Is Dard-E-Dil Ki Sifarish RaGa SS epilogue-pg30 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update
Loved it
Continue soon
Waiting for the next update
Thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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The cs is quite good. Even the start is quite good. It began with Indravadan going for the international photography competition. Loved Tej, Jhanvi, & Indravadan bonding. Indravadan-Naina scenes are quite romantic. The dialogue, "Your love is my strength." was very much passionate. Also loved Gayatri Danyanti scenes. Sad that Gayatri's dad has not returned. It is quite discouraging when the outsiders say that your spouse might have moved on with someone else when you are not in touch with him for years. Based on what they say, it also gives you bad dreams. It increases the insecure feelings but loved Damyanti's courage & belief that her husband will return one day. Wish & hope that her faith turns out to be true. Loved her saying Gayatri that she will meet her prince despite her dark skin. Some ruffians were teasing Gayatri. Glad that Indravadan saved her at the nick of time. He saw a Naina in her but with a dark complexion. I guess it will be a love triangle.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome start!!
Loved it.
Gayatri is upset as everyone teases her..poor girl have to face so much bec of her dark skin..her mother consoled her n asked her to wait for her Prince Charming..so her father left her mother but still she loves him..indravadhan is close to his bhabhi n he is going to Gayatri village for photography..he n Naina r in love n he went meet her before going...some men r misbehaving with Gayatri n he saved her from them n she thinks him to be her prince..he is stunned seeing her...
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats on your new story...it is wonderful...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for new Story...
Dhamyanthi and Gayathri bonding is cute.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
Character Sketch is very Interesting
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Is Naina and Gaythri perhaps sisters
as Gaythri's mother said her father loved her but was forced to leave her
so could Naina and Gaythri be related
Gaytri sees Indra and sees her prince charming in him while he feels that her face is same as Naina only complexion differs
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Thanku 4 the lovely comments friends

Is Dard-E-Dil Ki Sifarish...Recommendation for the painful heart Part 2

Indravadhan:Are you alright?
Gayatri was adoring his face without hearing it.
Indravadhan:Are you fine?
Suddenly Gayatri came back to senses.
Gayatri:Ya ya..you came as a saviour and saved me.I don't know how to thank you.
Indravadhan:Be careful.every time no one will be there to save us like we see in films and books.
Gayatri was silent.
Gayatri:I have not seen you before.
Indravadhan:I am from the city.I came here for photography.I mean I need to take the best photographs here for competition.I have heard that this village is very beautiful.So I can take good photos also.Right?
Gayatri:Yes.This village is very beautiful.So your photos will also be beautiful.
Indravadhan:Do you really know what competition is?
Gayatri:Yes.I have gone to the school till 5th std.
Indravadhan:After that why did'nt you go to school?

Gayatri became dull:This is a remote village.Here the schools are very small.Only till 6th they have classes.

Indravadhan:That's pathetic.What's your name?
Gayatri:Gayatri.Your name sir?
Indravadhan:Indravadhan...Indravadhan Singh Deo.Is there any lodge here?I want to stay here for 2 weeks.
Gayatri:Yes.I will show you the lodge.
Gayatri led him to the lodge.
Indravadhan;Thank you Gayatri.But i need one more help from you.Tomorrow onwards please show me the beautiful areas of this village.
Gayatri:Sure Sir.
Indravadhan:Think well and give me an answer.I am a stranger.
Gayatri:It's ok.You saved my life and dignity.I am grateful to you.So I will do anything for you.And I trust you.
Indravadhan smiled.
Indravadhan:Where will I meet tomorrow?
Gayatri:Where we met today.
Indravadhan:Ok.

Gayatri went back home.
Gayatri:Maa...
Damyanti:Gayatri beta...
Gayatri:Maa...today an incident took place.Some dirty men tried to attack me.
Damyanti was shocked:What?
Damyanti became upset and caressed her restlessly:Are you ok Gayatri?
Gayatri:Maa..don't get worried.I am alright.A nice man saved me from them.He punched them like the heroes of films and saved me.Just like the Prince saves the Princess from the witches.
Damyanti was relieved:Who is he?
Gayatri:His name is Indravadhan Singh Deo.He is from the city to take photographs for a big competition.I dropped him to the lodge.He wants me to show him this village for taking photos.
Damyanti got tensed:Don't go with him Gayatri.What if he...?We don't know how he is.

Gayatri:Maa...don't worry.He is a nice man.I will be safe with him.He saved me.I have full faith in him.
Damyanti:But Gayatri..
Gayatri:Maa...you only told me to help others.He saved me from a big danger.So it's my duty to help him back.Right?
Damyanti was silent.
Gayatri:So please don't object Maa.
Damyanti said yes helplessly.Gayatri was very happy.
Damyanti prayed to God:God..please protect my daughter.Save her from all evil traps.

The next day...

Before going to meet Indravadhan,Gayatri dressed up well.She wore the nice jewellery she has.Put powder and bindi.
She remembered Indravadhan's face and smiled.
She thought:Will he be my Prince?In stories and films Prince is the saviour of the Princess.Indravadhan Sir saved me.So he will be my Prince.Right?
Gayatri blushed.

Gayatri Indravadhan met.
Indravadhan:thank you so much for coming Gayatri.
Gayatri:It's my pleasure Indravadhan Sir.

Gayatri took him to the remote aea.
Gayatri:Our village is like a forest.There can be animals also.
Indravadhan was stunned:Animals?
Gayatri:Don't get scared.Not always.But we need to be alert.
Indravadhan:Oh no.
Indravadhan observed every corner and took photos.He captured different kinds of trees,leaves,water vapour in leaves,birds in the nest,different colour birds,small peculiar animals etc in his camera.
Indravadhan:I am surprised.I have not seen such animals and birds.
Gayatri:Yes Sir.Here you can find different species of birds and animals.

They roamed around a lot.
Indravadhan:I feel thirsty.I want water.From where can I have water?
Gayatri showed him a river:Drink from here?
Indravadhan:From here?Yuck.
Gayatri drank water from the near by river and looked at him.
INDRAVADHAN:How can you drink water from here?
Gayatri:It's pure water Sir.We all drink water from here.
Indravadhan thought:Bathing and drinking from the same river.So unhygienic.
Indravadhan:No.I can't drink from here.

G:Sir..if you are adamant about it you will really have tough time without getting water.

Indravadhan thought:My throat is really dry.Before i faint I need to drink water.I have no other option than to drink from this river.Yuck.
With hesitation Indravadhan drank from the river.
Suddenly they head a roaring sound.
Gayatri:Oh no.Elephant is coming.
INDRAVADHAN:Was it elephant's sound?
G:Yes.
INDRAVADHAN:But is there any need to be scared of elephant?
G:This is a wild elephant.It's better to be careful.Let's escape.
Gayatri grabbed Indravadhan's hand and ran.
They hid behind bushes and watched the elephant plucking tree branches and kicking trees making them fall down.
G:Let's leave.
INDRAVADHAN:But my photography.I have not explored this forest completely.
G:You do it tomorrow Sir.It's not safe now.
She grabbed his hand and ran.
They got tired and sat under a tree to rest.Both were panting.
Gayatri realized that she was sitting close to Indravadhan.She could feel his breath.She looked at him deeply.
Indravadhan looked at him.She looked somewhere else.
INDRAVADHAN:You actually saved me from that hyperactive elephant.Thank you Gayatri.

G:Don't thank me Sir.You also saved me.Right?

INDRAVADHAN:We both saved each other.
They giggled.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update...
Eagerly waiting for next update...
& thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice to see damyanti and gayatri bonding. Gayatri saved the person from the elephant who saved her from the thugs.

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