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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Errantnomad

"u always joke... u are never serious" "U mask all your feelings under laughter" the second sentence she said in Konkani

The wife knows' the husband now . 😳 it's so telling that she slips to Konkani when expressing that.



Slipping to ones known language is the way of speaking love
As II slips to her language while in love or when she wants to abuse dude
God I miss them like hell..
Nisha one update of SOSY pleaseee
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sonalgupta2004



Slipping to ones known language is the way of speaking love
As II slips to her language while in love or when she wants to abuse dude
God I miss them like hell..
Nisha one update of SOSY pleaseee
👏



Every week twice or thrice I do a 'Maavy' omelette with loads of bell peppers and I know I'm smiling then. But even he had grey hair in that Golden glow update when Nivi and the boys grew up to leave home . Golden Glow is so fittingly immensely satisfying tribute to sosy's run.

Updates like Letting go for its emotions, oily veggie patch for its whacky humor where Nisha was at her best and Golden glow for its journey almost surreal just stick and stay without you ever having to turn back the pages.
Edited by Errantnomad - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hope

"Did you show him the present?" Dadu goaded his grandson

"she did Dadu and I loved it"

"I can get you one" Dadu nodded compassionately

"Umm.. thanks but I dont wear women's jewelry. I am straight" he said calmly

Leela rolled on the couch hysterical

Trisha gripped his wrist and pulled "Ashwinnn" she whispered


"Aashooo" Mandira warned

"Good... I am happy... there is no law stopping a man from wearing women's jewelry, but I meant I will buy you Bvlgari men's watch"

"I have a couple, I am good Dadu" he said

He held Trisha's hand warmly


"You can stay, last night nobody was able to get home on time" Mandira coaxed her son


"i am sorry I cant, I have meetings today with the Asian F&B licensor, Chirag and I were hoping we can go scout for new office space. Our lease is running out soon"

"You do care" Sharanbir nodded in awe

"I get paid dont I, I am contractually obligated to work for the next few months, so I should go do my job" he said


"One day is not going to matter" Mandira was sad

"I can see u in the evening"

"Are u going too Ms Shanbag?" Sharanbir observed her letting herself out along with him


"Umm... no, just to the lift"


"OK, i will see you soon" he said pointedly

"Want to have lunch?" he asked her punching the button


"I have to go with Leela to bank no?" she said


"We can do both"

He stared at the static numbers on the LED


"can I ask you something?"

"No more cats?" she asked looking at Prasad's house longingly

"Ha... no... I wouldnt dare do that" he grinned

"i am waiting for your mother to go so I can bring her"

"women usually wait to do ... umm... stranger... umm... no more obvious things... after their mother in laws leave" he laughed


The elevator came and went, the other three were stuck now on various floors

They wandered around the circular atrium she peeked down to the ground floor. He held her back with one arm

"Its not scary" she smiled ack his protective hold


"I know... only bugs and indoor lizards" he muttered staring deeply into her eyes

"And even thief no?" she nodded

"Oh yeah.. imaginary ones" he agreed

"what will women do again?" she encouarged him to talk


"Oh yeah, they probably go get their nails done, or take naps or watch television" he laughed softly

"I can do all that no when she is here" she nodded

"So she does OK?" he asked hoping Trisha would like his mother

"she tells me to do proper cooking and umm" she stopped

"and pretty much all the rest of the gripe she has?" he asked not offended

"I am OK" she said

"she will probably nag you always do u realize?" he asked softly

"After studying I will learn to cook no" she said confidently

"she is your mother in law she will find things to nag" he informed

"she told me this morning I cant keep sugar in a different cupboard" she used the opp to tattle

"U shud do it anyway"

"Will u tell her u did it?" she challenged

"i will probably tell her it was you!!" he said mischievously

"then you cant be protective inside the house, only outside huh?" she struggled to free her wrist.

"Arent husbands supposed to mind their own business?" he gasped laughing under his breath as she fought his grip

"ashwinnn... "


"I bet you care take care of yourself, you dont need me to defend you..." he smiled gently, his eyes sparkling with suppressed laughter-tears

"OK I wont ask you for help" she nodded

"Trish..."

"what did you wnat to talk about?"

"Lets step away from this banister" he grinned walking over to floor to ceiling windows all around the waiting area

"I wanted to ask you if its OK if I can offer you money?" he said politely gently letting go of her arm


She rubbed it slowly "for what?" she asked

"Youve been here for weeks now, I ve asked you to open a bank Account, I need to take care of it too" he said softly

"I dont need money now" she said hesitantly

"I am sure you struggle to talk about money as much as I am right now Trish... its not an easy topic for both of us... we began this whole thing over money" he said shifting his laptop bag to another shoulder

"I know what I did Ashwinn" she said

"So do I" he nodded

There was a long pause

"You can just buy me things I need not give me money" she suggested

"Like?" he asked

"You know clothes and books, and journal rentals" she explained


"Yes to the last two... I might think about the first one" he whispered

It sunk in after a minute and she blushed furiously

"Like if I... you dont buy clothes means, I wont have clothes and wont be wearing at all?" she scoffed

"I can only hope!!" he said bending down and kissing her flaming ear

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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow. Lucky me. Logged in and have an update ready.
Thank you Nisha.

Off to read now 😃

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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow. Another warm update. They are moving ahead slowly and steadily.
Loved it. Thank you Nisha. They are craving for lone time. Had to move corridor to discuss their life.

I know they can when alone in room. But I guess room is not meant for discussion.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ah hah !! Hope springs eternal in our man's mind !!
Glad the topic of money has surfaced. It was inevitable that Trisha's meagre savings would run dry and it is just right that Ashvin broaches the matter. Glad also to note that Trisha is practical about it and lists out stuff he could pay for !

The mind goes back to R&B offering to pay just for lingerie 😳 while Ashvin here has discounted clothing of any sort 😆😆

Each of your characters etch their place in our hearts Nisha. And they stand out like gems for their take on life, the stance they take on various situations and the qualities they display !
And this comes just after I spoke of II in the last post. Practical Trisha is worming her way into our hearts too and staking her rightful place 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank u sooo much...
I was waiting for one...😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
She cant be too sanctimonious right Vani?
I mean she is the daughter of a poor man, she is a starving student herself

How far will her ego take her?
Not too far

She knows, agrees and likes being with him. She doesnt think having him spend on her clothes or food is beneath her pride or anything.
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Posted: 7 years ago
The leads in this story have absolutely zero egos compared to R&B and II. they also dont spend their time trying to outsmart each other.
No comeuppance here!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

The leads in this story have absolutely zero egos compared to R&B and II. they also dont spend their time trying to outsmart each other.

No comeuppance here!


Which is why I reiterate that it is the novelty of each character you create that weaves the magic in the tales you write ! Keep writing forever Nisha 🤗
Edited by VeeIyer - 7 years ago

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