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Christie2017

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Yeah Shruthi, I agree with Anita. Nowadays I don't go to bookshops as much as I buy online. And as and when u publish, please inform via this forum coz., there r many times I don't read newspapers at a stretch and there r others when I devour all papers and info. (I am very moody). So I will not know when it is published.

As for the theme, I gave u for the story of a working middle class unwed mother in a city, actually, 1 day as I was watching RKC, it struck me - what if mother-daughter reln is diff. I was keeping in mind these two only. And the story can be a bit similar to the Tamil movie (later remade in Hindi). I forgot the names of both. In Tamil, Sujata was the lawyer, Jaishankar the father. The story revolves round the girl (Poornima I think) who falls in love with a playboy Mohan and then gets dumped by him and how she fights society for her unborn child. Mithun, Rati, Rekha and Danny acted in Hindi. I liked Sujata's acting more than Rekha's.

But let it be a college going girl. And the dilemmas faced by mother-daughter; her future; mom thinking of daughter's marriage in future; daughter thinking of how to leave the mother. A building where they live. Diff. people; diff temperaments. Something like that. I can give the outliers. But I cannot write each and every dialogue. I am too lazy. And this not only for u Shruthi, anyone in this forum is invited to contribute EXCEPT THAT DON'T TURN IT INTO A LOVE STORY 😆😆. I am not against love stories, but I want some Indian writing that can be done without this. BF or GF r ok 😊.

Take ur time.

I feel we all have enough imaginations to contribute.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Anita, this one's for u. I know RKC has to come to a logical conclusion, but I disagree in that it now would very fast and forced and abrupt. If it were just fast paced I'd agree. But here in a single day they showed PP as accepting Sat's faults, Sat telling (it is still half truth)- Guruji told first born. Even if they showed that Sat is concealing that and just telling the children's lives would be in danger at LM, we as audience have evry right to know why Sat gave Anami and not Vats. Also, Dheeru, BD-Sudha past. All these now thanks to SP, will be shown in a single epi or by way of dialogue which is something i am not happy about.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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As for RKC's end, I think, Narrottam will take the bullet meant for Anami shot by an insane Sudha. Would love that he doesn't die and and is accepted by Sat in place of Vats.

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simran_singh_24

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Posted: 7 years ago

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I loved y'dy's episode. If I didn;t know the off-air news I wouldn't know they're rushing.

I liked Sat-Anami interaction, it was heavy & emotional.

I think Vatsalya will again hold back Anami.

DAdi-Anami scene was fantatistic.Dadi has the moral ground to say she didn't dump Anami,she was looking forward to having a grand daughter to pamper. Being wanted is a great feeling and that's what Anmai din't feel in LM. She was the replacement for the child they lost,And y'day Dadi showed her that wasn't the case.

Since the show is ending soon, may be nobody will get killed, we could get a bloodless coup.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Shruthi- Thank you for starting this thread once again. You and others here have given me different perspectives on this show and life. Loved the discussions here and will miss the talks here.

Athene,MangoT,Usha,Vidhya,Tiny,Janas and others will miss you girls.And big thanks for expanding my vision in many areas.😃

Hope we can all find another show somewhere soon to connect.

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shruthiravi

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Guys it will be published in flipkart and Amazon. It will have a webpage. I will share the details in this thread once it is ready. Janas yes the page that opens when u click the link is starting page of seven vows. You can read it in wattpad also which is more user friendly. In wattpad u just need to search seven vows or shruthiravi13. If anyone wants to read it, read it now as I will remove the climax from online forum once manuscript for publishing is ready ie u get abt a month's time.

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simran_singh_24

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Posted: 7 years ago

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@Janas- I don't know they'll end Anami-Adhi, the germ exchange thr' sipping from each other's glass means eternal martial bliss in desi tv😆🤣

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Ha, Ha Ha Simmi. That last post. I guess I wasn't as much against the love story per se as much as I was the way a CBI officer was going about doing his job and sometimes Adhi's exprns. But, I myself am guilty of comparing his acting with others. Probably coz., I felt he had so much time interacting with other actors of calibre. Even MM has been terrific.

Shruthi. Thanks. Whatpad, should I be downloading. I am not so good in all thes stuff, so I keep asking how to go about. Sorry for being a nuisance in this regd.

And to all u guys, don't say goodbye so soon. I mean we have 1 working days incl. today and a lot can happen in that time. Who knows SP may be bullied to give an extn of a month or two for a logical end.

Till 23rd, I am willing to wait 😉.

But all in all, as Simmi put it, thx Shruthi for such a thread wherein interactions ranged not only wrt RKC, but also others. We may have our diff (after all all fingers rn't the same), but these varied thoughts do expand our mind.