Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi frnds Anzeela here
i know many of u don't know me so let me introduce my self
anzeela here,writing a TS for the first time. 😊
and this ts is dedicated to one of the sweetest,loving and a well known writer on this forum who is my friend cum elder sister
VIJI DI
this is for u
love u

PART 1
EXCEL COLLEGE
Raman the heart-throb of college and his gang members Mihir,Abhishek and romi were standing in the corridor.Raman was lost in her thoughts when his trance was broken by mihir's voice
M: bhai lagta hai tu uske pyar mai pagal ho jai ga,why don't you propose her.
RO:han mihir pehli bar tune kuch sahi bola hai,propose ker de bhai isse pehle wo kisi aur ke sath ur jai
AB: han raman they both are absolutely right ab tu use proppose ker hi de,forgod sake you are in love with her for damn three years
RA:kya bol rahe ho tum log do you guys even know woh meri taraf has ke nahi dekhti infact meri friend bhi nahi banna chahti do you guys thinks ke woh mrea proposal accept kare gi.
M: try kerne se pehle hi haar man rahe ho kya tum raman bhalla hi ho.tu mera woh dost nahi hai jo aik bat pe ar jata tha toh woh hasil ker ke rehta hai.
AB: tu try to ker
RA: u guys are right first i have to try aur ab to main usse hasil ker ke hi rahunga i am not the one jo itni jaldi har man le.Ishita be ready to become my girlfriend aur us ke bad Mrs.bhalla
In heart "ure gi to woh sirf aur sirf RAMAN BHALLA ke sath"
They were talking when it was time for their class.All went to their respective classes.
IN CLASS
As soon as he entered the class all the girls started to drool over him but whose attention he wanted was busy in taking notes unaware of his presence.
Seat beside ishita was empty so he sat beside her he was trying to initiate a talk but h could not atlast he gathers courage and spoke
RA: hi kaisi ho,kafi time ho gaya tum se bat nahi hui to socha
he was yet to speak more when ishita interuppted and said in a rude tone
I: kyu kya hum rishtedar hain jo roz roz baat kerain.
RA: aise bat nahi hai but can't we become friends tumhara koi dost nahi hai so kya tum mujhe apna dost banao gi.
I: just stop it please forgot sake mera peecha chod do
leave me alone
RA: kyu chodon main tumhe akela main pichle teen saalon se tumse dosti kerna chahta hon but tum to aik hi jaga atki wi ho what is your problem ajj tume batani hi hogi,
I:oh hello mister who are you jo main tumhe apni problem bataon don't poke your nose in my matters it's better for you to stay away.main bohot ache se janti hon tum jaise larkon ko
In Heart ''i am so sorry raman but i am not worth for your friendship please mujhe maaf kerdena tumhe nahi pata ke yeh rude words bolke mujhe tum se zyada takleef hoti hai''
RA: excuse me,what do you mean main koi aisa waisa larka nahi ho i am just asking for your friendship itna bhao kyu dikha rahi ho
I:i don't understand kyu pade ho mere peche i am rejecting your friendship from damn 3 years it means ke koi reason hsi that's why i don't wanna befriend u
She said tose rude word by great difficulty,her eyes were moist she turned her head to other side in a jiffy to wipe her tears and to hide bur raman was fast enough to notice them.
In Heart '' kyu ishita kyu tum bar bar mera dil todti ho,but ajj tumhari ankhain kuch aur keh rahi hain i can feel your pain tumhari rejection ke peeche koi bohot badi wajah hai but kya lekin ab main in sab main nahi paron ga i'll propose you in farewell tab to mujhe yakeen hai you won't deny i hope tum mera dil nahi torogi and and alsoi'll try to make you fall in love with me in this one week YEH RAMAN BHALLA KA WADA HAI
his thoughts were disturbed by the lecturer.Both got busy in making notes,glancing eachother time to time with different thoughts.Raman with determination while ishita with guilt.

AFTER THE CLASS
Raman and his gang were discussing about the farewell party as raman was the president of college so he was responsible for all the arrangements.
RO: ishita ko propose kerne ke bare main socha ke nahi
RA: socha to hain but I'll not propose her in college it would be little awkward and kya pata woh gussa ho jai sorry I can't afford it
M: phir kya karega tu
AB: raman in dono ko choro listen to my plan carefully pehle tum use kuch gifts do like teddies,flowers and other girly things take woh tumse impress ho and uske bat call her to a restaurant I'll book the whole restaurant for you and uske bat tu use apni dil ki bat Nina hichkichai bata de I'm sure she won't reject
RA: yar kya wo mane gi
M: zaroor mane GI hamari future bhabhi
RA: I hope sab ache ho lekin agar usne reject kiya tu sachi main uske bina mar jaon ga
RO: kesi batain keraha hain pagal ho gai ho think positive why are you becoming senti
Like this they were talking when it was time to go home
Raman in heart " ab to wo man hi jaigi".Be ready ishita for the big surprise.

guys i know this update is not up to the mark👎🏼 but atleast i can get 10 likes with chotu comments😳
all positive and negitave comments r welcomed
bye
love u all ❤️
ANZEELA


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats on the new story anzee...
its a beautiful story..
Ishra are college students...
Raman's and boy gand teasing Raman for not proposing ishita...
Raman asks ishita to be his friend...
But ishita rejects raman...
But she thinks she is not worth of his friendship...
Raman making plans to woo ishita...
Really super se upar dear...
Eagerly waiting for next update dear...
Continue soon...
Thank you so much...
For that dedication dear...
Love to u too❤️
Edited by divan19 - 8 years ago

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