FF: Raj Naina - Knight in Shining Armor Pg 18 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
God I ate Ritu
Hope Raj can get the information from her. and just leave
Love
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

O wow what a twist.

So RR getting engaged.
Well I think just at the time of engagement Raj Will expose Ritu and thus the engagement will get cancelled.
Also Naina will come to know that Raj has done everything to prove Naveen innocent. So she will also understand.
Also Naina is falling for Raj.

Nice update

Please continue soon
An update everyday. As u did for sirf tere liye.

Well when are u continuing with sirf tere liye.



Waiting for both...
Sorry double post


Thanks 😳 I haven't been getting a lot of response for the story. Not sure if people are liking it or not
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: MANNNAYAK

Awesome update
will be waiting eagarly for next ud
continue soon


Thanjs 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Posted: 22 September 2017 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by yoginisahakari

O wow what a twist.
So RR getting engaged.
Well I think just at the time of engagement Raj Will expose Ritu and thus the engagement will get cancelled.
Also Naina will come to know that Raj has done everything to prove Naveen innocent. So she will also understand.
Also Naina is falling for Raj.

Nice update

Please continue soon
An update everyday. As u did for sirf tere liye.

Well when are u continuing with sirf tere liye.



Waiting for both...
Sorry double post

Thanks 😳 I haven't been getting a lot of response for the story. Not sure if people are liking it or not


Which story are u talking about.
Personally I feel both your stories are outstanding. So please don't stop cont soon
I am waiting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Awesome update.. Very nice twist
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
Won't be updated ur FF
Waiting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Part 9
Naina (controlling her tears) Congratulations! I wont be able to come. But congratulations!!! You two are meant for each other

Ritu: Really, you really think so?

Naina: Yes. I thought you guys were very different but you are exactly the same.

I should get going.

Naina went ahead and Raj followed telling Ritu that he had to discuss something with Naina.

Raj: Naina, hows everything?

Naina: Fine

Raj: Naina have you figured out your hospital arrangements with Shalini? and all your papwework and who's driving you to the hospital?

Naina: Is Ritu pregnant already?

Raj: What? Of course not.

Naina: Becuase you should bother about these things when you have your baby not in my case!

Congratulations and have a great life ahead with your soulmate.

Naina walked away and Raj was left behind wondering for the nth time if he had made a mistake by not telling Naina the truth about Ritu. He thought he was protecting her but maybe he had hurt her more.


RAJ AND RITU ENGAGEMENT VENUE
Ritu had organised a great venue for the engagement. Though trapping Raj had begun as work for her, she had fallen in love with him. She didn't know how she would navigate these emotions but she wanted their engagement day to be special.

Raj entered the venue and Ritu hugged him and whispered in his ears

Ritu: This is the beginning of our happily ever after

Raj (to himself): This is the beginning of your end.

Shalini looked on at the scene disappointed. Even though she had been skeptical at first, she had gotten convinced that Raj was genuinely in love with Naina and had the strength to support her fight against her demons. She had been shocked to discover that Raj was in fact in love with Ritu.

Raj: Doc how's Naina doing? Is everything set for her delivery? She is doing fine right?

Shalini: You really want to know? Her blood pressure was off the charts last night. This is a complication from all the stress you have caused her. Leading her on, proposing to her, and then dropping her like a hot potato.

Raj: Shal, but she'll be fine right? Please tell me,

Shalini: Focus on your big day Captain! I got her moved to the hospital this morning and am monitoring her. Now if you'll excuse me I need to go.

Raj felt completely unhinged. High BP, he knew that was extremely dangerous for Naina at this stage. He wondered if any of this was worth it - getting Ritu punished quickly had meant putting Naina through all this stress. Just then Ritu came and hugged him from behind.

Ritu: Captain, can I have the pleasure of a dance?

Raj: Yes of course.


As Raj danced with Ritu he promised himself that Ritu had only a few days of freedom left.

When it was time to exchange rings Raj felt paralyzed. Ritu was not the woman he loved. In fact Ritu was the exact opposite of the woman he loved! Begrudgingly he went ahead and exchanged rings. He didn't enjoy people congratulating him and quickly escaped outside.

He was fiddling restlessly with the ring on his hand when Shalini called him.

Shalini: Sorry Raj. I didn't want to disturb you. But it's Naina.

Raj: What's wrong? Tell me! What's wrong?

Shalini: We have decided to perform a c-section

Raj: Is she ok?

Shalini: She is. But he had designated you as her child's guardian a few weeks back. Before you and Ritu. Which means we'd need your signatures on a few places as well. Could you..

Raj: I'll be there in 15 minutes.

Raj made his way to Naina's ward and stood outside.
Naina: Shal why do we need to operate right now? I need time. I have some important things to wrap up. What if something happens to me during my surgery?

Shalini: Naina nothing will happen. High blood pressure isn't uncommon

Naina: You don't understand. I have to be extra cautious. My baby has no one besides me. And I made the mistake of appointing Raj as its guardian. Before I knew he was in love with Ritu..

Shalini: Naina, Raj hasn;t changed because of his engagement.

Naina: No. But i cant trust him! I can't.

Shalini: Naina this isn't the time for this. If we delay the surgery things will get complicated without reason. Please be reasonable Naina.

Naina: Ok.. But... Of fine.

Shalini left and ran into Raj whose face appeared troubled by everything he had heard.

Shalini: Raj come to my office.

Let me clarify Naina isn't in any sort of risk. It's just customary to have a guardian for the child. She hasn't had a chance to talk to you. It's entirely your decision whether you want to accept the responsibility or not.

Raj: Of course I do. But it looks like Naina doesn't.

Shalini: Raj you really hurt her. Do you know how hard it is for her to trust anyone after what happened with Raghav? But she trusted you and you let her down. By getting engaged to Ritu. By keeping her in the dark about your relationship. Anyways. Please sign this for now. And you can leave. There's nothing else needed from you.

Raj: I am not going anywhere. I am here.

Raj waited outside the operating theatre feeling all the nervousness and excitement he would have felt for his own child. A couple of hours later he heard the beautiful sound of a baby crying. A nurse came out with a tiny bundle in her hand and looked around. She came up to him

Nurse: Congratulations! You have had a gorgeous baby girl.





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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww... Baby girl... I am so happy that they have a girl... Rajveer will be on cloud nine...
And rajveer should have told naina About Ritu... This stress won't do good to anyone...
Waiting for the next update
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Finally u are back.

Amazing update

Please update next part soon.

Don't take so long

WoW it's a baby girl
Seriously now Raj should tell Naina about Ritu and make everything clear.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Awesome update
Baby girl, superb
Raj should have told her about Ritu
Continue soon

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