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Posted: 7 years ago
armaan se zyaada mujhe ridhima par gussa aaraha hai
woh armaan ki har baat maanrahi hai
she is behaving like a puppet
chiii ghinn hoti hai mujhe armaan ke dialouges padhkar
itne waahiyat dialouges
chiii
n what the hell 2 saal se ridhima ne ahaan ko sambhala aur usne first word baba kaha
jo insaan woh word ke layakh nahi hai usey itni preference mat do yaar
n rihoo di aap apni genre change mat karo ye ff ke khaatir i like your mature n simple stories
i dnt wanna guess ke kisne likha

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Posted: 7 years ago
part 17


im hell angry on ridhima now..why the hell she is behaving lyk a puppet..

armaan knws ahaan is his son bt phir v he is still saying those words to ridhima? ? why ??

and im feeling bad fr ridhima.. 2 saal ahaan raha to ridhima k sath bt phir v his 1st word is baba?? kyun? kyun? kyun??


I wont be surprised if armaan ask her to stay in guest room.. W*F


u knw what I changed my decision after reading this part...I want a sad ending. ..thats it.. ppl lyk armaan never deserves happiness..

armaan should be alive in the end... pal pal marna chahiye isse... ridhima should be a independent women...


I'm so pissed of. .

I think amna wrote this part
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Posted: 7 years ago
hello so comment karne se pehle kuch or post mat kar dena
ok to part 14 ki comment is here
hate armaan rude behaiviour towards ridhz
ek min ke liye when they have eye locks n armaan is enjoying ridhz hand made food so hungerly enjoying it fully tab lga shayad he is melting but idiot double angry hogya n then bechari ridhz ko ghar jane nah diya till late which is very unprofessional
but end me mza agaya armaan bakwaas kar rha tha n threating ridhz
but ye ek mother ki wrath samjo ya patience khatam hogya samjho
to tolerate that she finally fight back for herself
part15
i feel so happy n contended when ridhz slap him wohoo!!! i actually did a victort dance then very proud of her bohut sunaya use or use mirror dikhay
shujar h sari btaya sunayi
hope she should have dared 2yrs back
poor ahaan become the reason for their somehow getting together
chahe thode drama ke baad hi sahi
glad that ridhz ignore him fully after that he feel guilty abt his deed for few minutes just for some tym idiot phir hospital jate hi pagal hogya
same old n some new accusation
can i plz kill him
thank god that atul stand by ridhz n supported ridhz
part 16
i was confused why ridhz was all the tym hiding ahaan from armaan ?
loved how atul challenged armaan n support ridhz n acted as a shield for him but armaan armaan hi rahega didnt understand a single thing wat they both r saying just blaming ridhz flaring angrily
chlo finally ridhz ko reason to pta chla abt armaan reaction n anger
n she again give him piece of mind but use lena hi nag hota
but atul words definately affect him that y he is trying to prove himself right to isse liye hi sahi he will find truth or tab pta chalega
jerk agar ye 2 yrs pehle karta to itna problem to nah hota

part 17
so going aimlessly use bhi hospital hi jana tha
or phir shuru hua ye blame game abepagal hi h
chlo atleast ek truth to samne aya iske or use beleive hua uspe ahaan ko dekhke hi sahi but he believed ki ye uska baby h
but arrogance gyi nah iski
ab bhi zabardasti in taking ahaan n blackmailing ki courte jayega seriously i hate him so much
i dont understand how can they make out even in this situation
or ridhz still blushes with him
are they both hate eachother
anyways ye galat h bohot galat h ye ahaan how can he get so attracted to armaan in few hrs that usko baba bula his first word matlab kya ridhz ki koi value nah
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: NishitaRahman

Wow Mind blowing part.love the part.this part is written by amna.love Ahaan first word.eagerly waiting for next part.


thanks dear..
Glad u are loving the story...
Keep reading,enjoying and guessing...
take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: T.Peru

Nice update

Armaan is shock to see Ahaan resembk To him
Her forced Ridhima to live with him
Other wise he take Ahaan away from her
They kiss each other
And Ahaan call him as his father
Now they both need chance not for them
But also for Ahaan better future
Update soon


Thanks dear..
Yeah, first he didn't just give a look to the boy but now he shocked to see him totally look just like him..
Somewhere in his heart, he still have feelings for Riddhima is the reason that he is forcing her...
Let's see if they agree to live for themselves or for their son...
Keep loving and reading...
take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings

Yeh Armaan kaisa hai! Ab toh usse pata chal gaya hai ki Ahaan uska beta hai toh bhi Riddhima pe itna shak kar raha hai! Kyu? God, uske paas dimaag nahi hai kya? Ek paise ka bhi? Gadha kahin ka! Idiot.

Aur kaise ekdum farmaan sunaa diya. Ahaan mere saath rahega. Aur usse apne room mein rakh raha. Matlab ab Riddhima bhi uske room mein rahegi ya woh alag aur dono baap bete ek saath?

Aur yeh photos. Armaan ne ab tak rakhi hui hai? Wow! Woh toh maine expect nahi kiya tha! Waise, I hope Atul jo bhi photos ke through dhoondna chaahta hai usse mil jaaye.

Aur yeh Armaan aur Riddhima ek doosre se abhi bhi itne attracted hai toh woh dono saath mein reh rahe hai yeh interesting hoga!

And, of course! Ahaan ka first word! Armaan bohot khush hoga ki woh baba hai, lekin mujhe Ridzy ke liye bura lag raha hai. Itne saal tak Ridzy ne akele Ahaan ko sambhala. Aur uska first word? Baba.

Bas ab jaldi aage bhi update kardo! Please!


Thanks Dear...
Hehehhe paise se tohdina dhimag kareed sakte hai...
Issiliye ab tak usko akal nehi aaya... nehi toh akal ka use toh karte na ab tak...
I know, somewhere in his heart maybe he still have feelings for her...
But usko ego itna bada hai koi kiya kar sakte hai right...

Hhehehe mujhe bhi nehi pata kyun rakkhe hai...
Shayad usko sirf ek cheez chahiyeh usko remind karne ke liye woh kyun Ridz se nafrat karta hai...

We too felt really bad for Ridz..
Ab dekhte hai aage kiya hota hai...
Hehhehe haan haan, hum kardenge update...
Keep reading loving and guessing..
take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Natalya_bedi

Men like Armaan should be taught a lesson...
And Riddhima. ..does she have any self respect...
I mean pls I am up for a sad ending...it's better ...Armaan jaisa insaan maafi k kabil nahi hai...

Itne dinon tak ma ne sambhala aur Ahaan ne ba ba bol diya...apne Baba ki tarah mat ban beta...

I WANT RIDDHIMA TO MOVE ON...


Thanks dear...
Yeah he should really get to learn a lesson...
let's see if she let him hurt her or she stood up for her self respect...
hahaha accha, hmm dekhenge aage kiya karna chahiyeh humein ;)
After all it's a story, no one knows what will happen right...
Keep reading and loving...
take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

part 16


wohhh what an update
totally luvd it...

u knw what armaan never deserves love in his life.. He is cruel... armaan s zyada to Atul trust her... he's lyk main kabhi galat ho hi nhi sakta.. sab kuch sunne k baad v he's trusting shaina.. really armaan?? u deserve shaina man... I knw u have trust issues... bt phir v how can u always put finger on her character.. who d hell give u the rights
im so angry on him yaar



if it was any real life incident...I would say ridhima should never forgive armaan no matter what bt well we're talking abt AR here.. how can I say sad ending chahiye... happy ending dena bt armaan should regret what he said to her always... bahut papad banwao isse.ridhima should never forgive him easily...aur accident k bare me v toh sochna v mat.. itni easily bilkul nhi


hmm rihoo didu wrote this part???


and abt divorce main bhul gayi thi that talaq bolne se hi inlogo ka divorce ho jata hai.. bt well as u said he only said that once toh talaq toh nhi hua...


hey Priyuuu
Heheheh we know that right..
Isn't it moving awesome ;)

I know, how can he be so cruel na..
is aadmi ke paas toh akal naam ki cheez hi nehi hai...
Shaina aur Sid ke wajahse woh hamesha Ridz koh suffer karwate hai...
Wooo woo wooo, calm down girl lolzz...

I know, same even we want but sadly its not realll
Or it can be real :P hahaha...
Because sake of a child, parents always secrifies and stay with a person who they didn't want to give a chance...
Aur jaise Armaan ne behave kiya, Ridz ke jhaga koi aur hota toh ussi din bhaag jaate jis din usko pata chala Armaan same country mein hai right...
Kyunki father has a right to claim his child as much as a mother have...

Yup, I wrote that one :P
hehehe shocked??

Talaaq teen baar bolna padta hai...
Aur court mein talaaq confirm bhi karna hota hai nehi toh talaaq nehi hote...
So now tum khud hi socho hehe...

Keep reading and loving..
Guessing too...
Take care :D
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ITSABOUT_DMG

armaan se zyaada mujhe ridhima par gussa aaraha hai

woh armaan ki har baat maanrahi hai
she is behaving like a puppet
chiii ghinn hoti hai mujhe armaan ke dialouges padhkar
itne waahiyat dialouges
chiii
n what the hell 2 saal se ridhima ne ahaan ko sambhala aur usne first word baba kaha
jo insaan woh word ke layakh nahi hai usey itni preference mat do yaar
n rihoo di aap apni genre change mat karo ye ff ke khaatir i like your mature n simple stories
i dnt wanna guess ke kisne likha


Heheh calm down humey darling...
Itna gussa health ke liye accha nehi hai jaani...
I know, we think so too...
Dekhte hai aage kiya hota hai...
Armaan koh maafi milti ya nehi..
Usse pura sach pata chalti ya nehi...
Keep reading, loving and guessing...

hahaha I m not changing myself humey darling for any story...
It;s just that due to the name of the story, we both are trying to show some deep emotions through our words...
I know i know, meri individual stories mein toh Armaan bilkul aisa nehi hoga ;)
take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

part 17


im hell angry on ridhima now..why the hell she is behaving lyk a puppet..

armaan knws ahaan is his son bt phir v he is still saying those words to ridhima? ? why ??

and im feeling bad fr ridhima.. 2 saal ahaan raha to ridhima k sath bt phir v his 1st word is baba?? kyun? kyun? kyun??


I wont be surprised if armaan ask her to stay in guest room.. W*F


u knw what I changed my decision after reading this part...I want a sad ending. ..thats it.. ppl lyk armaan never deserves happiness..

armaan should be alive in the end... pal pal marna chahiye isse... ridhima should be a independent women...


I'm so pissed of. .

I think amna wrote this part


Hey Priyuuu...
heheh sabko ridz pe hi gussa aa raha hai ab...
i know, she is being a emotional fool in front of him...
Let's see if she forgive him or will give him a hard time...

Hehehe teri kyun ka jawab shayad next part mein miljaenge ;)
Phir yeh teri kyun kyun kyun badhal jaenge another word pe haha...

hmm dekhte hai woh kamre se Ridz koh baahar karte ya nehi...

Lolz, tum bhi decision change karli..
lagta hai ab kissi koh AR saath mein chahiyeh nehi...
Yeah, in real life a girl who have self respect would never give a chance to someone like Armaan..
But there still is a small percent girls who would give a chance to a guy who is father of their child...
So let's see what will happen...

Keep loving enjoying and guessing...
Muwaahhh Love u:*

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