost their members during the war shall get a compensation, may they be aaranya's soldiers or enemy kingdom's from the royal treasury of padmadurg and members of that family are always welcome for job opportunities in the kingdom as now they shall get special reservation as an effort to compensate their loss, to which we extend our condolences.

"What about me? How will you compensate my loss? spoke khushi in a low dangerous tone still facing the ground , her eyes red .

"Your fate now lies in the hands of my son, the yuvraj (crown prince ) and you dare not revolt , O princess of the fallen Padmadurg ,or your family shall face worst consequences ,those which you can't even think of in your nightmares. Your loss was inevitable , your father had done wicked deeds .he is not worthy of your mourning I hope you understand. said aaryamann in a haughty yet soft tone keeping in mind he was talking to an agonized 17 year old.

Shyam at once stood up on hearing the first line of aaryamann's speech but was utterly disappointed when aaryamann asked arnav what had he decided as khushi's fate.

"she shall be my wife , father, let her late dishonest father's promise be kept so that he gets some place in heaven. She shall be the younger kulvadhu of raizada dynasty.

"no, you expect me to marry you after what you did to my father !!!!!! khushi roared.

"stay in your limits ,princess, dare you talk to my son in that tone . your fate is sealed . you are on the list of the compensation to be sent by padmadurg . for now we send you there back .remember you need to be back here within 3 days with all the treasury of your place and that's not a request it is an order which you shall obey if you care the smallest bit for your family. shouted aaryamann .

Arnav felt bad for khushi on seeing her plight but he understands his father said so because you need to be strict with a person as stubborn as khushi .and this was all for her good only..

"mother , I don't want to go . I have an idea why don't we start our own rule here, at padmadurg , where I shall be the empress and you the royal mother. *slap*slap*slap *khushi fell down as garima slapped her. " look at your shamelessness

You have the atrocity to come and talk to me .you only bring doom don't you .you*pointing a finger at her* gobbled up my husband and brought doom to us .it is because of you that all our daughters are widows .how many times had I warned shashiji not to keep you but no he thought you are the one who shall bring prosperity. arre!! that prophecy was just a rumour I had spread so that my daughters' proposal shall attract great kings .you are no prosperity only doom ,only doom

Garima's words shocked khushi. she started crying like the poor little soul she was.

"YOU..and only you are the cause of all the destruction and devastation Padmadurg is suffering So you shall also have to surrender yourself as war compensation!!!!! And that's final so stop whining and get dressed proper and fast

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So this is it the 7th chapter we have crossed 3000 views AND WATTPAD .do tell me how did you feel after reading this chapter and don't forget to like or buddy me if you already haven't.

And yes I shall start a new story also which shall be based on ipkknd but shall have the base story of ipk 3.i was so excited when I saw that barun is a part of that show and I found the back story quite interesting and also ritu shivpury ie indrani in that show had a different villainy aura in her. I have nothing against shivani tomar but I found chandni (the character)to be a very despo and weak persona unlike khushi .so I decided to make my own ipk 4 with arnav and khushi in it !!!!!yeah!!!so pls do read and give your response to it

SO EXCITED IPKKND IS GOING TO BE RERUN AS "RABBA VEY " ONLY ON STAR UTSAV .DO WATCH IT ARSHIANS.



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Fantastic update. plz update soon

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