When Paths Converge -An AnuVir Saga (on AviMan) Pt -3 pg 16

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.......... Deeksha..........

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Though I was slightly confused as I always used to read on Rosid but the update was lovely.

Don't worry on criticism, it's your wish whom you have in mind to pair and post. I have seen many stories like this.

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MistyDevil

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Oh wow nice update dear. Viren entry was awesome and clashes between anuvir was superb now where this anu went. I loved it. Oh now our hero went search his heroine cool. Waiting for nxt dear. Thanks for the pm

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Nice update dear

Liked it !!

Anushka was regretting thyself for lying to her dadima yet again as she was in mission to find Jhanvi's murderer. As their lie cost Jhanvi's death. Loved Anuvir first meet though they had their tiffs and banter Viren was concerned about Anushka's whereabouts and safety.

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ayeshasif

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Posted: 7 years ago

#64

The character sketch and update is really nice I seriously have no words for your writing skills yr just amazing...update soon

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himani_692

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Posted: 7 years ago

#65

super duper awesome loved their first meet viren fell due to sudden brake their first eye lock that was so cute loved their little fight well it was Anu who was for fighting viren is concerned for her even tried to do friendship but Anu is lost in her own thoughts where is she missing now waiting for next eagerly update soon

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Preeithika16

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Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Amazing anuvir meeting was amazing.Anushka too naa but no worry viren has great capability to make place in heart .Where did anushka went what happened to her .Thanks for the pm

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MUNAZZA - SHAHID MALIK HUSSAIN

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Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Amazing starting love it thanks for pm update sooner

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InToTheUnknown

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Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: manasa5124
Awesome update yaar... Anuvir's first meet awww their eye lock though it was for a second it was cute n luvd their cute tiffs but where is anu n our hero went on search for his girl and in this searching whether they both will miss bus or what well waiting fr next update soon

thank you manasa dear

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InToTheUnknown

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Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: riswanarichu
Anuvir first meeting amazing and loved the update . Chechi avarkkenganum bus missaavo. enikkanganeya thonunno update ASAP. Waiting. ...

thank you dear. let's see