COMMENT
"Wow!! Nice work Shilpa!" Muskaan smiled commenting at the newly made designs by her best friends... "Muskaaan!!!" Shilpa yelled out gritted her teeth... "I know they are nice.. if they were not! I would have never finalized them.."
"Ummm... yeah.. yeah!" Muskaan bit her lower lip nervously, for sure she has just raised her best friends temper... "You suck in making a comment..." Shilpa was stern.. "You need to learn how to make a comment... Fine, for once i can take this nice, good work but everytime???" She arched her eyebrow.. "I am not a beginner right?? i only finalize designs if they are good! No actually awesome and compitable and here i hear you nice and feels like KILLING YOU!!!!"
"What do you expect me to say??" Muskaan frowned.. "Don't say anything... Just go and learn this one thing HOW TO MAKE A COMMENT FROM YOU ANNOYING BROTHER!!!" Shilpa blasted...
"Here you go.." Muskaan rolled her eyes.. "Again my brother is involved..."
"Ofcorse.." Shilpa smiled wide... "The only thing he is awesome at is in making a comment!!!" sarcasm was visible in her voice..
"ummm i thought you hate him when he makes a comment at you!" Muskaan narrowed her eyes... "Atleast he knows how to make it!!" Shilpa gritted here teeth...
"Ooowww i see some chemistry!!" Muskaan teased...
"Shut Up!!" Everytime Shilpa Malhotra does some work and needs an instant feedback, she had to call her one and only bestfriend Muskaan, who as ever not only spoils her mood with her nice and awesome one word comments but also leaves no other way for shilpa but to reach out for the Armaan Mallik she hates the most in this world...
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"Ahemmm.." Shilpa cleared her throat for some attention...
"May i help you??" He smirked as ever while taking out a shirt from his cupboard.. "How is this??" Shilpa hung a long black dress infront of him... "You can not just expect me to praise you! You know that right?? I will kill you instead.." He smiled ready to burn her up.. "I said i want your OPINION!!" She glared at him... "I am not thirsty for praises... i know i am good and that is why i am in this feild and i have loyal customers.." She added..
"And you are psycho!!" He chuckled... "Just..." She pointed a finger at him controlling her anger..
"Peace peace peace!!" He said making a peace sign and then glanced at what she was showing... This wasn't anything new.. This was a routine, Shilpa will work on something and ask Muskaan for the opinion/commentary and sulking ready to kill her then she lands up in his room and they start a banter... "Well.. Black is good!" He glanced from bottom to top, "my favorite color, thin silver glitter ribbon at the end adding attraction, plain and simple and full i loved it and you will look dayan in it HA HA HA!!" He winked at her...
"You jerk!!" As a habit, she took away a plastic statue from the side and threw at him...
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Walking around the stairs Muskaan bumped into Shilpa who was full red in anger, ready to kill everyone in town.. "You still here??" Muskaan gulped down the lump formed inside her throat.. "Yup!! And i will teach you a lesson.." She pointed a finger at Muskaan..
"Ahhh..." Next Muskaan was heard scowling as Shilpa was found dragging her to somewhere... " I hate your jerk brother and just because you don't know how to make a comment, i have to see him again and again.. Now i am gona teach you how to make a comment and he may go to HELL..." Shilpa yelled out loud in one breath..
"Huh??" This was the most pathetic thing can ever happen to Muskaan... Shilpa Malhotra teaching her something... Their equation was funny, they were best friends and were someother thing when Armaan gets involved and pisses Shilpa to hell..
HOW TO MAKE A COMMENT OVER SHILPA MALHOTRA'S WORK.. Muskaan felt like fainting on receiving a printed paper just out from the printer.. "Now read it out LOUD!!!" Shilpa yelled...
1. Never leave short and meaningless comments. i:e nice, awesome, great..
2. Give your opinion about the color and type of my dresses, you like them, hate them, or what do you think about them...
3. Comments don't include Adviceing so refrain giving me advices, when i need them i will ask you myself..
4. Something particular in the dress, or something which became your center of attraction..
5. What do you think in which which occassions my dresses can be worn?? Was there something extra or making it look bad? so i can correct..
6. How much do you think you will pay or will you like to buy such a dress for yourself?
7. Tell me you will never piss me off and make me reach your idiotic brother ever again.. "Hahahahahaah!!" Muskaan burst out laughing reading out the last one... "You guys have a thing you know that??" She said after a while to an angry shilpa...
"Yes ofcorse!!" Shilpa smiled... "I Hate Him and unfortunately he is the only stable person i can get a serious advice anytime i need.." Shilpa cursed over the fact..
"You both are very simliar to eachother.." Muskaan commented..
"Wow!! see you can make comments on that!! But not over my dresses..." Shilpa yelled again... "Okay okay! i get it.. i will try.." She hide her smile...
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"OMG!! I love this net!!" Muskaan went gaga over the peice Shilpa just kept in front of her.. "Red! Net and the style!! OMG Shilpa!! I want this..." Muskaan jumped up.. "Really??" Shilpa bit her lower lip... "I thought the sleeves needs some improvement.. i mean i think i can do better.." She replied..
"OH Shut up!! Do whatever you want with the next peice, but i just want this one.. perfect length, party occassion, Infact its awesoem for night parties.. i have matching earings aswell and i think it will look pretty awesome at me... what do you think??" Muskaan asked turning to look in the mirror... "And yeah i am taking this for free as my brithday gift!!" She added with a chuckle...
"Hmmm.." And for once without any argument Shilpa just sat down and didn't yelled out.. "What???" Muskaan arched her eyebrows.."Did you just realised i made a comment that encompasses all the points you gave me.."
"Hmmm.." Again a low nodd from Shilpa... "i feel tired.." she looked down playing with her fingers... "You are weird!!" Muskaan made a face and went to try the dress on... "Tch.. ahmmm.." Pouting, Shilpa just looked around wondering why is it so difficult...
"Muskaaan!!" Almost lashing out Armaan entered in her room with a pair of his shoes which clearly looked damaged! No.. chewed from its point infront..
"Hawww?? yeh kya hua??" Shilpa's mouth hung up..
"That annoying monster of hers!!" Armaan yelled out making Shilpa laugh.. "What the hell happen to you??" He next frowned taking a glimpse of her..
"Ummm nothing.. what will happen to me??" Shilpa raised her shoulders in the air all confused..
"OMG!!" His eyes widen up.. "You are Depressed!!" He chuckled.. "Shilpa Malhotra depressed!!!" He hooted out loud..
"Oh Shut Up!!" Irritated she started throwing all the pillows on the bed over him... "Hahahaha!!! Shilpa Malhotra depressed!!" He repeated throwing his shoes down on the floor.. "You..." Gritting her teeth, she attacked him only to be caught by him tight.. "Learn!!" His face brushed against her.. "How to fight first!!" He whispered near her ear.
"You.. Leave me!!" She tried to free herself from his grip..
"If you fight like this.." He didn't let her move and kept holding her the same way.. "you don't stand a chance against me in future.." He smirked..
"Urghhh..." She hit him with her elbow and freed herself from him.. "What future??" She asked rubbing her arm to sooth it down..
"Look!! You are depressed!!" He started his sommentary over her again.. "And since you are in depression, you are actually looking like a normal sweet girl a guy would give a thought to marry one day!!" He smiled..
"I don't need your comments!!" She gritted her teeth and turned around to walk back to the bed.. "And what do u meant by a guy would think??? If i have to marry someone! i will think! not him!!" She made a face..
"Yeah!! First you will show him a dress! Then u will ask for his comments and Then, by judging his comments you will decide whether you will marry him or not." He teased her..
"Yess!!!" She gritted her teeth trying to control her temper.. "If only his comment will make me go speechless! i will marry him!!" She stood up from the bed again and taunted while shooting fireballs at him through her eyes..
"Fine!!" He smiled nodding to which she released a deep breath thinking he will leave now but her breath stuck when out of blue he captured her and kissed her..
"Huh!!" Her mouth fell open with shock when he left her.. "Now you are speechless!" He winked at her and left..
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