Mystery and Emotions ~ Asshi's index *page 3 Abhiya TS sequel link* - Page 3

Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver

Okay so I read your SS on AbhiYa "Beautiful Mistakes!"

It was a beautiful concept which you executed flawlessly!

Totally amazing story!

You played with the characters amazingly!!

New Abhay which I loved a lot!!

Arushi and Riya both are cutie pies! Beautiful ones!!

Piya seemed like a helpless soul in beginning but soon her character got grip and she stood up firm on her feet. Specially when the talk came on her baby.

About Armaan I felt bad for him. He shouldn't have committed suicide man... It was hard to digest that a person like Armaan committed suicide. I had pictured him as a strong sensible man.

Haseena seemed liked an unaware soul...😆

The plots and situations were beautiful indeed.

Totally enjoyed reading it!!

Originally posted by: Asshi...

If you ask me then that story was challenge for me. Emotional long stories don't really work with me. But it was a request by a new reader and friend.

In fact that story concept wasn't mine even the starting and few points. It was difficult to blend your own imagination with others work but in the end I was satisfied. I know self praising😳 but I was really tensed in the start. I had even wondered if it'll end up as a mess but thankfully it worked well.

New Abhay wasn't my idea as I said. As you said the idea was nice. Even I loved him.

Well about Armaan I remember I had left a mystery with him that was his suicide or was it really a suicide? I don't think I answered it clearly out maybe I did?😕

I don't remember😳

Its a long time you see. Don't blame me okay😃

Hey you was super fast im completing it. It had some ten to twelve parts I guess. I use to write small updates right?😳

Anyway, thanks for reading it. Am really glad you liked it besides you brought me the old memories😃

Thanks a lot!😛

Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver

Yeah I read the note! It was concept of Seema and you executed it!

But at the end it was you who put it as a fiction excellently!!

You had left a mystery!! 😆

Whether Armaan committed suicide or was it an accident you didn't revealed it!

I have a bad habit of reading the things immediately which grab my attention! My friends always get shocked how I always complete reading fiction in matter of few hours!! Your updates were also small...

It was a pleasure reading it!!😊

Originally posted by: Asshi...

Yes mystery. I love to leave few points for viewers imagination.😉

That's not bad habit. Its really good one. I usually do same but if I don't then that thing will eat my brain out.😆 but I can never read fast. I take my own sweet time. Lazy girl you see😆

Yeah i used to write small updates. Actually my updated were really small when i started to write for first time. I just learned to legthen them with time. Now they aren't that much small. Got to learn lot of things with time.😛

Thanks.😃

Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver

I can easily understand that by the way you write..😆

I read fast naturally... But if I adore a scene I read it once again to get its feelings...

I can understand that.. Times teaches you how to update on IF...😆

You are welcome!!😉

Originally posted by: Asshi...

I think I should change that style now no? It becomes cliche😆 but then some habits don't change😉.

I always try to do something different that's how my writing style is drastically change maybe I'll be able to twist the usual plots too. Let's see how it goes😃

Fast I can never. If i attempt to do something fast i won't be able to enjoy it and it will go above my head 😆

Yup! Once you are frequent in something you'll evolve in it sometimes slowly sometimes quickly depends on how much you want to evolve and how you perceive😉

Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver

Yes some habits die hard... I believe writing styles don't change they just improve...

I guess I am blessed in that case then..😆

Yes your growth in a field mostly depends on your interest and passion into it..

Originally posted by: Asshi...

No writing style can be changed. I change mine. But yes it is also true that I didn't know to write at that time either.

Yes you are!😃