Dil Hi Dil Mein- Pt40 Pg52 Finale

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Anupreet

@Anu1993

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

Part 1

On a night in Mumbai students have gathered to celebrate the pre-graduation prom night. A guy enters he just walks in and all the girls are after him.

???- Hey girls one at a time, tum sab jante ho ki mein sirf ek ladki ke peeche bhagta hoon

The guys shoes are shown then his eyes then his face it turns out to be Angad Khanna (Iqbal Khan)

Angad goes up to a guy.

A- Hey dude, kahan the tum, kabse dhond raha honn

???- Sorry yaar phir se late, har saal late hota hoon

A- Har saal thapad bhi khate ho

???- Tumne kuch kaha

A- Nahin

The guys shoes are shown then his eyes then his face it turns out to be Lakshya (Pulkit). The song Voh Kisna Hai plays in the background.

Angad goes up to a girl

A- Hey darling, kaise ho tum

???- Angad dheko tum kuch bhi samajlo lekin mein tumse pyaar nahin karti hoon

A- I don't care

The girl goes away Angad keeps following her. She looks back at Angad focussing on her it is Kripa Sharma (Neha Bamb)

Kripa goes far away from him again and she ends up near a wall. Angad pushes her to the wall.

K- Angad kya har rahe ho, sab log dekh rahe hai

A- Tho dhekne dho, mujhe koi sharmindi nahin hai

K- Angad please

A- Teek hai tum ja sakti ho mein Lakshya ke paas jhata hoon

K- Thank you

Kripa walks away with a very angry face

Angad goes to find Lakshya but he is with a girl

A- Mar khaye ga yeh

Angad is just smiling watching the fun, meanwhile the camera focuses on Lakshya. Lakshya goes up to a girl he doesn 't know at all.

L- Kya aap mere saat date par jaa sakti ho

Girl- Kya batamees sharam nahi ati tujhe

The girl gives Lakshya a slap. Angad goes up to him

A-Maine kaha tha thapad khakar aye ga

A girl enters the room. Lakshya goes up to her

L-Arre kyun tharpati ho mujhe kabse tumhari suraat dhekne ka maan kar raha tha lekin as usual tum late ati ho mere tara

???- Lakshya maine kaha mujse door raho i am not interested in you so go away varna mein thake maar ke bheg doon gi tujhe

The girls eyes are shown then lips then her face it is Krishna-Tulsi (mouni roy)

Kripa is walking she sees KT and walks upto her

K- Hey KT kaise ho tum

KT- Mein teek hoon, tum

K- Mein teek hoon, yeh jho Angad hai kabse bhagra hai mere peeche

KT- Aur voh chilgo (idiot) Lakshya voh bhi vahi kar raha hai

K-Teek hai mein jaa rahi hoon

Kripa goes outside and sees somone

K- Yeh yahan kya kar raha hai

Coming up- The guy is shown who do you think it is

Hope u enjoyed my first part to my first fanfic

Edited by Anu1993 - 18 years ago

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candyprincess

@candyprincess

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

great part
either it's angad or a new character

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Rachandeep

@Rachu_1987

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

😆 coool part anu......found lil mistakes in there.....ill edit it later 😛

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Anupreet

@Anu1993

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Posted: 18 years ago

#14

Gaurav''s Love] 😆 coool part anu......found lil mistakes in there.....ill edit it later 😛

dont worry rach i have corrected the fanfic

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Anupreet

@Anu1993

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#15

i have a schedule i will do my fanfic sundays and wednesday

so it is wedesday this week then the sunday coming up

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Anupreet

@Anu1993

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#16

Previously: Kripa sees a man, he is coming forward to kripa but does not see her

Part 2

The man's eyes are shown then his mouth. It is Prithvi (Amit Tandon)

Kripa looks at him very curiously. Kripa and Prithvi met 4 years before now.

Flashback:

Kripa is walking in the pavement when she slips and Prithvi comes out of no where and saves her from falling they look at each other for about 5 mins.

They wake up from the day dream

K- I am so sorry. Mere vaje se apko itni taklif uthani pari. Aur apka bag bhi ghir gia hai. Loh mein ise uthaloo gi

P- Nahin koi baat nahin mein uthaloo ga.

Prithvi picks up his bag and they both walk separate ways.

k-(In her thoughts) Mere maa kehti thi ki jab pyaar hota hai tho apni cherhe par muskurahat ati hai aur dil bhi dharakh tha hai, mujhe bhi vaisa hi ho raha hai. kahin mujhe use pyaar tho nahin ho gaya. Lekin ek jhalak mein.

Kripa smiles and walks off

2 days later they met again in a cafe.

K- Tum

P -Tum

K- Tum vahin ho na jisne mujhe ghirne se bachaya tha

P- Haan mein vahin hoo. Mein apko pichle do din se kuch kehna jhata tha aap tukrai nahin is liye mein aaj vo kehna jhata hoon

K- Jee kahiye

P- Apko milne se bach mujhe bohth acha laga tumhara cherha tho yaad raha lekin apka naam

K- Oh mera naam Kripa hai aur apka

P- Prithvi

K- Nice name

P- Thanks maa ne rakha

Prithvi puts his hand out

P- Mujhse dosti karogi

K-Haan. Lekin ek shart par

P- Teek hai boliye

K- Agar aap mujhe aap kehna bhand karoge, just Kripa

P- Mere bhi yehi shart hai, just Prithvi

1 Week later Prithvi and Kripa started going out happily now a days them two practically spent every minute together. Prithvi and Kripa went to the town centre. They went in one of the shops and saw a cafe. Kripa was dead hungry so they went in the cafe. Prithvi and Kripa sat down they were both staring at each other. The song Pyaar mein tere palys in the background from Vaah Life Ho To Aisi

Chasme badur mere yaar ho gaya mein bekarar

Pyaar mein tere tere tere

Dil se na jana tu karke dil ko majboor

Chasme badur hogaya chur chur chur

Pyaar mein tere tere tere

Main gum hu tere ishk mein kabse kabse kabse

Oh jaana oh jaana oh jaana gum hu kabse

Har pal tujhko hi mangu rabse rabse rabse

Oh jaana oh jaana tujhko hi mangu rabse

Mere khwaabon ki hoor tu hi mujhko manzoor

Chasme badur hogaya chur chur chur

Pyaar mein tere tere tere

Pyaar mein tere tere tere

Chasme badur tera yaar ho gaya hai bekarar

Pyaar mein mere mere mere

Pyaar mein mere mere mere

Pyaar mein mere mere mere

Din raat mere aankhon mein kya hai kya hai kya hai

Ek chehra ek chehra ek chehra tera chehra

Har waqt mere dhadkan pe kya hai kya hai kya hai

Ek pehra ek pehra ek pehra tera pehra

Mere duniyaa ki noor chahu tujhko bharpur

Chasme badur hogaya chur chur chur

Pyaar mein tere tere tere

Pyaar mein tere tere tere

Dil se na jana tu karke dil ko majboor

Dil se na jana tu karke dil ko majboor

Chasme badur hogaya chur chur chur

Pyaar mein tere tere tere

Pyaar mein tere tere tere

Pyaar mein mere mere mere

Praar mein tere mere tere

The waiter came

W-Apko jana pare ga

P- Teek hai hum chalte hai

Prithvi and Kripa went. Next morning Prithvi went to find a job but every one said no to him and he really needed the money. He went home and the phone rang. Prithvi picked the phone up.

P- Hello, kaun bol raha hai

???- Mein Mr Rishabh Lambha hoon (Aman Verma)

P- Jee kahiye

R-Mere paas tumhare liye ik kaam hai

P- Kaisa kaam

R-Mein chata hoon ki tum Kamal Agarwal ko mardalo

P- Kya, apka dimag to teek hai

R-Rakham pandra crodes ki hai (15 crodes)

P- Sweet, kam ho jayega

R-Good

Prithvi was in his car looking for Kamal. He saw Kamal. Kamal was walking. Prithvi ran over him. He stopped the car and phoned Rishabh

P- Kaam ho gaya

R- Good

P- Mera paisa?

R- Mujhe milo apne ghar se baar

p- Teek hai

Prithvi went to meet Rishabh and got his money. Kripa phoned.

P- Haan Kripa

K- Mein tumarhe saat waqt bithana chati hoon

P- Ok darling mein abhi atta

Kripa and Prithvi met at Mc Donalds. Kripas phone rang

K- Hello Mum

G- Kripa hospital jhaldi aao tumhare uncle ka accident ho chuka hai

K- Kya

P- Kya hua

K- Mere saat hospital aao

Them 2 reached the hospital

K- Mum uncle kahan hai

G- Vahan

Prithvi looked at him it is Kamal Agarwal(ali asgar)

P- (in his mind) Oh my god. Agar mujhe pata hota to mein kabhi aisa nahin karta

The doctor comes

K- Kya hua

D -I am sorry hum use bacha nahin paye

Every one goes home with sad faces. Kripa goes to her room and Prithvi Follows

P- Kripa is accident aur kisi ne nahin balki maine kiya

Kripa slaps Prithvi

K -Kya. Tumne mujhe itna dhoka diya get out of my house. I hate you. Tumhari shakal bhi nahin dhekna jati

The song Zindagi Is Tarah from Murder plays in the background

zindagi is tarah se lagne lagi

rang ud jaaye jo deewaron se

ab chupane ko apna kuch na raha

zakhm dhikne lage dararon se

main tere jism ki hoon parchai

mujhko kaise rakhoge kudh se judaa

bhool kar na tho meri fitrat hai

kyun ki insaan hoon main nahin hoon kudha

kyun ki insaan hoon main nahin hoon kudha

mujhko hai apni har katha manzoor

bhool ho jaati hai insaanon se

ab chupane ko apna kuch na raha

zakhm dhikne lage dararon se

jab kabhi shaam ke andheron mein

raha panchi jo bhool jaate hai

voh subha hote hi milo chal kar

apni shaakon pe laut aate hai

apni shaakon pe laut aate hai

kuch humhare bhi saath aisa hua

hum yahin keh rahe ishaaron se

zindagi is tarah se lagne lagi

rang ud jaaye jo deewaron se

ab chupane ko apna kuch na raha

zakhm dhikne lage dararon se

Reality

K-( in her thoughts) Itna sab kuch hone ke baad yeh bahpas agaiya. Zaroor Badla lenhe ke liye.

coming up - what will Prithvi do to Kripa?