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Teaser 7: Facing The Past With Confidence

V and his family wants CK to visit their palace. So she accompanies V and his family with Champa, Chapla and Ragini. Ragini goes to her home in Naugarh while CK, Champa and Chapla goes to the palace. V finally meets his mother Padvika and also introduces CK, Champa and Chapla to her. Padvika immediately likes CK and agrees for her and V's relationship as she had heard a lot about her and she always prayed like others that she never gets married to SD but a nice guy who she deserves and fortunately that nice guy turned out to be her own son. Padvika gets recovered when Tej shows her Marich's photo asking her if he is the same man who kidnapped V and swapped it with SD. All are happy to see her recovered.

Tej Singh is showing the palace to V and CK. ChaVi spot some photo frames of SD around which they did not saw earlier and gets angry. CK recalls how SD repeatedly humiliated her and even tried to drag her to Naugarh once during V and SD's sword fight. She feels uneasy which V and Tej notices. V throws one of the photo frames on the floor.

"Shiv Dutt ki koi cheez iss mahal me nahi honi chaahiye, said V.

"Agar uski cheezein jald nahi hataaya gaya to yuvrani aur yuvraj ko takleef hogi, said Tej.

"Tej Singh, unhe thoda waqt lagega Shiv Dutt ki cheezein hataane me. Main itna kamzor nahi hu ki kuch der uski cheezein yaha aur rehne par mujhe koi takleef hogi. Shiv Dutt yaha ya Vijaygarh me aaya to zinda nahi bachega , said CK and walked ahead with V and Tej.

As she walked, SD's photo frame which was thrown by V was crushed under CK's feet as she walked over it unaware of it. Tej who noticed it showed it to her and V what she did unknowingly and the trio shared a smile over it. All the people present in the court who saw what she did were shocked and then smiled thinking SD's photo frame deserves this treatment.

Tej takes V and CK to V's room which used to be SD's room.

"Ye kamra to bahot bada aur sundar hai, said V.

"Par iss bade aur sundar kamre me vo manhoos Shiv Dutt rehta tha. Iss kamre me vo ek saath 4-5 ladkiyon ke saath raasleela karta tha. Tum iss kamre me raho isse pehle iss kamre ki shuddhikaran karvaani padegi, said CK which amused V and Tej but they agreed with her.

"Arey ye to maine socha hi nahi, said Tej.

"Koi baat nahi. Tab tak main Jai Aditya ke kamre me uske saath reh loonga, said V.

"Tum iss kamre me reh loge na? asked CK with concern.

"Haan main reh loonga. Ye kamra humesha se mera hi tha jisme Shiv Dutt ne itne saal aish kiya. Shiv Dutt ke pehle iss kamre me rehne se mujhe koi takleef nahi hogi, replied V.

Tej looked at them and smiled at how they were facing their past with confidence.

"Cheee! Yaha to abhi bhi uss kone me ladkiyon ke kuch fate(torn) kapde pade huve hai. Aur vaha uss kone me Shiv Dutt ke bhi kuch fate kapde pade huve hai, said CK with disgust.

V and Tej too felt disgust on seeing what all she showed.

"Lagta hai ye sahi waqt nahi hai hum teeno ka yaha rehna. Chalo, main aap dono ko baaki mahal dikha deta hu, said Tej as he wanted them to enter here only after the room is cleaned.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 8 years ago
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Awesome
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Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
brilliant chapter with teaser 👏
I totally love the way chandrakanta showed that kamini & mayunk their right place 👏
she gave them back what they did to her 👍🏼
oh hell that giddha singh & karthik play dirty trick to win 😡
but chavi vijaygarh & naugarh didn't let them win 👏
they fight with Rampur soldiers very bravery 👍🏼
wow chandrakanta saved her father from that giddha singh 👏
even called him father after longtime 😃
it was really emotional reunion of father daughter 😭
but those jerk mayunk & karthik came to disturb them 😡
seriously karthik was so coward couldn't fight with his equal power 😡
knowing very well chandrakanta is new in war he went to fight with her even misbehave with ragini 😡
but when jay aditya came to fight with him he runaway so disgusting 👎🏼
yippee viru killed giddha singh chandrakanta killed mayunk jay aditya killed karthik 🥳
CK mom killed that kamini who came to kill chandrakanta 👏
finally their enemies died vijaygarh & naugarh won the battle 🥳
but now chavi have to face their worst enemies shivdatt & marich
oh god precap & teaser look interesting yet im worried for chavi
as that monster shivdatt recover & planning to get revenge from chavi 😡
hope chavi will punish that monster 👍🏼
continue plz
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Awesome dear

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Part 15: Celebration, Confession And Determination For Revenge

V was talking with his father and cousin brother in his room regarding the actions of Rampur people in the war after they bathed and changed into other clothes.

"Ye Rampurwaalon ko to choodiyaan pehenni chaahiye. Hum teeno aur Tej Singh ke paas aane ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi aur ye sirf 2 ladkiyon ko nishaana bana rahe the jinhe ye sab seekhe sirf 6 mahina hua hai. Aur upar se itna chhal kar rahe the, said V.

"Sahi kaha, bhaiyya. Ye Kartik sirf ladkiyon ke saamne sher banta. Yudh me kabhi Ragini ke saamne jaata to kabhi yuvrani Chandrakata ke, said JA.

"Rampur ka sabse acchha aiyyar tak ne Vijaygarh aur Naugarh ke aiyyaron ko chhodkar Chandrakanta ko rokne pahuch gaya. Usne to uspar jadoo ki par Chandrakanta ne uska jadoo dono baar uspar hi daal diya. Jab jadoo se uska kaam nahi hua to vo Chandrakanta ke saath bal ka prayog karne laga. Acchha hua Tej Singh use bachaane aaya. Ek aur aiyyar Chandrakanta ke paas aanewala tha par Devgiri aa gaya use bachaane, said Surendra.

"Mujhpar bhi koi jadoo ka asar nahi hota hai. Isliye to Tej Singh mera dimaag nahi padh paaya tha. Ye khaas baat sirf mujhmein aur Chandra me hi hai, said V.

"36 ke 36 gun milne ka kuch asar hoga, joked JA.

"Main ye kundli nahi maanta hu. Aur ek baat aur hai hum dono me, said V.

"Kya? asked Surendra.

"Hum dono kitne bhi uchaai se gire par hum eek kharoch tak nahi aati hai, replied V.

"Haan, yuvrani ne ye baat Chachaji ko bataayi thi, said JA.

CK is relaxing in her bathing pool with RG sitting by her side outside the bath pool.

"Ekaant, said RG to the daasis and they left.

"Yaad hai tumhe ki uss raat Chunargarh me jab tum so gayi aur uthne ke baad tumhaare chot par marham laga tha aur tum chaadar se dhaki huvi thi, said RG.

"Main jaanti hu vo aap thi, maa, said CK.

"Vo main nahi thi, Chandrakanta. Vo Virendra tha, said RG.

CK is shocked to hear this. She recalls V applying ointment on her feet earlier.

"Mujhe pata kyu nahi chala? asked CK.

"Kyunki tum soyi thi, replied RG.

After a moment of silence, RG asked, "Tumne apne aur Virendra ke baare me kya socha hai?

"Aap jaanti hai na ki pichhli baar kya hua tha, replied CK.

"Tab ki baat kuch aur thi. Uske mann me ye bhi tha ki agar tumhe uski asliyat pata chalegi to tumhe kitna dukh hoga shaayad isliye vo kuch nahi bol paaya, said RG as CK looked at her.

Scene shifts to V and Surendra in V's room.

"Tum ladaayi ke baad Chandrakanta se nahi mile, said Surendra.

"Kaise milu? Vo ek ghante se snaan kaksh me hai. Pata nahi itni der kya kar rahi hai? said V.

Surendra smiled.

"Tumne apne aur Chandrakanta ke baare me kya socha hai? asked Surendra.

"Matlab? asked V.

"Matlab ye ki hum sab jaante hai ki tum usse pyaar karte ho, replied Surendra.

"Iska kya faayda? Pichhli baar jo hua uske baad mujhse himmat nahi hoti hai use ye kehne ki. Darr hai ki main apni dost ko bhi kho dunga, said V worriedly.

"Vo alag waqt tha. Tab tum chaahkar bhi kuch keh nahi paaye the, said Surendra.

"To ab kya karu? asked V confusingly.

"Aaj use sab bata do, replied Surendra as V looked at him.

Scene shifts to Chunargarh. SD sits up.

"Pitaji, said SD as he sees Marich and Pandit Jagannath with him.

"Mera putra theek ho gaya, said Marich happily and hugged him.

SD hugged him back.

"Kaisa lag raha hai aapko, yuvraj? asked PJ.

"Abhi bhi bahot kamzori lag rahi hai, replied SD.

"Tumhe firse pehle jaise tandrust hone me waqt lagega, said Marich as they broke the hug.

"Aapne mujhe Naugarh me kyu chhoda tha? asked SD.

"Vo main tumhe waqt aanepar bataaunga, replied Marich and asked, "Tumpar kisne hamla kiya? Uska naam batao use. Main use jeevit nahi chhodunga.

SD recalls how CK along with Champa and Chapla tried to kill him.

"Pitaji, mujhe Shyamala aur Jhumroo ne maarne ki koshish ki thi. Maine meri patni Shyamala ko Jhumroo ke saath uske bistar par jab pakda aur usse mujhe dhokha dene ki wajah poochhi to vo aur Jhumroo gussa ho gaye. Ek raat Shyamala mujhe dinner date pe bulaayi. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki vaha Jhumroo bhi tha. Usne aur Jhumroo ne mujhe dhokhe se maarne ki koshish ki. Agar aap dono nahi hote to main jeevit nahi bachta tha, lied SD.

SD got to know from the talks of his soldiers that CK had killed Shyamala and Jhumroo so he decided to make a fake story and lie to them using their names. He did not took the name of real culprits as he himself wants to punish those 3 girls especially the mastermind CK.

"Agar vo zinda hote to main unn dono ko jeevit nahi chhodta, said Marich angrily.

"Main jaanta hu aap aise hi karte, said SD with a smile.

"Thik hai, beta. Hum dono chalte hai. Tum vishram karo, said Marich.

"Ji pitaji, said SD.

Marich left the room with PJ.

"Chandrakanta, tumhe kya lagta hai ki kuch choohon(rats) ko maarkar tum sher se ladogi? Naa Chandrakanta naa. Tumhe aaj Rampur se jeetne ki jitna jashn manaana hai mana lo kyunki baar baar jashn manaane ka tumhe mauka nahi milega, said SD with a smile.

V goes outside CK's room to meet her and tell his feelings to her but when he was about to enter her room, the daasis tell him that she is sleeping so he goes from there as he did not wanted to disturb her. Also, she too was tired due to war like others.

In the evening, the celebration has started. V dresses himself in a red-black outfit(which he wore on his 1st night in Naugarh while confessing to CK. He enters CK's room. She was wearing a yellow outfit(which she wore during V's confession). CK who was standing in front of her dressing table smiled on seeing him. He smiled back at her. He comes close to her and held her hand. He helps her in getting ready by putting bangles and bracelets on her hands. He then makes her sit on her dressing table chair and puts a necklace on her. Both of them recalled the time when it was CK who was helping V to get ready after he defeated SD.

"Tum bahot khoobsurat lag rahi ho, smiled V.

"Tum bhi, smiled back CK and got up.

"Main ek baar Vijaygarh beech me hi chhodkar chala gaya tha. Vo isliye nahi kyunki main Nazim aur Ahmed ke mujhe fasaane ke vajah se naraaz tha par vo isliye kyunki Badri ne mujhe dhamki di thi ki agar main 2 pahar me Chunargarh nahi lauta to khunkhaar Vijaygarh par hamla kar denge. Maine Vijaygarh ko bachaane ke liye aisa kiya. Par maine mauka milte hi Badri aur sabhi khunkhaaron ko gufa me band karke Vijaygarh vapas lauta kyunki mera maksad sirf tilasm ki chaabhi laana nahi par tumhaari madad karna bhi tha. Mujhe tumse ek alag tarah ka lagaav ho gaya tha jo main bhi nahi jaanta tha ki kya tha. Main tumhe Shiv Dutt se haarte huve aur tumhaari zindagi barbaad hote huve nahi dekh sakta tha. Main Vijaygarh sirf chaabhi ke liye aaya to tha par Shiv Dutt ke shart ke baare suna to maine socha ki shaayad mera yaha aane ka maksad sirf tilasm ki chaabhi nahi par tum bhi thi. Maine tumhaari humesha dil se madad ki thi sirf tilasm ki chaabhi paane ke liye bahaana nahi kiya tha, said V honestly.

CK felt nice at him saying everything honestly.

"Tum mujhse ye sab aaj kyu keh rahe ho? asked CK.

"Taaki tumhe ye na lage ki maine bhi Kamini aur Mayuk ki tarah tumhaara istemaal kiya aur tumhaara peeth peechhe tumhaare bhavnaaon ka mazaak udaaya, replied V.

"Abhi neeche chalte hai, said CK and turned to leave but V held her hand to stop her.

V turned her to him asked, "Yaad hai tumne ek baar poochha tha ki kya tumhe mere sapnon me jagah mil sakti hai. Aaj main tumse poochhta hu ki kya tum mere sapnon ka hissa banna chaahti ho?

CK looked at him and recalled as she asked the same thing to him once.

"Tumne ye kehne me bahot der kar di. Aaj ka din itihaas ke panno pe sunhere aksharon se likha jaayega ki duniya me pehli baar ek ladki ne ladke se pehle apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya, smiled CK.

"Itni bhi der nahi huvi hai mujhe, said V.

"Kuch bhi ho par sabse pehle to maine hi kaha na. Kahi dekhi hai aisi ladki? asked CK jokingly.

"Dekhni bhi nahi hai, replied V with a smile and pulled her into a hug(their signature hug style).

"Agar mere khunkhaar hone ki baat nahi hoti to tum nahi main ye baat pehle kehta. Uss raat main tumhe sach bataanewala tha par tumne mujhe bolne ka mauka hi nahi diya, said V.

"Tum pehle nahi keh paaye to bahaane bana rahe ho, joked CK.

"Main bahaane nahi bana raha hu par sach keh raha hu, said V.

As they were still hugging each other, CK recalled V's incomplete statement when she hugged him emotionally after becoming maharani and his incomplete statement about SD when they were practicing archery. She understood what he meant both the times.

"Main samajh gayi ki tum dono waqt mujhse kya kehte kehte ruk gaye the, said CK.

"Acchha hai ki tum samajh gayi. Ab kya main sabke saamne bhari darbaar me to apni baat poori to nahi karta na. Kitna ajeeb lagta tha. Tumhaara uss din na chaahte huve bhi dil todne ke baad meri himmat nahi ho rahi thi tumse apni dil ki baat kehne ko, said V.

"Tab to hum akele the jab tum Shiv Dutt ko apna sasurji kehne jaa rahe the. Vo baat alag hai ki hume baad me pata chala ki Tej Singh aur Jai Aditya humaari baatein sun rahe the, said CK.

"Main aaj tumse apni dil ki baat pehle bhi kehne aa raha tha par tum soyi thi, said V.

"Ohh. Mujhe jaage rehna chaahiye tha, said CK.

"Koi baat nahi. Abhi to keh diya na, said V.

They remained more time hugging each other before leaving the room together.

SD is recovered enough to talk and walk around but still very weak in strength. He looked in the mirror and got angry looking at the 3 stabbing marks from CK which were slightly visible now.

"Chandrakantaaa, shouted SD and threw something at the mirror breaking it.

"Tu nahi jaanti Chandrakanta ki tune Shiv Dutt se panga liya. Tune jo mere saath uss raat ko kiya tha uski saza to tujhe main dekar hi rahunga, said SD angrily.

He then smiled and said in the mirror, "Rampur se yudh jeetne ki bahot bahot mubarak ho, Chandrakanta aur Virendra. Main tum dono ke jeet se aur tum dono ke zinda rehne se bahot khush hu. Agar tum dono marr jaate to main tum dono se apna badla kaise leta? Tum dono ki barbaadi mere haathon hi likhi hai. Chandrakanta, tujhse main aisa badla loonga ki tu humesha yaad rakhegi. Virendra, tujhe Chandrakanta kabhi nahi mil paayegi. Chandrakanta se apna badla lekar main tujhe bahot takleef doonga. Taiyaar raho tum dono. Shiv Dutt aa raha hai tum dono ki barbaadi bankar(he starts laughing in his signature way as he said that).

V and CK comes downstairs together in the main hall as their families, guests and staffs looks at them wondering them entering last that also together in the party.

"Lagta hai aaj bahot saare ladkon ka dil tootnewaala hai, said one of the guest prince.

"Aur ladkiyon ka bhi, said one of the guest princess.

CK and V after coming down tell their families in whispers that they like each other so that the guests can't hear them. Their families were very happy for them.

"Padvika bhi bahot khush hogi, said Surendra with a smile, "Vo bhi hum sab ki tarah chaahti thi ki tumhaari shaadi Shiv Dutt jaise insaan se na ho par ek acchhe insaan se ho jo tum deserve karti ho. Ab ye jaankar bhi bahot khush hogi ki vo acchha insaan unka khud ka asli beta hai.

CK looked at V and said, "Marich ke vajah se itne saal Dutt tumhaari zindagi jee raha tha. Agar Marich ne tumhe Shiv Dutt se na badla to mere liye Shiv Dutt ka nahi tumhaara shaadi ka rishta aata tha Naugarh. Shiv Dutt iss baat me tumhaari jagah lene jaa raha tha.

"Par aisa hua to nahi na. Tum Yaksh Mahal me Shiv Dutt se milne aayi thi par tum usse pehle mujhse mili bhale hi sher se bachkar bhaagte waqt kyu na mili ho, said V.

"Beta, tum dono kaise bhi mile par mile to na. Tum dono ko ek doosre se milna hi tha isliye bhagwaan ne tum dono ko kisi na kisi tarah mila hi diya, said Jai Singh with a smile.

CK and V smiled at what he said.

"Main chaahta hu ki aap sab kuch din humaare saath Naugarh rahe, said Surendra.

"Hum sab to nahi aa paayenge par sirf meri beti aur uski teeno saheliyaan jaayengi, said JS.

"Thik hai, said Surendra.

Next- Part 16: Chandrakanta, Champa, Chapla and Ragini To Visit Naugarh

Precap:

#Everyone set out for Naugarh. The girls were sitting in one cart. V, JA, TS and Devgiri were sitting in another cart while Surendra was sitting separately in another cart with some soldiers. The cart stops for sometime for everyone to take some rest. V wants to meet CK but can't as there are 3 girls with her. V is alone in his cart as other 3 guys went out for some time. He was looking outside the window. When he looks inside, he is shocked to see CK sitting beside him.

"Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? asked V.

"Baithi hu, replied CK, "Tum akele the to main aa gayi tumhe company dene.

#Tej and Chapla gets into a fight after he sees Chapla applying charcoal face pack on her face and calls her Chudailon Ki Chudail' like he is called Aiyyaron Ka Aiyyar'.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 8 years ago
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Awesome update
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Precap looks interesting
Waiting for tepla scenes
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Awesome update

Love the confession
Precap looks interesting
Waiting for tepla scenes
Continue soon
Thanks for pm


Thank u😊
The confession is same as the show with different convo after that😃
Tej has got a new job that is to annoy Chapla😆
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 8 years ago
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Very well written update.
Sd in his typical baddie avatar.
V n ck are awesome as usual.

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