Ariya ss - Hogi Pyaar ki Jeet - Page 4

CS is amazing and interesting

Woah.. part 1 just read n it is very interesting, superb.

Nice update

Originally posted by: etfr

Woah.. part 1 just read n it is very interesting, superb.

amazingly written.

though it confused me little because of the love in Priya's eyes as well as their eye lock moments. But the update is nice and yeah i want to know its Ariya = Arjun + riya or new addition Ariya= Arjun + Priya..?

i think its either Riya's new face or Priya is totally new addition. You really made us all confused.

Do continue soon. To kill my curiosity Which can kill me if get late.

thanksruhi1985sheetalfor PM.

Thank u so much 😊
Sorry for confusing u all but it will be cleared soon. Suspenses are cool i believe. 😆
I'll update the next part tomorrow.

Part 1(b)

Hello everyone. I m back with my next update. Hope u'll enjoy reading it 😊
(The last few lines of the precious part are written in italics at the beginning of the next part)

Arjun again loses his balance but she
caught hold of him.
Arjun: Meri...
She keeps her finger at his lips "Ssshhh". Arjun is again lost in her deep brown eyes.

Priya led him out of the restraunt and made him sit on the passenger seat of her car. At first, he struggled in her grip but as he was too exhausted, eventually he gave in.

She sat on the driver seat, fastened her seatbelt and also made Arjun wear his seatbelt. He could feel her so close to himself. He has never let any girl come near to him but he didn't understand why was he not protesting in this case. What kind of relief was he getting due to her close proximity??

The drive to his home was a silent one. Arjun was sitting with his eyes closed and head rested on the head-rest of the seat while Priya was stealing his glances every two minutes.

Reaching his home, she parked her car in front of the gate. She then stepped down and moved towards the other door. Slowly opening it, she lightly touched his shoulder "Aapka ghar aa gya...uthiye andar chaliye"

He slowly opened his eyes but his vision was too blurry as he was heavily drunk. He tried to get up from the seat but could not manage to do it and fell back. Then, Priya ducked inside the car and made him come out properly. Her one hand was around his waist and the other on his chest supporting him while his hand was over her shoulder. Taking small steps and careful steps she managed to enter the house with arjun by her side.

She was worried seeing his condition whereas he was finding solace in her embrace. It felt as if he was meant to be in those arms for ever and ever.

Soon they reached in front of the rooms. Arni's room in which Arjun and Roshni lived after their marriage was locked as usual, but the next room which was earlier occupied by Arjun(after Roshni's death) was also locked. Priya was thinking why was the room locked and in which room Arjun sleeps when her gaze fell on the guest room whose door was ajar.

She moved towards ths guest room supporting Arjun and gently laid him on the bed. She then removed his shoes and covered him with a blanket. She placed a water jug, a glass and medicine on the side table and turned to leave.

She stopped in her tracks after taking just two steps when she heard Arjun whisper something "Don't leave me".

She immediately turned around and moved closer to him and heard him murmur in sleep "Mujhe chodd kar mat jao...mai tumhare bina kaise jee paunga...plz mat...jao"

She started caressing his hair, then slowly moved down towards his forehead and rubbed her thumb on the frown-lines that developed on his forehead. Slowly he drifted into a deep slumber.

Once she was confirmed that Arjun is fast asleep, she also gathered herself as it was time for her to leave him. She quickly came out of the room not before taking a last glance at him and then hurriedly went to her car and drove back her home.

Location: Priya's house
She came running out of her car, went towards her room, sat on the bed clutching a pillow in her hand and started breathing heavily. It seemed as if she was running from from a bad dream of hers.

She had the fear of this day, her encounter with him. She was preparing herself for this but never did she knew even in her wildest dreams that all this will happen like it did few hours ago. She was shocked to meet him like that, to see him like that.

She was horrified seeing his condition and could not contril herself to get him out of it. And as soon as she reached his house some faint memories of past came back.

"How could he be so careless" she was talking to herself with tears flowing down her cheeks. She was thinking about the series of event that took place few hours ago and fresh trails of tears flowed out of her eyes showing her worry, care and concern for that man. With all the flashes going round and round in her head, she drifted to sleep cuddling her pillow.


Finally, the 1st part is complete. Sorry if i bored u. I deeply apologize for any mistakes and for creating so much confusion in ur brains. But they will get cleared one by one as the story will progress.

Plz do tell me how was it. I'll be eagerly waiting for ur feedback and if i'll get good response then hopefully i'll post the next part in the evening.
Thanks 😊 😊

Nicely written but very confusing y arjun felt something after saw Priya and Priya behavior like she loves Arjun plz dear don't show Arjun loves Priya not in past not in present not in future roshni is enough for this very difficult to see arjun with someone else not riya if roshni died then only Riya plz don't show anyone else I wish if Riya in place of Priya when she comfort Arjun eagerly waiting for nxt dear and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal

Nicely written but very confusing y arjun felt something after saw Priya and Priya behavior like she loves Arjun plz dear don't show Arjun loves Priya not in past not in present not in future roshni is enough for this very difficult to see arjun with someone else not riya if roshni died then only Riya plz don't show anyone else I wish if Riya in place of Priya when she comfort Arjun eagerly waiting for nxt dear and thanks for pm

Thank u so much didu. Don't worry i m also ariya fan, so how can i leave Riya and pair Arjun with anyone else. Plz wait for some more time and everything will be cleared.

And yes i have sent PMs to some but not all as the forum is not allowing me to send more than 10 PMs at a time. Now what to do?? Plz help...And also plz tell me how to send PMs altogether to everyone as i have to send them individually.

hmmm nice n confuse but wait
for u r revelation..dear..
but nice update..
continue soon..
thanks for pm dear..

waiting for next

updateee soon..

Originally posted by: anishk_dashika

Thank u so much didu. Don't worry i m also ariya fan, so how can i leave Riya and pair Arjun with anyone else. Plz wait for some more time and everything will be cleared.

And yes i have sent PMs to some but not all as the forum is not allowing me to send more than 10 PMs at a time. Now what to do?? Plz help...And also plz tell me how to send PMs altogether to everyone as i have to send them individually.

don't worry dear I'll sent and first u sent buddy req and when they accept ur buddy req u select one buddy for pm and where u see all others buddy name just select them and sent pm to all together but 50 in one time

Originally posted by: ruhi1985sheetal

don't worry dear I'll sent and first u sent buddy req and when they accept ur buddy req u select one buddy for pm and where u see all others buddy name just select them and sent pm to all together but 50 in one time

Okay...thank u so much 😊 😊