FF: FINDING LOVE [COMPLETED]

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Guys . I am back with a new idea of mine to torture you all. Most of you after reading Mere Humkadm FF have requested Yog & Anika so here's presenting our lovely YOGIKA in a new way hope you all will like it 😊

I hope har baar ki tarah ye aatyachar bhi aap loog jheel lenge 🤔🤔 Hope you all will like this concept & support me. I will post the parts soon & please give your feedback on CS & Prologue given below.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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FINDING LOVE


PROLOGUE :


Love is supposed to be the most beautiful feeling in this world & most pious too. Love isn't something you find or you look for but Love is something that finds you & that's why it's said "FALLING IN LOVE" as you don't force yourself you just fall hopelessly.

But at times we don't realize and accept the fact that we have already fallen for a person, certain circumstances, restrictions also our logical mind at times warns us or stop us from confessing our true feelings but people forget that True Love is not finding someone to live with but it's about finding someone you cannot live without.

We cannot see our Love in any kind of danger and pain and it's really tough when you see your love struggling just because of you. At times insecurities, logics & reality of life don't allow your heart to rule over your mind but True love indeed does not fade away as it is hard to find someone who loves you back, that's the power of love.


SNEAK PEAK:


It's a rainy night, and in between thunder and lightning 2 men are coming out from the hospital in Doctor's Uniform, they start their car & both started to move to their destination their quarters.


After a while they find a girl clad in black vest and Khaki pant bleeding profusely in an unconscious state. Her left hand and head is badly bruised and her vest also had blood spots.


Both stop the car immediately and one Doctor comes out and checks the lady and said "Nawaaz! Pulse slow hai hume jaldi hospital leke jaana hoga ... meri madat karo please"


Both next moment put unconscious girl in their car and started driving fast towards hospital. One doctor settled at the back seat and started the initial treatment.


After few minutes they admitted her in the hospital and started her proper treatment. After a while when things are stable a lady comes to them and asks "ye hai kaun aur aapko kaha mili?"


Man smiles and said "Patanahi! Hum ghar hi jaarahe the raaste main behosh mili ... subah tak hosh aa jaayega tab dekhte hai"


Next morning finally lady opens her eyes and sees a lady Doctor and two more Doctors treating her.


A Doctor with a smile came near and said with a smile "Hello Miss Fighter! Ab kaisa feel kar rahi hai aap?"


Lady with a smile "Much better Doctor! Par aapko kaise pata chala ki mujhe ladte hue chot lagi hai?"


Doctor said with a smile "aapki condition ko dekhke"


Lady said thanking him "Thanks a lot Doctor! Well I am ACP Anika Purohit"


Second Doctor smiled and said "Kaanon ki galiyoon se na apna bair hoo ... loo wo mil gaye raahon main khuda khair hoo"


Lady Doctor says smacking him "Nawaaz! Aap bhi kahin bhi shuru ho jaate hai"


Turning to lady said "I am sorry mere shauhar ko beech beech main shayari ke attacks padte hai ... Main Dr. Janant Siddiqui aur ye mere Shauhar Dr. Jaanawaaz Siddiqui"


Lady said asking the man sitting near him "aur aap?"


Man with a smile "Dr. Yogendra Vashisht"


Lady said forwarding her hand "it was nice meeting you"


Man first composed himself and took out his near paralyzed shaking hand from his pocket and grabs her hand and said turning to both the Doctors "Chalein! Rounds ke liye late ho raha hai" with that all three walked out leaving a stunned Anika behind

TUMHE HO NAA HO MUJHKO TO ITNAA YAKEEN HAI

MUJHE PYAAR TUMSE NAHIN HAI NAHIN HAI

MUJHE PYAAR TUMSE NAHIN HAI NAHIN HAI

MAGAR MAINE YE RAAZ AB TAK NAA JAANAA

KE KYUN PYAARI LAGTIN HAIN BAATEN TUMHAARI MAIN

KYUN TUMSE MILNE KAA DHOONDOON BAHAANAA

KABHI MAINE CHAAHAA TUMHE CHOO KE DEKHOON

KABHII MAINE CHAAHAA TUMHE PAAS LAANAA

MAGAR PHIR BHI IS BAAT KAA TO YAKEEN HAI

MUJHE PYAAR TUMSE NAHIN HAI NAHIN HAI

MUJHE PYAAR TUMSE NAHIN HAI NAHIN HAI

PHIR BHI JO TUM DOOR RAHTE HO MUJHSE

TO RAHTEN HAIN DIL PE UDAASI KE SAAYE

KOYI KHWAAB OONCHE MAKAANON SE JHAANKE

KOYI KHWAAB BAITHAA RAHE SAR JHUKAAYE

KABHI DIL KI RAAHON MEIN PHAILE ANDHERAA

KABHI DOOR TAK RAUSHNI MUSKURAAYE

MAGAR PHIR BHI IS BAAT KAA TO YAKEEN HAI

MUJHE PYAAR TUMSE NAHIN HAI NAHIN HAI

TUMHE HO NAA HO MUJHKO TO ITNAA YAKEEN HAI

MUJHE PYAAR TUMSE NAHIN HAI NAHIN HAI



CHARACTERIZATION: Characters are:

ACP Anika Purohit: A simple sweet natured girl from a middle class family & an IPS officer by profession & very tough cop with a sharp vision loves her family a lot.




Dr. Yogendra Vashisht: He is from a high class political family a famous Doctor and surgeon by profession. He is soft sweet hearted and a carefree person. He lost his right hand power in an accident. His friends call him Yog'




Dr. Jaanawaaz Siddiqui & Dr. Jannat Siddiqui: Friends of Yog they support him a lot they both are Doctor by profession & assist Yog in his hospital & researches.




IAS Manohar Vashisht: Father of Yog he is a famous Senior Bureaucratwith an honest reputation he loves his only son a lot. He lost his wife long ago & brought up his son all alone.




Girish Purohit & Mamta Purohit: Girish is a renowned Government officer and a helpful person Mamta is his second wife his first wife Manasvi died in an accident leaving a small Anika in his lap. Mamta is a home maker but being a step mother of Anika she doesn't like her much.



ACP Vinayak Rao Newallkar: Childhood friend of Anika and very close to her, and sweet person at heart.




Siddhi Purohit: Daughter of Mamta and Girish, she is pursuing her MBA and she loves her family a lot specially Anika





I will add more characters if required as the story progresses.😊


So how was it ? please give your Reviews 😊

Edited by LOVE.GOLD - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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CS N PROLOGUE -- PAGE 1

PART 1 ---- PAGE 4
PART 2 ---- PAGE 7
PART 3 ---- PAGE 11
PART 4 ---- PAGE 14
PART 5 ---- PAGE 17
PART 6 ---- PAGE 21
PART 7 ---- PAGE 25
PART 8 ---- PAGE 28
PART 9 ---- PAGE 33
PART 10 ---- PAGE 36
PART 11 ---- PAGE 40
PART 12 ---- PAGE 44
PART 13 ---- PAGE 48
PART 14 ---- PAGE 53
PART 15 ---- PAGE 57
LAST PART ---- PAGE 61






Edited by LOVE.GOLD - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Dear Readers,


I will update this FF depending upon my work & ur responses too If u don't find the prologue apt n I have less comments I will stop right here n will not update the parts further or I will be shifting it to blog for my genuine interested readers I think itna attyachaar kaafi hoga 🤔 so please let me know that weather I should continue or not 😊 & If you guys liked it please let me know through your comments & wait for this story to unfold. 🤗


Love & Regards
Your's Goldie

Edited by LOVE.GOLD - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#5
Wow didu new story
Awesome start didu
Prologue seems interesting

Aur cs it was soo gud Aapko tho pata hi hai I am biggest fan of ariya par kya karoon appki story ko ignore kaise karsakti hoo hai na
Isiliye aap forum me update karo ya blog par link bhej na math bhoolna
Ab updates jaldi dijiye
Waiting to be updated
Thanks for pm
Bye take care
Edited by sana1819786 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Buddy, finally you have started!! 😃 😃 😃
Congo...
🤗 🤗

Loved the title.. Finding Love
Nice prologue... We don't find love, love finds us.. That's why it is said "fall in love "
Really nice thought, dear
Loved it... ❤️

Coming to the CS-
Loved alll d character.. 😊
But you left me speechless..
Saurav as Vinayek!!!!!
I'm just 😳 😳
You know, l always have loved the friendship between Pooja & Saurav...

So, finally Yogika has been started..
Loved it as always..
Continue soon.. N don't forget to pm me 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: FarhanaKeka03

Buddy, finally you have started!! 😃 😃 😃
Congo...
🤗 🤗

Loved the title.. Finding Love
Nice prologue... We don't find love, love finds us.. That's why it is said "fall in love "
Really nice thought, dear
Loved it... ❤️

Coming to the CS-
Loved alll d character.. 😊
But you left me speechless..
Saurav as Vinayek!!!!!
I'm just 😳 😳
You know, l always have loved the friendship between Pooja & Saurav...

So, finally Yogika has been started..
Loved it as always..
Continue soon.. N don't forget to pm me 😳


Thanks Farhana dear glad you loved it
Yes I finally started
Yes that's true ... Love has its own flavor
Well Vinayak is childhood friend of Anika
Many don't know that Saurabh and Pooja are very good friends that's why I used his face
You will see Ani and Vini with full bloom
Will post the parts soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#8
You started a new story! 🥳
Even I wanted to read something on Anika and Yog after the FF ended, glad that you're writing something on them. 😳

Loved the CS, Pooja is love! <3
Karan Sharma suits Yog amazingly and Amir Sanjeeda are so adorable. ❤️
Saurabh Raj Jain is also on the list, eager to see Vinayak's friendship with Anika. 😃

The prolouge is intriguing. Eager to read further.

Thanks For Pm.
Update Soon.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wowww great going haa
Nice prologue
Pahali mulakaat me hi ye haal hai
Shayari nice yaar
Superbb
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: .Archangel.

You started a new story! 🥳

Even I wanted to read something on Anika and Yog after the FF ended, glad that you're writing something on them. 😳

Loved the CS, Pooja is love! <3
Karan Sharma suits Yog amazingly and Amir Sanjeeda are so adorable. ❤️
Saurabh Raj Jain is also on the list, eager to see Vinayak's friendship with Anika. 😃

The prolouge is intriguing. Eager to read further.

Thanks For Pm.
Update Soon.


Thanks Shanu dear glad you loved it
Love you lots 🤗
Its not Karan its Ahem Sharma and Pooja ... I personally loved their chemistry from Mahabharata 😳
Saurabh and Pooja are very good friends personally too ... So I cannot think of anyone else as Vinayak
Ani and Vini friendship will be worth watching
Will surely paste the parts soon
Keep reading 😊

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